Rise To Arms - Feat. IsIs

Rise To Arms
Written By: ELEETE Featuring IsIs

IsIs
I slap crap, trap cats in your smelly shit,
Im bustin at the seems with phat like missy elliot,
Breeze through your text, Im walkin mad shifty,
Trust the wrong cats find your raps gone missin,
Let her craze, the revolution is confusion,
Diffused in illusions protruded emcees losin,
Golden arrows, pierce through your strongest armors,
My styles blowin up, like islamic bombers,
This atomic wanders, leave gems cut flawless,
Boot your ass straight in the chest, im chuck norris,
Fuck yours kid, cause my styles lyrically stable,
You spiritually fabled, toss an turn in your bed sheets,
Cred meets, spred these, over some phat zed beats,
Word life your told your hot, forget it Ive blown your top,
Own your spot, son ive known who your not,
Lyricize my rhymes incline I rise to arms,
Despise your pawns, blow like rifle bombs,
Spawn my rappins, trapped in guerilla tactics,
Lay yourself down, or we'll kill ya factions.


ELEETE
No need to know my alias, bringin' change to angry kids...
An extraterrestrial foe, like aliens...
My lyrics engravin' a path of words an paving it...
Billie Jeanin' up the floor tiles wit' radiance...
These rumors your hear are blatant, obvious....
A walkin' prophet amongst the dead in ancient necropolis...
We speak the toxic shit, diseases often spit...
Lyrical Stability achieved through projectile vomit tricks...
I inject now, an steal your ears virginity...
Sodomizin' your dignity, while my words paint it vividly...
I leave you in a torment, shrouded ina mystery...
4 minutes lyrically are bringin' a lifetime of history...
My lines foretold lead to dead end roads...
A lyrical graveyard where words are set in stones....
Decipherin' cold scriptures from legends old...
Makin' your mind fold like DaVinci's code...
ELEETE and IsIs a priceless fusion of lyrical union...
Viewed through the eyes of a synical human...
Your useless, this ain't your everyday typical music...
This is suicide bitch, lemme see you cut yo skin to it...

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...89#post4454389
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=292069

eh...i liked this....sick rhymes guys for real!!
flow was tight....imagery was nice...
topic was interesting..this was a nice collab
overall i enjoyed reading both verses..
overall i'd say this is a 8.7/10..good job
keep it up guys your both good~

yea yea thanks for the feed. i think personally i came weaker in that. but it was still the shit. ahaha peace. uupin for feed

lol, yeah your good. but too aggressive for boris. boris is peace man!

plus id like to write with you too-

email me or somthing

aight son. uppin for feed. peace.

I thought I recognised your name Eleete.. As I recall, you left feed on my first ever OM..

Anyway...

Meh.. Not really my sort of thing.. You both wrote well for this type of piece.. But it wasn't particularly complex or detailed.. It didn't have any particular purpose or direction. You both used decent vocabulary, but a lot of it felt out of place. I wasn't particularly impressed.. Seeing as Eleete has been around for so long.. I expected something a little better.. Sorry.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=292098 check it out if you have a moment.

yea word. thanks for the honesty for real son.

Shit was wack..........didn't like it at all....quit readin it after the 6th line.....shit was horrible -100 out of 0

ahaha look at the little bitch tryna get even ahahaha. i dont really take your feed credible so whatever. ill isten to cats with at least 100 posts for real. thanks for tryin though. uppin for some mor real feed.

actually I did that before ya posted in mine......dumb ass and YOU.....>CAN.........Check

i dont really care. but seriously son. fuck off for real. just keep getting your non-sense two cents in here and leave aight? shit. talkin me to get a bib and pampers for real. you actin fuckin 5 years old.

Hahaha Vertikle is the Troll of RB...Congratulations son, something your actually good at...haha

ahaha. yo son eleete. you wanna collab again i got a dope topic.

Hell yea dawg you know im up for it hit me up wit it...

Welll I think there was only one problem with this piece is that it was a more of rant which i don't think did justice to the idea of the collab. Technically the rhyme was great some of it complex and both were consistent, but the collab had no significance to me the reade. So overall for your next collab I'd like to see utilization of the collab to be more intertwined where each part of the piece add something the other piece needs, sort of like a sybiotic relationship. You got the skills tho no doubt bout the that, just focus it.

RTF if you have time to Mockery:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=292214

You both are talented there's no doubting that but this wasn't my type of shit. I mean you both had good rhymes and vocabulary but it wasn't really that meanigful. This felt more like an audio track to me. Anway you're vocabulary couldn't have been better was ok but needs work, you're flow was good but there was no emotion in this piece. In all honesty I know you guys got talent but it feels like ya'll were just fooling around on this and weren't taking it seriously. The topic didn't really have any purpose but for this kind of piece I'll say it was good. Keep it up but drop some meanigful piece you guys got good talent.


Hit up my piece "The Infantry" that I'm bout to drop. Peace

rust the wrong cats find your raps gone missin,
Let her craze, the revolution is confusion,
Diffused in illusions protruded emcees losin,

Isis this was without definitive lyricism you fed the verse well but this here got me like damn......

We speak the toxic shit, diseases often spit...
Lyrical Stability achieved through projectile vomit tricks...
I inject now, an steal your ears virginity...
Sodomizin' your dignity, while my words paint it vividly

Eleete this was your strongest part a very solid delivery and verse from you twin glad to see you elivate to so much


both came ill clean your punches up some and you'll be jaw dropping but never the less this was some ill shit.

I really liked this piece....It flowed well..the vocab was on point and....as a collab I felt that both drops went well together....This is one of those pieces where while reading ur flowing and imaging a dope track behind it.....GOOD SHIT.....keep that shit going.....ELEETE I aint dick riding but you got some nice shit form what I've been seeing......K...I...U


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thanks for all the feed yall for real. peace

Yea no doubt thank you all, I appreciate all of you...An that constructive critiscism is madly appreciated, yo IsIs ima get at you asap about that deal...I bounced tonight an had too much to drink lol...Oh an I will get back at all your pieces as soon as im sober i promise...