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The reason we call him Nymph - O is cos that`s the total amount of votes he`s getting this entire season.
Everyone say Hi to RB`s very own NASIF! Haha ..
Lethal and viewed as the greatest to rhyme,
Your feeble I.Q`s not equating to mine.
The evil I spew has him shaking inside,
And though this geek'll refute that he`s played in his lines ..
.. Labels are calling out for people like you - To stop wasting their time!
See `round here, the ill kids have to garner respect ..
.. he`s Kyla Pratt in Dr. Doolittle 3 - That 'lil bitch is far from a vet!
But fuck the scheme a second, I`ll attack with true facts ..
.. It`s no coincidence you débuted same week Mystery brought back The Boot Match!
Hold up a second man, lemme show you niggas what I mean…
Haha, straight up - this herb is just WACK!Quote:
Nymph vs. Zed Peace (Last Week)
Zed peace might be dope…foreal, but the z making me sleep
And only reason he holding his ground…is cuz he under de-feet
But let`s see how he plans to `De-Feet` me, with my foot planted so firm in his ass.
I`ll take affirmative action, start stompin` this fellas face ..
.. and beat him so bad, he`ll find Memory Lane`s been sealed off with the yellow tape!
I smoked plenty on Fo` Twenty; Spent the day green as shit ..
You spent it tryna get a decent-hit, from your brothers left over seeds and sticks!
I`ve had enough of whining whores, all tentatively sensitive ..
Fuck penmanship. To end this shit - A MAG is tucked beside the balls!
I'll render his, attempt to diss, as sourly needing practice ..
.. then lend the kid, some splendid tips, on how a scheme is crafted.
Come holla at me when you`ve learnt how to craft a decent punch dawg, then i`ll help you with the schemes and shit. But at the minute im struggling to way up whats worse - Your raps, or the fact you`re challenging for Top Battles at 1-0! Haha, im out ..
Peace!
Camarac aint a vet, cuz since he joined his rec been the same
mad that u cant conquer elevation…that’s why u always com-plain
a poll aint needed in this battle just to know that you’ll lose
and you finally figured how a punch bruises
…after watching BLUES clues
talking like you the president… but ill let me punches explain
consider this a political attack the way ama cause cam-paign
you got no morals, so your meaning to be is left in a casket
only way ma verse’ll be shit is if this battle was sometin this as-set
fuck claiming your dope dude, u just need to hand the facts
this kids the female part in the game
…that’s why his name is cam-a-rack
you got no talent, your shit and you got no one to blame
this kid supposebly has a bright future…
but its mostly cuz of the colors in his name
a vet made post some pictures , cuz he wanted some cred
guess you not taken seriously
cuz rdot’s the only one who posted in tha thread
cam you not known and your style's a frown
and you taking the next steps a joke,
like trying to grind on a clown
you werent consistent against nymph, so let me give u a fact
only way you'll have a hit is if a fags gettin your BACK
Why the fuck was nymph in a moving up battle?
Cam won... not even close...
I`ll take affirmative action, start stompin` this fellas face ..
.. and beat him so bad, he`ll find Memory Lane`s been sealed off with the yellow tape!
yeah.. nymph had nothing quotable... wow
v/ CrackerCam
But fuck the scheme a second, I`ll attack with true facts ..
.. It`s no coincidence you débuted same week Mystery brought back The Boot Match!
I`ll take affirmative action, start stompin` this fellas face ..
.. and beat him so bad, he`ll find Memory Lane`s been sealed off with the yellow tape!
vs
talking like you the president… but ill let me punches explain
consider this a political attack the way ama cause cam-paign
v/ Camarac
not a fucking thing
vs.
you got no talent, your shit and you got no one to blame
this kid supposebly has a bright future…
but its mostly cuz of the colors in his name
good God.
Was this even woth a "going up?" match?
the fuck man. I found this battle to be boring as FUCK.
And camarac change your fucking style. I read the whole thing looking for a punch . Ended up deleting lines finding out you rhymed with it later... Shits gay. No matter how much you tryna act like it aint.
pfft.
Nympho gets it for producing a less stretched, more understandable verse. With better concepts.
Cam won this easily, wtf at anov's vote. Cool stuff Cam, i like ur flow and stuff. The doolittle punch was kinda cool and so was the boot match and memory lane. See u in the top battles.
Btw, u never replied to my diss on RE, lmao.
v/ Cam
And though this geek'll refute that he`s played in his lines ..
.. Labels are calling out for people like you - To stop wasting their time!
I`ll take affirmative action, start stompin` this fellas face ..
.. and beat him so bad, he`ll find Memory Lane`s been sealed off with the yellow tape!
vs.
cam you not known and your style's a frown
and you taking the next steps a joke,
like trying to grind on a clown
Cam, you came really inconsistent. Yellow tape line was pretty nice. Lables line made me laugh. I don't mind your style, just work on the concepts within it. Nympho, you just don't have the wording down yet and your concepts are meh. Try not to use more than 1 nameplay in a verse since most people in this league have been around awhile and it's all played. Your wordplay was a bit forced. The line I quoted was really corny, but it made me laugh so I decided to quote it. Yea, Cam got this though, just a much more polished and harder hitting verse.
Vote - Camarac
Lethal and viewed as the greatest to rhyme,
Your feeble I.Q`s not equating to mine.
^ huh *shrugs*
The evil I spew has him shaking inside,
And though this geek'll refute that he`s played in his lines ..
.. Labels are calling out for people like you - To stop wasting their time!
^ WTF why
See `round here, the ill kids have to garner respect ..
