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man your birth tape was a disgrace
they showed your moms vagina but they blurred out your face
the doctor couldn't bare to look at you
he had to get anestetics and eye drops to not have the burning from look at you
okay enough from your birth
and another bit of barf
you watching all the fat hoes get low
while you couldn't even hit the bitch when your having your periof,going phyco
this is a ok rap of my new career
after this i heard you went to faundle michael jackson and crack a beer
period*
twiata yo kidd no hate work on ur punches structure work on everything right now but i culd alrdy tell u ganna lose this one unless the kidd drops even worse like cat or hat lmao
igght 4real though read sum other battles n tutuorial or w.e to get to know what u gatta do to step yo game up ya digg
ya thanks for the advice dawg stuff just doesn't pop into my mind that much anymore
This nigga tries to spit words like bullets but I got a lyrical vest
Gotta get out my can of raid to get rid of this pest
This nigga will neva win fuckin' wit the likes of me
He should've been named stone cuz his carreer is stationary
C(see) twista get lifted and I don't mean elevation
I mean when he flies outa this thread after this humiliation
The only way you'll win is to cut and paste dope heads like a biter
Or maybe you can pay one of them to be your ghostwriter
But you sure as hell won't do it using your wak ass skills
His mouth is a leaky toilet ya'll watch as shit spills
uppin #1 :(
upping #2
~Sequential~ got this all the way the other dude just plain out sucks
k...
Uppin 1
uppin 2
Uppin 3
seq........onesided....battle...////....
v/seq
v//// sequential
better punches and flow thats it
TWISTA ELEVATE
NICE DROP TO SEQUENTIAL
NO HATE
yo twista i seen dat shit befor nigga u copyin dat shit lol u a fake nigga \
sequential nice drop
C(see) twista get lifted and I don't mean elevation
I mean when he flies outa this thread after this humiliation
The only way you'll win is to cut and paste dope heads like a biter
Or maybe you can pay one of them to be your ghostwriter
But you sure as hell won't do it using your wak ass skills
His mouth is a leaky toilet ya'll watch as shit spills
vs.
nothing
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work on your openers Seq, you stretched that one too much. you had a good flow and stayed consistent in ya verse.
twista, look at other battles, get an idea of how to write a verse. then start over. but keep workin on it.
v/ Seq
check out some of my other battles kid
v/sequential...........for ahving way more harder punches........no-hate..............p-e-a-c-e...........................
Uppin 4
v/ seq! .. oh my god ... seq spit a OK verse .... twista .. elevate .. you verse lack quality!
^^^^^^^word lol v//seq fo tryin harder n e ad a better verse all round n harder punches twist elivate son no hate