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im here, already typin my verse...
First, tell me.. do you want the deadliest thrust in the head or the gut?
Please don't be like hoes with bad memories and forget that you suck
For less than seventeen bucks, I can have your legs cracked in two
Face it, you're the wackest, duke, even mimes laugh at you
First time, dog, you're sure to get fucked like jailed cops
Cuz I prove who's better when my rhymes move letters without a mailbox
What do you know about hip hop? And who said your shit's hot?
You say you got the game tied up, but you about as tight as a slipknot
I'll make you stop breathing, and start needing a funeral procession
Cause of death listed as "talking shit without suitable protection..."
your status to me is unknown and thats simply the truth
so when you say your dope,...
we dont believe u, like the boy who cried wolf
you see facin u its sort of like slicin a fish, cus u lack guts
so wen i say ill leave u gutted its only b'cus im about 2 make cuts
and sergecly removes ur nuts, cus status can neva hang like me
but ill give u a pass this time.........and hang you off that tree
u aint nothin to boast about wus', even ur sis can beat nobs
and by the look of hes record, status is doing a very gd job
u can cherish my verse, but if u try n bite em ill snap ur fingers
cus emitating is forbitten,........so it rockin your mums lingers
First, tell me.. do you want the deadliest thrust in the head or the gut?
Please don't be like hoes with bad memories and forget that you suck
weak pretty played.
For less than seventeen bucks, I can have your legs cracked in two
Face it, you're the wackest, duke, even mimes laugh at you
ok.
First time, dog, you're sure to get fucked like jailed cops
Cuz I prove who's better when my rhymes move letters without a mailbox
no pretty much self glory.
What do you know about hip hop? And who said your shit's hot?
You say you got the game tied up, but you about as tight as a slipknot
still yet to see a personal or even his name..so no.
I'll make you stop breathing, and start needing a funeral procession
Cause of death listed as "talking shit without suitable protection..."
no.
vs
your status to me is unknown and thats simply the truth
so when you say your dope,...
we dont believe u, like the boy who cried wolf
no wtf didnt even rhyme.
you see facin u its sort of like slicin a fish, cus u lack guts
so wen i say ill leave u gutted its only b'cus im about 2 make cuts
ok.
and sergecly removes ur nuts, cus status can neva hang like me
but ill give u a pass this time.........and hang you off that tree
Good i guess pretty weak.
u aint nothin to boast about wus', even ur sis can beat nobs
and by the look of hes record, status is doing a very gd job
no.
u can cherish my verse, but if u try n bite em ill snap ur fingers
cus emitating is forbitten,........so it rockin your mums lingers
good..best line of the battle atleast..
wow @ how weak this battle was...but i have to give it to looks...status your verse was weak as fucked...you didnt even put in looks name..so it looks pretty prewrittin...you did not have 1 personal in your whole verse...looks..your verse wasnt much better but you atleast put in status's name..which gave u the win...you both came weak as fuck...v/ looks.
ok 1-0
uppin 1
v/looks.....better punches and ill techinque........other dude....elevate................................... no-hate.......p-e-a-c-e.......
-spader
Vote DQed...wack.
-Fue
that vote will be dq'ed^
First, tell me.. do you want the deadliest thrust in the head or the gut?
Please don't be like hoes with bad memories and forget that you suck
what?
For less than seventeen bucks, I can have your legs cracked in two
Face it, you're the wackest, duke, even mimes laugh at you
meh.. ok
First time, dog, you're sure to get fucked like jailed cops
Cuz I prove who's better when my rhymes move letters without a mailbox
no
What do you know about hip hop? And who said your shit's hot?
You say you got the game tied up, but you about as tight as a slipknot
no
I'll make you stop breathing, and start needing a funeral procession
Cause of death listed as "talking shit without suitable protection..."
no.
vs
your status to me is unknown and thats simply the truth
so when you say your dope,...
we dont believe u, like the boy who cried wolf
no
you see facin u its sort of like slicin a fish, cus u lack guts
so wen i say ill leave u gutted its only b'cus im about 2 make cuts
ok.
and sergecly removes ur nuts, cus status can neva hang like me
but ill give u a pass this time.........and hang you off that tree
ok
u aint nothin to boast about wus', even ur sis can beat nobs
and by the look of hes record, status is doing a very gd job
no.
u can cherish my verse, but if u try n bite em ill snap ur fingers
cus emitating is forbitten,........so it rockin your mums lingers
meh
v/lOOk$
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For less than seventeen bucks, I can have your legs cracked in two
Face it, you're the wackest, duke, even mimes laugh at you
vs.
nothing i enjoyed.
both did badly, this mime punch was the only line i saw with potential in the entire battle. Look$ i think has a bit of a problem with wording and good concepts, while as status just had horrible time with wording. like even your first punch could've been ok for a suck punch, but your wording ruined it horribly.
both did badly, but status was a little harsher here imo.
v/ Status.
both of you hit my link up with good feed.
up.3
For less than seventeen bucks, I can have your legs cracked in two
Face it, you're the wackest, duke, even mimes laugh at you
vs.
you see facin u its sort of like slicin a fish, cus u lack guts
so wen i say ill leave u gutted its only b'cus im about 2 make cuts
and sergecly removes ur nuts, cus status can neva hang like me
but ill give u a pass this time.........and hang you off that tree
weak battle....still feel that Looks has elevated a hell of alot.....props on that....status haven't seen much of ur battles....but i'ma give it to looks for them two punches best in the battle....both keep elevating
v/Looks
ps: hit up one of the battles in my sig....both of u please thanx
For less than seventeen bucks, I can have your legs cracked in two
Face it, you're the wackest, duke, even mimes laugh at you
First time, dog, you're sure to get fucked like jailed cops
Cuz I prove who's better when my rhymes move letters without a mailbox
vs
nothing
not a great battle, looks i felt you didnt come as hard as you could fam...like need to get harsher and more creative..i dont see wit in your rhymes.
status had some ok lines with potential like the mime one, the moving letters one was ehhh
but overal status took this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=310713
up 4
uppin 5
Staus- I saw no personals yo...and your punches didnt come hard at all...structure could even be stepped up...you need to come harder and more precise with your punches if you want the win
Looks- punches were meh...i know you didnt come hard in this battle cause iv seen you do a lot better...personals were there tho, so that was a plus, and structure was good...you took this battle with a overall solid and more rounded verse
\/-L00k$
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u can cherish my verse, but if u try n bite em ill snap ur fingers
cus emitating is forbitten,........so it rockin your mums lingers
^^ only punch i felt had any effect
vs
nothin i really liked
i felt this battle was weak for my likings and the pyunches wer lackin on both sides
status i felt you came with one ok punch but it wasnt worth quoting cus the wording wasd a bit of, and looks i barely quoted ur cus u just had more creativity. no hate but v// L
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