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LLL Jr. Week 4
Yup season has been going well recently
no showers each week let this down though but dont worry there gone
just keep doing what you do
belts are introduced this week...if you dont have a match up for a belt
then up your fuckin game
normal rules check by wednesday drop by friday
no fuckin around
Good luck :2thumb:
Check
Match whoever drops first (but 20 max)
I'll be back on Vaskez name in a few days
Go 10... unless u want more..
wanna drop early? I'm ready when you are. I don't mind dropping first, but I dont wanna drop early and then have you dropping on friday, knah mean? :D
Uhh... well if you wanna wait till tommmorrow i should find time to write it and post it up by wednesday.. that cool?
or u can post now, and i'll try to get it up by tommorrow... i got a SHITLOAD of homework to do tonight though i can't write shit right now...
Aight I'll drop either tomo or wednesday
here's 10:
Look who I got this week, my win might as well be free
Alphabetize's weak, but even if they weren't, he couldn't see me
Ho, be eazy, I can drop heat in any language, I don't lie
But you must be the ONLY Alphabet that can't form dope lines
Closest ya come to smokin and spittin fire this round
Is when it's YOUR ass that I Dragon stage to be clowned
Ho, wanna be deadly like radiation? I'll smash ya nose n ya face
Then there'll be Alpha particles scattering all over the place
A bout can be a bitch n leave a man punched out after 20 landed
N a battle takes skill, so when Alph's battlin, it'll leave empty-handed
Not a moment to spare.. heres 10.
u need vocab lessons, endless schooling, LLL don't want you, son
so when summer approaches in junior still guna be stuck in one
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you aint tough to beat, takin you out is initial, vask is lame
both the ones be standin out in the last part of your name
im infront, im first ur second, its obvious with this whore, or
the people are fuckin retarded if they fail to see disorder
your a pussy, dont even gota expose that, ill hurt ur feelings now
if any1 wants to see ur true manhood they can look in demons mouth
You better run, Virgin fag, you're headin straight for a whorin dude
Cuz FUCK, even your OM's have gotten slept on more than YOU
Uppin.
Vas-
Closest ya come to smokin and spittin fire this round
Is when it's YOUR ass that I Dragon stage to be clowned
Ho, wanna be deadly like radiation? I'll smash ya nose n ya face
Then there'll be Alpha particles scattering all over the place
alph-
im infront, im first ur second, its obvious with this whore, or
the people are fuckin retarded if they fail to see disorder
your a pussy, dont even gota expose that, ill hurt ur feelings now
if any1 wants to see ur true manhood they can look in demons mouth
You better run, Virgin fag, you're headin straight for a whorin dude
Cuz FUCK, even your OM's have gotten slept on more than YOU
wow! thought this would be 1 sided but actually....
v/alph, vas had a couple (2) nice bars but rest was mehh and Alph stayed consistently decent through the verse with a couple (2) good punches.
v/vask. no hate. i thought alph came decent and is elevating alot. vas just won this due to experience. i will explain thoroughly in the mag. but good battle guys. infact this was close so this will be an exception break down.
Ho, be eazy, I can drop heat in any language, I don't lie
But you must be the ONLY Alphabet that can't form dope lines
A bout can be a bitch n leave a man punched out after 20 landed
N a battle takes skill, so when Alph's battlin, it'll leave empty-handed
vs
im infront, im first ur second, its obvious with this whore, or
the people are fuckin retarded if they fail to see disorder
lol ok, up for more votes
Look who I got this week, my win might as well be free
Alphabetize's weak, but even if they weren't, he couldn't see me
Closest ya come to smokin and spittin fire this round
Is when it's YOUR ass that I Dragon stage to be clowned
Ho, wanna be deadly like radiation? I'll smash ya nose n ya face
Then there'll be Alpha particles scattering all over the place
pretty good verse all around. solid.
vs.
im infront, im first ur second, its obvious with this whore, or
the people are fuckin retarded if they fail to see disorder
your a pussy, dont even gota expose that, ill hurt ur feelings now
if any1 wants to see ur true manhood they can look in demons mouth
super gets this.. for the best line in the battle with the dragon.. and having one more quotable.
check my battle.
dude, vask, i know you can come so much better. and alph, that verse was aiight.
Ho, be eazy, I can drop heat in any language, I don't lie
But you must be the ONLY Alphabet that can't form dope lines
A bout can be a bitch n leave a man punched out after 20 landed
N a battle takes skill, so when Alph's battlin, it'll leave empty-handed
vs.
your a pussy, dont even gota expose that, ill hurt ur feelings now
if any1 wants to see ur true manhood they can look in demons mouth
ok, i was expecting alot more from both. alph had the demon line which was aiight, but the rest was blah. i wasn't really feeling either verse, but since vask had the better and wittie punches, he easily gets this. alph, your elevating, just work on punches and more direct hits. you'll get there.
v/ vask
get at the lw title. its been re-edited to 10 lines.
