Ten Lines
Due:30 Min
Blind Spit
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Ten Lines
Due:30 Min
Blind Spit
ha, didnt even know this was coming up.
check.
Check In As Well..
Your a bitch, but i have to say get off my nuts B
and..
I'd yell Trade Marks but you can't even touch me
And a force in the water? you can't even make waves G
And we don't need to surf to know your tidal will always be beach
You'll never see me, your times runnin out i got shit you can't top
And i'll hit you with so many hands it'll look like your on the clock
And dudes a fag, Got more than you can handle on the plate
Because everytime people ask you to measure all you say is no, weight
& i'm not just hype, from east to west everyone sees i'm felt
& i don't do hits below the waste....
.....because your just another knotch on my belt.
bitch, don't try me.
EDIT: i edited knot to knotch, my bad.
So Mr.W.rite retired?
and
dog your mom’s are whore so much it isn’t funny
So I’ll punch the bitch in the chest
And hit her right on the money
your careers going nowhere sitck in the Fl section
but dont worry i`ll help ya out a bit
by sending you in the W.rite dirrection
ya girls a skank i made her twist and twirl
Put so many bags on her face
Had her thinking she was a cover girl
and shes on my dick she wants me to make her baby
I can easily say i dont need feet....Toenail your lady
Cause
Music runs in the family your dad sister and aunt see
Cause you like rap..
while your mom has a collection of oldies
Old'D's boobs
Your a bitch, but i have to say get off my nuts B
and..
I'd yell Trade Marks but you can't even touch me
Uh, it's okay.
And a force in the water? you can't even make waves G
And we don't need to surf to know your tidal will always be beach
lol, kinda witty.
You'll never see me, your times runnin out i got shit you can't top
And i'll hit you with so many hands it'll look like your on the clock
Eh, it's okay, never seen it before though.
And dudes a fag, Got more than you can handle on the plate
Because everytime people ask you to measure all you say is no, weight
cool.
& i'm not just hype, from east to west everyone sees i'm felt
& i don't do hits below the waste....
.....because your just another knot on my belt.
ah, better.
Vs
So Mr.W.rite retired?
and
dog your mom’s are whore so much it isn’t funny
So I’ll punch the bitch in the chest
And hit her right on the money
Naw.
your careers going nowhere sitck in the Fl section
but dont worry i`ll help ya out a bit
by sending you in the W.rite dirrection
cool.
ya girls a skank i made her twist and twirl
Put so many bags on her face
Had her thinking she was a cover girl
Ehh, okay i guess.
and shes on my dick she wants me to make her baby
I can easily say i dont need feet....Toenail your lady
Cool.
Cause
Music runs in the family your dad sister and aunt see
Cause you like rap..
while your mom has a collection of oldies
lol, wtf is this?
Over all, I have to go with Ancel for coming more fresh, and original, from my opinion. He had better concepts, and not all the same, and im not saying TM did, but i saw some similiar. So yah..
Ancel.
Its amazing how he hasnt been here in months logs in votes and logs out..
wtf he is still on?
is on all the time?
are you gay and need excuses?
And a force in the water? you can't even make waves G
And we don't need to surf to know your tidal will always be beach
And dudes a fag, Got more than you can handle on the plate
Because everytime people ask you to measure all you say is no, weight
VS.
your careers going nowhere stick in the Fl section
but dont worry i`ll help ya out a bit
by sending you in the W.rite dirrection
ok Ancel came more like prepared and well thought out..more creative and just had a lil bit more consistant punches and freshness.
V//Ancel
Your a bitch, but i have to say get off my nuts B
and..
I'd yell Trade Marks but you can't even touch me
aiight, decent nameplay.
& i'm not just hype, from east to west everyone sees i'm felt
& i don't do hits below the waste....
.....because your just another knot on my belt.
vs.
dog your mom’s are whore so much it isn’t funny
So I’ll punch the bitch in the chest
And hit her right on the money
rofl.
your careers going nowhere sitck in the Fl section
but dont worry i`ll help ya out a bit
by sending you in the W.rite dirrection
Music runs in the family your dad sister and aunt see
Cause you like rap..
while your mom has a collection of oldies
Old D's ..kind've simple wordplay but lol. could've been better
both did ok. trade had that covergirl line which was ok too, but the paper bag shits kind've played. ancel had a no, weight line which was wack. and the tidal beach one was forced to me ..but that's pretty much it. surprisingly it looks like trade won ..
v. Trade Mark
And a force in the water? you can't even make waves G
And we don't need to surf to know your tidal will always be beach
^couldve been better,I like the concept an wordplay..but beach?
You'll never see me, your times runnin out i got shit you can't top
And i'll hit you with so many hands it'll look like your on the clock
^eh.aiight..
& i'm not just hype, from east to west everyone sees i'm felt
& i don't do hits below the waste....
.....because your just another knotch on my belt.
