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LLL Jr. Week 4
Yup season has been going well recently
no showers each week let this down though but dont worry there gone
just keep doing what you do
belts are introduced this week...if you dont have a match up for a belt
then up your fuckin game
normal rules check by wednesday drop by friday
no fuckin around
Good luck :2thumb:
12.
You're wack as fuck, and I don't see how you're failin to die
When you're in more of a frenzy then what Australia's like
Nothing on me, while I'm jacking the win you'll be beating off
I'm not in a sushi bar.. but I have no problem eating RAWW
It's simple.. we both love hip hop and just target our stay
But why'd you let acne drop all the Pac marks on your face
No chance to beat me.. I'm dope and nobody's heard of you
And you'll be taking the L, aw.. more then mass murderers do
You should just sign out.. fuck it, Aines.. just ban this gay
Cause people only cheer RAWW at junior high band parades
Dude just makes shit up.. and he ain't even the best herb
RAWW ain't a word,
So I'll just take one of the W's and pin it on my record
Check bitch
Lmao @ putting me on your "Shit List." You better post early, queerboy.
I'll edit this post with my links.
Its official Daedal is da hypocritical textural miracle
Bitting repeating other peoples material sam stick to cereal
RAWW ain’t a word? Ain’t ain’t a word edit ya verse
U suck at rapping and English teaching u wannab nerd
Dude’s name should b Daejavoo I reminisce 2 da rhymes he do
Da last fool used dat line didn’t get a “W” so how r u gone 2
This bitch make no since bet hit pull his pants down to piss
Assed out when he spit Mr.Goodwrench fix ya wac raps in a zip
Maybe it me or maybe it maybline but this emcee is wearing
Make-up like a drag queen wit his battle records not showing
let’s feed Polly a trisket 2 get him off Games Ova’s dick quick
Thks fo playing game of death he won a one-way trip to my shit list
You're wack as fuck, and I don't see how you're failin to die
When you're in more of a frenzy then what Australia's like
eh
Nothing on me, while I'm jacking the win you'll be beating off
I'm not in a sushi bar.. but I have no problem eating RAWW
eh
It's simple.. we both love hip hop and just target our stay
But why'd you let acne drop all the Pac marks on your face
no
No chance to beat me.. I'm dope and nobody's heard of you
And you'll be taking the L, aw.. more then mass murderers do
eh
You should just sign out.. fuck it, Aines.. just ban this gay
Cause people only cheer RAWW at junior high band parades
no
Dude just makes shit up.. and he ain't even the best herb
RAWW ain't a word,
So I'll just take one of the W's and pin it on my record
ok closer
vs
Its official Daedal is da hypocritical textural miracle
Bitting repeating other peoples material sam stick to cereal
no
RAWW ain’t a word? Ain’t ain’t a word edit ya verse
U suck at rapping and English teaching u wannab nerd
weak
Dude’s name should b Daejavoo I reminisce 2 da rhymes he do
Da last fool used dat line didn’t get a “W” so how r u gone 2
no
This bitch make no since bet hit pull his pants down to piss
Assed out when he spit Mr.Goodwrench fix ya wac raps in a zip
weak
Maybe it me or maybe it maybline but this emcee is wearing
Make-up like a drag queen wit his battle records not showing
no
let’s feed Polly a trisket 2 get him off Games Ova’s dick quick
Thks fo playing game of death he won a one-way trip to my shit list
weak
daedal u came cool flow was iight punches were cool but some werent hittin creativity was iight too overall decent shit.raww u came wit basic stuff that were too weak and some i werent feelin at all for ex. that goodwrench line random as hell.raww elevate this is a league not FL drop harder.vote daedal
I feel like u don't get alot of the shit I was saying but ne waz thanks fo voting one.Quote:
Originally Posted by Grand Champ
v/d..will explain in this weeks mag. n word at aust gone crazy.
