16 Lines
45 Minutes
RB Rules
U Spit First
^if thats a big problem ideas accepted chump
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16 Lines
45 Minutes
RB Rules
U Spit First
^if thats a big problem ideas accepted chump
I never accepted this....sorry
whatever I will drop then ........check
wtf...u told c to set it and not me...ur a BITCH...i dont c y anybody would duck sumbody like u...
SOMEBODY PLZ shut this battle down...u fuckin disgust me Educated...
ok....gimme an extension...dinner time
check
u have 30 minutes instead of 45 when u check in as a nice guy
the kids more bitch than a dog species rockin a pink glow
which explains his peculiar behavior to accepting being a hoe
i asked u to spit first to expose this dick like highlighters
alias username stood out good<---in his dreams to be an average writer
only potiential acheived by this bitch is through steroid injections
the last hopeful future this kid had was during BIll Clintons' election
like a bad infection...ya punches seem to just ^itch out...like u hav no hands
and ur flow seems to live off shortcummings...no wonder u require a 2nd man
the guy would give it his best run...but he was born without a mind
he asked extensions from a rapbattle to go out to dinnertime...
this crash dummy went head first into suckin himself off for respect
heads' arent meant to fit into assholes<---explains ur shit marks instead of text
Educations' taken lightly these days...just like educateds' career
he brings' fear...to the commercialing of womens' underwear
this kid brings more dirt to the table than "low blows"
we all know he specializes.....................^^^^^^
for men...but i cant b mad thats the only thing the kid' knows
ok checkin in now....sorry we went to this nice restraunt for my Birthday...I am moving away from home....here I go...droppin in like 10 or so
^ Look dude you need to take your wrists and tie them together
Cause your punches don't hit and they don't rhyme any better
You're correcting people's grammar.......why do you do that kid?
We all know that you're an ass, no wonder you're drops are shit
Poor guy, but at least rich in heart and this is what I'm inferrin'
You aren't worth it, your parents didn't even get you life insurance
See the truth is what I'm spittin'.....self glory? Bitch you're kiddin
I'd tell you to Go Fish, but then most of your lines would be bitten
You couldn't take off, unless you are winning bets with whores
Since when did Power resemble wack lines and shitty metaphors
See you're whole styles corroded...you won't measure to vets
To be close to a win....? Dude you have NO presence in text
I guess I am battling a "Text Master", he says he's the best at it
Which brings me to believe that I should never expect rappin'
You're used to losing, so it's no wonder people get you demoted
But you could win this battle hands down, if parapeligics voted
Quote:
Originally Posted by C.Wrighter
^ Look dude you need to take your wrists and tie them togetherQuote:
Originally Posted by Power Incision
Cause your punches don't hit and they don't rhyme any better
You're correcting people's grammar.......why do you do that kid?
We all know that you're an ass, no wonder you're drops are shit
Poor guy, but at least rich in heart and this is what I'm inferrin'
You aren't worth it, your parents didn't even get you life insurance
See the truth is what I'm spittin'.....self glory? Bitch you're kiddin
I'd tell you to Go Fish, but then most of your lines would be bitten
You couldn't take off, unless you are winning bets with whores
Since when did Power resemble wack lines and shitty metaphors
See you're whole styles corroded...you won't measure to vets
To be close to a win....? Dude you have NO presence in text
I guess I am battling a "Text Master", he says he's the best at it
Which brings me to believe that I should never expect rappin'
You're used to losing, so it's no wonder people get you demoted
But you could win this battle hands down, if parapeligics voted
FORGOT QUOTES
upppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnggggggggggggg number one
You're used to losing, so it's no wonder people get you demoted
But you could win this battle hands down, if parapeligics voted
See the truth is what I'm spittin'.....self glory? Bitch you're kiddin
I'd tell you to Go Fish, but then most of your lines would be bitten
You couldn't take off, unless you are winning bets with whores
Since when did Power resemble wack lines and shitty metaphors
vs.
a bunch of played shit. =/
This battle started of meh, Power, you need to come harder man. You need stronger punches, more solidity behind them. You shoulda went for harder personals than a fuckin' name glow, shits played along with all the ass jokes, and all the rest of the shit built up in your verse. Edu. I saw a lot of creativity in your verse, but also a few played concepts. Work on it a bit.
v/Edu. for having more originality in the verse.
^thanx for ur personal input...lookin for bar to bar explanations...uppping number two
upppiinnnnnnnnnnngggggggggggg number one'
^^^CHECK THAT UPPPIN...sorry MODs...Upping number THREE
^^^he changed his' username font n glow...it was pink...uppinQuote:
the kids more bitch than a dog species rockin a pink glow
which explains his peculiar behavior to accepting being a hoe
this crash dummy went head first into suckin himself off for respect
heads' arent meant to fit into assholes<---explains ur shit marks instead of text
^This punch was iight. I see where you were heading but it was worded badly.
vs.
See the truth is what I'm spittin'.....self glory? Bitch you're kiddin
I'd tell you to Go Fish, but then most of your lines would be bitten
^Decent
You're used to losing, so it's no wonder people get you demoted
But you could win this battle hands down, if parapeligics voted
^Could've been better but good.
Educated took this battle. Power, you need to work on landing the punch. Wordplay and wit. You have talent but your not their yet.
\\//Educated
uppin
uppin again
uppin this again
uppin numero 4
uppin 5
See the truth is what I'm spittin'.....self glory? Bitch you're kiddin
I'd tell you to Go Fish, but then most of your lines would be bitten
You couldn't take off, unless you are winning bets with whores
Since when did Power resemble wack lines and shitty metaphors
vs
Nothing
v/Educated
Had better punche's and overall better verse.
Played concepts
vs.
Poor guy, but at least rich in heart and this is what I'm inferrin'
You aren't worth it, your parents didn't even get you life insurance
See the truth is what I'm spittin'.....self glory? Bitch you're kiddin
I'd tell you to Go Fish, but then most of your lines would be bitten
You couldn't take off, unless you are winning bets with whores
Since when did Power resemble wack lines and shitty metaphors
V:---:Ed.
both verses were kinda played but Ed. came harder and more consistant then his opponent, Power was more predictable and the wordplay and nameplay was poor
You're used to losing, so it's no wonder people get you demoted
But you could win this battle hands down, if parapeligics voted
Vs.
played shit
educated took this easy lol the other guy came hella played and needed to work on his wording edu you could work on wording but your conceots are aight read the LLL to get a grasp of better wording and wordplay both of you
V.Ed