Starting Fresh
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Starting Fresh
12 line max
NO Crew
NO D/R
NO Recycling
NO Hate
You can re-post your verse
or write a new one.
i'll wait for you to drop first.
Sounds Good
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=281671 go vote for it plz yall this is a battle for the ownership rights of a crew cmon
Post your verse when you get the chance..i msged you
a few times but you didnt answer so i just helped myself
dude was Born all loop sided with no connection rod
his whole birth was a fall..parents claimed him as "OH MY GOD"
Ugly as fuck, when his mom delivered him in layber
he was the only kid with tinted windows on his incubator
Dude aint a pretty sight..just look up rat kangaroo
hes been around the blocks...and got hit by a few too
Im tired of rapping you so this is filler just try and surpass
saved by the bell..hell no..even skreetch would woop yo ass
Im nice when spittin dope with written..eh dumb bastard
that bullshit you post, lowers bullshits acceptable standards
.......you still lame while i bring the sickest of pains
buying a watch in hollywoon t/ only way u get a min of fame :2thumb:
you ain't on my level nigga, everything that you're droppin is worn
if you wanna see Lay, fuck rap.. you better off just watchin a porn
punk ass get jumped fast, you know i stay tight like a fitted, damn
n' you must not understand the win.. cuz you'll never get it man
plus ya bitch stays jockin my nuts, that hoe wouldn't dare cease
she's glued to my head so much, she got mistook for a hairpiece
but you ain't get none anyway, ain't that the truth home fry?
live in the windy city.. and wind's the only thing you get blown by
actin like you run with some thugs n' who ya bringin is crazy? please
you're not hard.. cuz ef's only followed by a g when singin the abc's
i spit tight, preachin that your shit's liked.. don't step or start geek
or the next person feelin you will just be tryin to detect a heart beat
ez.
voters - if you don't understand a line, just get at me and i'll tell you.
nice verses both of yal:
efusive...
you came hard wit mettas and punches..nice verse
lay doubt.....
you had hella punches and wordplay
my vote=Lay doubt
i feel that lay got this one wit a better flow i was feeling his more
but my vote dont count
but thats wat i thought anyway
lay doubt now vote on my topical
Good Verse Hommie..win or lose there should def be a re-match.
sorry to freepost
but could yal vote on my battles
vs legion and uncommon plz
dude was Born all loop sided with no connection rod
his whole birth was a fall..parents claimed him as "OH MY GOD"
ok
Ugly as fuck, when his mom delivered him in layber
he was the only kid with tinted windows on his incubator
not hard ..
Dude aint a pretty sight..just look up rat kangaroo
hes been around the blocks...and got hit by a few too
first line had nothing to do with second. good concept though
Im tired of rapping you so this is filler just try and surpass
saved by the bell..hell no..even skreetch would woop yo ass
no ..
Im nice when spittin dope with written..eh dumb bastard
that bullshit you post, lowers bullshits acceptable standards
ok ..not creative but direct
.......you still lame while i bring the sickest of pains
buying a watch in hollywoon t/ only way u get a min of fame
ok concept. REALLY bad wording
vs
you ain't on my level nigga, everything that you're droppin is worn
if you wanna see Lay, fuck rap.. you better off just watchin a porn
ok ..
punk ass get jumped fast, you know i stay tight like a fitted, damn
n' you must not understand the win.. cuz you'll never get it man
lol good
plus ya bitch stays jockin my nuts, that hoe wouldn't dare cease
she's glued to my head so much, she got mistook for a hairpiece
lol dope ..
but you ain't get none anyway, ain't that the truth home fry?
live in the windy city.. and wind's the only thing you get blown by
lmfao ..so consistant..
actin like you run with some thugs n' who ya bringin is crazy? please
you're not hard.. cuz ef's only followed by a g when singin the abc's
good wordplay ..not hard punch
i spit tight, preachin that your shit's liked.. don't step or start geek
or the next person feelin you will just be tryin to detect a heart beat
ok..
rofl ..so one sided. Lay Doubt obviously has way more experience than Efusive here and the battle was either unfair or Efusive was on a bad day. I've NEVER seen Efusive but his wording here was horrible, although he had SOME potentially good concepts. Lay Doubt however ..kept his verse consistant with punches ..a couple lame ones but overall a good verse and a direct win ..Good job
V/ Lay Doubt easy ..
thankz lay
but can i get some more votes in my other battler vs legion plz we need about2 more votes plz
damn bitch nigga, quit cloggin my thread.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Cry
Respect your vote, this is probably the worse verse i have
ever written...yeah im just having a really bad few days
Dude aint a pretty sight..just look up rat kangaroo
hes been around the blocks...and got hit by a few too
Im tired of rapping you so this is filler just try and surpass
saved by the bell..hell no..even skreetch would woop yo ass
Vs
punk ass get jumped fast, you know i stay tight like a fitted, damn
n' you must not understand the win.. cuz you'll never get it man
plus ya bitch stays jockin my nuts, that hoe wouldn't dare cease
she's glued to my head so much, she got mistook for a hairpiece
but you ain't get none anyway, ain't that the truth home fry?
live in the windy city.. and wind's the only thing you get blown by
actin like you run with some thugs n' who ya bringin is crazy? please
you're not hard.. cuz ef's only followed by a g when singin the abc's
Yeah lay came nice, Ef came nicer in the other thread than he did here.
