EXPOSED: The Da Vinci Con!

The Da Vinci Con!
http://www.danbrown.com/images/davin...ast_supper.jpg
The figure to Christ's right, is NOT one of Magdalene -
But of John the Evangelist!
His effeminate forms, sentiments borne...
...from Western conventions attempt to conjour the angelic!
There's no ponderous catalyst surrounding Christ's chosen heir ..
.. Reader's are only seeing what they`re being TOLD is there!
The over-bearing, woven hair and, feminine features that you're MEANT to see…
…Are simply Leonardo -
Painting to the same conventions as his contempories.
There's no blistering find or mystery behind this exquisite design,
How could the man of led the Priory Of Sion…
…A group that didn’t exist at this time?
Had the Catholic Church wished to deny, Christian minds, Mary was His asserted patron,
And rid the Bible of any intercoursal scourging statements…
…surely they`d of DESTROYED all impinging images, rather than preserve the paintings!
The Church openly flirted Pagan symbolism,
There’s no big ‘secret’ involved…
…as the Sheeple were told. It was merely proposed, to help with the Pagan people feeling at home.
The ‘Priory Of Sion’ theory alone is based on lies, and plagiarized ..
.. from pages of The Holy Blood And The Holy Grail you’ll find.
For all the purported research - The historical inaccuracies, are comical infact to me.

There's no ponderous catalyst surrounding Christ's chosen heir ..
.. Reader's are only seeing what they`re being TOLD is there!

What do these fresh-faced woman in these pictures have in common?
http://www.valentano.org/images/madass02.jpg
http://www.cartage.org.lb/en/themes/...orreggio20.jpg

They’re both St. John The Evangelist.

Replied to Avalon`s latest, Bounce`s latest, and a couple new-jacks pieces.

Leave links, and i`ll respond! :^)

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=293159

you gonna leave feed?

lol, jesus... who cares about an old dead guy!

your flow was really nice though

An Interesting piece.

I am a Christian so I guess that's what brought me hear.
Hmm

"The figure to Christ's right, is NOT one of Magdalene -
But of John the Evangelist!
His effeminate forms, sentiments borne...
...from Western conventions attempt to conjour the angelic!
There's no ponderous catalyst surrounding Christ's chosen heir ..
.. Reader's are only seeing what they`re being TOLD is there!"

Nice take on the matter.

Not going to say much because in away I am tired
of the Da Vinci code being talked about.


But you did however manage to do a nice piece
here and express what you felt on the topic.
People complain about a good write is not about
flow scheme but you did do it nice with good content,
meaning.


so overall nice appraoch to the topic.
stay writing you definitely got talent.

yo this shit was really different in a good way it kept my intrest i acuttly made me think which is great and it stayed wit me after i read it it also kept my interest through out it the concept was really cool even with the movie out i wouldn't have thought to write somethin like this if this is really how you feel then i could tell you put some of ya thought and emotion into it the flow went along nicley wit the structure the rhymes was pretty good and so was the vocab great peice stay up

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Originally Posted by Boris Funk

lol, jesus... who cares about an old dead guy!

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That was the most irrelevent thing I've ever heard, seriously.

Sorry,

I'll edit this in with feed later.

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Originally Posted by Midise

That was the most irrelevent thing I've ever heard, seriously.

Sorry,

I'll edit this in with feed later.

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surely pointing out that something is irrelevent is even more irrelevent - lol

do you mean 'im a christian therefore i believe that god... a man with a beard... had NON sexual intercourse with a 14 year old girl (her supposed age at the time) who then gave birth to a half man/half god superhuman- with the ability to walk on water, and convert water - magically adding the relevent sugars for it to ferment - into wine... and your dismissal is offensive to me'

lol, hope not

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Originally Posted by mc pyro.

yo this shit was really different in a good way it kept my intrest i acuttly made me think which is great and it stayed wit me after i read it it also kept my interest through out it the concept was really cool even with the movie out i wouldn't have thought to write somethin like this if this is really how you feel then i could tell you put some of ya thought and emotion into it the flow went along nicley wit the structure the rhymes was pretty good and so was the vocab great peice stay up

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yo can u leave feed on my om in ma sig plz

The figure to Christ's right, is NOT one of Magdalene -
But of John the Evangelist!
His effeminate forms, sentiments borne...
...from Western conventions attempt to conjour the angelic!
There's no ponderous catalyst surrounding Christ's chosen heir ..
.. Reader's are only seeing what they`re being TOLD is there!
The over-bearing, woven hair and, feminine features that you're MEANT to see…
…Are simply Leonardo -
Painting to the same conventions as his contempories.

