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Salvation - "Sweat, Dirt, And Blood"
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this is some brand new old unheard shit! basically. wrote this way back when i was bored. on the new equipment so the quality is there. nonetheless, enjoy.
-salvation
Feelin` the beat. I`m diggin` this shit homie. Feelin` the openin` line of the hook. That shit was sick. Feelin` the whole hook actually lol. Dope track son. Keep doin` ur thing.
yo... this is sexy... sticky this now.
pretty nice track, hot beat, nice lyrics...
flow could still use some polishing... still nice tho.
the only thing i still say about you is... you never change your delivery... everytime i hear you you deliver your shit in the same way... it makes it sound like your reading, and its not coming out naturally... with time i beleive you'll see what i'm talking about. It takes growth to fix that, and self-realization.
^ I think his delivery/voice/presence is sexy. :love:
I've heard this beat before. I'm diggin the hook. Flow is nice. Quality is nice, it sounds worse to me then before though, iunno why. Lyrics are niiiice. Good for a track like this. I love your rhyme scheme. Skeet skeet.
Nice shit man.
kain i know exactly what youre saying. i figure it'll just come in time. it took about 10 months just to establish my voice when it just started, i try things, but i figure if i just let time do its part that shit should fall in place eventually. thanks for the honesty, you know i respect your opinion. thanks nah, av, and vibe. paaaaaaayce
This is your best track as of yet. This is fucking dope.
I love it.
wow
pure dopeness
this is on my ipod
beat is sick, great flow.
overall, dope shit. good lryics
theres not much other shit i can say, its just sick.
Word. Nice track. I actually downloaded it.
yo this shit is ill fa real yo.. The beat is hot and I think you rode the beat nicely. The delivery is the same every one song but its coo tho..I like the concept to this song and the lyrics and shit it got a nice feel to it fa real man keep doin you...
salv... this concise, im sure you remember.. hit me up on aim..
aim = codenameasaph
nice track, obviously
thanks for replies.
welp, back to drinking.
*saved to computer*
Heard the beat but its still tight...chorus its tight..feelin it...FLow is dope cant find a fautl in it.. lyrics are on point They really seem to Go wit the beat and make the song dope as fuck.(s'wy i'm keepin it :D)..
Lil bit short but still incredible song...nvr seem to dissapoint me sal..keep it up
Thanks DVS... Appreciate it. I'll hit your shit up tomorrow when I'm sober.
i could mix ya shit if u want.
its a good song but the quality is hurting it
The beat is Nice as Fuck..The Voice is hittin hard..the concept is on point like Whoa..matches the beat well..
"I've read the Bible,Seen Tha Pain in Genesis.
Im scared,yet Ta Find The Key ta break In Heaven with!"
Dope line..
The Hook is Crazy!!
I'll only Bow ta tha man that gave me life!
Dope Song,Tha quality sounds sorta scratchy,but dope..Imma Bump this were Im at..
no idea whats up with the quality, havent heard any other complaints unless soundclick fucked it up somehow. nonetheless, thanks for the replies, they're appreciated.
Mix my shit!Quote:
Originally Posted by dragonangelunicorn
Mix my shit!
i loved the track...heavy hittin from start to finish
keep spittin
plz hit this up
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...7&page=1&pp=15
you are an idiotQuote:
Originally Posted by M.C. Shadow 13
Salvations is a FUGGIN FAGGOT...
nigger we need to collab
doooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooope. feeling it. nice one.
word..this shit was off the chain.. i gotta say i like ya flow alot.. real articulate.. gotta say good job here.. chorus was tight.. good quality to.. to me the mixing was pretty dope.. really nice track..
-like the beat
-like the flow
-delivery is really nice
a thoughtful track
imma give your other songs a peep =)
yeah, you mixed good delivery with intelligent rhymes....def. got skills
is this nigga ever not on the top? i mean i aint been here in a minute but seems he just sits up top, i mean homie nice but mix it up ya'll gotta have some other nice heads?
anyways.. beat is pretty hot i feelin it more then i felt i would as it opened up, your voice sounds different then last times i remember peepin you, maybe your mic fallin off?? sound more muffled i feel, i dunno, ya flow is pretty nice though you always been smooth with it, ya delivery pretty good, lyrics is good i like the chorus, only complaint is im not a huge fan of your voice and how you deliver it, regardless i give props where they do, thats just my personal input after the feedback, stay up homie keep doin ya thing hit me back
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=262484
i downloaded it nice.
deep shyt nigga, like the thought in this n the beat, but as every1 else has said, the quality really killed it - get Pro Tools - free download of old, but clear version on internet
This is the type of shit I like to hear from you sal. This was classic
sal v n just raw. Nice track. I loved the hook.
appreciate the honesty, Jayoo .. however, in the past 3 months or so ive dropped maybe 4 tracks and this is the second one that's been up on top, so, i'm not sure where thatscoming from.
thanks for allt he honesty, though
-sal
this tracks hot.. flow cool.. delivery cool.... feelin the hook the most on this track.... i aint heard much from u doggy... but im def impressed wit this shit
Damn i'm feelin da first verse it's soo true i can relate to it, i'm feelin yo delivery and voice presnce, da hook is good this track is pretty sick
8.3/10 one of da better tracks i heard on rapbattles
listening: i like the beat. i guess everyone else above sums it up. Its a good song. It has meaning which is always important, the quality is there, the skill is there. Tight drop.
Alright, listening..
The beat is dope as hell.. the quality is nice.. Hook is sick as hell.. the whole thing just, works like cheese.. for real. I'm vibing with the flow and delivery.. it sounds pretty ill on the beat. Overall, I thought this track was real nice. Good job.
You sounds like a mix between Nimrod and DZK.
Nice flow.
Beat is pretty cool.
'only work for a man if his hands are black'.
Can you spell R-A-C-I-S-M?
The hook is good too, reminds me of the song 'Bow Down and Pray'.
-The King
^^ word I like this shit..props..
"I'll only work for a man if his hands are black
From sweat, and dirt, and blood, from workin' himself"
Listen closer, lol.
Thanks for replies.
-Sal
The beat is good so it can show ur emotion more...The lyrics are good and the flow is on point...The chorus is pretty tight, u kinda got a mixed voice style of John Cena and Proof...The song was a lil short but it was worth a listen...I think everything was done right, there was no major flaws or anything with something to loud or to low....GOod shit
hell yea