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pz
Yup.
look i'm back kid, n this punch here will be a all time classic.. it's tactics
for me to get over the hump..
camel kneel down n i'll climb over the wack bitch
got left out of the leauge twice, 's no hard feelings cam, we do appologize
(Get the fuck out n stay out)
but we thought u'd be smart enuff.. to read between the fucking lines :/
camarac up on the pounds, fucking easy bake.. n this kids gettin battered
n he's a peice of cake..
which explaines why when i stomp.. he'll keep getting flatter n flatter
's summer time n this homo can't swim wortha lick.. his whole form is shit
so i'll teach you the breast stroke..
^^^ n you can't practice with chrits tit's
your a curse to birth, n if worst come to worst, man i'm flippin the page
cuz u should be proud of ya momma,
she went threw hard labor.. n got paid minumum wage
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Originally Posted by Teacher last week
^^^ damn kid i know your not a leader, but please cam don't follow my shit
cuz your like the first asshole i've ever seen.. who's verses actually indent
Look.
This corny bitch aint got half my talent NOR the respect.
.. Only apple I’ll be leaving on Teacher’s desk, is the one I’ve torn from his neck.
And I’ll be honest, Ive HAD IT with this fag.
.. The guys a bigger asshole than the cast of Honey, I Blew Up The Kids! Had.
Straight up. His motherfuckin’ ass still bumps cassettes.
.. Kid asked me what I cranked in my ride. I told him “Your mothers neck.”
If you think you’re fuckin' with me, you out your right mind.
.. Cos you’re about as Instrumental to MY wins, as they proved to be to Stryk9’s.
See, I aint need corny clichés to stay beatin' on you bitches ..
.. and you’re Sarah Paxton in the new Aquamarine flick. Sleeping with the fishes.
You lose.
ummm Mr. write dropped late n our contender's match n i let it slide n lost... i aint going for it twice...
vote up but it will be as much as feed n that's all
look i'm back kid, n this punch here will be a all time classic.. it's tactics
for me to get over the hump..
camel kneel down n i'll climb over the wack bitch
nice nameplay. cool punch.
got left out of the leauge twice, 's no hard feelings cam, we do appologize
(Get the fuck out n stay out)
but we thought u'd be smart enuff.. to read between the fucking lines :/
lol. OK, average.
camarac up on the pounds, fucking easy bake.. n this kids gettin battered
n he's a peice of cake..
which explaines why when i stomp.. he'll keep getting flatter n flatter
cool. nothing TOO great.
's summer time n this homo can't swim wortha lick.. his whole form is shit
so i'll teach you the breast stroke..
^^^ n you can't practice with chrits tit's
MEH ..didn't like this.
your a curse to birth, n if worst come to worst, man i'm flippin the page
cuz u should be proud of ya momma,
she went threw hard labor.. n got paid minumum wage
lmfao, funny as fuck.
^^^ damn kid i know your not a leader, but please cam don't follow my shit
cuz your like the first asshole i've ever seen.. who's verses actually indent
lmao . good.
Philly - good verse. cool one to read, it was nice. minimum wage line was my favorite there, that was witty as hell ..lol. good verse.
vs.
Look.
This corny bitch aint got half my talent NOR the respect.
.. Only apple I’ll be leaving on Teacher’s desk, is the one I’ve torn from his neck.
cool. very direct :| ..
And I’ll be honest, Ive HAD IT with this fag.
.. The guys a bigger asshole than the cast of Honey, I Blew Up The Kids! Had.
heh, funny. but he had just about the same concept ...kind of dumb since we saw his asshole joke RIGHT BEFORE yours ..
Straight up. His motherfuckin’ ass still bumps cassettes.
.. Kid asked me what I cranked in my ride. I told him “Your mothers neck.”
heh. funny. FREE BLOW JOBS!! ..
If you think you’re fuckin' with me, you out your right mind.
.. Cos you’re about as Instrumental to MY wins, as they proved to be to Stryk9’s.
lol cool.
See, I aint need corny clichés to stay beatin' on you bitches ..
.. and you’re Sarah Paxton in the new Aquamarine flick. Sleeping with the fishes.
oh real original :mad: ..lol, naw cool ..
Cam - goddamn, that was a harsh verse. everything about it was nailing hard. couple lines i didn't like too well, but everyone has their opinions. good verse.
cool battle, but honestly, i think Cam took this real easily. Philly, you were creative as hell but your harshness wasn't showing at all. Cam went directly to the throat! literally. this battle was nice, but easily won in my opinon by cam. good verses from both tho.
v. Camarac
Teacher - I liked your opener. The read inbetween the lines was ok, but not original. The hard labor was a decent flip, and an ok line, but the concept is too old for my tastes. The piece of cake / getting flatter and flatter line isn't a diss. Let me explain: Its like me saying: "Teacher, you're Garbage, cuz when I toss you, you land in the dumpster!" Its just something you made up so you could relate the "piece of cake" phrase to something else.