.. he`s Kyla Pratt in Dr. Doolittle 3 - That 'lil bitch is far from a vet!
^ :hung:
But fuck the scheme a second, I`ll attack with true facts ..
.. It`s no coincidence you débuted same week Mystery brought back The Boot Match!
^ meh
Hold up a second man, lemme show you niggas what I mean…
Quote:
Nymph vs. Zed Peace (Last Week)
Zed peace might be dope…foreal, but the z making me sleep
And only reason he holding his ground…is cuz he under de-feet
Haha, straight up - this herb is just WACK!
But let`s see how he plans to `De-Feet` me, with my foot planted so firm in his ass.
^ best bar so far I guess weak though
I`ll take affirmative action, start stompin` this fellas face ..
.. and beat him so bad, he`ll find Memory Lane`s been sealed off with the yellow tape!
^ your shit is always stretched...
I smoked plenty on Fo` Twenty; Spent the day green as shit ..
You spent it tryna get a decent-hit, from your brothers left over seeds and sticks!
I`ve had enough of whining whores, all tentatively sensitive ..
Fuck penmanship. To end this shit - A MAG is tucked beside the balls!
I'll render his, attempt to diss, as sourly needing practice ..
.. then lend the kid, some splendid tips, on how a scheme is crafted.
^ im done trying to break this shit down make it more understandable fuck sakes
vs
Camarac aint a vet, cuz since he joined his rec been the same
mad that u cant conquer elevation…that’s why u always com-plain
^ no this was wackkkkkkk
a poll aint needed in this battle just to know that you’ll lose
and you finally figured how a punch bruises
…after watching BLUES clues
^ huh
talking like you the president… but ill let me punches explain
consider this a political attack the way ama cause cam-paign
^ I actually liked this one
you got no morals, so your meaning to be is left in a casket
only way ma verse’ll be shit is if this battle was sometin this as-set
^ no
fuck claiming your dope dude, u just need to hand the facts
this kids the female part in the game
…that’s why his name is cam-a-rack
^ ........ :th_down:
you got no talent, your shit and you got no one to blame
this kid supposebly has a bright future…
but its mostly cuz of the colors in his name
^ :th_down:
a vet made post some pictures , cuz he wanted some cred
guess you not taken seriously
cuz rdot’s the only one who posted in tha thread
^ :th_down:
cam you not known and your style's a frown
and you taking the next steps a joke,
like trying to grind on a clown
^ :thumbsdow
you werent consistent against nymph, so let me give u a fact
only way you'll have a hit is if a fags gettin your BACK
^ :th_down:
This battle actually was the worst. I hated cams style dude you got to change that shit. The other dude wow your wordplay is elementry my dear watson, step it up dude. I'm not even gonna vote its a tie both came equally ass......... :jerkoff:
VCam easy
Srry Nymph but u were just simply outclassed here, but to be totally new, u cuold be a threat if u make some major strides. But u ran into a vet and got smashed here dun, good try and good luck next week cuzin. V/Camarac.
however, u could go son the shyt outta FL, lol.
I`ll take affirmative action, start stompin` this fellas face ..
.. and beat him so bad, he`ll find Memory Lane`s been sealed off with the yellow tape!
vs
talking like you the president… but ill let me punches explain
consider this a political attack the way ama cause cam-paign
^^^ heing nice n quoting
V/cam with ease
And though this geek'll refute that he`s played in his lines ..
.. Labels are calling out for people like you - To stop wasting their time!
I`ll take affirmative action, start stompin` this fellas face ..
.. and beat him so bad, he`ll find Memory Lane`s been sealed off with the yellow tape!
vs.
cam you not known and your style's a frown
and you taking the next steps a joke,
like trying to grind on a clown
.. ^Barely quotable
V. Cam, for just being harder. dissapointing battle
And though this geek'll refute that he`s played in his lines ..
.. Labels are calling out for people like you - To stop wasting their time!
I`ll take affirmative action, start stompin` this fellas face ..
.. and beat him so bad, he`ll find Memory Lane`s been sealed off with the yellow tape
vs
Nothing
v-Cam Easy.
v- Cam
its about time you started trying, although your verse was poo compared to what you can actually do. Nymph was whored in this battle, his punches were either weak with unoriginal concept, or just straight played and retarded, although the end of cams verse didnt have much of a rhyme scheme but still managed to punch a lil. one sided battle the whole way though, Cam i hope you just get back to your old self, tryin new shits cool but damn, son some mother fuckers on the way.
Vote Cam.. but it seems you're sacrificing the disses and humour for structure and composition. why not just try for both? you could do it easy
And though this geek'll refute that he`s played in his lines ..
.. Labels are calling out for people like you - To stop wasting their time!
See `round here, the ill kids have to garner respect ..
.. he`s Kyla Pratt in Dr. Doolittle 3 - That 'lil bitch is far from a vet!
cam tore it up nice shit i would have to go with Cam better verse
I wouldnt say the structure, but the composition - Yeah, in places. I am actually trying to do both in my verses now. It adds a bit of versatility, and a lot more technical aspects. You`re right, I could do it pretty easily, but im still trying to find what works and what doesnt with this 'New' style. I dont know if you remember the backlash I caught in the first week I tried this, but gradually - you kids are coming round to it, and that`s partly due to me experimenting with what works and what doesnt. Big shout outs to Exempt for his line-by-line breakdown though, because we ALL know those apply when you arent using a generic A-B scheme! Lol.Quote:
Originally Posted by COM
Good battle, Nymph.
Peace!