Last Dedications pt.II

People and Roles

When the depressor gets to your head get a Komic Relief
Smoke the leaf cause in Poetic its Justus, so fuck a beef
Get Datboip to ring up the Vortex, then multies will fly
Bloodz supporting the red dye now he’ll Verbally fry
Anyone messing gotta meet the Verbal Insanity flow
Poetically speaking you gotta let the Exact rhythm go
Don’t talk about guns or the GrimReapa might appear
Steer clear when Dat’s got his sarcastic flair near
We don't need Jehovah, Witness will get to ya head
A bit like Scratch, Sniffing the dread's weed spread

Change the track let’s get DJ to replace the play list
Phait giving me my first topical loss but I ain’t pissed
Pissed at lies but I’m a lawyer so I’ll back the Client
Clients defiant so he flows on the Omega wave reliant
See i remember Thomas as well, call me nostradamus so i can predict
That the future HOF's will include new kids who'll get easily picked
But then I wouldn’t be here without the constructive talk
With Evingale, Vortex & Bounce flaring eyes of a Hawk
But a toast to DYL the real Soul Shocker on the evolution
That’s Imminent, shout out to my homeboy revolution
Confusions at name changes so don’t fret if I miss you out
It’s about to end but then again I still gotta give Supanat a shout

Isis bringing it dope with an MC whose Mystique like Whoa
Also there Mal now Metaphive waging against a kid or another ho
Let’s not shout out his name ‘cause this is all about homies
Fuck the phonies haters come in dozens so fuck them cronies
Ayo I remember the 2 AOD’s as well as the Laydee Snypah
Shit I remember when Ghostflow made noob’s wet there diapers
Then I had Inst1gator he a real old dude man remember the shit
The only Witness was the one who saw Da King’s punch Blitz

You ever saw the Black Ninjah, It a Kaotic Theory
Fuck Smog, where the fuck MCBIGL, man he's lost like lost queries
Ayo, remember E.Z. Eddie his hat got too big for him
Tell me why the fucks Killamami fronting like Lil Kim
Lil Homie Cliff getting Educated on the Topical scene
Rhymescheme, Diamond Mind where the fuck they been
Ayo, this dope cause I’m playing Xtreme Malice’s beat G
Simply I bring Ta2 to get more Chedda Cheese quick-aly
Also a hout out to Tim for the reasons he leading the next level
Now let's go back & create another Sig for Lex, this time emboss & Bevel
Why you get happy, understand you don’t want to meet Mista Grim
Fuck where you been understand that the future for me maybe creatively dim
Now i paint abstract words a bit like contradicting Myself in words
I remember old homies giving props on me talking bout the Demonic Curds
Ayo I get the shit 1Up and mourn the death of Aghzbackward
Get Tryupmh and lace up 20 colabs dog what y’all heard

This wasn’t meant to be a dope ass om or anything like that, just a long ass read with shout out’s to various heads, I most likely have missed out a lot of heads whilst writing this and if I have don’t mind it just flow along cause I’m cool with y’all na mean.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=308223
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=308140

Not much of a practical OM, so I'll leave a couple of comments.

Nice intergration with the names and wordplay, sooooooooooo. . . just a knockaround sort of thing.

Clever.

Yeah it's just a name dropper na mean.

I know, Exactly what you mean.

LMAO.

Nice picture.

Thanks lol...

Nice way to incorporate people's names and make sense, lol @ "Time to make LeX another sig"..
not really easy to feed on, just thought it had a nice touch on it.

Lol...i know.

Lol very very clever idea.You have to be one of the best writers on here and you always have my respect.Clever piece :)

I honestly say i like your OM here...its a sequel that continues the tradition of clever word play and rhyme that has a sure reason and purpose...for gettin a readers' attention...this piece is a break off of the normal topics u write to which i notice have compassion in the structure...this one you came on the hard side...ore or less battle formation which also i have to say was a clever choice...the read is smooth and transitional...i felt that the target you set forth to generate a promising feeling throughout the story as well as the place for people in these streets...the words were great and the structure was good as always...nice drop here...hit me up with an honest remark as well...wun...

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I honestly say i like your OM here...its a sequel that continues the tradition of clever word play and rhyme that has a sure reason and purpose...for gettin a readers' attention...this piece is a break off of the normal topics u write to which i notice have compassion in the structure...this one you came on the hard side...ore or less battle formation which also i have to say was a clever choice...the read is smooth and transitional...i felt that the target you set forth to generate a promising feeling throughout the story as well as the place for people in these streets...the words were great and the structure was good as always...nice drop here...hit me up with an honest remark as well...wun...

