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must vote on 3 battles
verses due Friday.
Now check in.
I just started a job where I work over 50 hour weeks Monday-Friday. I know you don't have much time on Friday's either. Make this due Saturday at Midnight and I'll match whatever you post.
Alright, Saturday it is. .
You ain't gettin' a free pass against me this time like ya got in the audio tourney. I went 30, bitch
LOOK HERE BITCHES!!! I'm the one who saved christmas!
J/k, but I saved us from hearin' ya voice in the audio olympics
I'm in a rush, but i got itches to maul dudes today
I'd move ASAP, but i'll just tell my bitches to haul you away
RV's your home, are ya lost? Here I'll give ya some help
You look like a fish out of water...
... and no different anywhere else
Mystery, listen man, we shouldn't have to prove shit
I mean, we both beat Com...
... I just didn't need fake personals to do it
Desperate fuck, ya do anything to get tossed a win
You'd write enough lines for Anov L...
... but ya best verse EVER lost to him!
Fuck ya long verses, it don't make sense this dyke's raving
But to make a long story short...
... I'd sacrafice my life savings
I don't get all the fuss, bitch ya work plenty, plus
You're as busy as a bee, but still don't get ANY buzz
Yea, I know sometimes I write like I don't care
But I don't want to hit a decline, so I'll just swing at the air
Mystery gave ya a tough match n' this lame is in trouble
But he took care of you...
... he knew this baby would want to play with a bubble
So get away n' walk ho, ya verses make us bawk, yo
You Philbins of shit so easily, you could start a talk show
Go work out n' get stronger, s'okay to get one odor
Try workin' on the shoulders...
...no one would give a FUCK if ya run over
When ya realized ya had no friends it made this whore grimmer
N' it made you have a cow... fuckin' join you for dinner!
Ya name's strange, but ho I'm afraid that it pleases
N' suits you well, -esis is the ending of many fatal diseases
Your made for TV even tho I seen ya tremble n' twitchin'
You should be on the Family Guy, ya sure resemble a Griffin
You've won lots at RV, n' i seen how this bum fights
I hear ya celebrated TitleIX...
... it's what gave this bitch some rights
I just got on. I'll type my verse now.
Quote:
Originally Posted by DaTrusHurtz
. . Plus an ASAP line? Jesus fucking Christ.Quote:
Originally Posted by Mimesis. . in a battle that DaTrusHurtz voted on
Dog, you ain't going to son me. . your garbage ass is just dumb, see
You Philbins with flips. .
. .like the concept you completely bit FROM ME
And as I'm ripping this. . you should thank Mystery for spinnin' this
You're on the bubble cause it's the only thing you can pop a win against
Pathetic, we're stoppin' your raps. . just straight blockin' your trash
All I had to do was lay a check in to see you forfeit our audio match
I spoiled it. . can't afford to see movies. . your raps'll never boil, kid
But you keep going Over The Hedge. .
. .only cause it separates your room from the toilet
Dog, I'll break this guy. . we all know that you're just lame with rhymes
Cause you suck more then. . ahh, wait. . I can't use your name this time
Now I'm just spittin' free. . always winning, we know you ain't rippin' me
If we bottle up your losses you'd be able to start the biggest bar in history
I don't like shit, but I may choose to allow it. . this dude is just wow n'
I'ma speak on some weak shit. .
. .so try not to move or I'll lose my balance
Don't like my verses?. . guys, just watch me. . I continue to drop heat
But I'll drop the shadow of doubt. . as soon as Trus' body hits the concrete
You won't test my way. . half of your verse is wack and the rest is gay
Dog, keep holding your ground. . nobody uses those mobile toilets anyway
Teaching kids? Must be your call to fame. . acting like this is all a gameQuote:
Originally Posted by Vaskez
Your best student was wrecked and is now a regular in the Hall of Shame
^ Follow up. . you won't win this. . all your students will get ripped quick
Marv has a right to lash out. .
. .the tips you gave him would drive any restaurant out of business
Just chill n' see. . that none of your faggot punches will be grillin' me
You've been in the closet so long they could make Narnia a fucking trilogy
And as the boos steer. . into applause it's obvious that this dude's queer
I keep ringing ill names. . but yours hasn't been picked up in over two years
So I'll continue to rack wins. . just watch me, I'll keep tryin' to blast this
Until your mind frame will hold up the paper that I wipe my fucking ass with
In a crude way. . I'll show your broke and this match? Haha, Trus is gay
. .Even your pocket of air can't afford to carry around any loose change
Game over.
