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grev spyda you're not dope duke, and i know for a fact you're not hood
coz ya raps are so point less......... they make blunt pencils look good
only one of us will win, and above you in a dark place is where i loom
coz the crowd will cheer for you...... ONLY when you leave the room
im coming with dope punches, well compared to your weak ones son
and my rep is at the top of its skyscraper,
.................................................. . so ill just knock yours off one
you havent been here for months duke, but no one would of guessed
coz you told everyone you're back, and no one even knew you left
and i peeped ya shit, <- and thats exactly what it is, you wont win
bye Ben Afflick... coz your full of more ass then his fucking chin
eh...
yea hes talented wit word coz dudes real good at blaffing it
ur whole verses?, damn should one should introduce rap permit
i stay pounding on pussys like you......call dis hardcore sex
u only come hard wen you key ur verse while ur muscles r flexs
dudes like u i dnt pay attention to..call me a suburt kid in class
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v2...Picture049.jpg
^^ dats ur wife?....
....dats like M.J playin wit kids a wit out getin acused for harass
n you could auction ur verse on ebay..
..................................you still still wont get ur wordsworth
ur name reflects child hood.....coz you wasnt welcomed at birth
..............so ima do you dis favour and son you real quick
coz you choose a few but gues wot.......you was a draft pick
staburn
^^ SORRY I JUST FIXED THE SPELL ERROR N SHIT DER SO U KNOW WOT I MEAN BUT UPPIN DIS 1.
upping for votes
grev spyda you're not dope duke, and i know for a fact you're not hood
coz ya raps are so point less......... they make blunt pencils look good
meh. it's alright.
only one of us will win, and above you in a dark place is where i loom
coz the crowd will cheer for you...... ONLY when you leave the room
played lol. i've used this.
im coming with dope punches, well compared to your weak ones son
and my rep is at the top of its skyscraper,
.................................................. . so ill just knock yours off one
could've been SO much better. but it's ok.
you havent been here for months duke, but no one would of guessed
coz you told everyone you're back, and no one even knew you left
personal ..okish. real basic tho.
and i peeped ya shit, <- and thats exactly what it is, you wont win
bye Ben Afflick... coz your full of more ass then his fucking chin
meh. weak/fake personal. just meh ..
Gooch stick - not one of your better verses, but it was basic and about an average rapbattles verse honestly. so i can't down you on that too hard. but you can do so much better than this. it was just thrown together so quick that your punches were played ..you thought too fast. lol.
vs.
yea hes talented wit word coz dudes real good at blaffing it
ur whole verses?, damn should one should introduce rap permit
no. wack.
i stay pounding on pussys like you......call dis hardcore sex
u only come hard wen you key ur verse while ur muscles r flexs
no, that's dumb. and if this was hardcore sex, and you were "pounding on this pussy" that'd just make you gay? am i right? because obviously he's a guy judging by the picture you pulled up ..wack.
dudes like u i dnt pay attention to..call me a suburt kid in class
^^ dats ur wife?....
....dats like M.J playin wit kids a wit out getin acused for harass
dude, don't type black ..it's not your style. i don't care if you speak it. most can type without having to pronounce that shit the wrong way.
n you could auction ur verse on ebay..
..................................you still still wont get ur wordsworth
ur name reflects child hood.....coz you wasnt welcomed at birth
?lol wordzworth isn't even related at all with welcomed at birth. not creative, just a horrible attempt. obviously you left a piece of information in your head and didn't write it out here, so you're the only one who thinks its funny.
..............so ima do you dis favour and son you real quick
coz you choose a few but gues wot.......you was a draft pick
o00o0or0esof0o0asfomfg!! ..................... NO!
Grev - wtf at weakness here. this was rediculously bad. for coming back, you made NO impression on anyone. sorry ...welcome back.
weak battle, easily won thought by ...
v. Goochface ..
grev spyda you're not dope duke, and i know for a fact you're not hood
coz ya raps are so point less......... they make blunt pencils look good
only one of us will win, and above you in a dark place is where i loom
coz the crowd will cheer for you...... ONLY when you leave the room
^decent not good but decent
Vs.
Nothing, not even anything close to decent
v/WII
^^ lol at least vote like cry did WTF is dat vote i thought dis voting schemes wer banned?
meh. upping number 2
grev spyda you're not dope duke, and i know for a fact you're not hoodQuote:
Originally Posted by grev_spyda
coz ya raps are so point less......... they make blunt pencils look good
^ok line
only one of us will win, and above you in a dark place is where i loom
coz the crowd will cheer for you...... ONLY when you leave the room
^decent
im coming with dope punches, well compared to your weak ones son
and my rep is at the top of its skyscraper,
.................................................. . so ill just knock yours off one
^didn't like the wording here
you havent been here for months duke, but no one would of guessed
coz you told everyone you're back, and no one even knew you left
^seen this a few times.
and i peeped ya shit, <- and thats exactly what it is, you wont win
bye Ben Afflick... coz your full of more ass then his fucking chin
^Meh
vs.
yea hes talented wit word coz dudes real good at blaffing it
ur whole verses?, damn should one should introduce rap permit
^no. just No.
i stay pounding on pussys like you......call dis hardcore sex
u only come hard wen you key ur verse while ur muscles r flexs
^Flexs isn't even the word, it should be Flexed and its not a good punch
dudes like u i dnt pay attention to..call me a suburt kid in class
^^ dats ur wife?....
....dats like M.J playin wit kids a wit out getin acused for harass
^I don't like this wording at all, and still the concept has been used lots
n you could auction ur verse on ebay..
..................................you still still wont get ur wordsworth
ur name reflects child hood.....coz you wasnt welcomed at birth
^soo is verse would be worth more then its sold for? kind of a compliment and @ how does WordzWorth and his birth conect? if your trying to say words a worthless you'd still be wrong Words/The Pen are amoung the most powerful weapons in human history
..............so ima do you dis favour and son you real quick
coz you choose a few but gues wot.......you was a draft pick
^LMAO. NO,NO Just Hell no.
Happy Now you lost stop bitching
thank you i wasnt bitchin just makin sure u dnt get banned :)
this was weak as fuck, dissapointing battle, but wordz ur shit was played & worded badly, there was no real creativity in ur verse, & ur punches were lame u had like 1 ok/meh punches but that basicly won u the battle, grev u need to work on everything cuz u drop real bad here, work on wording ur shit better & acually coming with punches
V/WW
grev- iight flow, meh punches... most werent direct, some were disses tho, the personal pic was funny. no multis or metas. similies were wacc and played. you need to come back with fresh concepts if you come back at all
guc- meh flow, better structural, the punches were harder hitting too, which imo won this for you. the personals werent direct, you didnt need to come too hard for this , iight verse.
v/word
grev-iight this was horrible verse at the most coming from you. You came played at the most. You had somewhat good flow but wording was off. You have to coma alot more original & direct. You even had a pic to help you. So you should have focused on that.
word-You came alot harder the your oppenent in this one. You had a good use of wordplay and an all around flow. I felt you came more direct & original in this one.
v/Word.