10-Unlimited Linez(Going 10)
House Rulez...................
.......................Blind Spit
Due In 1 Hour After Check
Dont Prewrite Herbness.....
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10-Unlimited Linez(Going 10)
House Rulez...................
.......................Blind Spit
Due In 1 Hour After Check
Dont Prewrite Herbness.....
prewrite herbness?......
Just Dont Come In The Battle Wit Writtinz............
yeah...kk...this is my chec
yo breez vote on my battle against heres my rap plz yo thx
U Respectable?, Naw Kid, Beatin Me Ur Crazy, Dis Dood Aint Incredible
U Shoulda Stuck 2 Top-Pickles Like Crazy Gluing Da Peak On Vegetables*
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Im Blindin' Dis Bitch, Mainly Cuz My Punchez Are Mad Grimey Wit Hits
Ya Verse Is Like AWhoopi Cusion, Jus A Funny Way 2 Remind Me Of Shit
Teach U To Stop Bein A Bitch Round Da Forums Afta U Feel Da Incideration
Pre-written Or Not, U Still Gettin Whipped Up Like Smarty Jones Rehabliltation
Lol, Why Battle U, U Suck, Cuz In All Ur Battles Theres Suttin U Alwayz Lack
Becuz I Knew Theres No Way Ur A Vet When Even Ur Letterz Are Outta Wack**
Quit Sentimental Lyricals, Stop Ya Mentals, Ur Style Doesn’t Sell Nuttin Like Nore
Battelin 4 Respect vs D? Ur Finishing Behind Like Kids Racin Huskys On Tha 40
*Peep Thread
**Peep Name
U Respectable?, Naw Kid, Beatin Me Ur Crazy, Dis Dood Aint Incredible
U Shoulda Stuck 2 Top-Pickles Like Crazy Gluing Da Peak On Vegetables*
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Im Blindin' Dis Bitch, Mainly Cuz My Punchez Are Mad Grimey Wit Hits
Ya Verse Is Like AWhoopi Cusion, Jus A Funny Way 2 Remind Me Of Shit
Teach U To Stop Bein A Bitch Round Da Forums Afta U Feel Da Incideration
Pre-written Or Not, U Still Gettin Whipped Up Like Smarty Jones Rehabliltation
Lol, Why Battle U, U Suck, Cuz In All Ur Battles Theres Suttin U Alwayz Lack
Becuz I Knew Theres No Way Ur A Vet When Even Ur Letterz Are Outta Wack**
Quit Sentimental Lyricals, Stop Ya Mentals, Ur Style Doesn’t Sell Nuttin Like Nore
Battelin 4 Respect vs D? Ur Finishing Behind Like Kids Racin Huskys On Tha 40
*Peep Thread
**Peep Name
listenin to ya rhymes, is like watchin me take a shit
you producin flow, but you could never make a hit
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im tryna pay attention, but DAMN!!! homie you suck
if you cant win with skill, you sure as hell cant with luck
you flows like a hydrant, but its bein cut off
my flow is amazing, suck ya in like a trough
DAMN!!! im choppin you up, and its to perfection
im stealin this battle, like i do an interception
you jus jail bait, you always bendin over for soap
n you a freestyle battler, who jus got no hope
ya grabbin the rope, but homie ya grips to weak
.....hold on a minute....i gotta take a leak.......
................................................OK
Im back, n i realized my penis produces a better flow
cuz at least when im pissin, people like the show
you a wack MC, you more like a toy puppet
no one votin ya battles, you keep tellin'em to Upp it
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you that tv channel, that nobody really like to watch
HOMIE, IM UP HERE, could ya stop starin at my crotch..
Blah..whatever..weak...and quick.....
i vote breez better every thing
damn- elevate more work on yo structure no hate and every1 needs to elevate
aliiighttt uppin thisss ^^^^^1
Flow: rEEz
Structure: Tie (both wern't too good...noh8)
Punches: rEEz
Personals: rEEz
VERDICT: My vote is fa b_rEEz
nah, for real, yall gotta fix ya structure, and hit harder wit punches...~1~
ADVICE: Whereva ya name is missin in the cats, get it there....lol
str8 battle........
Flow/ Beez
Punches/ both
Structure/ beez
Personals/ beez
Vocab/ Damn
v/ beez
Flow: rEEz
Structure: Tie (both wern't too good...noh8)
Punches: rEEz
Personals: rEEz
VERDICT: My vote is fa b_rEEz
nah, for real, yall gotta fix ya structure, and hit harder wit punches...
