Crew Battle
Obscure Intelligence's Vs. Subliminal Visualz
Text battle, Rules:
10-12 lines. check by tuesday
verses due Wednesday ..
no bullshit, all votes MUST
be explained or results will
be immediate Disqualification.
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Crew Battle
Obscure Intelligence's Vs. Subliminal Visualz
Text battle, Rules:
10-12 lines. check by tuesday
verses due Wednesday ..
no bullshit, all votes MUST
be explained or results will
be immediate Disqualification.
checking in
check...lets drop now yo
mal aint blowing up, but losing this battle you cant refuse
ill hand this dick tha upper hand,
...since the bottoms tired of his abuse
think you top notch? please lok'll take aim where you stood
mal be asking for tips, but i dont think money'll do him good
your nothin but pussy and you cant keep relationships
yea i give food for thought, cuz thats all it do to take ya bitch
mal known to be superstitious, since he know he not winning
cuz id buzz you up to ma level...but i havent been drinking
Quote:
Originally Posted by Prosecution
crew thread^^^Quote:
Originally Posted by ~SILENT~
yesterday^^Quote:
Originally Posted by Rizzo
so wins from you ill pocket two, cuz your wackness sadens, true
your dope so why take this loss?
...when you were never even appreciated in the crew
pwnage
Feeble helps you?
you get help from a vet and im still pwn'n you, really, do u?
I geuss he basically ghosts 4 u, now u really gettin yo shit handed 2 u,
does this bitch really think he's better den me, i always gotta fight him,Quote:
Originally Posted by Lokeye
bitch says he gunna merk me, he nuttin but a hipochrit, too bad he spit like em,
kid deres nuttin u can do u're career is through,
i'd lend u a helpin hand but u cant type wit 2,
I wont lie kid, right now im kinda rusty, but i know my verse aint borin you,
Yea i stumbled and tripped over the bar of mediocrity, but i landed on you
Kid we all know your dumb no need you always lose your L prone,
so i suggest u Don't let your mind wander. Its too small to be alone,
uppin 1
mal aint blowing up, but losing this battle you cant refuse
ill hand this dick tha upper hand,
...since the bottoms tired of his abuse
-funny but dont you think dick concepts are played?
think you top notch? please lok'll take aim where you stood
mal be asking for tips, but i dont think money'll do him good
-lol ok
your nothin but pussy and you cant keep relationships
yea i give food for thought, cuz thats all it do to take ya bitch
-umm meh
mal known to be superstitious, since he know he not winning
cuz id buzz you up to ma level...but i havent been drinking
-nah homie
Quote:
Originally Posted by Prosecution
allumni me yo im on like 4 crews...gotta drop some
Quote:
Originally Posted by ~SILENT~
Ok you already are though. Lol.
crew thread^^^
Quote:
Originally Posted by Rizzo
roflmao im not even in dat crew i pust agreed to pwn you for them
yesterday^^
so wins from you ill pocket two, cuz your wackness sadens, true
your dope so why take this loss?
...when you were never even appreciated in the crew
-weak personal/closer
vs
you get help from a vet and im still pwn'n you, really, do u?
I geuss he basically ghosts 4 u, now u really gettin yo shit handed 2 u,
-meh you just called feeble garbage
Quote:
Originally Posted by Lokeye
Illest text heads
feeble
M~M
$pit
Chrit
does this bitch really think he's better den me, i always gotta fight him,
bitch says he gunna merk me, he nuttin but a hipochrit, too bad he spit like em,
-meh no
kid deres nuttin u can do u're career is through,
i'd lend u a helpin hand but u cant type wit 2,
-no, wow your really comming weak fam
I wont lie kid, right now im kinda rusty, but i know my verse aint borin you,
Yea i stumbled and tripped over the bar of mediocrity, but i landed on you
-nice
Kid we all know your dumb no need you always lose your L prone,
so i suggest u Don't let your mind wander. Its too small to be alone,
-ok
wow this battle was weak mal i dont know wtf was going on with you homie i think you should have stuck wit your first verse cause it was better but i still thought you pulled it off cause you had 2 decent lines but ehh and Killa your verse was iight but you had some played concepts which made ya verse boring and most of your punches were weak but you did have 1 decent line but this wasnt a gd battle both could of done better
v/Mal
This was a very good battle here but this is how I'm gonna put it
Lokeye-You had a good verse with some aight punches and personals but I falt you could have came harder with them.Also there were some concepts in your verse that were really played out like this one.