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seriously? WTF are you talking about?

Paka Paka Paka.... Whats up homie. This is Tryumph. PM me when ya can. Ive been locked up since december 1st of last year but im in a halfway house now. i spent the last 8 month on nothing but my raps and freestyles. We need to hook up again.
Nice OM and thanks for the shout out. One.

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Originally Posted by Kid Blitz

I honestly say i like your OM here...its a sequel that continues the tradition of clever word play and rhyme that has a sure reason and purpose...for gettin a readers' attention...this piece is a break off of the normal topics u write to which i notice have compassion in the structure...this one you came on the hard side...ore or less battle formation which also i have to say was a clever choice...the read is smooth and transitional...i felt that the target you set forth to generate a promising feeling throughout the story as well as the place for people in these streets...the words were great and the structure was good as always...nice drop here...hit me up with an honest remark as well...wun...

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I appreciate that, but the first part to last dedications was written a long LONG time ago and i doubt you could have read it.
Also, thanks to all the other comments.

lol gd way to remind th older users about th ppl hu jus disappeared...like me but im back now:)

this is a hard piece to leave feed on really, as its jus several shout outs linked together
i flow is consistent, and i can feel a sorta thankful feel to th piece
i liked this, put the title suggests ur leaving (i think) plz dnt leave lol
keep up, ill luk out for more of ur stuff since im back now

Thanks for the comments....unfortunantly i will have to leave soon na mean.

^last up for the night.

lol idc what everyone else said i thought this piece was quiet nice i liked the fact that you didnt force anyones name here every name you used had a meaning and fit into the line and although this piece had no particualar storyline or meaning i enjoyed reading it you shoulda used my name ;)

plz rtf on "The Siren's Deception"

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Pissed at lies but I’m a lawyer so I’ll back the Client
Clients defiant so he flows on the Omega wave reliant

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^Damn them 2 lines were dope as fuck :o

But cool piece liked how you incorporated all the names. Keep it real in college nicca. Get at me

I'll check the links later on in the day na mean.^

well nice....not much to say just thanks for mentioning my name(omega.) though it was short but nice very creative aswell....take care

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We don't need Jehovah, Witness will get to ya head

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The only Witness was the one who saw Da King’s
punch Blitz

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dope :coolio: and dope at mentioning my old name too lol

nice peice dude, it was simplistic, but it had the desired effect, definitely not one of your better peices, but perhaps one of the peices you will be remembered by, not because of how you wrote it, but because of why your wrote it if you know what I mean. I enjoyed the read, as I usually do when I read a Pakaveli OM lol. I'm sad to see you go mate, but yea, do what you gotta do and then get you ass back here :mad:

:love:

is this a cry for more feedback on future pieces? You're awful good with the politics, Pak. LoL.

This was cool, thx for pluggin' me in somewhere, I'm sure most of us read this waiting for our names to pop up. Cool read, this was just funky and cool, man.

You MUST HAVE been on at least a light depressant here - weed, alcohol, maybe a zannie? Go for it, man. I won't judge ya.

LoL. (I don't approve of drug use, officially. It's bad for you. Just let me do them.)

yeah bro nice write. thamx for the hoLL@. hah. flow was on.ill havta read this agin later. coz you got some good form and flow on here for REAL

if you get time check this madness
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=308739

Thanks for the shoutout lol.

And word. be back soon mother fucker. :love:

this was cool i could see this being an intro or outro track on a album the topic was creative and interesting with all the shout outs you seemed to incorparate a bunch of members into your writing like you said it wasent an outstanding peice but it was defently a good read i enjoyed it the flow was perfect for it and i like how you kinda went in and out of rhyme schemes so nice job although it was fairly long it was worth the read
leave feed on the om in my sig

mayne...im in this om...w00t

ok now

i like how u used niggas names and mad it make sense like this

When the depressor gets to your head get a Komic Relief

that smart and to do a whole om like that i think would be very dificult...so kudos on that...u stil had nice vocab...and to do the name thing made the wordplay outragious...u continue to make dope oms...this isnt like ur other ones...but the topic fits the verse right...and u added a personal idea for every person..like talkin about there humor or that theyve been gone or there skill leval...smart...:)

Don’t talk about guns or the GrimReapa might appear

^w00t :) nice om...