Im glad i put up a fight here, and am not getting ko'd.
Uppin for votes.
Ho, be eazy, I can drop heat in any language, I don't lie
But you must be the ONLY Alphabet that can't form dope lines
A bout can be a bitch n leave a man punched out after 20 landed
N a battle takes skill, so when Alph's battlin, it'll leave empty-handed
Vs.
im infront, im first ur second, its obvious with this whore, or
the people are fuckin retarded if they fail to see disorder
your a pussy, dont even gota expose that, ill hurt ur feelings now
if any1 wants to see ur true manhood they can look in demons mouth
Close battle, both of you had 2 quotables and you both came consistent. Vaskez i think the alphabet line cud have been real nice but i think you worded it wrong and could have made a better punch out of it.
Alphas 2 quotables were nice, 1 was a good personal and the other had good wordplay. Again you came with a consistent verse, but i think your 2 quotables were slightly better than vasks. So...
Vote/Alpha
Good battle
lol
3-2 to me
Look who I got this week, my win might as well be free
Alphabetize's weak, but even if they weren't, he couldn't see me
..............wtf there's no hit, this sucked.
Ho, be eazy, I can drop heat in any language, I don't lie
But you must be the ONLY Alphabet that can't form dope lines
...............alphabet's don;t from dope lines anyway, damn wtf is up with your overcomplicated and failed punches.
Closest ya come to smokin and spittin fire this round
Is when it's YOUR ass that I Dragon stage to be clowned
.......LMFAOFAOFAOOFAo did he just do a drag on wordplay? HAHAHAHH Front Lines kinda bitchass
Ho, wanna be deadly like radiation? I'll smash ya nose n ya face
Then there'll be Alpha particles scattering all over the place
....this was decent, bad wording tho
A bout can be a bitch n leave a man punched out after 20 landed
N a battle takes skill, so when Alph's battlin, it'll leave empty-handed
...rofl sucked. you still can't form a proper punch without giving it away before the actual punch comes in
1/10
u need vocab lessons, endless schooling, LLL don't want you, son
so when summer approaches in junior still guna be stuck in one
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you aint tough to beat, takin you out is initial, vask is lame
both the ones be standin out in the last part of your name
...wtf that made no sense to me, if you cant make sense to me you lose a point
im infront, im first ur second, its obvious with this whore, or
the people are fuckin retarded if they fail to see disorder
.....hahahahahahahha funnay
your a pussy, dont even gota expose that, ill hurt ur feelings now
if any1 wants to see ur true manhood they can look in demons mouth
......rahfulkfmaosjdfk hahahahahah nice one
You better run, Virgin fag, you're headin straight for a whorin dude
Cuz FUCK, even your OM's have gotten slept on more than YOU
....OH SHIT AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
6/10
damn this was a fucking landslide
v/ Alphabetized,
better wording, better punches, better executions.
my vote counts as it states in the first post "regular rules"
hahaha, very funny Marv. You little bitch. Marv aint in the league plus that's a hate vote.
regular rules state any LLL participant can vote. unless Aines change any of that when he started this it should count. and it's not a hate vote, it's obvious who won. rofl.
rofl @ not a hate vote. that vote doesn't count and that's basically the end of it
now piss off out of my thread you little obsessed punk
3-3 or 3-2? what was that?
Vaskez started off piss weak but then grew into some nice lines, meh finisher.
Closest ya come to smokin and spittin fire this round
Is when it's YOUR ass that I Dragon stage to be clowned
Ho, wanna be deadly like radiation? I'll smash ya nose n ya face
Then there'll be Alpha particles scattering all over the place
Same for Alphabetized. OK personal, but there was less creativity in your work than Vask.
im infront, im first ur second, its obvious with this whore, or
the people are fuckin retarded if they fail to see disorder
Vote: Vaskez
Vaskez
Ho, be eazy, I can drop heat in any language, I don't lie
But you must be the ONLY Alphabet that can't form dope lines
~Vs~
Alphabetized
your a pussy, dont even gota expose that, ill hurt ur feelings now
if any1 wants to see ur true manhood they can look in demons mouth
Vaskez some decent punches, but work on those setups. def the best nameplay in the battle (^quoted). the wording was off and made the 1-2 punches stretch at times. but u kept focused on drop'n a punch on each bar, good consistancy.
Alphabetizedur ez nameplay line was making a point, but not a punch. u did better on the personals than the nameplay. ur setups were yoda like worded at times they were.(reword so it isnt hard to read) other then the somewhat forced setups, u had some decent punches, played rhyme on ur closer took away any force u had on that punch. def nice concepts, just reword ur shit a bit next time and it'll land harder.
close battle.
