5 minutes to check
no bar count
10 minutes to post
no crew votes
we post at the same time.
this is a punchline battle not a general flow and wordplay style.
Printable View
5 minutes to check
no bar count
10 minutes to post
no crew votes
we post at the same time.
this is a punchline battle not a general flow and wordplay style.
YO! thanks, im checking in now, does this mean they will be only voting on punchlines?
yes it does from this moment now we got ten minutes if you dont like the punchline idea post whatever and i'll edit that out for you.good luck
you ready? i got mine posting in the next minute. okay?
Me versus you to even challenge is like full blown aids…there’s no hope
My rhyme inflict damage leaving Evil Jester to just a Bad Joke.
You barely hit puberty but get on the site and front like you hard,
Wait till your pubes set, you aint here to battle just jerk off to your avatar.
I mean don’t lie victory is something I can’t be denied, act a thug, why?
Your 14 you aint even got your learners permit to Ryde or Die.
Just forfeit, got many dimes but you’re a tax write off not even and expenditure,
You coming up short like miniatures,
This takes no thought Barney even had to ghost write your signature.
This a miss match not even competition, let me define what I mean
We could battle for ages and I’d still win 25 to 14.
I cant take you serious everything about you is hokey
I mean kid you battled feeding off lines and still lost to SMOKEY.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=260734
sorry for that maybe below the belt kid but atleast it’s true
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=261010
here now you can see how I’m addressing you.
Yo
This Guy is good, But damn im better, ill kick your ass all over the shop, you want it in a letter?
im the unstoppable, and the hip-hoppable, im also abominable, but you aint even admittable
Every one see's you, but no-one believes in you, your an ugly motherfucker with no-one to screw, you may hate me for it, but its damn true
i dont know why you fretting about it, you aint got no money to sue!
No house to live in, no people to speak to, if only they knew what kind of women you persue
Big ones, Fat ones, You think it doesent matter, a small guy like you should be after someone fitter, you even once raped, your own baby-sitter
she was only 12 years old and you werent no older.
But no-one even cares, about you, you own mother even shoved your head down the loo, she wanted to show you what a shit you've turned into, can't you even put together two and two?
Thats right, my friend, your a fucking loser, you dont even look old enough to be a boozer, you aint got enough money to be a drug user, someone ought to run you down, with your own beat up cruiser.
Bitch. :spank:
sorry i was late posting, it wasnt my fault, now were uppin for votes
my vote goes to AGH, nothin personal, his was jus better
yyou have to vote on the poll or it dont count...and please explain your vote or it won't count
im too tired to rate each bar now, ill drop my vote in tomorrow. Night
Me versus you to even challenge is like full blown aids…there’s no hope
My rhyme inflict damage leaving Evil Jester to just a Bad Joke.
&
I cant take you serious everything about you is hokey
I mean kid you battled feeding off lines and still lost to SMOKEY.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=260734
sorry for that maybe below the belt kid but atleast it’s true
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=261010
here now you can see how I’m addressing you.
versus..
This Guy is good, But damn im better, ill kick your ass all over the shop, you want it in a letter?
im the unstoppable, and the hip-hoppable, im also abominable, but you aint even admittable
overall/=This battle was 1 sided...very much...Cuz Evil had no punches...or it was his structure that kill'd it...Im sorry,but thats fact...DQ my vote if you want to..But its true.
v/=AGHZBAKWERDZ
Lol, looks like im gonna lose,but maybe not, we will have to see..
Uppin man, come on, havent had a post on this in 5 hours
upping this for votes damn this old.......................
upping this .................................................. ......
Me versus you to even challenge is like full blown aids…there’s no hope
My rhyme inflict damage leaving Evil Jester to just a Bad Joke.
nice opener, nice personal
You barely hit puberty but get on the site and front like you hard,
Wait till your pubes set, you aint here to battle just jerk off to your avatar.
first line ok, i thought the second one was a bit weak, could have hit harder.
I mean don’t lie victory is something I can’t be denied, act a thug, why?
Your 14 you aint even got your learners permit to Ryde or Die.
wasnt really feeling them lines..
Just forfeit, got many dimes but you’re a tax write off not even and expenditure,
You coming up short like miniatures,
This takes no thought Barney even had to ghost write your signature.
nice wordplay on first line, second line is a bit played, nice personal finisher
This a miss match not even competition, let me define what I mean
We could battle for ages and I’d still win 25 to 14.
nice play on the ages there. but not really a hard hitting line.
I cant take you serious everything about you is hokey
I mean kid you battled feeding off lines and still lost to SMOKEY
nice finisher, nice personal
verdict: ok battle, would have like to see more multi's in there, overall some nice lines but a bit weak.
This Guy is good, But damn im better, ill kick your ass all over the shop, you want it in a letter?
this could have hit alot harder, he could have been 'owned like a shop sweater' or something better, cos the second line didnt really hit
im the unstoppable, and the hip-hoppable, im also abominable, but you aint even admittable
bit weak, nice break from the normal rhyming style tho.. not really a punch
Every one see's you, but no-one believes in you, your an ugly motherfucker with no-one to screw, you may hate me for it, but its damn true
simple keystyle
i dont know why you fretting about it, you aint got no money to sue!
weak line
No house to live in, no people to speak to, if only they knew what kind of women you persue
Big ones, Fat ones, You think it doesent matter, a small guy like you should be after someone fitter, you even once raped, your own baby-sitter
is this a personal, its not really a hit, i would probably rape my babysitter too!
she was only 12 years old and you werent no older.
But no-one even cares, about you, you own mother even shoved your head down the loo
that line is the line which tells me lyrically you could never win this battle
, she wanted to show you what a shit you've turned into, can't you even put together two and two?
Thats right, my friend, your a fucking loser, you dont even look old enough to be a boozer, you aint got enough money to be a drug user, someone ought to run you down, with your own beat up cruiser.
basic, not hit
overall: basic keystyles, no real hits or personals, not multi's no wordplay,
vote: AGHZBAKWERDZ