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Agree on a Line Limit
Verses Are Due Fri 12EST
extension goes to Sat 12 Midday
Voting Ends Sunday night
I'm thinking around 14, coo?
yeah, 14 - 20
This'll be my first time facing you right?
yeah
and I'll try to go a bit more than 14 then but match whoever drops first
You underestimate me, bitch, when I finish, ain't even hurtin left, dunce
Of course you never faced me before...
...you can only face certain death once
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Mystery~Murdera
Still...Quote:
Originally Posted by Mystery~Murdera
This dude thinks he's dope n he'll send me hopelessly fleeing afar
He already stopped my stellar week...
...by puttin me vs someone so far from being a star
'Least you put your kid before text, for that I got respect for this geek
I'm sure you WILL put her to sleep first...
...n only THEN the heads in the league
After your second quote I was pissed, s'like you were an old enemy
But I feel ya when ya said no dissrespect...
...it's true ya disses won't get any
N I dunno why ya run the league when moddin gives ya the hardest time
But whatever ya say, goes...
...towards proving your text's well past it's prime
I got the fastest rhyme, when YOU claim skill, everyone sees you're wrong
N if you call the shots... your title one should be "Really Long"
I know the feeling's strong, but beatin me's only somethin you WANT to do
See I command respect while you can't even coax it to come to you
And I aint' stoppin dude, I'll battle more, so heads facin death is many
I get respect for every vet I beat, shame this win won't get me any
I'm hott n b... the results won't be something they're shocked to see
as far as I know there's specs of blood any time that you pop a V
just stop and leave, you've improved but dude I'm rid of you - you're through
because if this is As Good As It Gets then Jack Nicholson should sue
Ur fickle man it's true dont try n laugh Mystery doesnt hide in the past
and how on earth are you second coming? <--- when they invited you last
This guy is ass, got shit flipped like the sky is grass I'm glad that we faced
helping my mod skills - one less fucked up vote I wont have to erase
blasted disgrace elevate all you want but ur still whack man, believe me
wordings poor, wordplay sucks, n deliveries have begun to make labor look easy
See V you've got it in your head that ur $pit and you're acting wild
so don't talk shit about evolve...
....and then... in you very next.... verse... jack... his style
I aint laughed in a while but your verse is doing the trick, i've slain ur text
but just be happy... cuz my last line is the closest ^^^ you've came to sex
don't blame the vets, my sides splitting so hard that my laugh is hurting
how do u join a new crew then the next week get left out in a tag tourney
so u can pack up the hearst I really don't remember a battler worse..
& since when's it innovative to put lines in ur sig that overshadow ur verse
You underestimate me, bitch, when I finish, ain't even hurtin left, dunce
Of course you never faced me before...
...you can only face certain death once
DOPE
After your second quote I was pissed, s'like you were an old enemy
But I feel ya when ya said no dissrespect...
...it's true ya disses won't get any
N I dunno why ya run the league when moddin gives ya the hardest time
But whatever ya say, goes...
...towards proving your text's well past it's prime
I got the fastest rhyme, when YOU claim skill, everyone sees you're wrong
N if you call the shots... your title one should be "Really Long"
I know the feeling's strong, but beatin me's only somethin you WANT to do
See I command respect while you can't even coax it to come to you
And I aint' stoppin dude, I'll battle more, so heads facin death is many
I get respect for every vet I beat, shame this win won't get me any
vs
Ur fickle man it's true dont try n laugh Mystery doesnt hide in the past
and how on earth are you second coming? <--- when they invited you last
ROTF!!!!
This guy is ass, got shit flipped like the sky is grass I'm glad that we faced
helping my mod skills - one less fucked up vote I wont have to erase
blasted disgrace elevate all you want but ur still whack man, believe me
wordings poor, wordplay sucks, n deliveries have begun to make labor look easy
don't blame the vets, my sides splitting so hard that my laugh is hurting
how do u join a new crew then the next week get left out in a tag tourney
ROTFLMFAO funny shit
wow... just wow... I dunno if MM just wasnt feeling vaskezs verse or sumthin.. but I was and think that although MM came with the best line of the battle (the tag team tourney one) Vaskez managed to beat him.. he just had more shit that made me think dammn..
must be something in the air..
vote Vaskez....
btw is their a prize for the being the first voter in every battle?
You underestimate me, bitch, when I finish, ain't even hurtin left, dunce
Of course you never faced me before...
