Easy as 1.2.3.

i invent a verse composed of uncommon integers that reach to infinity
divide the universe by Pi to expose it's symmetry
broken down into fractals of chaotic imagery
slowly unraveling the architecture of divinity
use archaic wisdom - to break life down to an algebraic system
plot the parabolas of existence so there is no way to twist em
calculate a verse so precise you divide your faction to fractions when you hear em
work the angles courtesy of Pythagorean Theorem
code travels the matrix i study to spot the motions
add the common factors on an abacus and plot the quotients
i douse the rhythm with a thousand algorithms as curricula
discover that the globe and sun are perpendicular
my particular brand of mic geometry is rockin proofs
to show i equal both sides of you squared like the hypoteneuse
then i'll crack the code of a semiotic symbiote trapped in the mode
of the math behold as I fold it in half collapse to a fraction or decimal
yet still increasing to epochal decibels of inestimable
value - Now you see an object somewhat elliptical flipped reciprocal
reaches critical mass with a pass of the volume in cyclical
motion stirring a potion ingredients: quotients and medians
and the means to an end seems to begin in the range of strange attractors
flying on Cartesian planes with factors in an alternate path backwards
subtracted along an axis of y or x even cyber techs can’t find the next
integer hidden in the circumference amongst this hyper text
find the sine and tangent of a mind that’s rampantly spouting this
calculate the calculus of an amalgamated alchemist
it amounts to this static relation to quadratic equations
add in the radius of Saturn’s duration to fatten summations
try penning your bilinear stats to a grid or a graph
but perhaps consider forgetting the Euclidean path and inventing the math
intersect the vocal chords with words and plot the secants
as the events unfold and spot the sheet inside a Fibinachi sequence
look you can add rhymes for milleniums but still ya sum is none
in other words, welcome to Microphone Mathematics 101

what a load of nerdy croc shit. never return to this section of RB EVER.

Yeah lol i have never commented on a open mic but lolz man. This is mad gay. Theres a fine line between dope vocab and being a completely nerdy retard and you achieved the latter and some.

i douse the rhythm with a thousand algorithms as curricula
discover that the globe and sun are perpendicular
find the sine and tangent of a mind that’s rampantly spouting this
calculate the calculus of an amalgamated alchemist

^wowww

^hmmmmmm.... i just read your last rap dawg......you kinda suck, but thanx anyway.

2 Links man....and dont listen to the dumbfucks above, if Bounce or someone had dropped this, it would have been seen as dope

^Lol at that. Thats the weakest shit ever..Oh if bounce dropped it i would say it was cool... First of all bounce wouldnt drop this gayness and secondly stfu. Im giving him feedback. Negative feedback, because its a fucking horrible piece. And lol my last battle was against passive who was in second coming at the time and i merked him. Stfu fool, you dont no shit. What i want you to do is define all of those words for me



Stop posting useless garbage...you gave no feed, telling someone that their drop sucked is not feed moron
-Laur

he used his words correctly

for using all that math terminology in a piece with some pretty coo rhythm and schemes it's kinda dope

but for basically saying nothing and once again using all that math terminology it's kinda gay

lol - coo piece - definantly what you'd call nerd rap - if I was into nerd rap I'd say this was dope.... as is, it's out of my comfort zone

im not gonna lie...i actually do like this drop....very creative even tho i cant understand half the words you used...but i must say it was fuckin dope..i have never seen a drop like this in om yet...deffintly shit that should be HOF if good nuff...flow was nice barely fell off...mulites were there some where within those big fuckin words lol...some lines were strecthed as fuck...but meh what can i say bout that...strutre was the only real bad thing...but once again thats cuz of the words you used....the title didnt really catch my eye lol...but nice shit and u need 2 links...one of them could be my new om Drama..keep up peace...

ayo, i was lost in this shit, so all i can say is a little

the flow was nice, structure could've been better, to make it perfect you could've, made the flow better, had the structure more in sink, and used words that werent so fuckin big, cuz i got lost in the shit, but not a bad peice, i see A's on ur report card....LOl, stay up and stay at it

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What i want you to do is define all of those words for me

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Do it your damn self. Cats is too lazy nowadays to read anything remotely educational. Ledge, this was a sweet piece. Like college graduate braggadocio bro. I can somewhat agree with SMZ since the content wasn't insanely deep or emotional, but that doesn't matter here. It's tight to see a drop put together the way you strung in all the mathematical terms as metaphors of emcee shit. Nicely done. Don't listen to the ignorance.

