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20 lines
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Originally Posted by Mystery~Murdera
lol
Quote:
Originally Posted by Mystery~Murdera talking to $pit
You were never dope, you pre-writ you ran out of words then you split
Now you're back with aggression, but Spit's rewording ya shit
Its obsurd this bitch is here, both nearly lost last weekend
But at least the dude I was facing.. was half fucking decent
Ya recent shits worth 20, wanna go more and invite a loss?
Why the fuck you wanna put out more proof you've writers block?
I'll mince this tosser for Illtalic, coz its shit when you're burgled
You shouldn't have made it to this week so watch this mister re-murdered
This fucking nerd is lower class, you've worried geeks in the past
But now you're only spreading fear up the cheeks of your ass
You're surpassed so no more frontin' I'll squash this pest over nuthin
I'll put this bitch in a car crusher... come watch compress the button
Now you're stuck for wit I sense it, sentenced to spitting like an idiot
So just be glad I haven't mentioned the pm you sent admitting it
You're illiterate I'll break ya, got your words twisted and its blatant..
..that you ain't taking over bitch, you're just being overtaken
But I ain't mistaken, you're plucky and you've no reason to duck me
Because there'll be a worthy winner... or you might even get lucky
So just pray that I'll fall, this bore is mauled to the floor
At least try to put on a brave face.. coz yours says it all
Quote:
Originally Posted by Com
Yea fucka.. so I got my verse done & it's about to get worse, son
i only gave u that 2nd seed cuz we've all seen the pics of ur 1st one!
I murk from all angles like a sniper and Com is a sure spot
aint it funny how the baby gets sick around the times ur not
I'm for sure hott but I'll stop, what should I sodomize for
when your first non no-show feebs made u apologize for
I got an eye for talent... & Second Coming's roster is sick...
but ur the crew vomit - makin all that noise but still followin spit
I'm godly, ur ripped even ur bitch claims that i still do it best
so the only layd in your corner... would kill you in text
Rediculing ur vet status no one knows ur skill. I had to laugh
Because your last round… well… should’ve been exactly that
Make you tag the mat, go ahead post the shit u recycle & bottle
And I’ll move aside… but only cuz the brackets are horizontal
and you know i know that i'm back and I'm on a new mission
I'd name peeps that should have ur spot but u started a crew with'em
hope you're threw snifflin bout predictions, I fear you're a bitch
thought u were washed up. Then u made it clear.. ur career is on rinse
I’m so fly and if I let the truth be told there’s no denying
That nothing you post is original… hell, even the quotes are lyin
...warming up...
this can be upped now
................................
Yea fucka.. so I got my verse done & it's about to get worse, son
i only gave u that 2nd seed cuz we've all seen the pics of ur 1st one!
lmmfao oh god
Rediculing ur vet status no one knows ur skill. I had to laugh
Because your last round… well… should’ve been exactly that
aint that the damn truth
You're surpassed so no more frontin' I'll squash this pest over nuthin
I'll put this bitch in a car crusher... come watch compress the button
Now you're stuck for wit I sense it, sentenced to spitting like an idiot
So just be glad I haven't mentioned the pm you sent admitting it
that was coo from com
but wtf...com always has some gay reference in his verses..like damn, the buttcheck line? c'mon b
but yeah...its pretty evident here..
v/ m~m for obvious reasons
^is this guy honestly alowed to vote?
MM the quote is real lol you know that....
and Jacent I have no buttcheck line? am I tripping or are you?
You were never dope, you pre-writ you ran out of words then you split
Now you're back with aggression, but Spit's rewording ya shit
^^not really harsh
Its obsurd this bitch is here, both nearly lost last weekend
But at least the dude I was facing.. was half fucking decent
^^aight but ya almost dissing him less than his opponent
Ya recent shits worth 20, wanna go more and invite a loss?
Why the fuck you wanna put out more proof you've writers block?
^^heh aight
I'll mince this tosser for Illtalic, coz its shit when you're burgled
You shouldn't have made it to this week so watch this mister re-murdered
^^pretty coo wordplay
This fucking nerd is lower class, you've worried geeks in the past
But now you're only spreading fear up the cheeks of your ass
^^heh
You're surpassed so no more frontin' I'll squash this pest over nuthin
I'll put this bitch in a car crusher... come watch compress the button
^^pretty coo
Now you're stuck for wit I sense it, sentenced to spitting like an idiot
So just be glad I haven't mentioned the pm you sent admitting it
^^hah
You're illiterate I'll break ya, got your words twisted and its blatant..
