Looking Behind These Bloody Eyes (SS)

Looking behind these bloody eyes

http://www.stanford.edu/group/virus/...dium_ebola.jpg

-1976. Yambuku, Zaire. Currently the Democratic Republic of the Congo

Looking behind these bleeding eyes you'll find no pleading cries nor cure
Endure my feeding, tries to quell my greeting will spread my wrath for sure
A path of death is all that's left in place of this pathogen passed by men
Amassed in rituals, I'm passed in funerals of those I've last done in

A village killed swift without a trace to my make or place of origin
Faces pouring red bleeding from every orifice, no ignoring this
Bloodied fears mow down sun beaten cheeks of African tribesmen
Last of kin meet to clean bodies of the victims in which I've been

I'm passed around like party favors in celebration, my flavor is death
Savor each breath as I'm lurking inside speeding demise like I'm meth
Some say I've always been, hiding in retrovirus in ancestors of men
Others claim I'm bio engineered, weaponized in sectors and dens

Inspectors in general theorize I'm specialized, my general order's to kill
A vector of General orders realized, but humanity's paying the bill
Two hundred and eighty fell in my first wave of recorded attack
Sordid details & facts published by WHO document my ability & knack,

...to quitely kill & leave few to fuel the fires that rage against me
a pathogenic gun for hire whose only desire,
...is to aquire a new host & spread my seed of death within thee
eternal rest's my gift via fits of haemorrhagic fever,
...receivers bleeding from their ass, mouth, ears, nose and eyes
surprised by the rapid onset of death I dished in their tribes,
..I've thrived under controlled conditions, primmed for munitions
designed for politicians control of various sects,
...vary the sex & I kill with the same skill of a madman gone vexed
enter the sandman, the only question's who's next?

Zaire, Sudan, Uganda, Gabon?
My most recent up rise in Angola.. Who am I?
I go by the chosen name of EBOLA

...Looking behind these bleeding eyes you may find human ties,
uncovered lies, and weapons tied to pathogenic crimes...

-To date 1287 deaths have been attributed to Ebola, the first known outbreak of which killed 280 in Yambuku, Zaire.

Naturally occurring pathogen or man made weapon?

You decide...

:Looking behind these bloody eyes:

By: Bounce

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...05#post4080405

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...30#post4080430

alotta emotion in this, nice vocab, it seems like it would sound good on audio, you always drop nice but this was really good... i like how you managed to get extensive vocab in with the multi's and still have it make sence in every line, stayed on your topic the whole time, extremely original...
this is no doubt a 10/10...
really nice drop...

thanks man, it's apreciated...

Damn, talk about being slept on...

damn......DOPE DOPE DOPE DOPE..............did i mention that this was dope?.but on a real this was fucking amazing dude.......you do audio??? cuz this would be dope in audio.fucking great multies and vocab.....your imagery was dopeness at its highest level,you never came off the topic,it was stucutred very well and it all made sense.This was easily in the top 3 of all the OMs i've seen on this site,original topic,aint nver seen anything like it before.i know you don't like numerical ratings so i'ma just say that this was top class......dope as fuck dude.nice one

yo leave feed on my OM...it's in my sig

Thanks for the replies, you should peep more of my OM's or verses in general if you liked this one. This was just a quick SS verse. Oh yeah, and yes, I'm an emcee, I just don't post much online, but I am making music off the net though.

word I will definitely,I've seen your OM about the girl getting raped,i think it was in a tourney or something i dunno...but it was fucking dope......oh and can you send me one of your audios? by tha way can you plz hit up the OM in my sig?

hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=2752893&q=hi

here is a quick something..

