Courage

I’m sampling the chorus from ‘Soldier Like Me’ by 2pac for this song

I betcha thats how I got something you aint got, that's called courage
It don't come from no liquor bottle, it aint scotch, it's not bourbon
I don't walk around like no G, cuz that aint me, I'm not that person
I don't try to act like you do, cuz that aint you, you just burpin

You think you challenging me will start Code Red
It didn’t, I’ll jus respond with something I wrote-ed
Your Stan and I’m Slim, you gon do some crazy shit
I’ll be too busy, and then you’ll drive off of a bridge
With your boyfriend in your trunk, he’s only a kid
You want to battle me, but I don’t take advantage
Of little puffs that start every line with the same word
RED, damn, that was shit; it was like a lame turd
I gave you my opinion, and you want to battle me
You tried to diss me, and now it’s so sad to see
That you say you’re 16, but you were born jus before me
Faggot, you 15, I’ll break your wrists and spleen
Jus for tryna say that you a year older, you aint 16
When I find you, I’ma fuckin light you up with gasoline
And hav your boyfriend jack you off with vasoline
Cos my ass is mean, yo Em, hit it

I betcha thats how I got something you aint got, that's called courage
It don't come from no liquor bottle, it aint scotch, it's not bourbon
I don't walk around like no G, cuz that aint me, I'm not that person
I don't try to act like you do, cuz that aint you, you just burpin

Before you try to say it, this ain’t really dissin him, I’m not lyin
It’s jus warnin him that I can drop good stuff when I’m not tryin
But when I do try I come out with some stuff like Eminem
Dude, I’ll nick all your rhymes and start selling them
To some wack ass muthafuckas and I’ll start telling them
To burn them like firewood to give them some heat
Cos that’s all your stuffs good for, but I’m elite
Even when I’m half asleep I drop bombs that make you weep
Yeah, I drop bombs like I’m in Iraq or Afghanistan
As if I’m tryin to find terrorists like Osama or Saddam
Even though he’s already been caught, by the Americans
These dumb fucks confirm he’s dead or alive, fuckin pelicans
Cos I don’t know what else rhymes with the Americans
So anyway…don’t fuck with me cos I got Soldiers
In the Ghetto, and Hostile Minds, that will break your shoulders
And we all got Courage

I betcha thats how I got something you aint got, that's called courage
It don't come from no liquor bottle, it aint scotch, it's not bourbon
I don't walk around like no G, cuz that aint me, I'm not that person
I don't try to act like you do, cuz that aint you, you just burpin

links r in my sig
chorus is from 'Soldier Like Me' by 2pac ft Eminem
peace

leave links and i'll hit up ure drops

a gd drop and it flowed well and da rhymin was there aswell. keep workin at it and produce more gd dope drop

This was a nice drop, I like how u flow it......
Tha hook is ight..........Keep elevatein and ima do tha same........

Holla

uppin

uppin

don't get me wrong, i'm not hating......
but outta all the disses i've seen, this is one of the weakest
i expected much better from u dawg
maybe u are...just keep droppin more and i'll leave more feed
PEACE

good drop i was feeling the flow and ryhme scheme i give you 8/10

thnx
uppin

To Me It Started Real Slow But Picked Up Way To Simple An Intro And It Seamed Forced But As It Progressed It Got Better And Im Feeling It

pretty tite flow yo fosho.. plenty of forward movement.. i wasnt really feelin the hook idea too much tho.. maybe be better in audio sense.... consistancy of verse was all good.. had sum decent multies.. keep expanding on them.. its all good....
good character was put into this verse

stay @

thnx uppityuppp

Just gna leave feedback same way you left it for me :D

Sorry to tell you this mate, comparing yourself to Eminem... one of the best rappers in the world... not a good idea... It's like a guy who can do kick ups (English football analagy) comparing himself to Thierry Henry or Zidane...
flow ws good mostly throughout
rhymin ws simple
structure ws old... I.E gasoline and vaseline...
content was like every other G unit wannabe on this site's content... got to find your own voice and style...

Elevate...

:2thumb:

nice concept and wordage. Enjoyed reading throughout completely. Keep this work up

^^G Unit wannabe? - i aint likin gunit
i shit at kickups, i can only do 50-60 at the most
i didnt compare myself to eminem - other ppl said one of my pieces was the same style to his
but thnx for leavin feedback how i like it - to the point, without a load of crap to read to find out wot u need to wrk on

note to terry:
comparin yourself to Dr. Dre/Snoop Dogg...not good move...they are dope mothafuckas, and u jus a wrong fatherfucker...ure sig is bitten really

uppin

its an english "tongue in cheek" joke... come on would I seriously compare myself to Dr. Dre and then go on about bummin' someone? :S

This website is all about people pretendin to be like G units... I just log on to see what its all about... but all I can find is people with nothing better to do than to talk themselves up... Just like G Unit... I don't really mean any offence I just don't get why people do it... Maybe you could explain it... :)

jus pm it to me nxt time m8
dont want my threads clogged up