THE MASSACRE FT. SMOKEY.SILENT_KILLA911.SIN~A~MATIC & LIL J.C{FEEDBACK PLZ!!!}

{Intro}
haha...man its funny
Mr.Ballon Head..Where U At..
haha..Die Slow Muthafucka
Less Go The Massacre....

{Dark_Shadow}
brown pride can suck my dick & im Hispanic
Mr.Ballon Head when ur ass see me, u betta panic
im the King of the streets im the Realest there is
who are you? damn why didnt ur mom tell me she had a kid?
this right here is juss a taste if u keep fukkin around u gunna get hit hard
ur head so big ur moms pussy was extended 3 times, ur head bigger then lard
wit my pistol in ur mouth tears comin down ur eyes asking "oh so what was u saying"
u shit ur pants & studder out "nah im sorry plz dont kill me i was juss playing"
"i thought u was Mr.Ballon Head now excuse me ur mom iz waitin on my bed"
next time u talk shit imma finish the job, stand Up *Boom* haha bullet shot to ur leg

{Smokey}
hitten you over the head with bars, receiving a lyrical beating
kid spits like a deaf guy speaking, why you even bother competing?
You never accepted my challenges too scared cause all you like doing is sucking cock
Trying to lead the "Next Generation" you couldn't b a "Star" on a "Track"(trek) if you was related to "Spoc
Border Patrol couldnt catch you but i bet i will
Aiming at you with tha infahred homies ready to shoot and kill


{Silent_Killa911}
It was crazy when i heard u were alive after i drilled you
And its funny how u went "Jeppers Creepers" and got bak up when i thought i killed you
No wonder why everybody on this site hate you more then stank ass
Cuz ur nasty, most woman u with tell they own self, "Oh....I'll pass"
Let me get my kitten to harm you worst then u know it
Ya dumb? U got a boat...but u dont know how to row it

{Sin~A~Matic}
Destroyin fuckers in my spare time my rec never been stain
I'll keep prayin and hopin to the mods that they'll ban certain lames
niggaz who think they they shit and spit hot garbage
And get beat 5-0 against me cuz i'm always making carnage
A nigga with aliases out the ass like he shittin e mail addresses
and can't hold up any beef so i leave the nebs to clean up the messes
Have the silly niggaz wearin dresses like they lost a bet
and make a shit load of whack crews lame gangs, and gay sets
Buried under ground no sound no heart say five holy mary's and keep askin her
How u got caught in this Om and get caught in the fuckin massacre

{Lil J.C.}
im tired of all dis bitch talkin all dis mad shit, thankin dat he sick
i cud tear him limb from limb, knock him out wit 1 swing of my dick
talkin hard like he a real OG's, well i tell him 2 come 2 my hood, c me
show him wat a real nigga look like, have him beggin on his knees fo mercy
but i show nun, call me god, ill smite dis bitch nigga where he stand
i got his world n my palm, simply destroy it by clinchin my hand

{Outro}
hahahahahahahahaha
i told u nigga..dont fuck wit us...
My people are ready to bomb on you
InFahRed Nigga haha...Round 1...


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=287776
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=287028

iight iight,tha content of this waz good i was feelin tha word of massacre lolz,tha flow in the verses were good,tha vocabulary wasnt that bad but not to strong,and the verses were good they wasn't a lot of punches n stuff,well my overall enjoyment was good,i liked readin all the verses,G/L on round 2 since i this is round 1

less get sum feedback plz

this was quite good...it had some nice rhymes..I was liking silent Killa's the most because even though it was short it still made an impact,the whole drop was quite good,although you all could have made the vocab a lot better..the structre was quite good,but you may have to change the title because this will probably get closed. but all in all nice drop...keep at it,

mo feed ppl plz wud b appreciated

return the favour
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=287859

This shit was real good. i was feelin Sin and Silents verse the most. Dark yo verse good also couldda had more punchlines but ok. Smokey urs was meh.....syke not it was aight. JC ur was good but u couldda used more punchlines. but good job yall.

lol at this it was weak beyond believe nothing was good the best diss at chicho was the baloon head thing but serious weak attempt flow was really off very weak atttempt waits for a comeback from chicho

shit i feel importnant niggas dissing me. lol u know imma get ya'll bitches

this Was weak...You all coulda came harder against chicho, and why didnt u let me in on this?? I woulda came and dropped a verse...All of you need to get more personals on him, harder punches, and way better flow

yea but Remeber this only Rd.1 my niggas We coming Harder Next Time n wit more People