mal aint blowing up, but losing this battle you cant refuse
ill hand this dick tha upper hand,
...since the bottoms tired of his abuse
try to think of new concepts to use in your verse homie.But you had a good structure and good use of your vocabulary.
Malicious-You did aight but I seen better from you homie.You had some aight punches and personals but I think you could have done better.But in my opinion ou barely pulled this one in the bag.You also had a good structure and good use of your vocabulary too.And it looks like you tried to be creative with your verse so thats a plus too
For both heads-I think yall should work on some harder punches and personals cuz I seen better from both of yall.Lokeye try to use some concepts that aren't played out.And try to use some multis when you can and try using some wordplay.But overall this was a good battle but after reading both verses in this battle I came up with a final descion and my vote goes to.
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vote/Mal
thnx 4 votes everybody i will vote on links i see in ppls sigs a lil later
mal aint blowing up, but losing this battle you cant refuse
ill hand this dick tha upper hand,
...since the bottoms tired of his abuse
pw
think you top notch? please lok'll take aim where you stood
mal be asking for tips, but i dont think money'll do him good
ow
your nothin but pussy and you cant keep relationships
yea i give food for thought, cuz thats all it do to take ya bitch
uhhh not really
mal known to be superstitious, since he know he not winning
cuz id buzz you up to ma level...but i havent been drinking
played
so wins from you ill pocket two, cuz your wackness sadens, true
your dope so why take this loss?
...when you were never even appreciated in the crew
doesnt flow you know,not to be a hoe,so why write that yo?nah
you get help from a vet and im still pwn'n you, really, do u?
I geuss he basically ghosts 4 u, now u really gettin yo shit handed 2 u
no
does this bitch really think he's better den me, i always gotta fight him,
bitch says he gunna merk me, he nuttin but a hipochrit, too bad he spit like em,
woa woa compliment cuz he just said chrit was one of the Illest text heads
kid deres nuttin u can do u're career is through,
i'd lend u a helpin hand but u cant type wit 2,
meh
I wont lie kid, right now im kinda rusty, but i know my verse aint borin you,
Yea i stumbled and tripped over the bar of mediocrity, but i landed on you
ahh that is a peice of SHIT i dun wanna read your last line now
Kid we all know your dumb no need you always lose your L prone,
so i suggest u Don't let your mind wander. Its too small to be alone,
ooooooooo that fuckin sucked,thats like me sayin your a peebrain.........dont write again dam youve done beta then this.
v/ Lok for reasons above
uppin 2
up...
Quote:
Originally Posted by Tim
^lol.@listen..lesson.
BUt Im not voting..cuz both had sum weak shit..only line that stood out was
mal aint blowing up, but losing this battle you cant refuse
ill hand this dick tha upper hand,
...since the bottoms tired of his abuse
^Nice.
But dont ever come in my battles,Talkin bout both werent good droppin shit like this--->
I wont lie kid, right now im kinda rusty, but i know my verse aint borin you,
Yea i stumbled and tripped over the bar of mediocrity, but i landed on you
^Flipped as line..wow.
Lokeye won this....lol.
Pfff.
uppin
uppin 4
vote - http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=299143
mal aint blowing up, but losing this battle you cant refuse
ill hand this dick tha upper hand,
...since the bottoms tired of his abuse
decent, but not that hard
think you top notch? please lok'll take aim where you stood
mal be asking for tips, but i dont think money'll do him good
again decent, nothing special
your nothin but pussy and you cant keep relationships
yea i give food for thought, cuz thats all it do to take ya bitch
food for thought is played, any concept to me. i hear a punch with that like once a day. EVERYDAY
mal known to be superstitious, since he know he not winning
cuz id buzz you up to ma level...but i havent been drinking
meh.. weak
so wins from you ill pocket two, cuz your wackness sadens, true
your dope so why take this loss?
