Aight here goes, round 2 bwai
check: 10 mins
Drop: 25 mins
Min/Max lines: 10/30
No hate, d/r votes,
crew votes allowd, as we in most same crews, but they have ta be explained
Aight, that somes it up
Good Luck Bloodz
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Aight here goes, round 2 bwai
check: 10 mins
Drop: 25 mins
Min/Max lines: 10/30
No hate, d/r votes,
crew votes allowd, as we in most same crews, but they have ta be explained
Aight, that somes it up
Good Luck Bloodz
Check in........good luck ma dog
check in
good luck homie this should be good and to all u d/r riders and haters dont post in here
Whenever ya battle, all the free ghostwriters get hired
Bitch understand, the last man i battled fuckin' retired ( Turna)
Someone pass me a bag, this kids rhymes making me sick
You girl wants me ta screw her, cause she said you got a dick, size of a toothpick
Your like a bitch, ya been whored 19 times (rec)
Your punches don't hurt and everyones laugin' at ya rhymes
Change your name, less like bloodz to bitch4life
Battling me is just causing your record losses more strife
Damn, ya punches so weak they getting me paranoid
I own ya, like 50 fuckin' owns lloyd ( Ggg-G-Unit)
Ya beat me once, now i come back round like karma
Don't get cocky, onle person who said ya good was ya sympathetic momma
I'm piercing your rhyme, like a starry nights pierced by the moon
It aint ma fault, bloodz, you just ma new lyrical spitoon
Dog, ya rhymes so weak they make Ja-Rule sound a god
Don't spit anymore, you so garbage, y'all get banned by a mod
Last ya called me a fool, told me ta go back ta school, but now i whooped ya ass
Ding~a~Ring~Ring, hear it bloodz, now it's your turn to go back ta class
Aight luck to ya dog
dam srry bout taken so long well heres my drop good luck
my fist is dangerous your whole crews danger-less
i came along and smacked you around like the oppisite sex
you aint wack you just talentless without a bone in your back
all your bars skipped and missed.. its like the fucking record scratched
your only half the goods you gotta give up..i insist
im three fourths of the half you missed the other fourth is when i clench my fists
pakaveli, you praying lyrically for your existance
i nailed you on the cross and you started to bleed like a bitch or a mistress
nah you aint at my height you an homo from gay-Town
give up go to the judges table prop me and put on your academic gown
Fuck pak yall know he only spit lines that dont got even a punch in its blood
you aint blood you aint flowin FUCK THIS homo rip him out his crib like a stump spud
na i dont want you to represent me your rhymes aint as gifted as my rhymes got me
im lifted im high na i dont mean high i mean i take Aliens higher then Mars could pull a hydrolic-filled bently
fuck this dude i dont know shit about him all i know is where he from is garbage
i guess he sets the example cause hes sure as hell aint makin paper hes doin this for free he aint even run bars or charge
the introduction was tight now i gotta finish up a bar but im lyrically extinct
i guess the battles ending aint far get your aquantinces watch me pull out my gat and feel your last blink
srry this was a bit messy i had to rush
Aight good battle, both of our styles have changed since the last time, what ya think
yea this battle was sick uppin for votes ................
Nice battle il think if i could vote i would take Bloodz4life
Overal both very good :)
you aint wack you just talentless without a bone in your back
all your bars skipped and missed.. its like the fucking record scratched
vs
I'm piercing your rhyme, like a starry nights pierced by the moon
It aint ma fault, bloodz, you just ma new lyrical spitoon
was an aiight battle yall, yall both did ya thing
pak your structure and flow was much better,
but bloodz punches were hitting harder,
close battle but al give it to...........
V/Bloodz
thanks now uppin more votes i need this closed this is tha 3rd battle
I'm piercing your rhyme, like a starry nights pierced by the moon
It aint ma fault, bloodz, you just ma new lyrical spitoon
vs
nothing
v/bloodz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=263394
Hit That Up Wit An Honest Vote For Me :)
no offence yeh n this aint freeposting, but how u gonna quote pak and say bloodz had nothing n thn vote for bloodz, seems like a stupid vote to me, no hate
ima have to go with bloods for his punches hitting harder pac your punches just wasnt connecting you had ok structer so did bloodz and a comment to both shortin your lines they are stretched as fuck
v/bloods
Quote:
Originally Posted by .Omega.