V/d,...........i'll edit my explain in later this week
You're wack as fuck, and I don't see how you're failin to die
When you're in more of a frenzy then what Australia's like
Decent
Nothing on me, while I'm jacking the win you'll be beating off
I'm not in a sushi bar.. but I have no problem eating RAWW
straight nameplay
It's simple.. we both love hip hop and just target our stay
But why'd you let acne drop all the Pac marks on your face
meh, alright I guess
No chance to beat me.. I'm dope and nobody's heard of you
And you'll be taking the L, aw.. more then mass murderers do
nice concept
You should just sign out.. fuck it, Aines.. just ban this gay
Cause people only cheer RAWW at junior high band parades
statement ish.
Dude just makes shit up.. and he ain't even the best herb
RAWW ain't a word,
So I'll just take one of the W's and pin it on my record
aight closer
vs
Its official Daedal is da hypocritical textural miracle
Bitting repeating other peoples material sam stick to cereal
Hell no
RAWW ain’t a word? Ain’t ain’t a word edit ya verse
U suck at rapping and English teaching u wannab nerd
Nope
Dude’s name should b Daejavoo I reminisce 2 da rhymes he do
Da last fool used dat line didn’t get a “W” so how r u gone 2
And again
This bitch make no since bet hit pull his pants down to piss
Assed out when he spit Mr.Goodwrench fix ya wac raps in a zip
and again
Maybe it me or maybe it maybline but this emcee is wearing
Make-up like a drag queen wit his battle records not showing
damn, and again
let’s feed Polly a trisket 2 get him off Games Ova’s dick quick
Thks fo playing game of death he won a one-way trip to my shit list
Meh.
Meh, damn D I could tell you did a quick ish prolly cuz you did your homework and seen that this guy is a front liner. Raww go back to FL man. You might win there. Ish like that doesnt cut it here. Either way, D won strictly because he had some nice concepts and lines in there. Word.
V. Daedal
You're wack as fuck, and I don't see how you're failin to die
When you're in more of a frenzy then what Australia's like
Nah, weak wording
Nothing on me, while I'm jacking the win you'll be beating off
I'm not in a sushi bar.. but I have no problem eating RAWW
Not bad
It's simple.. we both love hip hop and just target our stay
But why'd you let acne drop all the Pac marks on your face
Nah
No chance to beat me.. I'm dope and nobody's heard of you
And you'll be taking the L, aw.. more then mass murderers do
Eh
You should just sign out.. fuck it, Aines.. just ban this gay
Cause people only cheer RAWW at junior high band parades
So so
Dude just makes shit up.. and he ain't even the best herb
RAWW ain't a word,
So I'll just take one of the W's and pin it on my record
Cool
Its official Daedal is da hypocritical textural miracle
Bitting repeating other peoples material sam stick to cereal
Noo
RAWW ain’t a word? Ain’t ain’t a word edit ya verse
U suck at rapping and English teaching u wannab nerd
No
Dude’s name should b Daejavoo I reminisce 2 da rhymes he do
Da last fool used dat line didn’t get a “W” so how r u gone 2
Way too simple
This bitch make no since bet hit pull his pants down to piss
Assed out when he spit Mr.Goodwrench fix ya wac raps in a zip
Weak wording and concept
Maybe it me or maybe it maybline but this emcee is wearing
Make-up like a drag queen wit his battle records not showing
Nah
let’s feed Polly a trisket 2 get him off Games Ova’s dick quick
Thks fo playing game of death he won a one-way trip to my shit list
No
Daedal won this very easily even though his verse wasn't great as RAWW had nothing but weak wording and terrible concepts.
v/ Daedal
Ok I understand that I am new here and we all were at one time I would like to have some useful feedback to help me elevate we are all here to get better I have looked at some of the other battles in here and this is by far not the worst of them!! Don't hate one.
At least your willing to admit that. lol but seriously, better than some other battles I seen. It is just another way that RB's style has developed. Find out what makes a dope verse on this site then play off of that putting your own flavor on it.Quote:
Originally Posted by RAWW
I think it is a dawm shame dat a fucker can get votes usning other people's shit I didn't think I really had to try I thought his shit was ok but I really thought I got his ass wit dat one no joke but I am not hard headed and I like what people have to say honestly so lets keep dem votes comming one.
