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Backstabber
[Announcer] “There is a man on the loose, repeat, there is a man on the loose…he’s armed with a knife…watch your backs”
Someone’s jus broke out, he’s on the loose
Some stabber, he won’t call a truce
He used to be your best friend, till he sold your raps
Now the police telling you to guard your backs
There’s a wack rapper, a back stabber
On the run, he sounds much crapper
Than Fred Durst and Everlast together
On a track called lovin Whitey for ever
But back to the criminal mastermind
He ain’t strong enough to last the time
To escape the police search around the streets
Loses games, nicks stuff, he was playin for keeps
And he lost, and now the police have lost him
They lookin in Queens while he’s in Boston
I’m goin out to find him, drop some rhymes to blind him
Then take him into the police, so I gotta occupy him
Keep him concentratin enough so they can trial him
So I’m lookin round the streets where he was playin for keeps
See his footprints, and follow them to an alleyway
But there’s nothing there, he must’ve got away
I hear a voice behind me; feel a pain in my back
It’s the backstabber, he stabbed me, I’m dyin…crap
[Announcer] “He has been seen, he is powerful with your backs turned…he is in Boston…if he threatens Benzino…don’t worry…that’s normal behaviour…watch your backs
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nice work. i enjoyed that one. Will you hear my first audio freestyle? its not great, but it was 4 in the morning.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=442505
just pm me if you want to tell me anything about it...
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thats was funny u always dissen benzino and Durst ur shit is fun to read
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I thought eminems version of a backstabber was better personally. but still this was a good read. the flow seemed to be a little off, and the multis were seeming like they were TRYING to be used but just were never thrown in. the structure was even for the most part. The overall piece was..Meh, i guess haha. Keep droppin, constructin topics, and just keep it raw.
-Peace.
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thnx for the feed...i was tryin my best to not bit from backstabber - but if i ever do Biterphobia...
not my usual style of om
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hey diss was a pretty good drop homie..topic was interesting and the rhymes you had were good same with the good multies.....flow was smooth all through and even struuctre as well.....vocab was ok....imagery was iight.....ovwerall this was good...keep it up..peace
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kinda basic....u coulda stretch the bars a lil...ya flow was choppy on some points...but this was well thought out an done..painted da image well...storyline board kinda feel..hit us up with some mutlis
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that drop is good its funny wiv dissin the limp biscuit arshole fred durst and takin a punch benzino asweel. the flow was very good and it was easy 2 understand the topic u ad chosen in the drop. the drop is awesome. keep@it
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muthafucka benzino
fuck biscuit [bizkit]
im barely dissin them
thnx for the feed yall
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benzino and biscuit were born 2 waste ppl time and try 2 fuck their heads up wiv ya shit. no probs inst1gator
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i wasnt really feeling this peace it could of been better if you used some multies and a better structure topic was played but other than that it was ight
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