...Dusk2Dawn... vs. Clisk (500)

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damn... my b... i accidentally made it 100 to vote.

I never knew this was you,

haha G/L

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you all bark dog... you really need to stop ya bitchin..
when i spit... i Inflict damage on ya Comps-Position..
you wasn't reconized ti'll facin' me... lost for years..
can't make him box office... but i'll box-off-his carrer..
you practice facin noobs... now your in a bad way kid..
my punches leave your eye's lookin' like a mad asians..
you low rank... me kneelin is the only way you facin' me..
if you had a thousand posts... you still wouldnt make a G..
go and quick key ya punches... all the fastest fly past me..
stab ya dick with a spiked bat and watch ya Status Dy-Nasty..

nice drop homie^^ nice drop.

This bitch is down for the count, my rhymes are forever wicked
Punch Clisk so fast…my fists would end up with speeding tickets
You're audience silent like crickets, other words you're boring dickhead
Change you're name to Osama because what you write has BIN said
You're flow is cheap like fuckin keds,... it’s time to fuck this virgin
You couldn’t get kids to drop their jaws even as a dental surgeon
Lyrically you’re hurtin, this fags gay, he don’t even try to debate
Your love life is like a 'new government',…your known to 'mandate'
Beating you is fate, I’m beyond great, faggot you’re not touching me
So fuck paying a long distance phone bill..........you’re phony for free


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damn, two crew members.

Drop you're thoughts.



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you all bark dog... you really need to stop ya bitchin..
when i spit... i Inflict damage on ya Comps-Position..
na. not hard
you wasn't reconized ti'll facin' me... lost for years..
can't make him box office... but i'll box-off-his carrer..
decent flip. could've been worded WAY better.
you practice facin noobs... now your in a bad way kid..
my punches leave your eye's lookin' like a mad asians..
na, dumb.
you low rank... me kneelin is the only way you facin' me..
if you had a thousand posts... you still wouldnt make a G..
lol, ok. although i dislike these "Hood/Gangster" bullshit punches lol.
go and quick key ya punches... all the fastest fly past me..
stab ya dick with a spiked bat and watch ya Status Dy-Nasty
meh, good attempt at wordplay but the wording was FUCKIN' HORRIBLE imo.

Clisk - you've deffinatly done better, i feel you've lost a bit of your witt. i mean i use to be scared to battle you when i was a noob, but now i feel like you've fell off and lost everything. either it's a bad day for you, or you've lost it.

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This bitch is down for the count, my rhymes are forever wicked
Punch Clisk so fast…my fists would end up with speeding tickets
lol, cool wordplay, but the self glory is bad.
You're audience silent like crickets, other words you're boring dickhead
Change you're name to Osama because what you write has BIN said
decent wordplay. nothing too hard.
You're flow is cheap like fuckin keds,... it’s time to fuck this virgin
You couldn’t get kids to drop their jaws even as a dental surgeon
worded badly, bit played too.
Lyrically you’re hurtin, this fags gay, he don’t even try to debate
Your love life is like a 'new government',…your known to 'mandate'
lol, never seen this before. it's cool
Beating you is fate, I’m beyond great, faggot you’re not touching me
So fuck paying a long distance phone bill..........you’re phony for free
na, wack. you called him fake/phony, lol ..

Dusk - deffinatly a surprising battle coming from you. your wordplay is getting better now, FAR better than your last battle. you still need to rough out some edges on your wording and learn how to make your punches more direct than a threat. but you'll get there. deffinatly elevating. good job

i felt that clisk came less than his best, and dusk came his best so far. and even though clisk's been around a bit longer, i feel dusk took this one quite easily. there's no doubt about it that dusk is getting better as he battles. Clisk, get your head back in the game. surprising battle, i predicted it the other way around but it was cool to see this.

v. Dusk

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dis was a good battle both in my crew but dis was good battle. i liked ur guys use of wordin n punches n personals. good luck to both.

It's only 100 to vote because he messed up poll, so everyone come in.

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Wow bump, 1 vote? damn come on.

Votes?

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you all bark dog... you really need to stop ya bitchin..
when i spit... i Inflict damage on ya Comps-Position..
^^ ok
you wasn't reconized ti'll facin' me... lost for years..
can't make him box office... but i'll box-off-his carrer..
^^haha gd
you practice facin noobs... now your in a bad way kid..
my punches leave your eye's lookin' like a mad asians..
^^ nah wasnt feelin it
you low rank... me kneelin is the only way you facin' me..
if you had a thousand posts... you still wouldnt make a G..
^^ ok but could be worded better i think
go and quick key ya punches... all the fastest fly past me..
stab ya dick with a spiked bat and watch ya Status Dy-Nasty..
^^haha gd

over all id give dis a 6/10 just coz sum lines wernt worded gd but a gd verse



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This bitch is down for the count, my rhymes are forever wicked
Punch Clisk so fast…my fists would end up with speeding tickets
^^haha dope
You're audience silent like crickets, other words you're boring dickhead
Change you're name to Osama because what you write has BIN said
^^ gd i like da imagination
You're flow is cheap like fuckin keds,... it’s time to fuck this virgin
You couldn’t get kids to drop their jaws even as a dental surgeon
^^ ermm ok not great
Lyrically you’re hurtin, this fags gay, he don’t even try to debate
Your love life is like a 'new government',…your known to 'mandate'
^^ ok
Beating you is fate, I’m beyond great, faggot you’re not touching me
So fuck paying a long distance phone bill..........you’re phony for free
^^ haha gd wordplay