Vote Vaskez.... errr.... superlative.... w/e
Look at all you gays just doin' quotables.. everyone should vote line by line
Look who I got this week, my win might as well be free
Alphabetize's weak, but even if they weren't, he couldn't see me
this needed rewording
Ho, be eazy, I can drop heat in any language, I don't lie
But you must be the ONLY Alphabet that can't form dope lines
simple, but effective nameplay
Closest ya come to smokin and spittin fire this round
Is when it's YOUR ass that I Dragon stage to be clowned
I surprisingly can't remember seeing Dragon wordplay.. cool
Ho, wanna be deadly like radiation? I'll smash ya nose n ya face
Then there'll be Alpha particles scattering all over the place
Just a statement, no punch really
A bout can be a bitch n leave a man punched out after 20 landed
N a battle takes skill, so when Alph's battlin, it'll leave empty-handed
not bad I guess
vs.
u need vocab lessons, endless schooling, LLL don't want you, son
so when summer approaches in junior still guna be stuck in one
he's already in LLL so this is kinda a fake punch
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you aint tough to beat, takin you out is initial, vask is lame
both the ones be standin out in the last part of your name
you coulda worded this much better, it's very indirect
im infront, im first ur second, its obvious with this whore, or
the people are fuckin retarded if they fail to see disorder
I've seen disorder wordplay and seen it better
your a pussy, dont even gota expose that, ill hurt ur feelings now
if any1 wants to see ur true manhood they can look in demons mouth
Sorta true so it hits
You better run, Virgin fag, you're headin straight for a whorin dude
Cuz FUCK, even your OM's have gotten slept on more than YOU
To me, this kinda punch only works coming from a vet against a newb
Kinda close, but not really... I feel Vaskez as a whole just had better concepts and came more fresh. I think he was the clear winner in this one to me.
Vote - Vaskez
Cool, idk what it is, hes up by 2 or 3 or maybe 4 idk. final up
6-2 me
marv's vote doesn't count cos anyone who's been around can tell ya that we've had beef for months. His vote always automatically goes against me, but I'm not gonna bother stating that he can't vote in every one of my threads that he wonders into.
Look who I got this week, my win might as well be free
Alphabetize's weak, but even if they weren't, he couldn't see me
Nah
Ho, be eazy, I can drop heat in any language, I don't lie
But you must be the ONLY Alphabet that can't form dope lines
Nah - wording was poor as was the concept
Closest ya come to smokin and spittin fire this round
Is when it's YOUR ass that I Dragon stage to be clowned
Nice
Ho, wanna be deadly like radiation? I'll smash ya nose n ya face
Then there'll be Alpha particles scattering all over the place
Nice - liked this, cool concept and wording
A bout can be a bitch n leave a man punched out after 20 landed
N a battle takes skill, so when Alph's battlin, it'll leave empty-handed
Concept was nice but the wording wasn't
u need vocab lessons, endless schooling, LLL don't want you, son
so when summer approaches in junior still guna be stuck in one
Not bad, cool concept
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you aint tough to beat, takin you out is initial, vask is lame
both the ones be standin out in the last part of your name
Nah, weak
im infront, im first ur second, its obvious with this whore, or
the people are fuckin retarded if they fail to see disorder
Nice - cool concept and wording
your a pussy, dont even gota expose that, ill hurt ur feelings now
if any1 wants to see ur true manhood they can look in demons mouth
Cool
You better run, Virgin fag, you're headin straight for a whorin dude
Cuz FUCK, even your OM's have gotten slept on more than YOU
Nah
On first read I thought Alphabetized had this, then I read again and I think Vaskez took it. He was more consistent, and while I wasn't feeling his opening stuff he got better. Alpha had some cool lines as well but they wheren't as good.
v/ Vaskez
Ho, be eazy, I can drop heat in any language, I don't lie
But you must be the ONLY Alphabet that can't form dope lines
A bout can be a bitch n leave a man punched out after 20 landed
N a battle takes skill, so when Alph's battlin, it'll leave empty-handed
Closest ya come to smokin and spittin fire this round
Is when it's YOUR ass that I Dragon stage to be clowned
Vs
im infront, im first ur second, its obvious with this whore, or
the people are fuckin retarded if they fail to see disorder
your a pussy, dont even gota expose that, ill hurt ur feelings now
if any1 wants to see ur true manhood they can look in demons mouth
V/Vaskez
Dragon line took it all.
Yup
8-2 me
remember I'm out for a few weeks, Aines
I keep the 2-0 record though, right?
Vaskez wins
Alpha loses and is booted
dropping late son
Vaskez (2-0)
yea okQuote:
Originally Posted by Vaskez
remind me of your rec when you sign back in