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LLL Jr. Week 4
Yup season has been going well recently
no showers each week let this down though but dont worry there gone
just keep doing what you do
belts are introduced this week...if you dont have a match up for a belt
then up your fuckin game
normal rules check by wednesday drop by friday
no fuckin around
Good luck :2thumb:
Don't ever tell me to up my fucking game or i'll pee in your mouth.
shut up n drop early.
links here....
i bees that nigga dogggie... fuck what ya heard.
this week marks the first ever belts so u ready to spit son?
sadly it also marks the first week to never that you'll ever get one.
namin yaself after the drink? haha ima take advantage of that
cause seemingly it seems u get ya punchlines from inside of the cap.
bookin my gear, packin punches leavin u shooken in fear
get beat by U. so bad u gonna be scared to look in the mirror.
so put ya investment in this battle if u really rappin ock
pryor to my verse i knew u'd end up like richard- a dead laughin stock.
aint no match for me, im easily handlin this dyke
casino fuckin with me would be the real gamble of his life.
ima legend get it right dim wit
only idle u'll ever be is ya buddy lists after leavin for 15 minutes.
u. lose dogggie.. this be a quick win bitch
the day Sowin a battle is the when dont bring his needle dick in it.
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upchuckin the mufuckin publishin
ummm..casino line bitten from Feeble.
oh yeah since hes the first to use it right dogggggie
He probly bit half those lines. i don't have time tonight but tomorrow i'll clown you. goodbye and STFU.. u.lose.
haha @ this.
now just because i didnt give up an alias name and i write a verse its gotta be bitten?
^thats how shit works around here. deal with it.
why thank you kind sir for the reassurance that wasnt needed.
Look faggot, I understand ur pussy and don't wanna give up your alias, but you don't have to bite.. well maybe you do, I dunno.
It's obvious ya prewritin' kid, playin off ur own name...
ya playin urself.. & when I make U. Lose it'll prove he has no game
this kid don't understand who he is, n' all the rest knowQuote:
why thank you kind sir for the reassurance that wasnt needed.
u talk like snoop in ya verse, & a cracker in the next post
really, u a wannabe. every attempt this fag seems to fall
& if u "bees that nigga".. how come ur punches don't sting at all?
when it comes to sex, his mom got him. damn the abuse burns
but ur Ma'zda best.. she's got drive & even makes U. turn
it must be frustrating son, bein a loser, I don't mean to show hate
but ur makin' all these aliases, & ya name still holds noweight
try & try again. ya keep gettin rejected when ur writin kid
shit, i'm givin ya flonase so much.. it could clear ur sinuses
ya style is wack kid. it's been played out for some time
fuck LLL, to even come close to his alias I'ma read verses in Front Lines
now sign up under a new alias, homo.
are u THAT desperate to fill your verse, that u just have to go on about me biting? fuck outta here man.
v/U.Lose.. will explain thoroughly in the mag. good battle guys.
vote on mine.
Please stfu. quit wining like a bitch, "doggie."Quote:
Originally Posted by U. Lose
btw, Record's vote don't count. no beef, but i want explanations. plus ya'll are in the same crew, i know crew votes are allowed but that's just kind of suspicious with no explanation.
nobody is here to wine doggggie. but i can tell u dropped what u could and TRIED to put it together. you had since monday when i dropped my verse and all u can say is that i bit half my lines? pffft U MAD.
SHUT
THE
FUCK
UP
fuck you, i have school monday through friday, you fucking dropout.
now let people vote.
i had school too, finals week doggggggggie. didnt take me very long to write my verse... but i dont blame u for tryin too hard and seein ur result it would make me wanna cry too.
keep postin if u'd like, might lighten u up a bit.
but lets see some votes
lol oh he is lol forgot. but still i vote like this wit everyone so no excuses. i have to explain either way in the mag.
All this bitchin won't help the voting ;)
Nor will 'swaying'......
Bitching about how his verse was whack = swaying.
