10-12 lines
Checkin asap
No d/r
No swaying
No crew
No hate
No Feeding
Well explained votes......
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10-12 lines
Checkin asap
No d/r
No swaying
No crew
No hate
No Feeding
Well explained votes......
u spelled my name wrong dick
Try Again
Fuck U faggot....Check in and rap ur bullshit verse I dont got tyme 4 u herbish pussies this is my check
well your dropping your verse for no reason
casue when i beat you i want the win
so im not checking in untill you make a new thread
now stop acting hard and get on ya job
i hate you arrognat ass herbs wit a custom tittle and aint about shit
beat sombody worth beating bitch then talk all the shit u want
now jus set it up in another thread and ill check in their
i would do it but i have no creds on dis alias
fuck it check
Its obscene that dis faggot even wants 2 compete....
U'd pre-write 4 weeks and ur half of this battles still gon be incomplete....
Cuz ur weak.....thats it... ur flat garbage put ur intentions 2 sleep....
Cuz U beatin me cant happen especially when u lack intensity....
U became whack instantly when u were born....
Since the form of a fetus U were a failure and ur dreams were torn.....
Never was norm....parapralegic flows got u nowhere....
Dis pussies foriegn 2 the fact I'll rip em bald wit no hair....
I'll enclose this without taking this further....
Ramurder Murda 1....whatever jst kno U have 1 flow that was mudered....
Meh.....U still weak....G/L
Im goin 2 be nice and give u an additional 10 mins....After that the no-show votes R being dropped...
your garbage man,& your whole career will be shelfedQuote:
Originally Posted by Black_Out
even he knows,so arrogant he talks about himself
your a lame fuck,but da bitch thinks he's so Hard & StreetQuote:
Originally Posted by Black_Out
thought he was real scary,then the fag sucked 's teeth
lol Check out the net thug,but he knows he likes to try on wigsQuote:
Originally Posted by Black_Out
i raised my hand to he's soft ass,Black_Out <-- and thas wat he did
the nerve of this herb,talking like he owns the site
i'd rip pussy to shreds,but ya moms wont be home tonight
your a weak as fuck,and thats what ya rhymes be all about
& i'd keep punching his face,cuz speed bags never ware out
& lol @ no show votes here u go herb
Daaaaaaaaaamn.........u Fed Off Of Everything.....read The Rules.....read The Fuckin Rules.....no Feeding.....i Repeat.....no Feeding
which one of those lines were in ya verse kid i didnt feed off nuttin in ya verse
now stop swaying
Wow this was a Real close battle in my eyes. this is how i break it down..
Its obscene that dis faggot even wants 2 compete....
U'd pre-write 4 weeks and ur half of this battles still gon be incomplete....
good opener.. good line too
Cuz ur weak.....thats it... ur flat garbage put ur intentions 2 sleep....
Cuz U beatin me cant happen especially when u lack intensity....
thats aight
U became whack instantly when u were born....
Since the form of a fetus U were a failure and ur dreams were torn.....
wasant feelin that line really..
Never was norm....parapralegic flows got u nowhere....
Dis pussies foriegn 2 the fact I'll rip em bald wit no hair....
lol ok
I'll enclose this without taking this further....
Ramurder Murda 1....whatever jst kno U have 1 flow that was mudered....
coulda been better
Originally Posted by Black_Out
^^^^^....Danm ur gettin merk'd
your garbage man,& your whole career will be shelfed
even he knows,so arrogant he talks about himself
lol okay.. good opener
Quote:
Originally Posted by Black_Out
Pffft....Hol up
your a lame fuck,but da bitch thinks he's so Hard & Street
thought he was real scary,then the fag sucked 's teeth
nah wasant feelin that
Quote:
Originally Posted by Black_Out
Fuck U faggot....Check in and rap ur bullshit verse I dont got tyme 4 u herbish pussies this is my check
lol Check out the net thug,but he knows he likes to try on wigs
i raised my hand to he's soft ass,Black_Out <-- and thas wat he did
good line..
the nerve of this herb,talking like he owns the site
i'd rip pussy to shreds,but ya moms wont be home tonight
nah
your a weak as fuck,and thats what ya rhymes be all about
& i'd keep punching his face,cuz speed bags never ware out
bad closer.. coulda came stronger
This battle had its weak points and its strong points... for the most part i think murder came more orignal and more creative.. but black stayed more consistant with the punches.. What won this battle over for me and made me come to my decision was the personal's from murder. they were more creative.. the opener was catchy and so forth.. black u coulda came a little stronger with some personal attacks.. i feel the way u closed it out kinda fell off..
