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Blow the dro
Cho:
Ya girl Blow the dro/ Ya we can take it slow
Gettin high and gettin hot/ Waitnin for dem pantys drop
Take it off and just let go/ We can take it to the floor
Have he screamin all night/ God damn this dro is tight
Verse:
Puff puff pass bitch blow the dro
and afta ya hit bitch ya drop it low
and what next ya ask... ya already know
im gonna beat that shit up startin on da floor
we can go other places like up in the bedroom
scute up little mama give ya self some headroom
hurry up girl ya need to give me some head soon
no dis aint no joke dro hits you as hard as a monsoon...
da dro made ya drippin wet so i can slide in eazy
im tellin u that u the on but u just another breazy
the weed make me interjetic like an energizer battery
so im fuckin u so hard i could go to jail for battery
but you know it feel good cuz you screamin and moanin
if u dont stop then i wont stop from the night to the mornin
this dro made it all happen cuz that shit works magic
you gonna rember this night for the of ya life and... sex... we can make it a habit
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links, or it'll get closed
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what you talkin bout what links is you talkin bout
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this was aight son but it wasnt all that hot tho to me. if your gonna make a song maybe the whorus can atleast be said about two times the least and you couldve ahd a more decent flow at the first half of ya verse. you need to improve with ya vocab skills it wanst too bad tho' if you wanna choose something like this for ya topic maybe you should put more to it than just the basics
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I thought the chorus was pretty tight but from there everything went basic. Your creativity level was pretty low so u need to up that.
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thats all i need some opinion i want to know what other people think of my shit but when i drop another om ill reack that hoe i just need to know what i need to improve
Tks for the feed back
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say uppin this shit give me some mo feed back
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yo,, this shit is dope,, keep it comin
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emm i found it quite average
its alright
notthing special tho
av ago at another 1 :D
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leave some feed to tell me what i need to do next time
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hmmm it was aiite.. hook was quite good.. but surely ya cudda dun.. better feel me..
it weren't nuttin special cudda been better... u kno add some multies, improve ya vocab, be mo' creative, etc... stil overall it was aiiite.....1
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Yea it was alright but like somebody else said it was kinda basic. One syllable rhymes and what not, put some multis in there and it would be better.
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its aiite... can ya check out any of my o.ms if ya don't mind b............
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uppin fer some feed my niggaz
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yo the hook was nice.
but on the verse it went from hot to whack
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iight dawg check on all the OMs
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Closed, and now you're on the warning list for re-using links.