...you can only face certain death once
I know the feeling's strong, but beatin me's only somethin you WANT to do
See I command respect while you can't even coax it to come to you
vs.
This guy is ass, got shit flipped like the sky is grass I'm glad that we faced
helping my mod skills - one less fucked up vote I wont have to erase
don't blame the vets, my sides splitting so hard that my laugh is hurting
how do u join a new crew then the next week get left out in a tag tourney
lmao
i got it tied on quotables. and although MMs quotables were better, and he had the best almost quotable line (second coming one), vaskez had less wtf lines like MMs evolve one. i think i still gotta go with MM here though with a little bit of a stronger verse although i dont think this battle was that good. both could have came much better imo. vaskez's closer has been used numerous times, and ive seen a stellar punch in the 1-2 league as well. so overall i have MM taking it with the better lines.
v/ MM
You underestimate me, bitch, when I finish, ain't even hurtin left, dunce
Of course you never faced me before...
...you can only face certain death once
After your second quote I was pissed, s'like you were an old enemy
But I feel ya when ya said no dissrespect...
...it's true ya disses won't get any
I know the feeling's strong, but beatin me's only somethin you WANT to do
See I command respect while you can't even coax it to come to you
vs.
Ur fickle man it's true dont try n laugh Mystery doesnt hide in the past
and how on earth are you second coming? <--- when they invited you last
lol @ that
blasted disgrace elevate all you want but ur still whack man, believe me
wordings poor, wordplay sucks, n deliveries have begun to make labor look easy
don't blame the vets, my sides splitting so hard that my laugh is hurting
how do u join a new crew then the next week get left out in a tag tourney
ok, so i dont really want to vote here, because this shit is very very close, and it COULD go either way. I dont think there is a definate winner here. I almost quoted that long shot concept, but the wording wasnt on for me. i had to read it a few times before it clicked. damn, its so close, i feel like if i vote on way or the other, i'd be wrong doing so. becasue of the lines like as good as it gets and the evolve i think i have to give this to vaskez. but then when i re read the verses M's seems to come off harder and more direct. i need more time...
fuck is yal niggas on about? stop dick-ridin...no offense MM
You underestimate me, bitch, when I finish, ain't even hurtin left, dunce
Of course you never faced me before...
...you can only face certain death once
After your second quote I was pissed, s'like you were an old enemy
But I feel ya when ya said no dissrespect...
...it's true ya disses won't get any
I got the fastest rhyme, when YOU claim skill, everyone sees you're wrong
N if you call the shots... your title one should be "Really Long"
And I aint' stoppin dude, I'll battle more, so heads facin death is many
I get respect for every vet I beat, shame this win won't get me any
vs
just stop and leave, you've improved but dude I'm rid of you - you're through
because if this is As Good As It Gets then Jack Nicholson should sue
Ur fickle man it's true dont try n laugh Mystery doesnt hide in the past
and how on earth are you second coming? <--- when they invited you last
blasted disgrace elevate all you want but ur still whack man, believe me
wordings poor, wordplay sucks, n deliveries have begun to make labor look easy
if that one line was as dope as everyone seems to think :rolleyes: then i may have given this to MM, but....it wasnt sorry. actually i think MM is sorta running outta gas, maybe used up too many concepts too fast. i dunno, but this is below par compared to what he usually drops.
v/ vaskez
this was really hard because neither came all that great
but both still had a couple of pretty dope lines as well
Vaskez
man your verse was pretty good i liked the concepts
but your wording is killing man, you're doing better but you seem to always have one or two lines in your battles that have great concepts but sub par wording
and wording is key
like your opener
You underestimate me, bitch, when I finish, ain't even hurtin left, dunce
Of course you never faced me before...
...you can only face certain death once
not being pickey but this could have been better, i liked it but i could have really been dope
anyways..
let me vote..
This dude thinks he's dope n he'll send me hopelessly fleeing afar
He already stopped my stellar week...
...by puttin me vs someone so far from being a star
nice but could of been better
N I dunno why ya run the league when moddin gives ya the hardest time
But whatever ya say, goes...
...towards proving your text's well past it's prime
not bad...this was better
And I aint' stoppin dude, I'll battle more, so heads facin death is many
I get respect for every vet I beat, shame this win won't get me any
ok ^ this line may have lost the battle for you..not because it was bad or anything
but because u used the same concept in earlier in your verse
even the rhyme is the same, try to stay away from that next time
it may have been ok in during regular season, but there is little margin of error in the playoffs..
