15lines
blind spit
no haten votes
5mins to check
1hour to drop iight
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15lines
blind spit
no haten votes
5mins to check
1hour to drop iight
aight lets get this shit on the go
i'm ready to let it all flow
im in my zone,none will stop me
who is this guy? and why does he think he's better than me?
when compared to me he's the size of a flee, now it's my time to stand up and rise up
and put this bitch up on notice,make him wish he was lost like milo and otis
and motive is simple anger and contempt , dont even attempt to back out
cause i'll take out my gat, bang bang splat splat opp's i just made a mess
this bitch is in distress, don't look at me cause i'll put him to rest
i'll chop him up and put him in a chest and drop him of the broklyn bridge
and yes i'm on the fucking edge ready to snap i'm sick of this crap
the trap is set,bitch is about to get wacked
this guy must be the world's tallest shit stack, with the worlds smallest dick
that satisfys his big white boyfriend rick,this aint no joke or trick
folks this guy is sick, i feel like hitting him with a brick
this guy looks like his mom popped him out while on the toilet having a big ole shit
this guys life has been one big ole comedie bit, i don't even wanna know how many guys he's been wit,this is were im gonna end this so i send my regards and a fuck you
yo all this pussy backed out
fuck i got a first round knockout
werd dmc aint nothing but a pussy caught in a black out
post ya votes all
good verze
check check ....and my computer shut down...and it aint no no show kid ur rap was weak anyways....and u wrote more than 15 lines i should dq ur ass but naah because i was late and u didnt even check w.e i'mma drop my verse on this noobie
good verze i want 2 c dis finish
aight dmc drop your shit
but this time please dont split
i wanna hear your so called "hit"
now bring it bitch
you aint a rhymer u should call ur self "talk alot"
because u talk alot of shit and all u do is talk and not spit
u didnt even check and u typed ur wacked ass verse
ya rhymes are preskool ya need to rehearse and tho
this nigga didnt think of this shit of the top of his head
and he wrote it down first it still was the thought of a 8
year old rap the guys 20 and dont no how to use a good line
or use his time but fuck it i'mma beat the shit outta u and
call you terd and and smash ya head inbetween bricks
and yous a phoigcal lier if u thinking i got a boyfriend
the only thing i got closest to da is a G.U.N. and i use that
to defend and niga dont even pretend cuz u aint shit
and i'm gunna comprehend and sense that this niggas shaken
and i'm also gunna guess because he was faken
this nigga sucking so much dick shit it make me sick
and kid i'm pushin keylows kinda like blow niga u cant rhyme
kinda like u cant throw a punchline so just let it go cuz i'm
smashin Mcs like u that think ur tough,one word comes outta ur
mouth and thats it give u a glass jaw so u cant spit
and yous a pathalogical lier*********************......................... ..........................
v/Ryhmin
both came weak with no punches and shit lyke dat. Ryhmin gets my votes cuz of a better flow and personals.
RTF, and drop an honest vote in 1 of the links in my sig
bitch you call me a pathalogical "lair"
but bitch i just wage pyshcological warfare
my skillz are for hire , your ryhmes are like a flat tire
anoying and useless
shut up ..if i wanted cum back i would have scraped the top of ur lip for my cum back iight so shut up goof ur rhymes is 100percent peer gargbage something i'd use to break up my e on pussy
my ryhmes must be good or maybe your verse was just worst den mine but im in the lead it may be one vote but its one more vote than you got
vote/ werd
i think that werd had a better flow concept and better punches then that other nigga had both of yall can do better though
thanks man ....upppin votes ...vote hurr and make it honest and leave ya link and i'll vote in ya battle honest too iight
yo all keep the votes coming
vote for the best man
keep it honest
straight up yo
peace out yall
dis waz good ill vote soon wen i get enuff postz
v/ werd.
for not having stretched lines, cause both verses were below par.
ELAVATE> both of ya, and read the tuts.
thanks.....uppin leave ya post and i'll vote if ya vote on dis one but be honest iight ...........................
ya peeps start uppin with the votes yall.............................................. ..............
yo u both need to find a better structure
i hate reading this paragraph form
just end everyline wit a rhyme instead
but ne way word won this because he rhymed alot more thatn T. both yall need to elevate cuz there wasnt much punching just statments being thrown around
v//wor
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honestly i v/ werd.....