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Let's Roll
Let's Roll ..
By: Nash
My ticket went in the box, my mom waited at the airport
waiting for us to take off, not knowing we'd come up short
men of some sort stood up, told us to shut our mouths ..
.. to stay the hell down!
& meanwhile back at the house
familys were finding out, trade towers were down and out ..
.. adrenaline rushed, everyone felt hushed, not a shout
everyone so flushed. Middle Eastern men making fun of us
laughing at us, 'We have Bombs!' with accents like jibberish
but it was the wish of our familys to stop the plane ..
we were insane, in hopes that people'd remember our names
we came brave, WE were the bomb squad. of some men
some terribly horrible men, we'll always be better than them
and then, the plane sends itself into rolls. the crew crys
stomachs churn and fold with 'Why's?' behind our eyes ..
the bombs were lies, this mission was suicide. i cried inside
and when i hung up the phone with my wife, i almost died ..
.. a heart relied on my country for saviors and i craved her.
Statue of liberty stand tall ..
.. cuz Afgan's be hitten walls for DAMN sure
life is a trip, but the U.S. can't fall. and dude, we paid a toll
Our last words after the 'I love yous' were, 'Alright, Let's roll ..'
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Before Flight United 93 crashed to it's doom upon the farmland,
.. there were men on that plane, who's fates met their demand
.. "Let's Roll", were the last words captured by a frequency from
the military before the wreckage of Flight United 93. These men
and women were brave souls destined to save a mere monument?
may they rest and make these words famous. May they live in the
afterlife in precious arms. May no more harm come to the people
of this flight. and i represent everyone when i say, "Thank You."
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http://projects.pisd.edu/webmasterin...terReuters.jpg
United 93 Crash Scene
Links ..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=291373
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=291054
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=289863
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=290793
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Ill piece dawg...I definatly loved the topic of this piece...an the way you delivered the piece was nice...I wrote a piece on this very same subject an I liked your interpretion of this...very very nice...keep up the good work...everything was overall well put...your vocab was nice, very descriptive, ill piece...
If you get a chance hit me back on my piece...thanks peace...
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...03#post4441003
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I like how you played the topic and the truth behind it all really brought this piece to life... You worded it well......structure was good......Out of a lot of 911 pieces I've heard no one play on it like this.... this was just a good piece and you can't knock it....keep doing ya thang Fam......GOOD SHIT...
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^thanks. let's get some heads in here.
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Hell Yea, This Was The Dopest Peice Ive Seen On Rb So Far, Although Ive Only Been Ere A Day Lol. Excellent Choice Of Topic, Ya Flow Was Flawless In My Opinion, Structure, Vocab, Delivery Were All Dope, The Only Fault I Can Pick Wid This Peice Is That It Was Well Too Short For My Liken, I Would Of Liked To See Another Verse Never The Less, You Got Across What You Wanted In That Short Drop...hell Yea Bruv, Imma Look Up Some More Of You Work, Im Not Suprised You Have The Stats You Do With Issh Like This,
9-10 Easy..
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raise up ..fools, comment
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Good topic man. Felt this piece all the way through. Ill be lookin out for some more from you dude, you gotz somethin good
Safe!
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woa..i was feelin this..nice flow and nice imagery...
nice rhymes and nice complexity and vocab usage...
topic was interesting and enjoyable to read....
overall this was a good peice..keep it up
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let's not roll and say that we did.....but then we didn't ok bitch
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Yeah...Good topic and your flow was immaculate, kept me readin and entertained. You brought the words to life... Nice peice.
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I give it a 2 outta 10.......wit a slap in the face and some fries please
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^fucking queer. get out of here with your suck ass bullshit. blow a left okay?
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let's hear some respectable opinions ..
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nice piece here . i was really feelin wat u did . very nice imagery an concepts. i liked ur use of good vocab .nice way to use an accident as an om . nice very idealistic. u had nice wordin an nice consistecy thru out dis . the topic dat was chosen was also very good . different but nice. very nice topic to read off of. delivery of this piece was also very good. understandable thru out . also very descriptive . liked the use of da picture also .
nice work .
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this was a good piece, what i liked the most about this writtin was how you used the imagiry well, it went well with the topic and u structured it well. the concept was ok it made it easier to understand the piece all the time i was readin it. nice piece cry
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Great drop, I felt the emotion, I really felt like I was on this plane. Vocab was on point and it moved along steadily. You're imagery was there like I said I felt like I was on this plane. Good topic, it really moved me man, I never even thought of this that deeply before now. Great drop honestly, keep it up peace.
Hit this up please:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=292228
Thanks
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yo good shit one of the best i read
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this piece didn't get recognized too well, so let's try the fuck again.
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I Really Enjoyed This Piece
The Imiginary Was Really Good
I Like The Concept To
Pretty Good Opener, Delivery Was Also Nice
I Like How You Used The Picture To Help Your Work
I Think Vizualses Help Paint The Picture Even More
Overall I Would Say This Was 8-9
Keep Up The Good Work :2thumb:
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nice piece here . i was really feelin wat u did . very nice imagery an concepts. i liked ur use of good vocab .nice way to use an accident as an om . nice very idealistic. u had nice wordin an nice consistecy thru out dis . the topic dat was chosen was also very good . different but nice. very nice topic to read off of. delivery of this piece was also very good. understandable thru out . also very descriptive . liked the use of da picture also .
nice work .