Ight here we go.


First off my comment wasn’t aimed at you, it was actually aimed at the stupid mother fucker in front of you. Second of all that load of bullshit you posted had absolutely nothing to do with feedback what so ever. There’s a big difference between constructive criticism and being and absolute asshole. But hey I do apologize if my particular brand of lyrical intellect made you feel inferior in anyway. I do realize some of you are absolute idiots and have yet to explore the English language beyond the shadows of the four letter words. So look I’m going to do you a favor and help you help yourself - so instead of me defining these words how about you go and grab a dictionary and find out what the fuck they mean on your own.


oh yeah this is aimed at the drunk whatever is name is.

I have never heared of nerd rap before, haha at nerd rap, the fuck? But nahh I liked this piece the vocabulary was really great, all the algebra and geometric metaphores were great and you put it together nicely. It flowed really well and made a whole lot of sense but just didn't really have anything emotional that made me feel like you enjoyed writing this. The fuckin metaphores were dope as hell and it was extremely original but it felt like as if you didn't care about this. Other than the lack of emotion, everything was great and I liked it a lot.

I understand what everything means. Wanted him to define all the words himself to show us he does.

All this says is " im guna " the whole time. Then just forces a whole alot of rhyming, and doesnt actually achieve anything. What are you trying to say? A whole bunch of highschool maths proofs and theories..smh i cant really see how anyone can like this. If Dj is right and these sorta concepts can get HOF then lol at the state of this forum.

Btw if you dont consider " this piece is horrible" as feedback then i suggest YOU pick up a dictionary and look it up. Tool.

Edit: As Ha just alluded to below. Anyone could right this..The way you're talking is as if you are a creative genius who created these terms. A 14 year old learns 80% of that stuff in highschool. You're just applying mathetical terms to real life things..its not hard cunt.

So yes my feedback is: That was a horrible concept, fucking boring with absolutely no imagery and emotion. Try harded vocab which people can understand but just cant relate to.

lol, anyone could write this kind of thing.

I lay the foundation and devide the angles equally like isosceles

it's all good knowing they're all maths terminology but when we can't even define the words you're using, what's the fucking point of posting that shit.

you owe me bitch.

Okay let me help you understand something , so that we can quite wasting each others time. Look I don’t give a fuck about you. I don’t give a fuck how smart you think you are, I don’t give a fuck how dope you wish you were, and I really could careless rather of not you give a fuck about me. So do us both a favor - shut the fuck up and quite clogging my thread.

fuck you wack nerd.

You should do one about ABC's next.

nerd rapz, maybe.

but none the less.. it's different. i like it. i say we embrace it. but lets not forget to also justify our thugz.

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then one about Ben

Blah at the argumentative heads. Ya'll posted like 4-5 times already and the threads like an hour old? Get the fuck over it. If you don't like it then just say so and move on. I don't understand why you feel you need to defend your position on why his verse was garbage. Honestly.

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Blah at the argumentative heads. Ya'll posted like 4-5 times already and the threads like an hour old? Get the fuck over it. If you don't like it then just say so and move on. I don't understand why you feel you need to defend your position on why his verse was garbage. Honestly.

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That's not really the problem. The problem is people just post negative feedback without any contructive criticism.

And then the thread makers argues with them.

Then the cycle begins and repeats.

And then someone like you makes an obvious observation that everyone already knows about like you gained an higher understanding about the situation.

And then someone like you comes in who lives off having the last say and perpetuates the situation more, instead of just leaving it be after being asked to chill. I guess some people just enjoy being anoying and getting fake attention on the internet. Well, congratulations.

lol at fake attention. you live in a fairy world.