Holy shit dude that was seriously dope,your style is like no other I have heard before.your lryics were out of this world,and all together fucking amazing....damn i wish I was you lol

lmao, that is just a qucik take on a song we shall finish up as soon as my bands lead singer gets the time, we are so damn busy with shows, it's hard to find studio time.

peep this...

http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=2753313&q=hi

my daughter is on the final version of this song. It me SMZ from here on RB and my band, my daughter dropped a few bars on this too, just not on this draft version...

iight this was fuckin unreal.Man I look up to you as a big inspiration.The shit you come out with is always dope and you always keep it at that level.Your imagery is amazing,.I have never seen a writer more creative than you,always full of ideas just waiting to release them.The read was very intresting also,I was tuned in from start to finish.All I can say is excellent.I dont needa say "Keep this going" cause I know you will.Great stuff bro

Thanks, it's rare now days for me to hear members have followed my work. I am glad you like it man, your feedback is really appreciated. Lately members are busy with d/r their crew membger drops who are avaerage at best... Look forward to seeing you in more of my Om threads.

Yeah bro can't wait untill next drop.At least that is something to look foward to.Anyway i'm not gonna clog this up so pz....

yeah bounce this was a nice piece but a very scary topic. anyway, your structure was amazing, you used wordplay like ive never seen anyone use before and overall this was great. you sounded great on the audio. your not like the other herbs who just posts here to get their posts up. good job. pz.

nice drop bounce.....didn't expect anything less from u since i've read some of your OM's before and also had the chance of u leaving some feedback on one of mine which was a honor to have a mod look at it....but i liked the way u standed on topic none the less leavin a question at the end was a good why to end your OM...alot of emotion was used in this...and your vocab was on point...really made it was it was....nice job i give u a 10/10......because u simply did that great....peace

-Quest

Thanks everyone, I kind of stopped droping in OM for a long while. it's nice to be back at it...

up...

*Brushes off Bounce's dick*

Ooooooook, while yes, this was brilliant piece... In terms of what YOU'RE capable of I don't think this really measured up at all. I didn't like how in the begining you kept refferancing in a "I am the... (This), I am the... (That)." It felt very artificial and Guess Who like, which for me kind of threw off the full effect of your roll play. I would have loved to have seen you take a more metaphorical approach and give the Ebola virus more of a human like personality. Just have a large masterpiece of beautiful personification in order to really define that twist at the end when you find out that its NOT a man but a virus. So, I mean, I respect it for its sheer creativity and above average content and approach... But when I look back at what else you've done it just doesn't measure up at all for me. Oh, and the flow was amazing, that was definately on point. It was kinda slow to come in the begining but after the first few bars it just pick up and was so intense and intricate. So, great piece but I know you've got better.

... I'd really apreciate it if you could check out my OM: "The Garden of Eden"
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=275365

yo hot shyt nigga . i was feelin da whole thing nice flow.

Thanks everyone

damn, I really liked this piece, I could image everything you was saying, your imagery was hot man for real... and the the vocab and words you choose just made the imagery felt that much more..

...to quitely kill & leave few to fuel the fires that rage against me
a pathogenic gun for hire whose only desire,
...is to aquire a new host & spread my seed of death within thee

I thought those lines were dope man, this piece was very good

A solid 8.5/10

Quote:

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...to quitely kill & leave few to fuel the fires that rage against me
a pathogenic gun for hire whose only desire,
...is to aquire a new host & spread my seed of death within thee
eternal rest's my gift via fits of haemorrhagic fever,
...receivers bleeding from their ass, mouth, ears, nose and eyes
surprised by the rapid onset of death I dished in their tribes,
..I've thrived under controlled conditions, primmed for munitions
designed for politicians control of various sects,
...vary the sex & I kill with the same skill of a madman gone vexed
enter the sandman, the only question's who's next?

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Hmmmm..............Cool. This 'stanza' looked like you were talking or making a speech to a big crowd if you know what I mean. The drop was very meaningful and I feel your pieces are getting stronger and stronger depth wise. Your flow is flawless man, and so is your audio flow. The shit is crazy. The emotion of your pieces are inexplicable, mysitfying, and cyptical. The way you portray your message here is insane, I enjoyed the ending lines also. They had meaning which is always great when I read your pieces. Thanks for the read. Feel free to give feed on the link in my sig, I appreciate everything. Piece.