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before thursday.
bad habits are hard to kick, s' why ur text only meets my fists
ur nobody till ur somebody's bitch
so after u've dropped, re-mop my floor...theres spots u missed
i got this, straight to the top like rockets u can't stop it tho u try
but its only after i've knock'd u down that ur known as the fall guy
i scar this mans face, bitter bars an u cant shake the damn taste
but i'll never take ur life...when ur still needn #'s for ur fan base
so hold the phone! naw.. i'll just choke cam out instead
cuz the 2nd cel left, so did any of his decent text messages
left for dead. TKO. that's the price u pay to play with X
i've already broke the bank, s'why this piggy's dyin w/ HHS
I havent been online until now, I said I wouldnt be last week. Whatever though, i'll post something tomorrow.
You`ll never be famous enough to meet the President,
So I suggest keepin` it quiet.
Infact, you couldnt get flown into the White House if Zacharious Massaoui was the pilot!
First off, you deserve a lumpin`, brah ..Quote:
Originally Posted by SirusX
.. Cos your fucking set-ups are more creative than your punches are!
And ten lines is 'bout this bitches limit ..
.. plus his outfit`s are so mis-matched, they could do with payin' Hitch a visit.
He`s a lame fag and i`m tearing this chancer ..
.. then spreading between his mom`s legs - like her Ovarian Cancer!
This an ass-whoopin` you`ll NEVER be forgettin` ..
.. Cos you`ve got that Three-Bar style of Resin`s,
But with all creativity of Rezen.
Fuckouttahere. Quick key, all that's needed. Out like a Champ ..
Sirus X:
Dude, I wasn't feeling any of your verse..
You had some potentially mint punches but they were
fucked up with wording.
Camarac:
First off, you deserve a lumpin`, brah ..
.. Cos your fucking set-ups are more creative than your punches are!
He`s a lame fag and i`m tearing this chancer ..
.. then spreading between his mom`s legs - like her Ovarian Cancer!
Overall:
Sirus just didn't throw anything worth quoting which was sad, coz he's shown some potential over the last few weeks. Cam', not a good verse by all means. First bar got quoted because it was true, and the second quote was just harsh and grimey. Who wants to go to the White House though? lol.
Vote: Camarac.
I only loiked Sirus' "text message" punch. That was it.
Cam hit sweet with that personal on his "mop the floor" punch.
Real nice.
"Hitch" was kinda eh...but "ovarian cancer" was just plain mean, man.
Me likey!
Fairly easy...Cam
Peace
First off, you deserve a lumpin`, brah ..
.. Cos your fucking set-ups are more creative than your punches are!
He`s a lame fag and i`m tearing this chancer ..
.. then spreading between his mom`s legs - like her Ovarian Cancer!
vs.
nothing much man
I didnt feel sirus' verse at all. Cam's ovarian cancer lines was nice. The set-up punch was pretty cool too. pretty nice verse, nice to see ur not only focusing on multies and flow. Cam won this.
v/ Cam
WTF is Cam doing in the bottom half??? LOL
First off, you deserve a lumpin`, brah ..
.. Cos your fucking set-ups are more creative than your punches are!
He`s a lame fag and i`m tearing this chancer ..
.. then spreading between his mom`s legs - like her Ovarian Cancer!
vs
you had a lot of older punches, and some horribly worded ones. some of it had potential and could've turned out real dope but otherwise it was a pretty bad verse. come better next week.
battle was a no contest ..
v. cam
1-4. losses will cease
I`ve been trying something new. And will continue to do so. The only reason I hadnt this week is cos Siris wanted me to drop Thursday, and I`d only seen the thread Wednesday night! Lol. Normal service shall resume next week.Quote:
Originally Posted by Evolve
Good battle Siris.
First off, you deserve a lumpin`, brah ..
.. Cos your fucking set-ups are more creative than your punches are!
He`s a lame fag and i`m tearing this chancer ..
.. then spreading between his mom`s legs - like her Ovarian Cancer!
vs
Nothing
Cam easy here didnt like Sirus shit
Yea dont sleep
so hold the phone! naw.. i'll just choke cam out instead
cuz the 2nd cel left, so did any of his decent text messages
vs.
First off, you deserve a lumpin`, brah ..
.. Cos your fucking set-ups are more creative than your punches are!
This an ass-whoopin` you`ll NEVER be forgettin` ..
.. Cos you`ve got that Three-Bar style of Resin`s,
But with all creativity of Rezen.
Camarac took this battle. .
Quote:
Originally Posted by Camarac
sirus.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Evolve
gettin that itch to come back again?
You`ll never be famous enough to meet the President,
So I suggest keepin` it quiet.
Infact, you couldnt get flown into the White House if Zacharious Massaoui was the pilot!
^Stretched,pretty str8..stretched tho.lol.
Quote:
Originally Posted by SirusX
bad habits are hard to kick, s' why ur text only meets my fists
ur nobody till ur somebody's bitch
so after u've dropped, re-mop my floor...theres spots u missed
First off, you deserve a lumpin`, brah ..
.. Cos your fucking set-ups are more creative than your punches are!
^lol.good.
And ten lines is 'bout this bitches limit ..
.. plus his outfit`s are so mis-matched, they could do with payin' Hitch a visit.
^pretty simple.bland.
He`s a lame fag and i`m tearing this chancer ..
.. then spreading between his mom`s legs - like her Ovarian Cancer!
^Nice.
This an ass-whoopin` you`ll NEVER be forgettin` ..
.. Cos you`ve got that Three-Bar style of Resin`s,
^coo.aiight really.
vs.
bad habits are hard to kick, s' why ur text only meets my fists
ur nobody till ur somebody's bitch
so after u've dropped, re-mop my floor...theres spots u missed
^it seems like its backwards..but aiight opener.not really feeling it.
i got this, straight to the top like rockets u can't stop it tho u try
but its only after i've knock'd u down that ur known as the fall guy
^naw.
i scar this mans face, bitter bars an u cant shake the damn taste
but i'll never take ur life...when ur still needn #'s for ur fan base
ummkay.
so hold the phone! naw.. i'll just choke cam out instead
cuz the 2nd cel left, so did any of his decent text messages
^good.
left for dead. TKO. that's the price u pay to play with X
i've already broke the bank, s'why this piggy's dyin w/ HHS
^almost,but off a bit cuz of wording..seems forced at the end.just my opinion.
V/=Cam.(just for having 2 nice punches that stood out.)
v/Camarac, not cause it was dope but just becuz Sirus really dropped the ball on this shyt. Ya two battlers that belong in the top section but this battle really earned ya bottom status as of right now, i kno that Cam may have came soft tho cuza X's verse.
This an ass-whoopin` you`ll NEVER be forgettin` ..
.. Cos you`ve got that Three-Bar style of Resin`s,
But with all creativity of Rezen.
^that alone won it for Camarac
wasnt really feeling anything in sirus's verse
cam didnt come too good either. but yeaa better than sirus did, especially since he had the only line that stoodout somewhat.
so yea based on better punches and consistency
vote - Camarac