...when you were never even appreciated in the crew
meh decent
vs
you get help from a vet and im still pwn'n you, really, do u?
I geuss he basically ghosts 4 u, now u really gettin yo shit handed 2 u,
ight, needed to be reworded
does this bitch really think he's better den me, i always gotta fight him,
bitch says he gunna merk me, he nuttin but a hipochrit, too bad he spit like em,
nope
kid deres nuttin u can do u're career is through,
i'd lend u a helpin hand but u cant type wit 2,
nope
I wont lie kid, right now im kinda rusty, but i know my verse aint borin you,
Yea i stumbled and tripped over the bar of mediocrity, but i landed on you
ight
Kid we all know your dumb no need you always lose your L prone,
so i suggest u Don't let your mind wander. Its too small to be alone,
[b]meh ok, just needed to be reworded.
this battle was pretty close.. none really had any quotable lines..
so in the end it comes between best bars..
so wins from you ill pocket two, cuz your wackness sadens, true
your dope so why take this loss?
...when you were never even appreciated in the crew
vs
I wont lie kid, right now im kinda rusty, but i know my verse aint borin you,
Yea i stumbled and tripped over the bar of mediocrity, but i landed on you
i find it really hard to vote for anyone on this, coz i felt the verses were so weak but.. w/e mals was harder.. barely..
vote - malspicous
dont have
have enough 2 poll but here feed bitches.
mal aint blowing up, but losing this battle you cant refuse
ill hand this dick tha upper hand,
...since the bottoms tired of his abuse
iight
think you top notch? please lok'll take aim where you stood
mal be asking for tips, but i dont think money'll do him good
lol iight
your nothin but pussy and you cant keep relationships
yea i give food for thought, cuz thats all it do to take ya bitch
mehh
mal known to be superstitious, since he know he not winning
cuz id buzz you up to ma level...but i havent been drinking
o.k
so wins from you ill pocket two, cuz your wackness sadens, true
your dope so why take this loss?
...when you were never even appreciated in the crew
o.k but eeehhhh medicore drop nuffin speical stood out but
it was iight stay constiant 2 the fact every bar was average iight verse
vs.
you get help from a vet and im still pwn'n you, really, do u?
I geuss he basically ghosts 4 u, now u really gettin yo shit handed 2 u,
wack. TOO MANY U'S IN THIS BAR RUINED FLOW N WDF
y is feeble center of attention now? no still
does this bitch really think he's better den me, i always gotta fight him,
bitch says he gunna merk me, he nuttin but a hipochrit, too bad he spit like em,
weak near wack
kid deres nuttin u can do u're career is through,
i'd lend u a helpin hand but u cant type wit 2,
iight
I wont lie kid, right now im kinda rusty, but i know my verse aint borin you,
Yea i stumbled and tripped over the bar of mediocrity, but i landed on you
iight, yea u r fuckin rusty though
Kid we all know your dumb no need you always lose your L prone,
so i suggest u Don't let your mind wander. Its too small to be alone,
weak. disappointing verse i mean seriously this shit is on some
weak shit really weres the wordplay n shit? no where
n dam idont how u getttin votes fl is where some wack shit
nowadays dam. i think cuz of this verse u will be gettin
cut son from the yak pak.
v/lokeye clearly had the better verse.
meh battle should be way better.
uppin #5 and wordzworth i dont get you voting mal got mostly nope and shit but he still wins ??? watever man
agreedQuote:
Originally Posted by Sir Preme.
Vote for mal cus he had some decent consistancy in punches and creativeness on metaz and multie punches...he had a better verse than lokeye. lokeye had more played concepts than Mal and some of his punches didnt punch!
V/MAL
Vote DQed...wack.