Oh, and I don't want TayTay to vote. Word.
^ stop using that gay font, slut. this was a good battle, better than any other battle this week I've voted on, and closer... However... Don't get pissy when I tell you why I didn't like some of the lines people. .
LOOK HERE BITCHES!!! I'm the one who saved christmas!
J/k, but I saved us from hearin' ya voice in the audio olympics
Average. You're trying to diss him for something that was your fault (you no showing or whatever happened) and it just doesn't work out well because of that.
I'm in a rush, but i got itches to maul dudes today
I'd move ASAP, but i'll just tell my bitches to haul you away
Calling him "a sap" ? below average because although the creativity wasn't bad, the diss was.
RV's your home, are ya lost? Here I'll give ya some help
You look like a fish out of water...
... and no different anywhere else
Lol.
Mystery, listen man, we shouldn't have to prove shit
I mean, we both beat Com...
... I just didn't need fake personals to do it
good personal.
Desperate fuck, ya do anything to get tossed a win
You'd write enough lines for Anov L...
... but ya best verse EVER lost to him!
ok. This is personal feelings that affected me not liking this line as much as i might have, but I saw that battle, and Mimesis won IMO
Fuck ya long verses, it don't make sense this dyke's raving
But to make a long story short...
... I'd sacrafice my life savings
i didnt like this because the cliche you used isn't actually a diss to him, its in reference to what u previously said about him having long verses, which isn't that great a diss in and of itself. so as you go on with this line, it just got progressively weaker. Also, sacrificing your life savings doesn't strike me as a great thing to support your diss... Its just not that creative or "astounding" or even believable... creative cuz you could've said "to make a long story short" then said just about anything after that in support of it.
I don't get all the fuss, bitch ya work plenty, plus
You're as busy as a bee, but still don't get ANY buzz
lol, kinda corny but i chuckled
Yea, I know sometimes I write like I don't care
But I don't want to hit a decline, so I'll just swing at the air
?
Mystery gave ya a tough match n' this lame is in trouble
But he took care of you...
... he knew this baby would want to play with a bubble
lol
So get away n' walk ho, ya verses make us bawk, yo
You Philbins of shit so easily, you could start a talk show
meh
Go work out n' get stronger, s'okay to get one odor
Try workin' on the shoulders...
...no one would give a FUCK if ya run over
haha... nice, although wording could've been much better. still, nice concept
When ya realized ya had no friends it made this whore grimmer
N' it made you have a cow... fuckin' join you for dinner!
nah
Ya name's strange, but ho I'm afraid that it pleases
N' suits you well, -esis is the ending of many fatal diseases
could've utilized this concept better
Your made for TV even tho I seen ya tremble n' twitchin'
You should be on the Family Guy, ya sure resemble a Griffin
good
You've won lots at RV, n' i seen how this bum fights
I hear ya celebrated TitleIX...
... it's what gave this bitch some rights
sounds forced
. . Plus an ASAP line? Jesus fucking Christ.
Dog, you ain't going to son me. . your garbage ass is just dumb, see
You Philbins with flips. .
. .like the concept you completely bit FROM ME
above avg
And as I'm ripping this. . you should thank Mystery for spinnin' this
You're on the bubble cause it's the only thing you can pop a win against
avg , dont like the feeding
Pathetic, we're stoppin' your raps. . just straight blockin' your trash
All I had to do was lay a check in to see you forfeit our audio match
again, dont like the feeding
I spoiled it. . can't afford to see movies. . your raps'll never boil, kid
But you keep going Over The Hedge. .
. .only cause it separates your room from the toilet
forced, is this supposed to be a personal? funny? what?
Dog, I'll break this guy. . we all know that you're just lame with rhymes
Cause you suck more then. . ahh, wait. . I can't use your name this time
haha
Now I'm just spittin' free. . always winning, we know you ain't rippin' me
If we bottle up your losses you'd be able to start the biggest bar in history
good concept, good line
I don't like shit, but I may choose to allow it. . this dude is just wow n'
I'ma speak on some weak shit. .
. .so try not to move or I'll lose my balance
ehh, concept and wording are both shaky. concept is kinda played. avg
Don't like my verses?. . guys, just watch me. . I continue to drop heat
But I'll drop the shadow of doubt. . as soon as Trus' body hits the concrete
played concept, avgly worded
You won't test my way. . half of your verse is wack and the rest is gay
Dog, keep holding your ground. . nobody uses those mobile toilets anyway
ok
Teaching kids? Must be your call to fame. . acting like this is all a game
Your best student was wrecked and is now a regular in the Hall of Shame
avg
^ Follow up. . you won't win this. . all your students will get ripped quick
Marv has a right to lash out. .