^I loved this part. Sometimes I think your lines are stretched, which makes it difficult to find your flow, but your imagery overshadows every flaw in your piece. Every single time. I really liked the way you approached this topic, espeically since I'm a Christian, so this had a favorable advantage to me. Anyway, I also felt that this was little too condensed. Simply meaning I wished you would've made it a bit longer because you touched lightly on some heavy topics throughout your verse (Priory of Sion, Holy Grail). I don't think people know the theory of Priory of Sion unless they go see the movie or read the novel, but I did enjoy this piece. You grasped it very well for what it was and the spin on John The Evangelist made it more interesting and relieving at the same time. Cool drop.

your lines are too stretched for my liking but you got pretty good imagery dude. it was a little to short for the topic too, felt like you coulda touched on alot more. the whole first half was fire though. nice drop my dude.

The lines actually ARENT stretched. Because of the internals and whatever else, the flow is still there. Regardless of the line lengths. And often, if im going to use a somewhat longer follow-up line, i'll simply use a shorter set-up. Maintaining the flow. I have to agree with Nique somewhat here though, I think MAYBE going for this topic in a league made up of early teenagers was the wrong move, and possibly what cost me the Championship this week. Regardless, I put a hell of a lot of effort into writing this, and Im glad you all appreciated it.

Thanks! :^)

This piece was a great read ......
nice take on the topic...
flow was choppie but good...
personal feelings and emotions were felt...
Vocab was terrific...
I'd have to say that this piece was more meaningful than anything .....
Overall this was a good take on a contraversal topic....
Good shit .... Keep it up ....

Ok I liked this.I do not think the lines were streched at all,I thought they were just right for the piece.People only say that because they have not read it properly.Your imagery was very impressive and vocab made it all the better read.One thing I would say that needed improvment on this piece is that you should have been more creative.You could of gone other places with this and made it a bit longer,because what you wrote was a very good read.I know you were going quality over quantity,but I still think it needed a bit more.I liked the topic that you have written on too.Nice read and keep it up ;)

mad interesting. topic stuck out for me. so i decided to read it.
flow was nice. rhymes were good. this had a ton of creativity.
nice vocab and complexity. and overall this was a very nice read.
i liked it. keep it up. peace~

Cheers, Yo.

I`ve replied to your piece. Anyone else - leave links and i`ll work my way through them all!

Pz!

boris funk wat r u

Good Points - I Really Liked This Piece It Flowed Really Well, Your Imagery Was On Point And Your Vocab Was Of The Chain And I Liked They Way You Approached The Topic.... I Wouldnt Be Suprised To See This In Drop Of The Month.

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Originally Posted by Camarac

The figure to Christ's right, is NOT one of Magdalene -
But of John the Evangelist!
His effeminate forms, sentiments borne...
...from Western conventions attempt to conjour the angelic!
There's no ponderous catalyst surrounding Christ's chosen heir ..
.. Reader's are only seeing what they`re being TOLD is there!
The over-bearing, woven hair and, feminine features that you're MEANT to see…
…Are simply Leonardo -
Painting to the same conventions as his contempories.

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^ This Bit Was Flawless

Bad Points - It Was Too Short And Stretched In Places, And You Should'nt Of Put Pictures It Spoilt It In My View... But That's All I Can Fault You On.

Good Shit, Looking Forward To Seeing More From You In The Future.

This was sexy.

You kill with rhyme scheme man... way to paint a picture with a verse. Could have almost even been a little longer. But yeah... this was very nice. Actually read it in SS...


Good work my man.

Bumping this with the release of Angels and Demons.

Crazy to think this will be three years old in a weeks time!


Woah.

I guess this wasn't bad.. it seemed kind've simple at times.. bit repeatitive... you're pretty much just defending something that doesn't really need defending. I find all the concepts of the divinci code were entertaining but I never really took them seriously, more as theory or myth.. the whole bible's really kind of a thousand ideas branched into one book, everybody split them into different religions and ideas, and this is another example of a different off branch.. vocab was decent.. rhyming was off in places but this was you back in what.. 2006?? haha.. be cool to see you revise this..


- Cry

wow what a great piece...so true...right on...dam OJ u kill em evrytime...never any bullshyt...always perfect...great flow...fukin awesome conceptz...great vocab n shyt...great metaphorz n shyt....this was just a great fukin read...u said it all!!!

yo RTF on any of my dropz...