-Fue
mal aint blowing up, but losing this battle you cant refuse
ill hand this dick tha upper hand,
...since the bottoms tired of his abuse
mal known to be superstitious, since he know he not winning
cuz id buzz you up to ma level...but i havent been drinking
so wins from you ill pocket two, cuz your wackness sadens, true
your dope so why take this loss?
...when you were never even appreciated in the crew
vs.
I wont lie kid, right now im kinda rusty, but i know my verse aint borin you,
Yea i stumbled and tripped over the bar of mediocrity, but i landed on you
lokeye-Flow was tight and punches were mostly good setups were nice and the wording was also good
Malicious-Flow was good but punches were meh you had one ok punch you culdve came alot stronger setips and wording werent the best either
\/-Lokeye
mal aint blowing up, but losing this battle you cant refuse
ill hand this dick tha upper hand,
...since the bottoms tired of his abuse
nice
think you top notch? please lok'll take aim where you stood
mal be asking for tips, but i dont think money'll do him good
ok
your nothin but pussy and you cant keep relationships
yea i give food for thought, cuz thats all it do to take ya bitch
no
mal known to be superstitious, since he know he not winning
cuz id buzz you up to ma level...but i havent been drinking
lol
so wins from you ill pocket two, cuz your wackness sadens, true
your dope so why take this loss?
...when you were never even appreciated in the crew
ok
vs
you get help from a vet and im still pwn'n you, really, do u?
I geuss he basically ghosts 4 u, now u really gettin yo shit handed 2 u,
lol nice
does this bitch really think he's better den me, i always gotta fight him,
bitch says he gunna merk me, he nuttin but a hipochrit, too bad he spit like em,
ok
kid deres nuttin u can do u're career is through,
i'd lend u a helpin hand but u cant type wit 2,
lmao
I wont lie kid, right now im kinda rusty, but i know my verse aint borin you,
Yea i stumbled and tripped over the bar of mediocrity, but i landed on you
lmao
Kid we all know your dumb no need you always lose your L prone,
so i suggest u Don't let your mind wander. Its too small to be alone
lmfao
my vote is for Malacious, both had really good verses. But i was feeling Mals punches were a little harder. I also fel that he had better wordplay. Both had good structure and flow. Good job to both.
v//MAL
Vote DQed...your banned for obvious reasons.
-Fue
meh, wack battle. both sucked ass, i've seen so much better from Mal. i have a feeling hes been half assing it for a while now, i'm seriously dissapointed. Lok, you have potential, your wordings on point, just your concepts are wack as hell. both competitors were meh, but seriously i think that Malicious won this pretty easily.
weak personals and played lines both ways, Malicious just had the least of the bad shit present in this battle. do better guys, do better ...
v. Malicious.
think you top notch? please lok'll take aim where you stood
mal be asking for tips, but i dont think money'll do him good
this could have been good, ill quote it anyway.
vs
you get help from a vet and im still pwn'n you, really, do u?
I geuss he basically ghosts 4 u, now u really gettin yo shit handed 2 u,
haha, you should have capitalized REALLY tho.
mal aint blowing up, but losing this battle you cant refuse
ill hand this dick tha upper hand,
...since the bottoms tired of his abuse
That sounds like your jerking him off. Your under homosexual suspision.
Vote Mal i liked his quotable more.
Not really anything quotable
vs
you get help from a vet and im still pwn'n you, really, do u?
I geuss he basically ghosts 4 u, now u really gettin yo shit handed 2 u,
Lol... Nice
Lol.. I think Mal took this with the better overall punch of this battle. Both came bland to me seeing that I expected more. But it was an ok battle. I have to say Mal's punche's were alot harsher & landed more direct.
v/Mal.
Vote DQed...wack.
-Fue
Vote - Malicious
This was a kool battle. A lot of playedness in both verses but there has to be a winner. This was actually closer to me than what the votes are putting it out to be. Lokeye, i think i remember you from awhile back. Anyways, your verse was sub-par. Wording was horrible but some concepts were decent. Mal, you had harder punches that were less played and besides your wording was a tad bit better. This is a old battle but definitly worth voting on. Anyways, no hate to neither.
peace....