. .the tips you gave him would drive any restaurant out of business
avg
Just chill n' see. . that none of your faggot punches will be grillin' me
You've been in the closet so long they could make Narnia a fucking trilogy
rofl, dope
And as the boos steer. . into applause it's obvious that this dude's queer
I keep ringing ill names. . but yours hasn't been picked up in over two years
ok
So I'll continue to rack wins. . just watch me, I'll keep tryin' to blast this
Until your mind frame will hold up the paper that I wipe my fucking ass with
meh
In a crude way. . I'll show your broke and this match? Haha, Trus is gay
. .Even your pocket of air can't afford to carry around any loose change
ok
sorry to mimesis, i didnt really explain anything, just getting really tired. One good point of mimesis's verse was that he had a good flow, so if I didn't like something or thought it was on the "low" side of average/ slightly below average, it wasn't that bad to read anyway. DaTrus actually had a very readable verse as well, even when I didnt particulrly like a few concepts... One thing you guys should know is that when I say ok, or average, thats exactly what I mean... If I saw a whole verse of "OK" lines with one or two good lines, I'd be happy. I know some people use "average/ok" as a substitue for "wack" but I don't. it seemed datrus's verse was more on the humorous side this battle, and mimesis's was on the other end of the spectrum, if that makes sense.. neither side is better, both can and have been pulled off very well, just saying.
vote - mimesis
vote - mimese
Thanks for the vote and the explanation. . that's probably going to be the most detailed vote we get, but to explain a few things. .
I wasn't feeding with my bubble lines. It's because we're both on the Bubble to make playoffs and title of this thread has "Bubble" in the title and all that. Also, I wasn't feeding with my line about our audio battle. I mean, what I said was fact. I checked in and said I was going to post. . and he came in and said that I could have the win. The line may have not been hard hitting or whatever, but it's not like it wasn't true. I could have posted all of those lines (except the Philbin one, because he flipped a concept I had used a while back) before he posted his verse and they would have still made sense, know what I'm saying?
I just wanted to clear that up. I appreciate the vote, though.
LOOK HERE BITCHES!!! I'm the one who saved christmas!
J/k, but I saved us from hearin' ya voice in the audio olympics
ehh
I'm in a rush, but i got itches to maul dudes today
I'd move ASAP, but i'll just tell my bitches to haul you away
ok
RV's your home, are ya lost? Here I'll give ya some help
You look like a fish out of water...
... and no different anywhere else
ok
Mystery, listen man, we shouldn't have to prove shit
I mean, we both beat Com...
... I just didn't need fake personals to do it
decent at best
Desperate fuck, ya do anything to get tossed a win
You'd write enough lines for Anov L...
... but ya best verse EVER lost to him!
ok
Fuck ya long verses, it don't make sense this dyke's raving
But to make a long story short...
... I'd sacrafice my life savings
nah
I don't get all the fuss, bitch ya work plenty, plus
You're as busy as a bee, but still don't get ANY buzz
kinda wack, simple
Yea, I know sometimes I write like I don't care
But I don't want to hit a decline, so I'll just swing at the air
eh
Mystery gave ya a tough match n' this lame is in trouble
But he took care of you...
... he knew this baby would want to play with a bubble
i unno
So get away n' walk ho, ya verses make us bawk, yo
You Philbins of shit so easily, you could start a talk show
no
Go work out n' get stronger, s'okay to get one odor
Try workin' on the shoulders...
...no one would give a FUCK if ya run over
nah
When ya realized ya had no friends it made this whore grimmer
N' it made you have a cow... fuckin' join you for dinner!
better
Ya name's strange, but ho I'm afraid that it pleases
N' suits you well, -esis is the ending of many fatal diseases
hah
Your made for TV even tho I seen ya tremble n' twitchin'
You should be on the Family Guy, ya sure resemble a Griffin
weak
You've won lots at RV, n' i seen how this bum fights
I hear ya celebrated TitleIX...
... it's what gave this bitch some rights
ehh
off and on decent...
next...
Dog, you ain't going to son me. . your garbage ass is just dumb, see
You Philbins with flips. .
. .like the concept you completely bit FROM ME
feeding. so it kinda duzznt count
And as I'm ripping this. . you should thank Mystery for spinnin' this
You're on the bubble cause it's the only thing you can pop a win against
hah
Pathetic, we're stoppin' your raps. . just straight blockin' your trash
All I had to do was lay a check in to see you forfeit our audio match
decent
I spoiled it. . can't afford to see movies. . your raps'll never boil, kid
But you keep going Over The Hedge. .
