10-12 lines
Post when your ready
no later one hour from when this thread is posted though.
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10-12 lines
Post when your ready
no later one hour from when this thread is posted though.
:coolio:
in.
so is Pens
Think you hard now? i'd usually get personal on this jew
So be thankful.....that i havent heard a damn thing about u
Ya hometown is wack, just because it’s the location u rep
I’d never set foot in a place like that
......................but I’ll make an exception for ya chest
But on a serious note, cos ya battlin me ya reps just went up
Pens couldnt pave the way for the greats in a Cement truck
Please take those wack, egotistical audios back to MySpace
N stop actin’ like u got an S on ya chest,
.....................since coroners cut a Y shape
huh. wheres my closer went? nvm.
I know it hurts but im raw, Fuck a job, ya whole verse is a flaw
but ima punch in and out ya mouth as if I worked at ya jaw
now I know that im dope, ima hit ya chin as you choke
so now ya mouth can relate to ya pockets, both of em broke
But youll fix the fracture by gettin it wired, just know that I beat you
and that aint the last straw, youll need more of those eat food
but ill never ask for him to explain to me what happened
cuz if I wanted history, its Ndividual after I attacked him
saw you went 8 so I matched
vote up
vote pins.. got me to laugh on one bar.. about the broke pockets lol.. but anyway.. punches were ehh on both sides.. ithink pen won cuase his verse wasnt so played.. but decent battle... pretty close..
Think you hard now? i'd usually get personal on this jew
So be thankful.....that i havent heard a damn thing about u
hmmm ok,tho i really tink you boasting yaself.
Ya hometown is wack, just because it’s the location u rep
I’d never set foot in a place like that
......................but I’ll make an exception for ya chest
lol ok but still weak,youve dun better
But on a serious note, cos ya battlin me ya reps just went up
Pens couldnt pave the way for the greats in a Cement truck
better,dope line
Please take those wack, egotistical audios back to MySpace
N stop actin’ like u got an S on ya chest,
.....................since coroners cut a Y shape
call me a fuckwitt...but need ya to fill me in??
overall ive seen you do alot better in just the battles below!! and in your links in other threads.wasnt completly weak,was still tight structure and couple of nice lines.
I know it hurts but im raw, Fuck a job, ya whole verse is a flaw
but ima punch in and out ya mouth as if I worked at ya jaw
fuck no,see wat you getting at but blah
now I know that im dope, ima hit ya chin as you choke
so now ya mouth can relate to ya pockets, both of em broke
wordings bad...really tho kinda good concept.
But youll fix the fracture by gettin it wired, just know that I beat you
and that aint the last straw, youll need more of those eat food
no
but ill never ask for him to explain to me what happened
cuz if I wanted history, its Ndividual after I attacked him
nice closer
id still vote/ndividual....doper lines more thought out...pens ill was to simple and just lacked anything really but keep up,great potential.now i feel like a goose tho =( my vote dont count lol keep up!!! PZ
when you go to work, you have to punch in/clock in. when you leave you have to punch out/clock out. so if i worked at his jaw id have to punch in and out. *sigh*Quote:
I know it hurts but im raw, Fuck a job, ya whole verse is a flaw
but ima punch in and out ya mouth as if I worked at ya jaw
fuck no,see wat you getting at but blah
niggas need jobs
and if his jaw is broken hed have to eat through a straw
why am I explaining myself?
nvm.
keep voting
Pucnhes- Pen
Vocab- Pen
Flow-N
Structure-N
Personals-Pen
straight battle
v/ pens ill
I dont like that shit^
what shit the way that i vote where i give someone the catagory?
the whole entire method of voting.
it explains nothing.
learn how to breakdown a verse before you post in my battles homie.
now vote people
it would be nice if you helped up this shit Ndividual.
i think this is number five.
ill keep upping if you allow me though. I just dont want no dq bullshit.
but whoever votes..drop a link. ill be sure to get to it.
The murderous Pens
I know it hurts but im raw, Fuck a job, ya whole verse is a flaw
but ima punch in and out ya mouth as if I worked at ya jaw
now I know that im dope, ima hit ya chin as you choke
so now ya mouth can relate to ya pockets, both of em broke
vs.
Ndividual
someplayed lines like the "i havnt heard about you" line, the "pave the way to greatness" line...etc.
v/Pens
Think you hard now? i'd usually get personal on this jew
So be thankful.....that i havent heard a damn thing about u
Ya hometown is wack, just because it’s the location u rep
I’d never set foot in a place like that
......................but I’ll make an exception for ya chest
v.s.
I know it hurts but im raw, Fuck a job, ya whole verse is a flaw
but ima punch in and out ya mouth as if I worked at ya jaw
now I know that im dope, ima hit ya chin as you choke
so now ya mouth can relate to ya pockets, both of em broke
V.Pens:He came harder with punches and wordplay. His wording really helped along with the flow. Ndivid came basic his punches were nothing special and he lacked in wordplay.
Think you hard now? i'd usually get personal on this jew
So be thankful.....that i havent heard a damn thing about u
Ya hometown is wack, just because it’s the location u rep
I’d never set foot in a place like that
......................but I’ll make an exception for ya chest
v.s.
I know it hurts but im raw, Fuck a job, ya whole verse is a flaw
but ima punch in and out ya mouth as if I worked at ya jaw
now I know that im dope, ima hit ya chin as you choke
so now ya mouth can relate to ya pockets, both of em broke
v/pen (better verse)
He came harder and had a better overall verse. Nd had some basic line's and didnt hitas hard.