4 real...and otha cat wasnt so bad either but he cud elevate on those ,,,,,,,lines it makes it sound more stretched than it is
you a wack MC, you more like a toy puppet
no one votin ya battles, you keep tellin'em to Upp it
vs
nothing
bunch of bland generic punches by damn, werent directed at all
v/ b.reeze
Quote:
Originally Posted by ($topical heat$)
that aint a vote
Quote:
Originally Posted by Hand of God
DQ.... learn to vote kid
DQ, read the rules.Quote:
Originally Posted by SIX6
Uppin this...^^^^ 2
Lets GooOO ^^^^^^^^^^^ 3 ^^^^^^^^^^^^
Aight basically b_reez had more punches than dman, he had a btter flow and better rhymes, V/B_Reez
^^^ DQ....not explained..he didnt vote anyway
yo uppin for my homie b_reez
multies-incred
flow-incred
structure-b reez
punches-incred
multies-incred
vote-incred..merked it
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multies-pedi
flow-pedi
structure-b reez
punches-pedi
multies-pedi
vote-pedi..merked it
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^^^ DQ....explain it dawg
yo queen style dq free posting
shes a Mod topical...
so vote...and explain....
or dont vote...and leave
why the fuck shoud i..do you?,,nobody else sure does so fuck all ya'll
muppets this how i vote from now on..i used to give great feedback belive me but not no more..i cant poll for some reason anyway,.. haps not enuff votes.. i could poll with my alias.. as i got over 1000 posts
goodbye fuckers
Dq Over Upping........b_rEEz Upped 6 Timez And Topical Heat Upped For Him So Over Up
stop free posting bullshit in this thread...
and yeah..when i drop a vote..i leave LOTS of feedback..so my homies know what to work on...fuckin herb
yea well you sure dont leave no decnt feedback unless its you r homie do you you bullshittin foo.. plus you only vote for your homies..your votes are bullshit bitch..
hands down he B REEZ takes it, i like his better in every way.Quote:
Originally Posted by b_rEEz
i think damm took this cat...yall think reez got him..
thats a joke..he had no creativty or nothing...i vote damm
Opener=breez, both was week, but that crazy glue vegatables line
naawwww....lmao not in a gud way
Rhyme scheme=damn, elevated scheme, breez to simple
Flo=tie, both had some sharp transitions,
Vocab=none really, wtf is incideration?
Multiz=none
Wordplay=damn, had more than breez
Metaz=breez, 1 vs damn none
Similies=breez,had 3 or 4, damn maybe 1
Diss=breez, the uppit line,and the crotch line, from breez the whoopi
cusion line
Personals=breez, used damn in his verse,weak nameflip, but damn cud
of dropped his verse on anyone...
Punches=none, wasnt feelin any
Complexity=damn, see potential, breez to simple
Closer=breez, set up was bad,but had some humour, meta, diss
close battle, breez got more cats,though i like damn style better
dont think i can justify givin the win to dam...overall breez more
consistant...more cats...stay up dam...no hate...both yall elevate
this was a murder somebody please call the police on breez lmao
Flow: rEEz
Structure: breez (wasnt very good but better then his)
Punches: rEEz
Personals: rEEz
v/breez no hate need i say more
v/ damn for having some nice vocab and dope punches and glahfgusonjgkrdfijyhodrtyhc
i vote breez better every thing
damn- elevate more work on yo structure no hate and every1 needs to elevate
nothin else to be said ^^^took the words right outta my mouth
v/breez
my bad already posted on here sorry for that ya'll
damn had some aight punches in da beginning of his verse and then it got worse and started laking on da punches and they got weaker......it seemed like damn had tryed to attempt too many multies.....wasnt feeling dat at all.......breez had betta punches and they hit a lot harder....his opener buried da hatchet.......he had betta lyrics and a little bit betta verse but it was a lil close.......breez didnt kill damn.....it jus coulda been betta......but gets ma vote.
vote/ breeze
peep ma beat and reply below here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...wpost&t=258883
pnches-damn
flow-tie
wordplay-?
strycture-b reez
complexity-damn
rhyme quality-damn
creativity-damn
overall-damn
breez need to elevate those basic rhymes
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