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The Guilty Victim
The Guilty Victim
"Silence Approaches the room,
Every One Stands quiety with the Mist"
"Lawyers Approaches the Men,
The Jury Smiles With a Little Twist"
[Judge Approaches the Stand]
The Judge Says: Order in The Court Order In The Court
Your Out Of Control,Cops I Order You to Light The Tourch
[The Court Room Gets Silent and Quiet]
Im Not Guilty I Haven't Once In My Life Caused any Harm
Why Did The Window Break?,and YOU!! Tripped The Alarm
It wasn't me I Swear That,You Must Have The Wrong Person
It was You Walking In Thier House,& What was You Searching?
Why Am I Missed Judge You Have No Proof,Yeah Im Innocent
[It got Quite at some point and sun was so high out Glissining]
Why So Silent? Yes Just admit that You Are Guilty at charge
Thinks to his Self: Just Fuck Its So Long Til I Can Even Pard
Judge These Questions are Outraged and real Out Leagued,
May I Continue Your Honor,Yes You May Continue, Preciede
I Call His Last Girl Friend To The Stage,Approach the Stand
What First Happened,In Yor House Hold was he a real man
yeah he treated me like a ladie,nothen really to acuse him
but he did have medicine,to get up in bed he alway used them
How Was your relationship,Did He ever try to Abuise You
That never would of happened,never,but he maybe used to
Has He ever got frantic around you,disturbed or distracted
Maybe Once or two since we was together,but i never reacted
[The Defence Lawyer]
"Order in The Court Order In the Court,Sir I dont think These
Questioned are Usefull."
"How Could My Client Do this to any man or women,
his are terribably brutal."
The Wund on that man was on the left side of the neck
His right arm was amputated this is no time for a guess
clues,maybe but this is no television show to react to
Close Your Mouth,No one in the court even asked you
Thinks to his self:Fuck Im Just go Say I Just Did It
Its Just Better Then My Family Alive Then Just Risk It
[Defendant Found Guily In The Court,
And The Man In The Audience Is Ginning Hard,
Was This Man really Guilty?]
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ill get links in a bit
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this was really dope!......love how u wrote it like a story and had diff people talk...the emotion was crazy could see everything in my head when i read it......this just was a really dope peice.
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thanx yo good looks im telling these cats im coming back with somthen ill ya know
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yo this was aight. it flowed very well an it had some vocab. you did ya thang wit the emagery too. i liked the way it ended but i wish they was more cause it was pretty good. peace out
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yeah im thinking buot having another part to it ill write it later if im online werd thanx 1
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yo thats waz ill son
its like a story told in a rap mian thats was ill
keep up da work homie peace
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thanks man More Fans YAY!!
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it was pretty dope. the flow was tight. the topic was ill and very original which i love. the structure was dope too very even throughout the entire piece. the set up of the words and the plot was dope. the complexity was pretty decent for vocab. needed to be elevated a little more. but overall this was a real good piece. only some small minor things you need to improve on to make this piece legendary. overall i will give you a 9.5/10. keep droppin b you got mad potential.
-Peace
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aww shizznit :) AYAYAYAYA mufukka coming up hot now second part i think i might as well write shit hehe thankz for the feed leave links people
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yo g. i dropped my latest om. check it out. I sigged it.
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Nice story line with it, well doen homie.
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uppin for more feed leave links and i got you
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Damn, Like the dope picture you had flowing in my head. This was an awsome drop, loved the flow, wordplay, and vocabulary. I seriously hope you plan on staying active on this site, and active on making OM's. This was above average, almost killer. I would give this drop a 8.5/10.
Nice drop. Check my OM.
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werd ill check it thanks homie shit i got to read it again hehe
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damn duke, that shit is pro,