Bloodz got nothin against syco voting, but somehtin aint write here
decent battle both had ok punches and personals nice rhyming in some places but pakaveli had a few more that hit ok bloodz u had some too but not as many as pak
dats why my vote goes to pak
V/pak
Not that great but gotta say Blood came harder wit punches u too should be dominating each otha cause u have known each otha for a min but Blood had harder punches evrything else waz evenly matched
v/Blood
DAMN theres a clear winner in this........Pakaveli
Had easier rhymes to read and well kept me laughin thoughout his whole verse
the other negro's flow was off and wasnt as offensive as Pakaveli....I think the line that won the whole thing for Pakaveli was
Whenever ya battle, all the free ghostwriters get hired
Bitch understand, the last man i battled fuckin' retired ( Turna)
Yo that right there was straight up Genius.....I wish i woulda thought of that
VOTE_Pakaveli_______
Aight thanks, someone noticed.....Uppin'
decent battle both had ok punches and personals nice rhyming in some places but pakaveli had a few more that hit ok bloodz u had some too but not as many as pak
dats why my vote goes to pak
V/pak
I Quoted The Wrong Ones :pQuote:
Originally Posted by Diamond Mind
heres what it should be
I'm piercing your rhyme, like a starry nights pierced by the moon
It aint ma fault, bloodz, you just ma new lyrical spitoon
vs
you aint wack you just talentless without a bone in your back
all your bars skipped and missed.. its like the fucking record scratched
pakaveli, you praying lyrically for your existance
i nailed you on the cross and you started to bleed like a bitch or a mistress
V//Bloodz
Im Omega Bye The Way
Whenever ya battle, all the free ghostwriters get hired
Bitch understand, the last man i battled fuckin' retired ( Turna)
Someone pass me a bag, this kids rhymes making me sick
You girl wants me ta screw her, cause she said you got a dick, size of a toothpick
Your like a bitch, ya been whored 19 times (rec)
Your punches don't hurt and everyones laugin' at ya rhymes
Change your name, less like bloodz to bitch4life
Battling me is just causing your record losses more strife
Damn, ya punches so weak they getting me paranoid
I own ya, like 50 fuckin' owns lloyd ( Ggg-G-Unit)
Ya beat me once, now i come back round like karma
Don't get cocky, onle person who said ya good was ya sympathetic momma
I'm piercing your rhyme, like a starry nights pierced by the moon
It aint ma fault, bloodz, you just ma new lyrical spitoon
Dog, ya rhymes so weak they make Ja-Rule sound a god
Don't spit anymore, you so garbage, y'all get banned by a mod
Last ya called me a fool, told me ta go back ta school, but now i whooped ya ass
Ding~a~Ring~Ring, hear it bloodz, now it's your turn to go back ta class
That was a pretty good verse.
Made me laugh alot.
Nice flow,And good rhymes.
8/10
Vs.
my fist is dangerous your whole crews danger-less
i came along and smacked you around like the oppisite sex
you aint wack you just talentless without a bone in your back
all your bars skipped and missed.. its like the fucking record scratched
your only half the goods you gotta give up..i insist
im three fourths of the half you missed the other fourth is when i clench my fists
pakaveli, you praying lyrically for your existance
i nailed you on the cross and you started to bleed like a bitch or a mistress
nah you aint at my height you an homo from gay-Town
give up go to the judges table prop me and put on your academic gown
Fuck pak yall know he only spit lines that dont got even a punch in its blood
you aint blood you aint flowin FUCK THIS homo rip him out his crib like a stump spud
na i dont want you to represent me your rhymes aint as gifted as my rhymes got me
im lifted im high na i dont mean high i mean i take Aliens higher then Mars could pull a hydrolic-filled bently
fuck this dude i dont know shit about him all i know is where he from is garbage
i guess he sets the example cause hes sure as hell aint makin paper hes doin this for free he aint even run bars or charge
the introduction was tight now i gotta finish up a bar but im lyrically extinct
i guess the battles ending aint far get your aquantinces watch me pull out my gat and feel your last blink
Hm..Thats was okay,Lines where a lil too much extended.
