10 or More Lines
Due in 30 mins
After Check in.
G'Luck
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10 or More Lines
Due in 30 mins
After Check in.
G'Luck
check b4 verses - make dat 40min - and im down wit it
Whatever you want lil nig' Check.
hey when u guys gonna battle man im just tryin to get 100 post good luck both of u
yea yea nigga check - i thought u ran away n shit - (there's a personal 4 u)
We dont give a Fucking fuck! leave homo.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=260927
show me some love
That was dirreted to that noob^
lol - imma chec dat shit out lata yo - but post in a battle thread if u aint battlein or votin - ull get banned for dat shit
dont post* - i meant to say, but neway - back to biz...40min dawg
Worthless scum is whatcha is heres a tip quit rappin' man, stop it
I would give ya shit to sell, but you still wouldn't get tae wealthy profit*
Ya see im not bein' mean when i say this but im tossin' ya a L, Fetch
And fuck, i should take you'r sig cause the real correction is im the Best**
Text is not best for you switch to Topical, but fuck you lack at that too
S'why the shit you layed out in the OM forum aint gettin' no Love Boo
I would say you won ya battle by D/r's but nah that isnt very Coo'
Cause the last time i checked i saw ya D'rs Dick ride right off of YOU.
10 lines is enough to beat ya kid, my punches will leave ya thinkin'
And I'll just sit right at my Computer watchng how Ya punches aint Hittin'
*-Tae i made mean a
**-his sig says hes the best
There ya go, kid
The grim reaper wanna see Tae-P die -
so watch...as 16 lines take out 85/
real quick - let me dig in this kid - splittin his wig -
leave him lookin like the nig in his sig/
ya no prob(lem) - so off - ya flow missin the mark -
no heart - so soft - u couldnt win if i lost/
Nigga u couldnt spit sick wit a fever -
Grim or dominator... - no - ya not either/
Please ya - no reaper -
n if u was.........
then i'd squeeze the - millimeter/
heat ya - leave ya - leakin - litaz(liters)-
.. turn ya fuckin hoody to a beater*/
so suck a dick - u aint seein me prick -
this nigga couldnt fuck wit me if we was g'in a bitch/
im slayin this cat - sparrin wit tae? - brace for the mat -
my punches straight dick - bitch - lay on ya back/
*the grim reaper wears a black hoody
fuck - niggaz already pm'in me about the last line sooooooooo
last line explanation for u slo cats
follow me...
straight dick meaning hard - hard punches make a nigga lay on his back - n i was sayin take it like a bitch take dick - especially on her back - my favorite position - got it - good - tae uppin 1
.1.
nice battle
flow- Tae
meta- Tae
structure- couldnt decide
wordplay- Tae
punches-Tae
V /Tae
even though Tae won in all catgeories i still dont believe Grim was far behind. u not bad kid, just get some mo practice and try not rhyming easy words like Boo and You. those rhymes r just fillers.
uppn 2............................................
Get the Fuck outta here with those votes.
.2.
3rd up - can i geta som votes pleez...............
Grim had good structure....but flow was all tae...you need to work on ya hard punches tho...but you got tha flow and wordplay down.....grim ya verse was weak as hell....good structure....but weak verse
grim-5/10
tae-7.4/10
v.tae for an all around better verse
fqwubfWEIOUYGFWEUGB
OH SHIT, V/ - Grim son.
im not a ass but damn............can u xplain ya vote next time
Dude, look at you'r votes their no good either.
.3.
this was a good battle . structure went to grim
but punches and flow went to tae profit.
vote .. tae profit.
Structure - Grim
Flow - Tae
Punches - Tae
The rest was tied for me.
Vote - Tae ..Grim you did good, just a little rough around the edges.
Hit my text battle up in my sig. :2thumb:
grim killed his weak verse with actual punches and way beta structure really nuthin else to say lol......jus tae elevate on ur punches and make ur lines even..elevate
v/grim (beta verse)
~1~
aight.........................uppn 4..............
wtf.................last Up.................can We Get Sum Votes, Ill Vote On Ya Shyt
wow Tae got some dickriders
newayz
v-grim better evrything
Upp .4. cmon peeps. Leave links And i'll get at em'
yo yo yo sons chill the fuck out.....all of your words gay.....look at me...in elementary and kissing your moms.....lets see if you can beat this!!!!!!!
JO LISTEN
YOU HAVE A PICTURE OF A PHAT ASS CAR
YOU WISH YOU WERE IN THAT CAR
YOU ARE GONNA BE JEALOUS WHEN YOU SEE ME DRIVE BY IN THAT CAR
YOU DON’T HAVE A RED CENT
AND YOU TRYING TO BE LIKE 50 CENT
YOU ONLY HAVE 6 SHIRTS IN YOUR CLOSET
THAT ARE FROM THE ONE DOLLARS OUTLET
YOU WISH YOU WAS LIKE ME
THAT’S WHY YOU HATE ME
AND ENVY ME
BUT IM STAYING HERE SO YOU CAN SUFFER MORE
TILL YOU GO CRAZY AND CANT CONTROLET NO MORE
TILL YOU WANNA DIE
TO THIS WORLD YOU WANNA SAY BYE
YOU WILL CRY
AND EVEN TRY TO COMMIT SUICIDE
TILL YOU CUT YOUR VEINS
AND DIE OF TO MUCH PAIN
OR BLEAD TO DEATH
YOU KNOW MY RHYMES TO HARD FOR YOU AND THEY GONNA LEAVE YOU DEAF....
<---------BABY FACE KILLA--------->
You suck^
Die slowly.
uppin for these emcees............................
turn ya fuckin hoody to a beater*/
so suck a dick - u aint seein me prick -
this nigga couldnt fuck wit me if we was g'in a bitch/
im slayin this cat - sparrin wit tae? - brace for the mat -
my punches straight dick - bitch - lay on ya back
^^Dopeness^^^
{vs}
Worthless scum is whatcha is heres a tip quit rappin' man, stop it
I would give ya shit to sell, but you still wouldn't get tae wealthy profit
Punches:T
Personals:ehh (tie)
Flow:Grim
Wordplay:Grim
Sctru:Grim
Overall:Tae my vote stronger punches grim ya shit was played some of it didnt even make sense or it was basic