The Massacre Part 2.
Coming In 2 Days...

word 2 dat

lol and wit more people lol coolie kid. its only more ppl i gotta diss

go ahead n diss me fact is u scared of smokey scared 2 battle him u wantin 2 do a GFX battle lmao lame bro u n ova yo head wetback bitch

thimk dat kid

have u battled him strait up yet? nope n have fun tryna diss all of us lmao bro u jus a hater all u eva do is talk shit but den when smokey challenges u u duck lmao lame get yo shit 2gether spick

lmfao. did u see when i called him out in bitchslap twice? and when i called him out in the lf thread?

for a GFX battle??? wtf who cares who can make a betta sig n shit

lmao. kid go look at the thread. he got to pick which it was. text, topical or gfx. we beefed b4 to. ask west, smokey scared of me

ok but when i was talkin 2 u jus tha otha day u said i dont do topicals tell smokey 2 pick gfx or topical n he wanted 2 battle u n text but u were bein a bitch about it

he had his chance so fuck him. plus he either had it prewritten or ghos written verse

bro w.e u scared n bsides dat u said smokey sucks so if he sucks so bad y do u care if he uses pre writ shit? battle him str8 up bro stop bein a bitch

hahaha stfu. just be on the look out for my response

will do i need a good laugh rite now n since u such a joke ur perfect fo it lmao

i guess u gonna have to see

Yea Chicho didnt u tell me That smokey was Ghost Writin For You???????????? n that u even stole a couple bars from him?? huh??
Yup whose the bitter now u bitch

lmfao. i never said smokey. i said kid

lmao shadow..... chico was bitin? lmao watta lame stfu chico u aint shit u had smokey ghost writin fo u thanx fo dat laugh i knew ud pull threw lol beaner

o well u still havin ppl write fo u cuz u lame! lmao

lmao, y would i want smokey to gw for me? lol i told u it was kid

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Originally Posted by ~ChIChO~

lmfao. i never said smokey. i said kid

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nah mybad.......Kid Sick was Ghostwriting for u..ok thnx for admitted it..see i quoted it juss in cased ur ass wanted to Edited it...haha...Wadda Biter

lmao. dats not me biting. dats my gw biting. plus he only gw 1 bar

cuz smokey betta den u but u still not writin yo own shit n dats sad cuz u talk shit when u kno u gonna get sum1 else 2 give yo reply so ill thank kid sick fo tha reply wheneva its posted aight well i had my laugh im out peace border jumper lmao n u shud change yo name 2 chica cuz u scared PUSSY! lmao

lmfao. it was only 1 bar and kid wat are u? black or white?

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Originally Posted by ~ChIChO~

lmao. dats not me biting. dats my gw biting. plus he only gw 1 bar

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really? bt isnt GhostWriting still bitng in a sense bcuz its not ur Lyrics which mean u were taking Credit for Kid's Lyrical Talent bcuz of Course u have none..

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Originally Posted by ~ChIChO~

lmfao. it was only 1 bar and kid wat are u? black or white?

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what r u a Chicho a Beaner Or a Alien Beaner?

lol no cuz it wasn't kids lines. he bit it off somebody else. plus u bit to so u ain't got room to talk. and jc. this shit imma write is my shit kid

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Originally Posted by Lil J.C.

cuz smokey betta den u but u still not writin yo own shit n dats sad cuz u talk shit when u kno u gonna get sum1 else 2 give yo reply so ill thank kid sick fo tha reply wheneva its posted aight well i had my laugh im out peace border jumper lmao n u shud change yo name 2 chica cuz u scared PUSSY! lmao

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haha lmfao word..wadda WetBack iz this nigga ChiCha lmaoo

lmao. ya'll know im not mexican right

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Originally Posted by ~ChIChO~

lol no cuz it wasn't kids lines. he bit it off somebody else. plus u bit to so u ain't got room to talk. and jc. this shit imma write is my shit kid

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oh REALLY!!!!!! so u juss admitted that u took lyrics from Kid Sick that Kid Sick Stole From Sum1 else??? wow WetBack u truly are Amazing lmao fukkin MExican Ballon Head Bitch