This was written on a deep tip...conveniently while the power was out...so thats how I got the name. I would appreciate any feedback...I am new to the site not to the game...and I will definitely return any feed back i get. thanks. enjoy.
This piece is called FIRE BY CANDLELIGHT....but changing the title is the only way people will read it.
ENGAGE IN THOUGHT…I think about the DAYS FORGOT
My WRIST HURTS…FLAMES ARE LOST…I hope my BIC WORKS
The PAIN, IT STOPS…rememberin the days I hoped the PAGES CAUGHT
Would TWIST VERBS til every grain in my BRAIN EXHAUSTS
TIMED PRECISION an the FINEST WRITTENS…BECAME THE MARK
MY AMBITION was for RHYME AN RHYTHM…not the FAME I GOT
PRAYED TO GOD to see my NAME ATOP the list of lyricists that CHANGE YA FRAME OF THOUGHT
wit one stroke of breathtaking PAINT TO RECLAIM YA HEART…
I wanted vernacular…I KEPT PRACTICIN…IMPROVED MY VOCAB
USED A NOTEPAD so my FLOW HAD a wealth of INDEPTH ADJECTIVES
Can one really PERFECT TACTLESSNESS…In MUSICAL FORM?
A ROSE TRUE TO THE THORN that GROWS INTO A BEAUTIFUL SONG
Keep MOVIN ALONG, cuz what else you gonna DO WHEN ITS GONE?
All ya life people PROVIN YOU WRONG…but CRITICS ASIDE
I got INFINITE TIME to sit back and watch the MINUTES COLLIDE
I just want the chance to PICK UP A MIC…and TOUCH LIVES
CONCOCT A POEM, show people they’re NOT ALONE in the TOUGH TIMES
I cant DISCUSS WHY being real gives something people can BELIEVE IN
An ACCRUED MEANIN could give ya the power to RESUME BREATHIN
Have NEW REASONS….to come to terms with a FEW DEMONS
I’m THROUGH DREAMIN…now there’s just time for the RHYMES TO DIE
Tried TO ACHIEVE EM…now I TRY LIFE DIVIDED from NINE TO FIVE
My MINDS APPLIED to other things…until I can FIND THE TIME
To DISGUISE THE CRIES of a lost soul HIDDEN INSIDE THE LINES
Good RIDDENCE TO MY DEMISE…my spits will exist till TIME EXPIRES
Music COINCIDE WIT LIFE? A question there’s no RESPONSE FOR
People are generally DRAWN TOWARDS…the strength of a SONGS CONTOURS....