MM
man i just didnt see that fire in your verse like i usually do
didnt seem like u put much effort...
some lines were entertaining and creative and some were blah
Ur fickle man it's true dont try n laugh Mystery doesnt hide in the past
and how on earth are you second coming? <--- when they invited you last
This guy is ass, got shit flipped like the sky is grass I'm glad that we faced
helping my mod skills - one less fucked up vote I wont have to erase
these were nice..didnt really like the opener or the Nicholson line
wasnt feelin those too much, but u picked it up here
I aint laughed in a while but your verse is doing the trick, i've slain ur text
but just be happy... cuz my last line is the closest ^^^ you've came to sex
don't blame the vets, my sides splitting so hard that my laugh is hurting
how do u join a new crew then the next week get left out in a tag tourney
these helped your verse in the long run...i wasnt feeling the Evolve line or the labor
line, they've been done before, well the concept itself has, you know what i mean
the rest of just ok for me and the verse as a whole was decent just kinda below your standards ...
ima have to vote MM.. he had more quotables and his verse overall was better
v/MM
not much time to vote..as I'm leaving tomorrow for vacation. I will say this was a good battle.. and the first battle I've seen from Vaskez where I thought he had some vet quality lines..
The stellar line was dope. The command respect line was good, not dope tho. M~M had the delivery line which was good. The dissrespect line I've used before Vaskez, lmao.. it seems like I've used half the concepts in this league sometimes. I need to stop texting. anyway, M~M your second coming line was decent but nothing better i don't think.. your opener was also good M~M... overall I think the verses were nearly evenly matched... M~M had some solid personals and some near misses, and Vaskez had some solid personals as well. Most of M~M's "near misses" were on personals and mnost of vaskez's "near misses" were on wordplays/ non-personals. Either way, nothing wack here. a good battle...everything was solid overal.. it came down to the best bars...and I think Vaskez's two bars I named, the stellar one and the command respect one, were slightly better than M~M's two. Mostly the stellar one though, that was pretty funny. close, but
vote - vaskez
You underestimate me, bitch, when I finish, ain't even hurtin left, dunce
Of course you never faced me before...
...you can only face certain death once
^decent, not great
This dude thinks he's dope n he'll send me hopelessly fleeing afar
He already stopped my stellar week...
...by puttin me vs someone so far from being a star
^cool, long-winded wording
'Least you put your kid before text, for that I got respect for this geek
I'm sure you WILL put her to sleep first...
...n only THEN the heads in the league
^kinda simple, fairly predictable, still ok
After your second quote I was pissed, s'like you were an old enemy
But I feel ya when ya said no dissrespect...
...it's true ya disses won't get any
^pretty cool
N I dunno why ya run the league when moddin gives ya the hardest time
But whatever ya say, goes...
...towards proving your text's well past it's prime
^good
I got the fastest rhyme, when YOU claim skill, everyone sees you're wrong
N if you call the shots... your title one should be "Really Long"
^cheesy but really funny to me. maybe i have a dire sense of humour lol
I know the feeling's strong, but beatin me's only somethin you WANT to do
See I command respect while you can't even coax it to come to you
^pretty cool
And I aint' stoppin dude, I'll battle more, so heads facin death is many
I get respect for every vet I beat, shame this win won't get me any
^nah i've seen this a lot of times
vs
I'm hott n b... the results won't be something they're shocked to see
as far as I know there's specs of blood any time that you pop a V
^ok
just stop and leave, you've improved but dude I'm rid of you - you're through
because if this is As Good As It Gets then Jack Nicholson should sue
^not really for me
Ur fickle man it's true dont try n laugh Mystery doesnt hide in the past
and how on earth are you second coming? <--- when they invited you last
^nicer
This guy is ass, got shit flipped like the sky is grass I'm glad that we faced
helping my mod skills - one less fucked up vote I wont have to erase
^ok but his voting doesn't really seem like great material for a diss
blasted disgrace elevate all you want but ur still whack man, believe me
wordings poor, wordplay sucks, n deliveries have begun to make labor look easy
^i've seen similar stuff before
See V you've got it in your head that ur $pit and you're acting wild
so don't talk shit about evolve...
....and then... in you very next.... verse... jack... his style
^hmmm
I aint laughed in a while but your verse is doing the trick, i've slain ur text
but just be happy... cuz my last line is the closest ^^^ you've came to sex
^alright
don't blame the vets, my sides splitting so hard that my laugh is hurting
how do u join a new crew then the next week get left out in a tag tourney
^funny personal
so u can pack up the hearst I really don't remember a battler worse..