v- Murder - BARELY
Feeding Is Everything B4 The Battle.....i Thought....let Me Kno If Im Wrong.....well Id Never Believe U Anyway....fuk It W/e...who Cares
Quote:
Originally Posted by Dukes-A-HaZZaRD
THEN HERES A D/R VOTE.......HOW IN THE HELL DO I GET BETTER COMMENTS THAN U...AND U GET A VOTE,WHEN HE STATES THAT HALF UR LINES R SHITTY.....
uppin
and black out stop fuckin wit the voters man
black out definately got the upper hand on that last verse over murda 1
good shit dog
black out -1-
murda 1 -0-
murda 1 got aids
no cure for the disease you're not gonna be saved
you try to spit you try to rap
but all that bullshit you're talking is whak
and you know that
and i give you credit for that
but still you spit your silly shit trying to battle mc's
get yourself into some trouble when your battlin' me
you might not know who i am but i know who you are
get out of line i'll have the homies straight run up on your car
i get into battles never hesitate or back out
make you lose again like that time you lost to "blackout"
v/ black out coz ur not allowed to feed off ppls verse man read the house rules
black out doesnt matter if the guy fed off everything cauz your verse waz eazily betta!!! no hate!!!
Pay close attention Murda.......See these r not herbs...they're dope heads that can see a sloppy verse to a decent structure keyed verse....good drop anyway u pussie....
thanx...uppin
lol how can u call them dope heads when they dont know what fucking feeding is lol u went and got ya lil noob buddies to vote for u cause u thought i was feeding your fucking lamer then i thought
Im not gonna argue.......My final werds...*OWNED*
lol your such a fucking idiot lmmfaorofl
*owned*
Its obscene that dis faggot even wants 2 compete....
U'd pre-write 4 weeks and ur half of this battles still gon be incomplete....
Weak
Cuz ur weak.....thats it... ur flat garbage put ur intentions 2 sleep....
Cuz U beatin me cant happen especially when u lack intensity....
Meh
U became whack instantly when u were born....
Since the form of a fetus U were a failure and ur dreams were torn.....
Aiight
Never was norm....parapralegic flows got u nowhere....
Dis pussies foriegn 2 the fact I'll rip em bald wit no hair....
BOO
I'll enclose this without taking this further....
Ramurder Murda 1....whatever jst kno U have 1 flow that was mudered
Decent I guess
vs.
your garbage man,& your whole career will be shelfed
even he knows,so arrogant he talks about himself
Decent punch...LOL @ personal
your a lame fuck,but da bitch thinks he's so Hard & Street
thought he was real scary,then the fag sucked 's teeth
NOPE
lol Check out the net thug,but he knows he likes to try on wigs
i raised my hand to he's soft ass,Black_Out <-- and thas wat he did
MEH
the nerve of this herb,talking like he owns the site
i'd rip pussy to shreds,but ya moms wont be home tonight
Good
your a weak as fuck,and thats what ya rhymes be all about
& i'd keep punching his face,cuz speed bags never ware out
Weak closer
Both need work as you can both see. I think that for consistency I have to give the battle to Ramurda...he just seemed to drop harder and overall better punches. Both of you are cool with me I hope, so don't take this as d/r for either one of you...but this is just truth for me. I think both of you should go to LLL and read some battles...get some tips, which doesn't mean bite, but get ideas...good luck guys...
v/Murder1
^^^^^^^^^AT least his vote made sense....................
I voted on this...Murda..hit up my link in sig
yeah if they are dope then im the pope man, they all suckQuote:
Originally Posted by Black_Out
Its obscene that dis faggot even wants 2 compete....
U'd pre-write 4 weeks and ur half of this battles still gon be incomplete....
-no
Cuz ur weak.....thats it... ur flat garbage put ur intentions 2 sleep....
Cuz U beatin me cant happen especially when u lack intensity....
-hell no
U became whack instantly when u were born....
Since the form of a fetus U were a failure and ur dreams were torn.....
-ur dreams was torn part kinda blew it, toherwise nice attempt
Never was norm....parapralegic flows got u nowhere....
Dis pussies foriegn 2 the fact I'll rip em bald wit no hair....
-heh, no, selfglory
I'll enclose this without taking this further....