Nice punches,But a lil hard to read.Rhymes were pretty good.
7/10
My vote has to go to Pakeveli.
yo this battle was good... no hate blood won this shit... he had a better punches.....
v/blood
.Omega. and Vocab~$kill$ votes are dqued
pak was more creative, true bloods had betta punches but i liked paks flow and personals bout the record. no hate
Wow talk about rigged voting that kid should be banned he clearly didnt read a single thing
(I'd vote myself but I cant call it)
i cant vote but i would vote pak cuz he had betta flow and made me laugh throw his verses
no h8 homiez
Whenever ya battle, all the free ghostwriters get hired
Bitch understand, the last man i battled fuckin' retired ( Turna)
No
Someone pass me a bag, this kids rhymes making me sick
You girl wants me ta screw her, cause she said you got a dick, size of a toothpick
Na stretched
Your like a bitch, ya been whored 19 times (rec)
Your punches don't hurt and everyones laugin' at ya rhymes
Na
Change your name, less like bloodz to bitch4life
Battling me is just causing your record losses more strife
No
Damn, ya punches so weak they getting me paranoid
I own ya, like 50 fuckin' owns lloyd ( Ggg-G-Unit)
Ok
Ya beat me once, now i come back round like karma
Don't get cocky, onle person who said ya good was ya sympathetic momma
Na
I'm piercing your rhyme, like a starry nights pierced by the moon
It aint ma fault, bloodz, you just ma new lyrical spitoon
No
Dog, ya rhymes so weak they make Ja-Rule sound a god
Don't spit anymore, you so garbage, y'all get banned by a mod
Ok
Last ya called me a fool, told me ta go back ta school, but now i whooped ya ass
Ding~a~Ring~Ring, hear it bloodz, now it's your turn to go back ta class
Nice flow but punch woz weak
Vs.
my fist is dangerous your whole crews danger-less
i came along and smacked you around like the oppisite sex
No
you aint wack you just talentless without a bone in your back
all your bars skipped and missed.. its like the fucking record scratched
Decent
your only half the goods you gotta give up..i insist
im three fourths of the half you missed the other fourth is when i clench my fists
Na
pakaveli, you praying lyrically for your existance
i nailed you on the cross and you started to bleed like a bitch or a mistress
Nope
nah you aint at my height you an homo from gay-Town
give up go to the judges table prop me and put on your academic gown
No
Fuck pak yall know he only spit lines that dont got even a punch in its blood
you aint blood you aint flowin FUCK THIS homo rip him out his crib like a stump spud
stretched as fuck, needs rewordin
na i dont want you to represent me your rhymes aint as gifted as my rhymes got me
im lifted im high na i dont mean high i mean i take Aliens higher then Mars could pull a hydrolic-filled bently
Again very stretched hard to read
fuck this dude i dont know shit about him all i know is where he from is garbage
i guess he sets the example cause hes sure as hell aint makin paper hes doin this for free he aint even run bars or charge
Lol another stretcheds punchline, keep them shorter man they hell to read
the introduction was tight now i gotta finish up a bar but im lyrically extinct
i guess the battles ending aint far get your aquantinces watch me pull out my gat and feel your last blink
Stretched and weak :thumbsdow
Ok i got Pak winnin this with 2 decent punches to bloodz 1. Close battle, and bloodz wud have won this if he never came with 3 stretched as a fat bitch punch lines at the end. Work on that bloodz and youll be a lot better. Another thing for both of you, don't include as much self glory in your verses, concentrate more on worplay and try to add more wit to your verses. And bloodz don't write anythin like this agen lol
the introduction was tight now i gotta finish up a bar but im lyrically extinct
i guess the battles ending aint far get your aquantinces watch me pull out my gat and feel your last
the introduction was tight now i gotta finish up a bar but im lyrically extinct
i guess the battles ending aint far get your aquantinces watch me pull out my gat and feel your last blink
^^ Nobody wants to hear about shootin people in punchlines anymore, it's mad played. Just a bit of advice, cuz after all criticism is supposed to let you improve so i try to give constructive critisism :)
Anyways apart from that yall had decent verses, good battle guys :2thumb:
Vote/Pak