^cool.
vs.
your careers going nowhere sitck in the Fl section
but dont worry i`ll help ya out a bit
by sending you in the W.rite dirrection
^lol.
ya girls a skank i made her twist and twirl
Put so many bags on her face
Had her thinking she was a cover girl
^naw,but couldve been so much better...
and shes on my dick she wants me to make her baby
I can easily say i dont need feet....Toenail your lady
^forced a bit,but okay..lol.
Cause
Music runs in the family your dad sister and aunt see
Cause you like rap..
while your mom has a collection of oldies
^str8.I giggled a bit..but that it.
overall/-this battle was cool.but I got Trade winnin this..by just a bit more.Thats it.I just didnt like Ancel's Trade Mark nameplay..cuz I saw that somewhere before..not sayin its bit,just not appealing 2 me.IMO.An the ToeNail bit from T.M. was forced but still had a lil wit to it.basic battle.
V/-TradeMark.
2-2 and upp#2..
wow.....uppin.
Your a bitch, but i have to say get off my nuts B
and..
I'd yell Trade Marks but you can't even touch me
*nahh
And a force in the water? you can't even make waves G
And we don't need to surf to know your tidal will always be beach
*good
You'll never see me, your times runnin out i got shit you can't top
And i'll hit you with so many hands it'll look like your on the clock
*good
And dudes a fag, Got more than you can handle on the plate
Because everytime people ask you to measure all you say is no, weight
*nahh
& i'm not just hype, from east to west everyone sees i'm felt
& i don't do hits below the waste....
.....because your just another knotch on my belt.
*ok
ok verse nuthin specail i liked a few lines i didn't like how u kept on sayin and in the beginin of each line...good flow tho..7/10
vs
and
dog your mom’s are whore so much it isn’t funny
So I’ll punch the bitch in the chest
And hit her right on the money
*ok
your careers going nowhere sitck in the Fl section
but dont worry i`ll help ya out a bit
by sending you in the W.rite dirrection
*ok
ya girls a skank i made her twist and twirl
Put so many bags on her face
Had her thinking she was a cover girl
*lol thats funny..
and shes on my dick she wants me to make her baby
I can easily say i dont need feet....Toenail your lady
*lol wtf...
Cause
Music runs in the family your dad sister and aunt see
Cause you like rap..
while your mom has a collection of oldies
*nahh
lol fuckin funny verse had i guess good punches i liked them...uhh didn't really liked your struc tho so...8/10
vote trade mark good battle ppl.....
hit the siggg
uppity....
And a force in the water? you can't even make waves G
And we don't need to surf to know your tidal will always be beach
You'll never see me, your times runnin out i got shit you can't top
And i'll hit you with so many hands it'll look like your on the clock
vs
your careers going nowhere stick in the Fl section
but dont worry i`ll help ya out a bit
by sending you in the W.rite dirrection
i felt ancel took this batlle....TM had sum good concepts but worded wrong, and had Ancel had sum goodshit aswell...but seeing as Ancel got me going more he gets my vote...good battle guys
Your a bitch, but i have to say get off my nuts B
and..
I'd yell Trade Marks but you can't even touch me
thats was a cool nameplay
& i'm not just hype, from east to west everyone sees i'm felt
& i don't do hits below the waste....
.....because your just another knot on my belt.
vs.
your careers going nowhere sitck in the Fl section
but dont worry i`ll help ya out a bit
by sending you in the W.rite dirrection
Music runs in the family your dad sister and aunt see
Cause you like rap..
while your mom has a collection of oldies
this was cool, i liked the wordplay
overall this was a pretty close battle i think. both had good flow
punches and personals were also good but i think trade mark
had slight better. so in that case trademarkg ets my vote
v/trade.
Meh...nothing
vs.
dog your mom’s are whore so much it isn’t funny
So I’ll punch the bitch in the chest
And hit her right on the money
your careers going nowhere sitck in the Fl section
but dont worry i`ll help ya out a bit
by sending you in the W.rite dirrection
both of yall structures were kinda off, played, and some weak punches were thrown on both sides, but i feel TM came harder and more consistant with punches and personals
v:----:TM
And a force in the water? you can't even make waves G
And we don't need to surf to know your tidal will always be beach
You'll never see me, your times runnin out i got shit you can't top
And i'll hit you with so many hands it'll look like your on the clock
v.s.
ya girls a skank i made her twist and twirl
Put so many bags on her face
Had her thinking she was a cover girl
and shes on my dick she wants me to make her baby
I can easily say i dont need feet....Toenail your lady
This battle wasn't as good as it could've been. As far as I can see TradeMark came a bit better with concepts and punches. Personals weren't exactly shown in his verse nor used. But his punches were a bit witty. Just a little. His flow was nice and his delivery was ok. Wording was also quite good. Where on the other Ancel had the punches but he let it down with his wording. "And" was very repititive in his verse. Leading it sound like run on sentences. No dissin. His punches were nice and flow was ok.
V.TradeMark. For the reasons listed above.