You know Mindless

I don’t really understand what all this hostility is about. Its just a verse about mathematical terminology . I never said it was dope or that it was suppose to be deep, I was just flowing. I mean damn is there some sort of controversy surrounding math that I don’t know about? Are they using algebra to kill the Japanese or something? Should I be watching CNN - I mean let me know - did you guys fail geometry…is that it? Or does my verse contain some sort of subliminal bigotry written in code? I mean for the record the Jews are cool with me, the Mexicans can stay, I’m anti-war, it’s Black power ‘til I die, rest in peace Tupac and damn I miss Chris Farley. I mean I don’t know what else to say…. besides hopefully that clears up any misconceptions that my sinister verse about numerical racism and hatred might have implied. I’m truly sorry.

Stop freeposting...take some time off...bye

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Originally Posted by LedgenZ

You know Mindless

I don’t really understand what all this hostility is about. Its just a verse about mathematical terminology . I never said it was dope or that it was suppose to be deep, I was just flowing. I mean damn is there some sort of controversy surrounding math that I don’t know about? Are they using algebra to kill the Japanese or something? Should I be watching CNN - I mean let me know - did you guys fail geometry…is that it? Or does my verse contain some sort of subliminal bigotry written in code? I mean for the record the Jews are cool with me, the Mexicans can stay, I’m anti-war, it’s Black power ‘til I die, rest in peace Tupac and damn I miss Chris Farley. I mean I don’t know what else to say…. besides hopefully that clears up any misconceptions that my sinister verse about numerical racism and hatred might have implied. I’m truly sorry.

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That's just the way people on RB talk.


This isn't like open poetry night or anything.


I can't imagine actual human beings being at the other end of the computers.... I just can't.









Edit: SMZ, keep talking shit son. Come see me.

basically - you just randomly caught the attention of a few guys who get off on being irritating and hopefully getting some reaction out of somebody

there's nothing wrong with your verse.... it's just a standard "I'm dope" piece, except you threw in the extra tangent of using a bunch of math terms....

ignore these kids - cats have done abc pieces before.... and I've heard some dope sounding ones.... personally it didn't catch me cause, I mean you not really saying anything and just rapping about math is like fheh to me - but still, showed some skill in how you wove the words, so coo ish

No more posts unless it is feed

^Did you ban both me and marv for saying his piece was garbage? wow..take a look around. If you are a bit trigger happy then visit every thread and 70% of them will have someone making fun of sum1 saying wot they did was stupid etc.

dope ass vocab lmaoo

the vocab would of been nice if their wasnt so much, andif they werent so mathy. the flow was chunky cus you had to squeeze out most of the big words.

I liked it,it was good,and the vocab was off da hook man!
I liked the reference to mathmatical terms and stuff,it was somethin different.
Overall,I give this 8/10,you bring da flames man~

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Originally Posted by Dunkalicious

I understand what everything means. Wanted him to define all the words himself to show us he does.

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You are a complete moron for stating such a thing.

If you read , actually read what he droped everything
made sense the words were used correctly like SMZ stated.
Hence Legendz understanding perfectly his word
choice you freakin wussy..



Anyway this drop was unique and very interesting in my
opinion..I took some of the math courses so I understood
however a bit rusty with math because it's been so long
but nicely done. I seen your other drops Legendz and you
are really good. It's good you took a chance on something
different and educational...Kept a great flow scheme as well
which is difficult to maintain...


stay writing.

i'll admit it was good, just funny in some ways.

try to achieve something subtle. that's a challenge. this is some major overkill man. nobody wants to wade through this. seems like some canibus/chino xl shit to me though. some people like that

this shit was dope, fucka hater, it was easily understandable if you know how to read and have mathemtic skills, i understood this whole peice maybe one or 2 words i wasn't familiar with but i had grade 11 math skills in grade 7 from being tested cuz i was flying by math, so this was intresting maybe nerdy yah, but if you have a brain it was good, the flow was even nice as fuck, it wasn't hard to read at all ive seen 10 times choppier flows by people who have no intelligence, pz bitches.

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