..that you ain't taking over bitch, you're just being overtaken
^^aight
But I ain't mistaken, you're plucky and you've no reason to duck me
Because there'll be a worthy winner... or you might even get lucky
^^heh
So just pray that I'll fall, this bore is mauled to the floor
At least try to put on a brave face.. coz yours says it all
^^didn't like the wording too much but aight
vs
Yea fucka.. so I got my verse done & it's about to get worse, son
i only gave u that 2nd seed cuz we've all seen the pics of ur 1st one!
^^lmao
I murk from all angles like a sniper and Com is a sure spot
aint it funny how the baby gets sick around the times ur not
^^haha
I'm for sure hott but I'll stop, what should I sodomize for
when your first non no-show feebs made u apologize for
^^lol again
I got an eye for talent... & Second Coming's roster is sick...
but ur the crew vomit - makin all that noise but still followin spit
^^kinda clever
I'm godly, ur ripped even ur bitch claims that i still do it best
so the only layd in your corner... would kill you in text
^^damn, clever again
Rediculing ur vet status no one knows ur skill. I had to laugh
Because your last round… well… should’ve been exactly that
^^aight but enough on this subject, hehe
Make you tag the mat, go ahead post the shit u recycle & bottle
And I’ll move aside… but only cuz the brackets are horizontal
^^aight
and you know i know that i'm back and I'm on a new mission
I'd name peeps that should have ur spot but u started a crew with'em
^^not that harsh
hope you're threw snifflin bout predictions, I fear you're a bitch
thought u were washed up. Then u made it clear.. ur career is on rinse
^^meh
I’m so fly and if I let the truth be told there’s no denying
That nothing you post is original… hell, even the quotes are lyin
^^hmm
I think MM took this with the first part of his verse, good wit, some hard personals. Just had more bars that stood out, while Com was only consistently decent imo, though had a few good bars too.
v/MM
wtfQuote:
Originally Posted by COM
This fucking nerd is lower class, you've worried geeks in the past
But now you're only spreading fear up the cheeks of your ass
^uhh there?
& don't you guys want people votin gon ur battles?...more than likely vaskez & i will be the only two voting
^lmao how the fuck is that a gay punch or even have a gay reference? proves you didn't even read my verse properly... i'm not beefing with vaskez vote.. it was was completly legit.. but you're not voting coz you've bitched about losing since the last round.. i'm not posting anymore, i hate it when it turns into a bitchfest .. sorry about this MM.. just delete all this shit if you like...
Mystery murdered this shit.
^My thoughts exactly, after reading Coms verse, I figured he'd win it cuz it was pretty solid, and Mystery's verse last week left alot to be desired, but damn,
Its obsurd this bitch is here, both nearly lost last weekend
But at least the dude I was facing.. was half fucking decent
Ya recent shits worth 20, wanna go more and invite a loss?
Why the fuck you wanna put out more proof you've writers block?
I'll mince this tosser for Illtalic, coz its shit when you're burgled
You shouldn't have made it to this week so watch this mister re-murdered
You're illiterate I'll break ya, got your words twisted and its blatant..
..that you ain't taking over bitch, you're just being overtaken
vs
I murk from all angles like a sniper and Com is a sure spot
aint it funny how the baby gets sick around the times ur not
I'm for sure hott but I'll stop, what should I sodomize for
when your first non no-show feebs made u apologize for
I got an eye for talent... & Second Coming's roster is sick...
but ur the crew vomit - makin all that noise but still followin spit
I'm godly, ur ripped even ur bitch claims that i still do it best
so the only layd in your corner... would kill you in text
Rediculing ur vet status no one knows ur skill. I had to laugh
Because your last round… well… should’ve been exactly that
and you know i know that i'm back and I'm on a new mission
I'd name peeps that should have ur spot but u started a crew with'em
hope you're threw snifflin bout predictions, I fear you're a bitch
thought u were washed up. Then u made it clear.. ur career is on rinse
Com came good, but Mystery dropped dope, this is the dopest ive seen from him since like his 5th week in the league.
v/ MM
I'll give you Jacent's vote because
of last round but I do think it was legit.
Fair??
