Psycho

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May 13th, 2006, 09:55 PM
O Negative

Psycho

Your a faggot, so scrawny the British mistake you
Take a lighter to your flesh and try to enflame you
I hate you, whoever made you should pay dues
Ill take a knife to your moms clit, carve, and make food
Ill drown in placenta, eat your baby brother then youll howl when i send ya
Your moms body parts severed up in wrappings like it was december
You wish that you never, had ever fucked with me
Ill leave your face injected with fat so its hard for you to fucking breathe

Then cut your sleeves, and slice the days that i torture
Into your flesh and straight laugh as i torch ya
Take a bath in some corpses
And not just any corpses ...
Its your whole family
When I attack its just horrid and morbid
Call my shit murder woship
Perform like FedEx ground this shit is urgent

Gouge out their eyes and put them in a line or a stack
Not minding the facts ...
Beacause my mind is just black
When I'm angry; cant keep it tied or in tact

And when I killed your mother... Her screams were like music
Cut off her legs and arms leaving her helpless and useless
Took her leg and i used it
Beat her until she puked blood, the stench heavy and putrid
Then gave her a few slugs

Sewed her face off and stapled it to mine
Now everytime you look at me
Its her face a facade guarding my flaming eyes
Its a gay disguise, and your lame demise
I decide to have more fun so Im mating flies,
Pour their offspring on you then brake your thighs,
Then get a recorder and tape your cries

Last but not least...
Take a family member you loved and thought was deceased
Inject them with heroin and HIVS
Make them molest you so you catch a disease
Slice off their feet and watch them bow to their knees
You watch as I cut them open and devour their plead
I'm aroused when they bleed
Dont allow them to breathe
You now understand why i make people cower with ease
May 13th, 2006, 09:59 PM
O Negative

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=292023
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...60#post4452960
May 13th, 2006, 10:07 PM
~Vertikle~

2 thumbs down....I was moved wit this piece.....moved out of this thread......good day loser......and elevate bitch made bitch
May 13th, 2006, 10:09 PM
O Negative

Haha. Yeah the lyrics to this song are dedicated to people like you. Thanks though.
May 13th, 2006, 10:13 PM
~Vertikle~

Catch aids and die....www.myspace.com/therealvertikle.....I feel your pain for real......hit that page up and hit me up wit a message on there.......
May 13th, 2006, 10:34 PM
O Negative

Wow... Nice pics... You look like a fucking faggot. I hope someone kills everyone you love and rapes you until your rectum busts out of your asshole.
May 13th, 2006, 10:45 PM
~Vertikle~

i hope when i get famous I run into u................
May 13th, 2006, 10:58 PM
Twixn...

^ when you get famous

BAHAHAHA...

quit all your dreams right now you generic looking fuck. and stop making it so people won't even wanna post in here with your bullshit comments.
May 13th, 2006, 11:01 PM
~Vertikle~

you look like nothing......cause even if ya posted a pick pussy would still not follow even if it is the net you bitch....I remember you twixn......ur a faggot.........I remember seein you go into bathroom stalls holdin men's hands and shit.....pussy......I stated where I lived at in one of these forum's come get me mothafucka......I'mma cut ya up and leave the cops some skin and bones to claim ya died
May 13th, 2006, 11:08 PM
Twixn...

^ lol cut me up...

sorry... i dont pretend like im an E-gangster...

nice try though... keep having fun pretending your a dope gagnster when really your a skinny white boy. ;)
May 13th, 2006, 11:13 PM
~Vertikle~

wit dope rhymes......and alot of friends in the city he's lived in his whole life.....test me pussy I'll bury you like anybody would....and I ain't too skinny to be honest cause I'll put a swelling on that jaw mothafucka
May 13th, 2006, 11:17 PM
Twixn...

like i said...

wannabe gangster.

nuff said :)
May 13th, 2006, 11:53 PM
-IsIs-

Quote:

Originally Posted by Twixn...

like i said...

wannabe gangster.

nuff said :)

word ahahahah.

anyways...the piece was alright not my style. keep writin son for real you got some lyrical skills that will produce more and more as time progresses.

-Peace
May 14th, 2006, 12:27 AM
Syk.iLL

Screw the above free posting bullshit. Anyways what up O Negative. how's it going. This is an okay piece. Not really to great for one reason. Your structure wasn;t really consistent and made your flow choppy. Your rhymes are very simple at the beggining but its good you pick up. For this type of piece I think a storyline would invoke more emotion in the reader because horrorcore does that, if it's in a tale people find themselves relating to a sick and twisted being. Overall depending on concept will change the approach you take.
May 14th, 2006, 11:18 AM
O Negative

Thanks to the two peeps who actually left some... Critique.

I'll return the favor.
May 14th, 2006, 11:19 AM
~Vertikle~

wanna be gangsta never said I was a gangsta I'm white pussy bitch.......come bring it I've given my address out come get me......
May 14th, 2006, 11:21 AM
Big C.

diss wasnt bad but it wasnt good..in da middle it was
strucutre and flow wa sa bit uneven and choppy..
but, the rhymes and multies were pretty nice..
topic was aight....overall this was a descent peice
just keep elevating man..you got some potential..
May 14th, 2006, 01:05 PM
K.Gee

this piece was crazy. I could follow the structure. Had good mutils, and had a storyline that went throughout the whole verse. Its a perfect 10 in my eyes.