. .only cause it separates your room from the toilet
nah
Dog, I'll break this guy. . we all know that you're just lame with rhymes
Cause you suck more then. . ahh, wait. . I can't use your name this time
heh...
Now I'm just spittin' free. . always winning, we know you ain't rippin' me
If we bottle up your losses you'd be able to start the biggest bar in history
ok
I don't like shit, but I may choose to allow it. . this dude is just wow n'
I'ma speak on some weak shit. .
. .so try not to move or I'll lose my balance
nah
Don't like my verses?. . guys, just watch me. . I continue to drop heat
But I'll drop the shadow of doubt. . as soon as Trus' body hits the concrete
ehh
You won't test my way. . half of your verse is wack and the rest is gay
Dog, keep holding your ground. . nobody uses those mobile toilets anyway
ermmmmm
Quote:
Originally Posted by Vaskez
Marv's one of the people DTH helped elevate and one of his ex-dickriders. Now he's ashamed of that and is lashing out, lol
Teaching kids? Must be your call to fame. . acting like this is all a game
Your best student was wrecked and is now a regular in the Hall of Shame
decent
^ Follow up. . you won't win this. . all your students will get ripped quick
Marv has a right to lash out. .
. .the tips you gave him would drive any restaurant out of business
concept was good wording was off
Just chill n' see. . that none of your faggot punches will be grillin' me
You've been in the closet so long they could make Narnia a fucking trilogy
eh
And as the boos steer. . into applause it's obvious that this dude's queer
I keep ringing ill names. . but yours hasn't been picked up in over two years
ok
So I'll continue to rack wins. . just watch me, I'll keep tryin' to blast this
Until your mind frame will hold up the paper that I wipe my fucking ass with
ok
In a crude way. . I'll show your broke and this match? Haha, Trus is gay
. .Even your pocket of air can't afford to carry around any loose change
weak closer
battle was ehhh... decent at best u both came weaker than u should have..
vote - mimesis more consistency.
close battle tho
Feeble, I'm basically saying that's HE'S the decline, and because I don't want to hit a decline (him), I'll just swing and miss him.Quote:
Originally Posted by Feeble Minded
Thanks for the detailed votes fellas, good battle man
When ya realized ya had no friends it made this whore grimmer
N' it made you have a cow... fuckin' join you for dinner!
Ya name's strange, but ho I'm afraid that it pleases
N' suits you well, -esis is the ending of many fatal diseases
for the most u were just meh @ best.. seen u do wayyyyyyyyyyyyyy better man.. get wit it :mad:
vs.
And as I'm ripping this. . you should thank Mystery for spinnin' this
You're on the bubble cause it's the only thing you can pop a win against
Pathetic, we're stoppin' your raps. . just straight blockin' your trash
All I had to do was lay a check in to see you forfeit our audio match
ow I'm just spittin' free. . always winning, we know you ain't rippin' me
If we bottle up your losses you'd be able to start the biggest bar in history
Teaching kids? Must be your call to fame. . acting like this is all a game
Your best student was wrecked and is now a regular in the Hall of Shame
^ Follow up. . you won't win this. . all your students will get ripped quick
Marv has a right to lash out. .
. .the tips you gave him would drive any restaurant out of business
there were a couple more lines that i thought were ok, but not but so much quotable like these
V/mimesis
you two hit up my contenders match
im not going to pull a feeble minded with my vote, so i'm sorry. that shit is ridicilously long holy shit. but basically, trus, ur verse lacked a LOT in my eyes. nothing got me excited, and i was really bored reading that entire verse. u should have kept it short, because stretching verses out like that just ruins ur creativity. u think of a line, and write it thinking shit, i've got 29 more lines to do, that one isnt gunna hurt my verse. but trust me, ur shit was boring. u need to come up with some newer concepts. and not just new concepts, u really need to establish a style of your own,cause ur style is really bland right now. mimesis came a litle better, his consistency was better, so i gotta give him the win.
LOOK HERE BITCHES!!! I'm the one who saved christmas!
J/k, but I saved us from hearin' ya voice in the audio olympics
^^aight
I'm in a rush, but i got itches to maul dudes today
I'd move ASAP, but i'll just tell my bitches to haul you away
^^pretty good
RV's your home, are ya lost? Here I'll give ya some help
You look like a fish out of water...