Ramurder Murda 1....whatever jst kno U have 1 flow that was mudered
-wtf? hell no
vs.
your garbage man,& your whole career will be shelfed
even he knows,so arrogant he talks about himself
-ok, nothing special
your a lame fuck,but da bitch thinks he's so Hard & Street
thought he was real scary,then the fag sucked 's teeth
-hell no
lol Check out the net thug,but he knows he likes to try on wigs
i raised my hand to he's soft ass,Black_Out <-- and thas wat he did
-heh, ok
the nerve of this herb,talking like he owns the site
i'd rip pussy to shreds,but ya moms wont be home tonight
-lol
your a weak as fuck,and thats what ya rhymes be all about
& i'd keep punching his face,cuz speed bags never ware out
-not good
this was a wack battle, but still, murda 1 got this one with no problem, other guy has to learn how to write punchlines.... bleh
/v murda 1
Its obscene that dis faggot even wants 2 compete....
U'd pre-write 4 weeks and ur half of this battles still gon be incomplete....
good openor
Cuz ur weak.....thats it... ur flat garbage put ur intentions 2 sleep....
Cuz U beatin me cant happen especially when u lack intensity....
aight not bad
U became whack instantly when u were born....
Since the form of a fetus U were a failure and ur dreams were torn.....
meh..ok
Never was norm....parapralegic flows got u nowhere....
Dis pussies foriegn 2 the fact I'll rip em bald wit no hair....
lol this was pretty good
I'll enclose this without taking this further....
Ramurder Murda 1....whatever jst kno U have 1 flow that was mudered....
nice closer kid... nice shit
your garbage man,& your whole career will be shelfed
even he knows,so arrogant he talks about himself
lol ight
your a lame fuck,but da bitch thinks he's so Hard & Street
thought he was real scary,then the fag sucked 's teeth
nope not feelin it
lol Check out the net thug,but he knows he likes to try on wigs
i raised my hand to he's soft ass,Black_Out <-- and thas wat he did
aight good line
the nerve of this herb,talking like he owns the site
i'd rip pussy to shreds,but ya moms wont be home tonight
lol ight this made me laugh
your a weak as fuck,and thats what ya rhymes be all about
& i'd keep punching his face,cuz speed bags never ware out
uhh.... naa not feelin it coulda came a lil harder..
overal feed back
Black-out - had nice flow through out his whole verse......came pretty hard with punches.. i think he lightend up a lil bit cuz he thought it was an easy win...but he still hada decent drop... he had a nice openor n a nice closure... his structure was on ... nice shit but ive seen a lot better frum u
Murder1- u had choppy flow... not bad... sum punches i was reeli feeling but sum wuns i wasn't at all.... unlike black out u didn't keep coming hard......ur structure was decent... but u werent on point with tha punches...nice drop besides that tho... but this basic lil things made u fuck up this battle.....
V/Black out....Reasons above
Its obscene that dis faggot even wants 2 compete....
U'd pre-write 4 weeks and ur half of this battles still gon be incomplete....
no
Cuz ur weak.....thats it... ur flat garbage put ur intentions 2 sleep....
Cuz U beatin me cant happen especially when u lack intensity....
no
U became whack instantly when u were born....
Since the form of a fetus U were a failure and ur dreams were torn.....
no
Never was norm....parapralegic flows got u nowhere....
Dis pussies foriegn 2 the fact I'll rip em bald wit no hair....
hell no
I'll enclose this without taking this further....
Ramurder Murda 1....whatever jst kno U have 1 flow that was mudered
terrible
vs
your garbage man,& your whole career will be shelfed
even he knows,so arrogant he talks about himself
nah
your a lame fuck,but da bitch thinks he's so Hard & Street
thought he was real scary,then the fag sucked 's teeth
not really a punch
lol Check out the net thug,but he knows he likes to try on wigs
i raised my hand to he's soft ass,Black_Out <-- and thas wat he did
o.k but you coulda re-worded it better
the nerve of this herb,talking like he owns the site
i'd rip pussy to shreds,but ya moms wont be home tonight
nah
i vote for murda1 for atleat dropping decent punches
v/murda1
your a weak as fuck,and thats what ya rhymes be all about
& i'd keep punching his face,cuz speed bags never ware out
N..........
v//Black Out Because He Had Better And More Punches And Okat Structure And He Had A Decent Drop This Was A Pretty Close Battle To But Black Out Took It
no hate
Its obscene that dis faggot even wants 2 compete....
U'd pre-write 4 weeks and ur half of this battles still gon be incomplete....
U became whack instantly when u were born....
Since the form of a fetus U were a failure and ur dreams were torn.....
vs
your a weak as fuck,and thats what ya rhymes be all about
& i'd keep punching his face,cuz speed bags never ware out
v/black out better verse harder punches better flow
blackya punches were gd and u flowed well
murda ur punches were ight but i dnt think they wer clear,u dant flow aS WELL AS out but it was gd
both drops were gd but i felt black more no hate
ima vote on ma alias
my vote ^^^^^^Quote:
Originally Posted by LiKe-WiSe
dqued over upping