10-12 lines
due in 30
blindspit
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10-12 lines
due in 30
blindspit
checkin in. good luck.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=302521
Kid made a thread in bitchslapped "looking for a fight"
But once he steps in the ring he's booking for a flight
He's too scared of me.................
It should be the other way, he's a michael jackson look-a-like
Kids a fuckin gay, i told him to committ suicide so he took a knife
Your a fuckin wack fagget, your too weak, your in the Juniors
No one notices you kid, no one cares about you, people just ignore
I don't see why u even bother rapping or even living for
I'ma spit, spin you around and escort you to the nearest door
So u can have your whole life to think how bad you got whored
I just battled you bitch cuz i got bored, your fuckin despicable
Rapping takes skill and you are not close to being analytical
After i spit, bitch the condition i leave you in is seriously critical
Peace muthafucka.
Okay here returns the grim reaper, hims uh keeper
ur a shallow bitch, but in yo girl i go deeper
its 1pm, damn! yo girls uh sleeper
is that you buzzen
i see yo name in her beeper
it to bad no one wants u cause ur skills get cheaper by the dozen
stop threading and go fuck ur own cousin
plain and simply im better than you, so next time come right
where do u get yo lyrics from dude vanilla ice?
okay your time is im done with this fight
God sent me but ill make you take your own life
Peace bitch!
iight upping # 1 for votes.
uppen for votes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=302523
i would have to say fatal killed in diz one.. u both did good but fatal had smooth rhymes and a great flow goin.....jr. u did great too but i ljuss like fatal a lil more
v//fatal blacout
uppin for votes. # 1.
man FATAL Killed it i dun even have to break it down lol shit son good jop my fav bar is
it to bad no one wants u cause ur skills get cheaper by the dozen
stop threading and go fuck ur own cousin
v// FATAL No Hatin
uppen for votes
uppin # 2 for some votes.
fatal blaccc..
less wack
no hate, but verses were wack....
vote//fatal by the punches..
uppin # 3 for votes.
uppen for vote #4 whats wrong with people vote already
uppin # 4 for votes.
do i even have to break-it down line by line? naw man.....
fatal- ur verse was good u had some ok punches and personals, ur wording was a lil off but still u won..........6/10
JR- ur verse was meh....meh garbage, ur lines idk if they were even lines.......no punches nor perosnals......2/10
v/fatal
wordie^ this battle should not be broken down...it's clearly onesided
Fatal: you had some good concepts here and there but you need to be creative all throughout the verse and u had nice personals and a couple punches,but a bit were played but you are elevating good job here enogh to win I understand it wasn't your best dropping ability but you still came with a couple good lines w/ set ups
JR: well you need some elevattion but you seem to look like you're getting a handle on some ok concpets that aren't too played but you need better wordplay and punches as well as good personals but what is aonther thing is setting up your opponet so try reading LLL battles to get an idea on what to look for when you are thinking of your punches as well as personals and wordplay
V/Fatal...Better Punches/Concepts