Yeah .. Ten Lines
Due Whenever
Good Luck dude
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Yeah .. Ten Lines
Due Whenever
Good Luck dude
I'm In... Hope these are the rules you wanted
thanks cuz....
ill drop now while i can.
rules are fine cuz.
You won't win, but I understand how writing ends desire
I treat your verses with intelligence, enlighten them on fire
Calling you wack is true. calling me wack is a sin to be fair
so I'll scalp this bitch .. & end his chances to win by a hair
he calls himself "Versatile" .. Dude you'll never be felt still...
I found it funny, you quoted yourself when nobody else will
this next lines got a homonym, your stalling is recent,
Man if I right a wrong - It'll be cuz I was calling you decent
So bitch in conclusion I'll basically give you fucking hell
Cuz your post said it all, And you wrote well... nothing well
[I][B]Ill Break Feebles Mind,As To Feeble?? Your Relevence Is Great,
But Why Did This Prick Join A Crew Whoms Intelligance Is Fake?,
Check Ya Elements Mate,As Ill Be Hooking Ya For Chanting,
But I Seriously See How Things Are Looking Up.......
From Where Your Standing!
But Seriously People,Ill Be Left Handing.....This Gurken,
But Are You Rap Battles Or A Right Bitch???...........
...................As Only The Second One Fits The Person!,
Ya Writs Aint Hurting!!! But You Think Im Scared Now???
Seriously,they Like Fake Tattoos Cuz,THEY WARE OUT!!
man had nothing....way shit goes i guess...peace.
lol at me forgetting the bold and italic shit....grr im pissed at myself...
Dope Verse Cuz.....Thanks For The Experience.
Nice battling you
id say this was a weak battle for both of u.. ive seen betta... imma vote for versatile... i jus think he edged feeble just a tab bit... nuthing to special in this battle.. seemed like jus a quick battle cuase yall was bored or suntin.. but anyway.. decent punches from the both and flow was iight on both sides.. but ima give it to ver for the fact his opener was better and ending.. thats about it tho.. stay up yall keep rhymin no hate no dr... check my sig u kno
vote versatile
funny thing is i cant vote.. jus my input :)
Alright Lol
Up
daym wish i could vote and get some in erre...lol 37 views and no legit voters =(
You won't win, but I understand how writing ends desire
I treat your verses with intelligence, enlighten them on fire
Calling you wack is true. calling me wack is a sin to be fair
so I'll scalp this bitch .. & end his chances to win by a hair
those were cool
Check Ya Elements Mate,As Ill Be Hooking Ya For Chanting,
But I Seriously See How Things Are Looking Up.......
From Where Your Standing!
coulda been dope.
wording eh..
vote Feeble.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=298632
and I just know youll get to this.
actually like them lines to lmao PZ
v.versatile
heres why:::ver..you was coming wit the punches,personals,and vocab..i liked the flow you had going on....alright mettas..and not bad multies..you need work on your strucure...hot drop...feeble...you came hard in mettas and multies..okay persoanls and punches..i felt that ver came harder in this one..with a more complex and steady verse..no hate..or beef..~1~
thanks for the vote.....appreciate the comments to...uppin
GOT DAMMIT..i ant got enough posts shit
sorry feeb..i dont mean to freepost or nothin
sorry yal..
[B]far been waiting on this for hours cant up much more.......
Upping, this shit better get closed as many battles as I vote on
You won't win, but I understand how writing ends desire
I treat your verses with intelligence, enlighten them on fire
Calling you wack is true. calling me wack is a sin to be fair
so I'll scalp this bitch .. & end his chances to win by a hair
lmao
vs.
Nothing really
V/Feeble for coming better & with some funny punches
You won't win, but I understand how writing ends desire
I treat your verses with intelligence, enlighten them on fire
nice
Calling you wack is true. calling me wack is a sin to be fair
so I'll scalp this bitch .. & end his chances to win by a hair
dope
he calls himself "Versatile" .. Dude you'll never be felt still...
I found it funny, you quoted yourself when nobody else will
o.k
this next lines got a homonym, your stalling is recent,
Man if I right a wrong - It'll be cuz I was calling you decent
good personal
So bitch in conclusion I'll basically give you fucking hell
Cuz your post said it all, And you wrote well... nothing well
good closer
Ill Break Feebles Mind,As To Feeble?? Your Relevence Is Great,
But Why Did This Prick Join A Crew Whoms Intelligance Is Fake?,
no
Check Ya Elements Mate,As Ill Be Hooking Ya For Chanting,
But I Seriously See How Things Are Looking Up.......
From Where Your Standing!
o.k concept
But Seriously People,Ill Be Left Handing.....This Gurken,
But Are You Rap Battles Or A Right Bitch???...........
...................As Only The Second One Fits The Person!,
wack
Ya Writs Aint Hurting!!! But You Think Im Scared Now???
Seriously,they Like Fake Tattoos Cuz,THEY WARE OUT!!
blah
v/feeble
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=297871
hit dat please feeble^
my feed^ just pollin on dis nameQuote:
Originally Posted by Malicious.
Feeble Minded-
You won't win, but I understand how writing ends desire
I treat your verses with intelligence, enlighten them on fire
nice wordplay
Calling you wack is true. calling me wack is a sin to be fair
so I'll scalp this bitch .. & end his chances to win by a hair
nice concept
he calls himself "Versatile" .. Dude you'll never be felt still...
I found it funny, you quoted yourself when nobody else will
nice personal
this next lines got a homonym, your stalling is recent,
Man if I right a wrong - It'll be cuz I was calling you decent
lmao..damn sick
So bitch in conclusion I'll basically give you fucking hell
Cuz your post said it all, And you wrote well... nothing well
ok
"Versatile"-
Ill Break Feebles Mind,As To Feeble?? Your Relevence Is Great,
But Why Did This Prick Join A Crew Whoms Intelligance Is Fake?,
ight personal
Check Ya Elements Mate,As Ill Be Hooking Ya For Chanting,
But I Seriously See How Things Are Looking Up.......
From Where Your Standing!
ok
But Seriously People,Ill Be Left Handing.....This Gurken,
But Are You Rap Battles Or A Right Bitch???...........
...................As Only The Second One Fits The Person!,
lol nice
Ya Writs Aint Hurting!!! But You Think Im Scared Now???
Seriously,they Like Fake Tattoos Cuz,THEY WARE OUT!!
ok
this was a very good battles.....goes down in history as one of my favorites....
both was throwin punches that was great and complex.......but i felt that feeble was throwin harder punches...so my vote is...
v/Feeble
ps....both hit up the battle in my sig
yeah, yeah, yeah.
i don't know how versatile got those two votes that didn't count, :/ that's nuts. but anyway, feeble's scalp line, and enlighten line stood out to me. I thought those really won the battle for him and were his hardest punches.
versa, umm, you need to work more on wording your punches so that they can be more effective. you had some concepts that weren't awful but you worded them pretty bad, the fake tattoos line was really gay imo, but nonetheless, you'll get better.
v/ feeble.
Lol upppin
You won't win, but I understand how writing ends desire
I treat your verses with intelligence, enlighten them on fire
Calling you wack is true. calling me wack is a sin to be fair
so I'll scalp this bitch .. & end his chances to win by a hair
lmao
vs.
Nothing .
vote - feebs for having punches that semi hit atleast.