overall 8/10

gd wordplay n imagination is wot got dis battle on dusk part

gd battle both

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Originally Posted by Cry

you all bark dog... you really need to stop ya bitchin..
when i spit... i Inflict damage on ya Comps-Position..
na. not hard
you wasn't reconized ti'll facin' me... lost for years..
can't make him box office... but i'll box-off-his carrer..
decent flip. could've been worded WAY better.
you practice facin noobs... now your in a bad way kid..
my punches leave your eye's lookin' like a mad asians..
na, dumb.
you low rank... me kneelin is the only way you facin' me..
if you had a thousand posts... you still wouldnt make a G..
lol, ok. although i dislike these "Hood/Gangster" bullshit punches lol.
go and quick key ya punches... all the fastest fly past me..
stab ya dick with a spiked bat and watch ya Status Dy-Nasty
meh, good attempt at wordplay but the wording was FUCKIN' HORRIBLE imo.

Clisk - you've deffinatly done better, i feel you've lost a bit of your witt. i mean i use to be scared to battle you when i was a noob, but now i feel like you've fell off and lost everything. either it's a bad day for you, or you've lost it.

vs

This bitch is down for the count, my rhymes are forever wicked
Punch Clisk so fast…my fists would end up with speeding tickets
lol, cool wordplay, but the self glory is bad.
You're audience silent like crickets, other words you're boring dickhead
Change you're name to Osama because what you write has BIN said
decent wordplay. nothing too hard.
You're flow is cheap like fuckin keds,... it’s time to fuck this virgin
You couldn’t get kids to drop their jaws even as a dental surgeon
worded badly, bit played too.
Lyrically you’re hurtin, this fags gay, he don’t even try to debate
Your love life is like a 'new government',…your known to 'mandate'
lol, never seen this before. it's cool
Beating you is fate, I’m beyond great, faggot you’re not touching me
So fuck paying a long distance phone bill..........you’re phony for free
na, wack. you called him fake/phony, lol ..

Dusk - deffinatly a surprising battle coming from you. your wordplay is getting better now, FAR better than your last battle. you still need to rough out some edges on your wording and learn how to make your punches more direct than a threat. but you'll get there. deffinatly elevating. good job

i felt that clisk came less than his best, and dusk came his best so far. and even though clisk's been around a bit longer, i feel dusk took this one quite easily. there's no doubt about it that dusk is getting better as he battles. Clisk, get your head back in the game. surprising battle, i predicted it the other way around but it was cool to see this.

v. Dusk

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I agree this was total oppisite of what I excepted
Pretty Much agree with the above feed vote Dusk

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Originally Posted by Cry

you all bark dog... you really need to stop ya bitchin..
when i spit... i Inflict damage on ya Comps-Position..
na. not hard
you wasn't reconized ti'll facin' me... lost for years..
can't make him box office... but i'll box-off-his carrer..
decent flip. could've been worded WAY better.
you practice facin noobs... now your in a bad way kid..
my punches leave your eye's lookin' like a mad asians..
na, dumb.
you low rank... me kneelin is the only way you facin' me..
if you had a thousand posts... you still wouldnt make a G..
lol, ok. although i dislike these "Hood/Gangster" bullshit punches lol.
go and quick key ya punches... all the fastest fly past me..
stab ya dick with a spiked bat and watch ya Status Dy-Nasty
meh, good attempt at wordplay but the wording was FUCKIN' HORRIBLE imo.

Clisk - you've deffinatly done better, i feel you've lost a bit of your witt. i mean i use to be scared to battle you when i was a noob, but now i feel like you've fell off and lost everything. either it's a bad day for you, or you've lost it.

vs

This bitch is down for the count, my rhymes are forever wicked
Punch Clisk so fast…my fists would end up with speeding tickets
lol, cool wordplay, but the self glory is bad.
You're audience silent like crickets, other words you're boring dickhead
Change you're name to Osama because what you write has BIN said
decent wordplay. nothing too hard.
You're flow is cheap like fuckin keds,... it’s time to fuck this virgin
You couldn’t get kids to drop their jaws even as a dental surgeon
worded badly, bit played too.
Lyrically you’re hurtin, this fags gay, he don’t even try to debate
Your love life is like a 'new government',…your known to 'mandate'
lol, never seen this before. it's cool
Beating you is fate, I’m beyond great, faggot you’re not touching me
So fuck paying a long distance phone bill..........you’re phony for free
na, wack. you called him fake/phony, lol ..

Dusk - deffinatly a surprising battle coming from you. your wordplay is getting better now, FAR better than your last battle. you still need to rough out some edges on your wording and learn how to make your punches more direct than a threat. but you'll get there. deffinatly elevating. good job

i felt that clisk came less than his best, and dusk came his best so far. and even though clisk's been around a bit longer, i feel dusk took this one quite easily. there's no doubt about it that dusk is getting better as he battles. Clisk, get your head back in the game. surprising battle, i predicted it the other way around but it was cool to see this.

v. Dusk

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I agree.... no hate... this how i would have broken it down....

I Think Both Could Have Worked In The Imagery Area Of The Battle..but Personalz Were On Point... I Felt That Dusk Had A Better Vokab To Enhance The Bars...both Had A Descent Flow Nothing To Wonderful...

Overall I Think This Was A Close Battle Between To Good Heads...i Think Both Of You Took It To Easy And Could Have Done Much Better...but For Funnier Verse And Better Vokab..

V/ Dusk