Counts at 3-0??
well damn. not a bad effort by com, all things considered.. against most of the other heads here, would've prolly won.. but... i made the same mistake when i battled M~M, didn't come hard enough basically... and as usual, M~M tore this shit up. so yah... I can't give too much explanation... both yall my hombres... but M~M just went at com with personals...and did have some decent wit also
v/ M~M
i'd appreciate if yall both vote on my battle, slept on
You were never dope, you pre-writ you ran out of words then you split
Now you're back with aggression, but Spit's rewording ya shit
You're surpassed so no more frontin' I'll squash this pest over nuthin
I'll put this bitch in a car crusher... come watch compress the button
vs.
Yea fucka.. so I got my verse done & it's about to get worse, son
i only gave u that 2nd seed cuz we've all seen the pics of ur 1st one!
I got an eye for talent... & Second Coming's roster is sick...
but ur the crew vomit - makin all that noise but still followin spit
I'm godly, ur ripped even ur bitch claims that i still do it best
so the only layd in your corner... would kill you in text
Rediculing ur vet status no one knows ur skill. I had to laugh
Because your last round… well… should’ve been exactly that
Make you tag the mat, go ahead post the shit u recycle & bottle
And I’ll move aside… but only cuz the brackets are horizontal
and you know i know that i'm back and I'm on a new mission
I'd name peeps that should have ur spot but u started a crew with'em
yeah, Mystery took this one. i felt alot of shit in his verse, vomit line was dope, lay d line wasa cool, last round had nice wording. some good lines. Com dropped a bit bland to me, not really any super hard hitters.
vote- MM
Ya recent shits worth 20, wanna go more and invite a loss?
Why the fuck you wanna put out more proof you've writers block?
I'll mince this tosser for Illtalic, coz its shit when you're burgled
You shouldn't have made it to this week so watch this mister re-murdered
You're illiterate I'll break ya, got your words twisted and its blatant..
..that you ain't taking over bitch, you're just being overtaken
vs
I murk from all angles like a sniper and Com is a sure spot
aint it funny how the baby gets sick around the times ur not
I'm for sure hott but I'll stop, what should I sodomize for
when your first non no-show feebs made u apologize for
I got an eye for talent... & Second Coming's roster is sick...
but ur the crew vomit - makin all that noise but still followin spit
I'm godly, ur ripped even ur bitch claims that i still do it best
so the only layd in your corner... would kill you in text
this was nice but i thought M~M was more consistent.
v/ M~M
Yea, I expected more from COM but still a valent effort.
You were never dope, you pre-writ you ran out of words then you split
Now you're back with aggression, but Spit's rewording ya shit
Ya recent shits worth 20, wanna go more and invite a loss?
Why the fuck you wanna put out more proof you've writers block?
M~M just came nicer, some real dope shit in there.
Yea fucka.. so I got my verse done & it's about to get worse, son
i only gave u that 2nd seed cuz we've all seen the pics of ur 1st one!
I got an eye for talent... & Second Coming's roster is sick...
but ur the crew vomit - makin all that noise but still followin spit
Rediculing ur vet status no one knows ur skill. I had to laugh
Because your last round… well… should’ve been exactly that
Make you tag the mat, go ahead post the shit u recycle & bottle
And I’ll move aside… but only cuz the brackets are horizontal
and you know i know that i'm back and I'm on a new mission
I'd name peeps that should have ur spot but u started a crew with'em
Damn, hot.
v/M~M
You're illiterate I'll break ya, got your words twisted and its blatant..
..that you ain't taking over bitch, you're just being overtaken
But I ain't mistaken, you're plucky and you've no reason to duck me
Because there'll be a worthy winner... or you might even get lucky
well com the beginning of your verse was like, shit every single battler has tried to do eight million times and has been flipped on their opponent eight million more times. there was nothing hard about it. that fear line was like ... nasty. kinda grossed me out, everything else was jsut kinda like decent. i dono, the wording or the concept or something just didnt appeal to me. anyways
vs
I got an eye for talent... & Second Coming's roster is sick...
but ur the crew vomit - makin all that noise but still followin spit
Rediculing ur vet status no one knows ur skill. I had to laugh
Because your last round… well… should’ve been exactly that
Make you tag the mat, go ahead post the shit u recycle & bottle
And I’ll move aside… but only cuz the brackets are horizontal
MM came a lot more clever, the opener was witty but was a very weak punch. didnt do shit for shit, but then you dropped the first punches ive actually thought were DOPE in this round. the rest was like eh, but all of yer shit was pretty much more creative than com's verse besides his quoteables. i dono, pretty one sided to me
vMM
I advance. Good battle Com.