Quote:
Originally posted by Daedal
Dude just makes shit up.. and he ain't even the best herb
RAWW ain't a word,
So I'll just take one of the W's and pin it on my record
umm, isn't^that feeding... :rolleyes:Quote:
Originally posted by RAWW
RAWW ain’t a word? Ain’t ain’t a word edit ya verse
U suck at rapping and English teaching u wannab nerd
Yea and that is aginst the rules but so is bitting
Nothing on me, while I'm jacking the win you'll be beating off
I'm not in a sushi bar.. but I have no problem eating RAWW
You should just sign out.. fuck it, Aines.. just ban this gay
Cause people only cheer RAWW at junior high band parades
Dude just makes shit up.. and he ain't even the best herb
RAWW ain't a word,
So I'll just take one of the W's and pin it on my record
vs
nothing
Your 2nd bar was feeding mayne, ya concepts just gotta get a lot more creative. take more time on ya verse for one thing.....seemed very rushed
well newayz, v/ Daedal
WHAT THE FUCK are you talking about, you fucking faggot? I didn't bite anything. Jesus Christ. Just shut the fuck up.Quote:
Originally Posted by RAWW
I spent about 5 minutes to type up a verse against you, but the point is: I spent 5 minutes.. I didn't bite shit.
So, in conclusion, you can shove that accusation up your ass.
he said bitting, not biting. Bitting - uh, is that like putting bits together? :bored:
will edit this with a vote later
Nothing stood out here like the rest of the battles. But Daedal obviously won this.
Daedal-
Nothing on me, while I'm jacking the win you'll be beating off
I'm not in a sushi bar.. but I have no problem eating RAWW
It's simple.. we both love hip hop and just target our stay
But why'd you let acne drop all the Pac marks on your face
No chance to beat me.. I'm dope and nobody's heard of you
And you'll be taking the L, aw.. more then mass murderers do
You should just sign out.. fuck it, Aines.. just ban this gay
Cause people only cheer RAWW at junior high band parades
RAWW-
nothing.
v/deadal obviously.
Dude just makes shit up.. and he ain't even the best herb
RAWW ain't a word,
So I'll just take one of the W's and pin it on my record
vs.
nothing.
raww you had nothing and you fed. both of them equals into a loss. sorry, up your game and maybe? dae, more than enough to win. we all know you can do better.
v/ daedal
Nothing on me, while I'm jacking the win you'll be beating off
I'm not in a sushi bar.. but I have no problem eating RAWW
No chance to beat me.. I'm dope and nobody's heard of you
And you'll be taking the L, aw.. more then mass murderers do
Dude just makes shit up.. and he ain't even the best herb
RAWW ain't a word,
So I'll just take one of the W's and pin it on my record
vs.
(I'll break this down to help you)
Its official Daedal is da hypocritical textural miracle
Bitting repeating other peoples material sam stick to cereal
^^eh who's he biting? Naah
RAWW ain’t a word? Ain’t ain’t a word edit ya verse
U suck at rapping and English teaching u wannab nerd
^^feeding, which is ok in my book as long as you flip something back on him that HE did wrong, but not in this case
Dude’s name should b Daejavoo I reminisce 2 da rhymes he do
Da last fool used dat line didn’t get a “W” so how r u gone 2
^^too simple, nothing surprising
This bitch make no since bet hit pull his pants down to piss
Assed out when he spit Mr.Goodwrench fix ya wac raps in a zip
^^meh
Maybe it me or maybe it maybline but this emcee is wearing
Make-up like a drag queen wit his battle records not showing
^^very very played and not harsh
let’s feed Polly a trisket 2 get him off Games Ova’s dick quick
Thks fo playing game of death he won a one-way trip to my shit list
^^lmao you're making yourself sound stupid with the last line
v/Daedal, easily, no hate Raw, just elevate
daedal wins
Daedal (1-0)
Raww (0-1)