Camarac - I liked your opener a lot. Favorite line of the battle, it was dope, even though it was one of those violent disses. The rest of your verse - alright in parts, but you have too many disses that aren't really creative. I know you keep saying fuck cliches etc etc, but you used to come up with shit like "# 1? get real, that just means that you ain't shit" - thats the type of stuff thats gonna get a response out of me.
narrowly, vote - cam
thx for the feedback guy's....
Look.
This corny bitch aint got half my talent NOR the respect.
.. Only apple I’ll be leaving on Teacher’s desk, is the one I’ve torn from his neck.
^whoa.Nice.
And I’ll be honest, Ive HAD IT with this fag.
.. The guys a bigger asshole than the cast of Honey, I Blew Up The Kids! Had.
^aiight.
Straight up. His motherfuckin’ ass still bumps cassettes.
.. Kid asked me what I cranked in my ride. I told him “Your mothers neck.”
^Damn.
If you think you’re fuckin' with me, you out your right mind.
.. Cos you’re about as Instrumental to MY wins, as they proved to be to Stryk9’s.
^Coo..
See, I aint need corny clichés to stay beatin' on you bitches ..
.. and you’re Sarah Paxton in the new Aquamarine flick. Sleeping with the fishes.
^not really feeling this.
vs.
look i'm back kid, n this punch here will be a all time classic.. it's tactics
for me to get over the hump..
camel kneel down n i'll climb over the wack bitch
^good,but not really hard hitting...But nice nameplay
got left out of the leauge twice, 's no hard feelings cam, we do appologize
(Get the fuck out n stay out)
but we thought u'd be smart enuff.. to read between the fucking lines :/
^Not really feeling this..just a lil basic..
camarac up on the pounds, fucking easy bake.. n this kids gettin battered
n he's a peice of cake..
which explaines why when i stomp.. he'll keep getting flatter n flatter
^aiight.but its not really hard hitting
's summer time n this homo can't swim wortha lick.. his whole form is shit
so i'll teach you the breast stroke..
^^^ n you can't practice with chrits tit's
^lol.
your a curse to birth, n if worst come to worst, man i'm flippin the page
cuz u should be proud of ya momma,
she went threw hard labor.. n got paid minumum wage
^LMAO
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Originally Posted by Teacher last week
i kill with proper writing.. wit a flick of my pen i'm taking his life
break his limbs n dent his face.. till there's nothing left to w.rite
^I seen this before...Im not sure where..but str8 flip on it tho.,
^^^ damn kid i know your not a leader, but please cam don't follow my shit
cuz your like the first asshole i've ever seen.. who's verses actually indent
^Lol.
Overall/-To be honest I got Philly winning this..IMO his hit a lil harder in sum parts,but Cam had sum real harsh punches.but overall Philly had a concsistant verse..to me.Maybe thats why Im not in the playoffs.lol.But IMO philly got this.Cam had 2 harsh ass punches,but the rest were not really my cup of tea.
V/-philly.
i know i said i'm taking the win... but dizzam more feed?
This corny bitch aint got half my talent NOR the respect.
.. Only apple I’ll be leaving on Teacher’s desk, is the one I’ve torn from his neck.
If you think you’re fuckin' with me, you out your right mind.
.. Cos you’re about as Instrumental to MY wins, as they proved to be to Stryk9’s.
vs
look i'm back kid, n this punch here will be a all time classic.. it's tactics
for me to get over the hump..
camel kneel down n i'll climb over the wack bitch
got left out of the leauge twice, 's no hard feelings cam, we do appologize
(Get the fuck out n stay out)
but we thought u'd be smart enuff.. to read between the fucking lines
your a curse to birth, n if worst come to worst, man i'm flippin the page
cuz u should be proud of ya momma,
she went threw hard labor.. n got paid minumum wage
maybe i woulda liked the Sarah Paxton line if i'd seen the movie buuuut i didnt' lol
philly seemed like he just wanted this more than you cam
v/ Teacher
Whatever.
I could care less about who actually wins the match, and Philly seems intent on saying I no showed anyway, but I just wanted to say - What you did this week was a complete bitchmove man. I post the same time EVERY fucking week. I post as early as I can, first thing Saturday morning my time, and every one of my other opponents has accepted that, and the mods have too, but you're a complete fucking BITCH for what you've done this week. All respect I had for you is gone. And it aint even no 'Cam's crying because he's losing' bullshit, because EVERY motherfucker on this board with half a brain cell knows I sonned the fuck out of you here man, what you did was a complete fucking bitchmove.
Take your precious win, faggot. Its not the records that are making the playoffs, its the verse quality.
Meanbs jack to me if you take the win, i just dont like how you went about it. Shits gay.
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Originally Posted by Camarac
fuck is you talking it's 2-2
n spent the last two weeks perparing for my grandfather's funeral n shit n i still posted my verse in time..
^^^ that's the main reason i was pissed like how can i drop n he didn't..
if it was a bitch move i would have took a no-show win against w.rite n a CONTENDER match go figure man.. i don't want your respect @ all if u look @ like that..
this is of less importance than last weeks battle
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Originally Posted by K.O
how bout BANNED