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Lyrical Stability
For real. Im Gettin fed up wit wack rappers actin all the shit. for real. watch how the shits done for real. and by the way. im still just sharpenen the swords here.
Walk the line sons, of breathing air and death,
wear the best, armour to protect against the fresh
bless the gods, female, male, respectin flesh,
edgin the cliff spiritually etchin a sketch,
fetchin the crest, lyrically stressin the next,
cat who claims his powers are all in the visual,
fallin rituals, reclaimed sorcery of the mystical,
physical,
tear the epidermis layered tissue,
say your issues, eradicate anothers miss use,
of talents, balance, beam steady and im ready,
seem edgy and heavy, lyrics spittin verbally lethal,
got respect from dirty jersey, to germanys people,
depict me as a king, along with the man of steel,
I make bands feel, suction to walls with acid meals,
Walk the line sons, sway with lyrical stability,
spiritually kill emcees, with swiftness of agility,
the kill is still in me, like DDT in wildlife,
stop actin wild on mics, cause your wack an child like.
Take this collar bone, hollow out the marrow and swallow it,
the taste is as stale as how you on the mic and droppin kid,
im stoppin it, this force is required in my nature,
inspired by the major, and ive retired the flavor,
youve seen self, but now see his split personality,
my rips hurt reality, and slip and squirt fatality,
spit the illmatic flows, noone will ever challenge me,
in this galaxy, im the A-Zed Faculty,
spray this mean naturally, trays of obsene actually,
slays teams gradually, with jaded streams of casualties.
spray lyrics speratically, I eratically end you.
Walk the line sons, prepare to meet your maker,
I stand stare at a weak faker, of obsene nature,
lyrically visious, fluint in flow like liquids viscus,
hit with permiscuis,
talents that idols cant equip with,
Relaxing melodies, I give props for the beat,
lyrics finalize kills, but my man zed, drops defeat,
eradicate souls even there spirits with the lyrics,
feeding near it, and I make sure that you emcees hear it,
son you cant compare wit, the one and only majesty,
truth be told, after ive revealed your phony tapestry,
stone masterpiece, carved by using mental words,
cut your central nerves from this instrumentals urge,
temple purged, your the last of the wack species,
you try and rap weekly, but fall fast frequently.
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this was really nice man. i loved the emotion and concept man!. i loved your delivery and approach towards the topic! you had some areas that need to be fiwed but still this was a really good drop!.
Vocab stood out very wella nd emoption was a great asset along with the multies that was deviated and devised into this drop!
nice man keep it up!
RTF on the OM in my link called gone!
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nice piece, flow stood out, and the multies were dope.. inners were decent, and i liked how you used the topic, emotion was top-notch too, keep dropping that heat man and id appreciate it, vocab was cool, although some words were spelled wrong, almost all of the big ones, lol, but that doesnt matter a lot
hit up techinicolor angel, link in sig
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this was a good piece my nigga
real good ryhme skeme its was flawless
but i didnt like da way u structured it
^that hurt da flow alot
good imargey..ok emtional feel
8/10
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yea word. thanks for the feed. i feel you about the structure kid critical its just i wrote it to a beat and the way its structured did fit with the beat. but thanks for the constructive critisism. aahaha and Soulstice yea i know i spelled some words wrong but thats for cats who cant read good ahahaha.
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still waiting for feed to be RTF on the links in my sig!
and if you souldnt mind i'd like you to come and join
sol presence my crew!.
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yea i hit it up. peace. uppin for some more feed.
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iiight well i really liked this piece
ur flow was really good didnt really fall off during tah whole piece
u had some nice choice of words which made tha whole piece better
tha mulities were really dope u kept them up real well
ur strutre couldve been a hell of alot better that was what made this piece look bad
u should use liek times roman font or something
and some lines were pretty strecthed u dont wanna do taht lol
ur emotion was really good i felt it which helps tha piece alot
and ur topic was a really nice topic not many pl write on this kinda thing keep up tha dopeness and come check out GTA we could use some more heads like u
and look out for my next piece stop by it and RTf plz thanx ~1~
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yea thanks for the feed. i know about the structure. i wrote it to a beat so it seems wierd to read it. but on audio its better. but thanks and ill try to elevate on that type thing.
-Peace
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This is honestly my type of shit right here, lyrically this is what i look for in pieces, I loved this piece, its flow stood out dramatically an so easy to read...Like some said the structure was the only thing that hurt it but either way it was dope...I will definatly look out for your pieces...peace...
Much respect IsIs...peace...
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yea word. thanks son. much appreciation with that feed. uppin for more.
-Peace
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rhymes were good overall and flow was nice
vocab and complexity was aight here and there
topic was good and imagery was nice....
overall this peice was nice man...keep it up..
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