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He is not worth my lines in this battle...but who give a fuck
I like the welly describin name Vortex...ahhhh u suck
I know u think u got skillz but they can't compete wit mine
He think he got the killa punchline but...It's all in his mind
Poetic Justice...ahhhh I'm tired of ppl bitin off name for crews..NOOBS
Next time name yaself a shoe like NIKE so u can check me dude
Not ready for me Justice is already serve and u need to stick to the poetic
U must be immune to all illness in ya lyrics cause u neva spit sick
But let me close this thing before I hurt is feelings to badd..he's fragile
Ya may punches my flow like a ballarine but thay still not agile
fuck it
dude ya crew’s so insignificant, I cant even remember they bitch name
I’d blow-up codered’s image, but he already got a rep… as a shit stain
Ya team leader LG’s an ass, da bitch shudda jus put me twice versus 6
he’s not much talent also, yet stood next 2 red least he gotta modest bit
& since he a shit-faced hypocrite… ya homie king01 might say your ill
but lets skip the bullshit, & move past ur hoe-assed excuse for a skill
I cud smite ya better-yet leav u dicks zombie like ‘em Haitian witchdoctors
ya squad’ll flop like twixted’s body-bags, guard ya do-rags bitch’s its ruckus
slappin fags red 2 black, I leave blue bruises like brutal pimps on dames
of course ya’ll LLL, let me explain: ya’ll penises is Ludicrous Limp n Lame
vortex- You had a good verse, good punches, flow was smooth, and your personals were decent. Try to give more of them though as they make your verse better. keep working on punches, yours were good but simply wording them better would have made your verse even better.
code- You had a decent verse also, but your verse could have been better if you worked on your personals more. The punches hit to hit him more.
V/vortex
plz hit up tha battles in my sig
no hate
yeah... aiite.. this is off to a slow start
bumps
vsQuote:
Originally Posted by Code Red
personals-vortexQuote:
Originally Posted by Vortex
punches-vortex
w/p - vortex
structure - vortex
creativity - vortex
no diss at all
i seen you come alot stronga red
maybe you were distracted or somethin
cuz this doesnt even seem like somethin you'd drop
cuz he's not this much better then you
but in this battle....he was
v-vortex
Uppin #1
any more ups?
bump
Code Red
He is not worth my lines in this battle...but who give a fuck
I like the welly describin name Vortex...ahhhh u suck
Meh
I know u think u got skillz but they can't compete wit mine
He think he got the killa punchline but...It's all in his mind
ok
Poetic Justice...ahhhh I'm tired of ppl bitin off name for crews..NOOBS
Next time name yaself a shoe like NIKE so u can check me dude
No
Not ready for me Justice is already serve and u need to stick to the poetic
U must be immune to all illness in ya lyrics cause u neva spit sick
No
But let me close this thing before I hurt is feelings to badd..he's fragile
Ya may punches my flow like a ballarine but thay still not agile
ok
This was ok...Not the best verse. One or Two good punches. No personals.Some multis. 7/10
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Vortex
dude ya crew’s so insignificant, I cant even remember they bitch name
I’d blow-up codered’s image, but he already got a rep… as a shit stain
No
Ya team leader LG’s an ass, da bitch shudda jus put me twice versus 6
he’s not much talent also, yet stood next 2 red least he gotta modest bit
Meh
& since he a shit-faced hypocrite… ya homie king01 might say your ill
but lets skip the bullshit, & move past ur hoe-assed excuse for a skill
Nice
I cud smite ya better-yet leav u dicks zombie like ‘em Haitian witchdoctors
ya squad’ll flop like twixted’s body-bags, guard ya do-rags bitch’s its ruckus
No
slappin fags red 2 black, I leave blue bruises like brutal pimps on dames
of course ya’ll LLL, let me explain: ya’ll penises is Ludicrous Limp n Lame
Meh
Also not the best verse. Some good punches an some weak. Ok multis. Average vocab.
6.05/10
Vote= Code
Reason is because.....Some of vortex's punches didnt really fit well together. They had a filler...Close but he didnt get my vote in this battle
Code Red
He is not worth my lines in this battle...but who give a fuck
I like the welly describin name Vortex...ahhhh u suck
Aight^not all dat
I know u think u got skillz but they can't compete wit mine
He think he got the killa punchline but...It's all in his mind
Nice
Poetic Justice...ahhhh I'm tired of ppl bitin off name for crews..NOOBS
Next time name yaself a shoe like NIKE so u can check me dude
Nope
Not ready for me Justice is already serve and u need to stick to the poetic
U must be immune to all illness in ya lyrics cause u neva spit sick
Nope
But let me close this thing before I hurt is feelings to badd..he's fragile
Ya may punches my flow like a ballarine but thay still not agile
okie
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Vortex
dude ya crew’s so insignificant, I cant even remember they bitch name
I’d blow-up codered’s image, but he already got a rep… as a shit stain
No^^^
Ya team leader LG’s an ass, da bitch shudda jus put me twice versus 6
he’s not much talent also, yet stood next 2 red least he gotta modest bit
Ehh.No^^^
& since he a shit-faced hypocrite… ya homie king01 might say your ill
but lets skip the bullshit, & move past ur hoe-assed excuse for a skill
Aight^^
I cud smite ya better-yet leav u dicks zombie like ‘em Haitian witchdoctors
ya squad’ll flop like twixted’s body-bags, guard ya do-rags bitch’s its ruckus
Nah B^^^
slappin fags red 2 black, I leave blue bruises like brutal pimps on dames
of course ya’ll LLL, let me explain: ya’ll penises is Ludicrous Limp n Lame
Okayy..ehhh^^^
V/Code for Being More Consistent more harder Punches and shit Nice Vortez ive seen better from u
V/ - Vortex.
Code Red you suck terribly.
yo dat battle was hot but im goin to give diz vote to vortex yo his punches were mad ill
bumps..
V/Code for Being More Consistent more harder Punches and shit Nice Vortez ive seen better from u[/QUOTE]
no u havent seen better from vortex u muggy shitfaced idiot... good old
DR n Hate
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Originally Posted by WordPloy
no u havent seen better from vortex u muggy shitfaced idiot... good old
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I knew it!!!!!!!!!!
I knew it!!!!!!!!!![/QUOTE]Quote:
Originally Posted by RAWW
ha
cough up
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A Yo If I Could Vote I Would B Cus Dis A Hot Battle
yeah fosho shorts
seems like the voting if fuller bull around here
I think vortex ripped that fool apart. I mean Red had some flow,but Vor just had it all. he landed those punches with no mercy,adding his crew as a touchy personal. Props to both and no hate.
code took that nike concept from kkilla34
Code had underestimated vortex and come up with a weak verse all over, vortex had better punhces, flow and personals \/ Vortex
yo this was a pretty dope battle but its gon hafta go to muh dawg Vortex wit better flow, structure, punches an personals...
stay up homeys