... and no different anywhere else
^^nice twist, just not that harsh
Mystery, listen man, we shouldn't have to prove shit
I mean, we both beat Com...
... I just didn't need fake personals to do it
^^did he have fake personals? dont remember so
Desperate fuck, ya do anything to get tossed a win
You'd write enough lines for Anov L...
... but ya best verse EVER lost to him!
^^aight not witty enough
Fuck ya long verses, it don't make sense this dyke's raving
But to make a long story short...
... I'd sacrafice my life savings
^^aight
I don't get all the fuss, bitch ya work plenty, plus
You're as busy as a bee, but still don't get ANY buzz
^^aight
Yea, I know sometimes I write like I don't care
But I don't want to hit a decline, so I'll just swing at the air
^^not too bad
Mystery gave ya a tough match n' this lame is in trouble
But he took care of you...
... he knew this baby would want to play with a bubble
^^lol but corny
So get away n' walk ho, ya verses make us bawk, yo
You Philbins of shit so easily, you could start a talk show
^^not bad
Go work out n' get stronger, s'okay to get one odor
Try workin' on the shoulders...
...no one would give a FUCK if ya run over
^^hehe liked this one
When ya realized ya had no friends it made this whore grimmer
N' it made you have a cow... fuckin' join you for dinner!
^^cooorny, but aight
Ya name's strange, but ho I'm afraid that it pleases
N' suits you well, -esis is the ending of many fatal diseases
^^eh, needed different wording
Your made for TV even tho I seen ya tremble n' twitchin'
You should be on the Family Guy, ya sure resemble a Griffin
^^bit bland
You've won lots at RV, n' i seen how this bum fights
I hear ya celebrated TitleIX...
... it's what gave this bitch some rights
^^hah
vs.
Dog, you ain't going to son me. . your garbage ass is just dumb, see
You Philbins with flips. .
. .like the concept you completely bit FROM ME
^^eh, didnt like the wording
And as I'm ripping this. . you should thank Mystery for spinnin' this
You're on the bubble cause it's the only thing you can pop a win against
^^such a nice concept weakened by bad wording cos popping a win against something dont make that much sense
Pathetic, we're stoppin' your raps. . just straight blockin' your trash
All I had to do was lay a check in to see you forfeit our audio match
^^heh
I spoiled it. . can't afford to see movies. . your raps'll never boil, kid
But you keep going Over The Hedge. .
. .only cause it separates your room from the toilet
^^aight
Dog, I'll break this guy. . we all know that you're just lame with rhymes
Cause you suck more then. . ahh, wait. . I can't use your name this time
^^haha quite nice
Now I'm just spittin' free. . always winning, we know you ain't rippin' me
If we bottle up your losses you'd be able to start the biggest bar in history
^^quite cool, still woulda preferred it worded different
I don't like shit, but I may choose to allow it. . this dude is just wow n'
I'ma speak on some weak shit. .
. .so try not to move or I'll lose my balance
^^hehe
Don't like my verses?. . guys, just watch me. . I continue to drop heat
But I'll drop the shadow of doubt. . as soon as Trus' body hits the concrete
^^mmeh
You won't test my way. . half of your verse is wack and the rest is gay
Dog, keep holding your ground. . nobody uses those mobile toilets anyway
^^heh
Teaching kids? Must be your call to fame. . acting like this is all a game
Your best student was wrecked and is now a regular in the Hall of Shame
^^hehe I was joking with that, so this makes no sense, sorry
^ Follow up. . you won't win this. . all your students will get ripped quick
Marv has a right to lash out. .
. .the tips you gave him would drive any restaurant out of business
^^nice wordplay
Just chill n' see. . that none of your faggot punches will be grillin' me
You've been in the closet so long they could make Narnia a fucking trilogy
^^hahaha funniest line so far
And as the boos steer. . into applause it's obvious that this dude's queer
I keep ringing ill names. . but yours hasn't been picked up in over two years
^^nice concept, again didnt like the way you worded it
So I'll continue to rack wins. . just watch me, I'll keep tryin' to blast this
Until your mind frame will hold up the paper that I wipe my fucking ass with
^^meh
In a crude way. . I'll show your broke and this match? Haha, Trus is gay
. .Even your pocket of air can't afford to carry around any loose change
^^aight
Game over.
I dunno this wasn't as one-sided as people said, kinda close, but I still got Mim taking it by a bit
v/mimesis
WTF at Vaskez? i was never taught by DTH rofl hahahahahahha WTF hahahah *dead*
lmao read my vote on that line, I told him I was joking. rofl