But lay edged him.
V/Lay
this was a good battle both came strong with punches and good flow but im gonna vote Lay cause even though Efusive had some good funny punches i just thought Lays hit harder and were more witty
v/Lay
please vote on my battle
Post your verse when you get the chance..i msged you
a few times but you didnt answer so i just helped myself
weak punch^^, lol na jks
ok...so...
dude was Born all loop sided with no connection rod
his whole birth was a fall..parents claimed him as "OH MY GOD"
nah
Ugly as fuck, when his mom delivered him in layber
he was the only kid with tinted windows on his incubator
no thank you
Dude aint a pretty sight..just look up rat kangaroo
hes been around the blocks...and got hit by a few too
nice
Im tired of rapping you so this is filler just try and surpass
saved by the bell..hell no..even skreetch would woop yo ass
nope
Im nice when spittin dope with written..eh dumb bastard
that bullshit you post, lowers bullshits acceptable standards
so so
.......you still lame while i bring the sickest of pains
buying a watch in hollywoon t/ only way u get a min of fame
nah
not that great, overall 6/10(FL Standards lol)
you ain't on my level nigga, everything that you're droppin is worn
if you wanna see Lay, fuck rap.. you better off just watchin a porn
alright
punk ass get jumped fast, you know i stay tight like a fitted, damn
n' you must not understand the win.. cuz you'll never get it man
lol, cool
plus ya bitch stays jockin my nuts, that hoe wouldn't dare cease
she's glued to my head so much, she got mistook for a hairpiece
meh
but you ain't get none anyway, ain't that the truth home fry?
live in the windy city.. and wind's the only thing you get blown by
nice
actin like you run with some thugs n' who ya bringin is crazy? please
you're not hard.. cuz ef's only followed by a g when singin the abc's
nice
i spit tight, preachin that your shit's liked.. don't step or start geek
or the next person feelin you will just be tryin to detect a heart beat
lol nice closer
overall:8/10
lay doubt took this, overall better verse.
PS lay your verse in LLL against marv is dope. lol made me laugh so much
no hate
vote lay
aye Lay you back at it long time no see pm me if you wanna know who this is but yall had a close battle Lay is you rusty?.....I seen you do better in LLL slizzy keep it up though shake off that rust lol
Ugly as fuck, when his mom delivered him in layber
he was the only kid with tinted windows on his incubator
vs
you ain't on my level nigga, everything that you're droppin is worn
if you wanna see Lay, fuck rap.. you better off just watchin a porn
punk ass get jumped fast, you know i stay tight like a fitted, damn
n' you must not understand the win.. cuz you'll never get it man
plus ya bitch stays jockin my nuts, that hoe wouldn't dare cease
she's glued to my head so much, she got mistook for a hairpiece
but you ain't get none anyway, ain't that the truth home fry?
live in the windy city.. and wind's the only thing you get blown by
actin like you run with some thugs n' who ya bringin is crazy? please
you're not hard.. cuz ef's only followed by a g when singin the abc's
i spit tight, preachin that your shit's liked.. don't step or start geek
or the next person feelin you will just be tryin to detect a heart beat
vote lay
he needs 1 more vote ....good verse lay
i should of done better :(
bumping for the last vote
yo good azz battle man y'all niccas had me laughin but im sorry i was just indulged in da shit lay doubt was spitting and he had some good punchlines and he kept the flow going.......
v/lay doubt
ayo don't mean to free post but id like if y'all could help close some of these battlez of mine thankz and bye...... and if y'all wanna battle pm me.....,
Ugly as fuck, when his mom delivered him in layber
he was the only kid with tinted windows on his incubator
funni... not really a punch tho
vs.
actin like you run with some thugs n' who ya bringin is crazy? please
you're not hard.. cuz ef's only followed by a g when singin the abc's
lmao.. not to strong tho...
honestly this wasn't even a battle it was super 1 sided... lay hit in every bar...
effusive... ya verse was meh hommie n that's being nice... ya first three bar's was ugly jokes... 1 is enuff...
V/lay