& since when's it innovative to put lines in ur sig that overshadow ur verse
^ok, not great
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i think mm had a couple of the better lines of the battle to be honest, but they were only better by a little way, and i think vaskez outshined him in the remaining part of his verse. some of mm's seemed a little straightforward, whereas vas was more interesting. i wasn't expecting him to win but i gotta vote for vaskez.
v/vaskez
I got the fastest rhyme, when YOU claim skill, everyone sees you're wrong
N if you call the shots... your title one should be "Really Long"
I know the feeling's strong, but beatin me's only somethin you WANT to do
See I command respect while you can't even coax it to come to you
And I aint' stoppin dude, I'll battle more, so heads facin death is many
I get respect for every vet I beat, shame this win won't get me any
Sorry wasnt feeling the opener and ive seen the disrespect line...really felt this was a weak ass verse until the quoteables i have above came along.
This guy is ass, got shit flipped like the sky is grass I'm glad that we faced
helping my mod skills - one less fucked up vote I wont have to erase
blasted disgrace elevate all you want but ur still whack man, believe me
wordings poor, wordplay sucks, n deliveries have begun to make labor look easy
See V you've got it in your head that ur $pit and you're acting wild
so don't talk shit about evolve...
....and then... in you very next.... verse... jack... his style
don't blame the vets, my sides splitting so hard that my laugh is hurting
how do u join a new crew then the next week get left out in a tag tourney
so u can pack up the hearst I really don't remember a battler worse..
& since when's it innovative to put lines in ur sig that overshadow ur verse
I dunno, i was likin this shyt outside of maybe 2 lines, i feel like dude's still comin strong and the above was good, especially the tag tourney line (only really big line of the battle) and the sig line, vote line, and the delivery shyt was all quality, i feel like the expectations placed on M are so high that it takes away from his verses but like i said i got em in this one.
4-3 to me so far, Jay's still undecided
dude thinks he's dope n he'll send me hopelessly fleeing afar
He already stopped my stellar week...
...by puttin me vs someone so far from being a star
After your second quote I was pissed, s'like you were an old enemy
But I feel ya when ya said no dissrespect...
...it's true ya disses won't get any
N I dunno why ya run the league when moddin gives ya the hardest time
But whatever ya say, goes...
...towards proving your text's well past it's prime
I know the feeling's strong, but beatin me's only somethin you WANT to do
See I command respect while you can't even coax it to come to you
vs
Ur fickle man it's true dont try n laugh Mystery doesnt hide in the past
and how on earth are you second coming? <--- when they invited you last
blasted disgrace elevate all you want but ur still whack man, believe me
wordings poor, wordplay sucks, n deliveries have begun to make labor look easy
See V you've got it in your head that ur $pit and you're acting wild
so don't talk shit about evolve...
....and then... in you very next.... verse... jack... his style
meh
don't blame the vets, my sides splitting so hard that my laugh is hurting
how do u join a new crew then the next week get left out in a tag tourney
ok... MM how are you gonna use a punch to diss his 'fucked up votes' when you praise his voting like every week? lmao.. that right there killed it for me.. and it seems like every verse to anyone in my crew, there goes a '$pit' punch.. the fuck.. can't people come up with better material than to bring me into every verse?
Vas, some decent shit, nothin I was really wow'd by, but def enough to win this by a hair..
v/Vaskez
dude thinks he's dope n he'll send me hopelessly fleeing afar
He already stopped my stellar week...
...by puttin me vs someone so far from being a star
After your second quote I was pissed, s'like you were an old enemy
But I feel ya when ya said no dissrespect...
...it's true ya disses won't get any
I know the feeling's strong, but beatin me's only somethin you WANT to do
See I command respect while you can't even coax it to come to you
Kinda nice above average, good punches wordplay etc.
v.s
blasted disgrace elevate all you want but ur still whack man, believe me
wordings poor, wordplay sucks, n deliveries have begun to make labor look easy
See V you've got it in your head that ur $pit and you're acting wild
so don't talk shit about evolve...
....and then... in you very next.... verse... jack... his style
Above Average as well. Good wordplay, some personals
OVerall i got- Mystery By a hair on his chinni chin chin
Good battle guys coulda went either way
but i was feelin myst more
You underestimate me, bitch, when I finish, ain't even hurtin left, dunce
Of course you never faced me before...
...you can only face certain death once
this was cool. weird but cool.
After your second quote I was pissed, s'like you were an old enemy
But I feel ya when ya said no dissrespect...
...it's true ya disses won't get any
N I dunno why ya run the league when moddin gives ya the hardest time
But whatever ya say, goes...
...towards proving your text's well past it's prime
I got the fastest rhyme, when YOU claim skill, everyone sees you're wrong
N if you call the shots... your title one should be "Really Long"
And I aint' stoppin dude, I'll battle more, so heads facin death is many
I get respect for every vet I beat, shame this win won't get me any
Vaskez - overall i think it was a great verse coming from you man. real straightforward, real creative and weird, but your styles real unique to me. as is half the elite 8's style here lol. like your first line, weird because its direct but its afsdlmasdgl dunno how to explain it. pretty cool stuff though.
vs.
Ur fickle man it's true dont try n laugh Mystery doesnt hide in the past
and how on earth are you second coming? <--- when they invited you last
This guy is ass, got shit flipped like the sky is grass I'm glad that we faced
helping my mod skills - one less fucked up vote I wont have to erase
blasted disgrace elevate all you want but ur still whack man, believe me
wordings poor, wordplay sucks, n deliveries have begun to make labor look easy
don't blame the vets, my sides splitting so hard that my laugh is hurting
how do u join a new crew then the next week get left out in a tag tourney
^pretty much all of these lines were dope dude.
M~M - wow, lol. you came pretty harsh imo, and its weird because vaskez didnt come as hard, but he had more lines that i liked, but you had the lines overall that i liked the most. your verse was pretty dope altogether too, consistancy went to vask but here i dunno ..
hard decision seriously. Vask was real consistant, while M~M just came dope as hell with some lines. strange but i'm leaning towards M~M an lot more here... i dunno if anyones ever done it like this, but i just happened to enjoy M~M's verse a lot more even with the least quotables.
like i said hard decision, but ..wow.
v. M~M, i felt his shit was much harder.. wierd ..
yeah vote for the verse that you enjoyed the most, guess that evens it out to 5-5
wtf... who the fuck deleted my vote... like really.. how homo is that
wtf? Artistik is Teacher and he was in playoffs so his vote counts! And Evolve's vote got deleted too, which was for me, but then he wasnt in LLL this season
I noticed that too. I guess mine didnt count. Its all good though.
well Artistik's counts cos he was in the playoffs under the name teacher...
Vaskez:
This dude thinks he's dope n he'll send me hopelessly fleeing afar
He already stopped my stellar week...
...by puttin me vs someone so far from being a star
Nice.. I liked this.
After your second quote I was pissed, s'like you were an old enemy
But I feel ya when ya said no dissrespect...
...it's true ya disses won't get any
Quite obvious..but fresh. I lol.
I got the fastest rhyme, when YOU claim skill, everyone sees you're wrong
N if you call the shots... your title one should be "Really Long"
haha
I know the feeling's strong, but beatin me's only somethin you WANT to do
See I command respect while you can't even coax it to come to you
Lol, your best line of the battle.
MM:
Ur fickle man it's true dont try n laugh Mystery doesnt hide in the past
and how on earth are you second coming? <--- when they invited you last
lol..
blasted disgrace elevate all you want but ur still whack man, believe me
wordings poor, wordplay sucks, n deliveries have begun to make labor look easy
haha I liked this.
so u can pack up the hearst I really don't remember a battler worse..
& since when's it innovative to put lines in ur sig that overshadow ur verse
haha.. true.
Overall:
Ok, while Vaskez had too many punches banging on about respect, I found he hhad a better verse overall. I thought MM's wording should have been far better on the evo' line, that could've been so dope. Surprised you used a ^^^ line.. was aight though. Vasez just has more quotables.. and came better in this battle.So..
Vote:Vasez.
Vaskez you counted wrong.
You're up one more than you think, recount em.
I dunno, I think I'm up by one now, but Philly/Teacher/Artistik and evolve also voted for me if I remember right - those votes got deleted - evolve's vote didnt count, but Teacher's should since he was in playoffs, so it should be 7-5 to me (Artistik/Teacher tell me if I'm wrong and you didnt vote for me, I'm not 100% sure).
well I'm sure it was an accident by MM
yeah I know, he didnt recognise philly cos he keeps changing his name, lol, I already pm'd him.
yea i dropped a well brokedown vote.. which turned out for vaskez...
M~M can undelete it plz