I will edit this with my vote, but im goin to bed now.
vote Sobe plz plz plz. take this from me. U. Lose bit half of his lines on a popular rap site. i dont wanna be telling anyone waht that site is, but trust me, it's all bitten apart from the nameplay.
v sobe.
lemme guess.. urbanprowlers?
yeah i think so, i cant be assed to find them all but i'm 99 percent sure i;ve read um somewhere on there.
bull-fuckin-shit.
one nigga goes on and says i bit a line and then everyone say i bit them. fucks wrong with people here?
sorry but i had to point it out, i seen most them lines reading up on stuff from long ago.
i'll give you the benefit of the doubt and revote in a min.Quote:
Originally Posted by U. Lose
... :thumbsdow this guy.
whats wrong with this board
U.Lose
namin yaself after the drink? haha ima take advantage of that
cause seemingly it seems u get ya punchlines from inside of the cap
~Vs~
Sobe plz plz plz
this kid don't understand who he is, n' all the rest know
u talk like snoop in ya verse, & a cracker in the next post
U.Lose- some structure issues left ur verse short n streched all over... but fuck it, it didnt hurt your flow too much. that sobe cap line was nice, had me lol. ur opener and closers should hit harder then they did. that mirror line was nice for a generic. overall good verse, you hit on the personals, had an ok flow, and some nice punches... nothing too shocking tho,.. next time put more emphasis on the opener/closer
Sobe plz plz plz a couple nice personals in there- soft on the opener, but finished nice on the closer, the best line (^quoted) was ur only personal that was nice from setup to punch. the rest of your 1-2s looked more like half-2s. the setups wording was off, (seemingly jus to make the rhyme on the punch). not a bad verse at all. so dont get it twisted, but that coupled with the played (ur mom, noweight) lines,... took too much away from the punches that did hit. also, next time put the quote before or after ur verse, (it kinda threw off the flow where it was).
close battle, I had to re-read jus to be sure... but for the ^above reasons...
Vote U.Lose
no hate Sobe, that was a nice drop. U.lose jus barely got this imo
V/ Sobe...his was just doper...
^^ explain it then it'll be 1-1
as of now 1-0 U. Lose
this week marks the first ever belts so u ready to spit son?
sadly it also marks the first week to never that you'll ever get one.
no
namin yaself after the drink? haha ima take advantage of that
cause seemingly it seems u get ya punchlines from inside of the cap.
weak
bookin my gear, packin punches leavin u shooken in fear
get beat by U. so bad u gonna be scared to look in the mirror.
no
so put ya investment in this battle if u really rappin ock
pryor to my verse i knew u'd end up like richard- a dead laughin stock.
ight,but is ock a word?
aint no match for me, im easily handlin this dyke
casino fuckin with me would be the real gamble of his life.
eh no
ima legend get it right dim wit
only idle u'll ever be is ya buddy lists after leavin for 15 minutes.
weak
u. lose dogggie.. this be a quick win bitch
the day Sowin a battle is the when dont bring his needle dick in it.
no
It's obvious ya prewritin' kid, playin off ur own name...
ya playin urself.. & when I make U. Lose it'll prove he has no game
no
this kid don't understand who he is, n' all the rest know
u talk like snoop in ya verse, & a cracker in the next post
eh
really, u a wannabe. every attempt this fag seems to fall
& if u "bees that nigga".. how come ur punches don't sting at all?
lol good
when it comes to sex, his mom got him. damn the abuse burns
but ur Ma'zda best.. she's got drive & even makes U. turn
nice
it must be frustrating son, bein a loser, I don't mean to show hate
but ur makin' all these aliases, & ya name still holds noweight
no
try & try again. ya keep gettin rejected when ur writin kid
shit, i'm givin ya flonase so much.. it could clear ur sinuses
meh
ya style is wack kid. it's been played out for some time
fuck LLL, to even come close to his alias I'ma read verses in Front Lines
nah
so put ya investment in this battle if u really rappin ock
pryor to my verse i knew u'd end up like richard- a dead laughin stock.
only punch that i liked from ur verse the rest was just eh.
vs
really, u a wannabe. every attempt this fag seems to fall
& if u "bees that nigga".. how come ur punches don't sting at all?
when it comes to sex, his mom got him. damn the abuse burns
but ur Ma'zda best.. she's got drive & even makes U. turn
these 2 punches were good and were the best in the battle.
v.sobe
this week marks the first ever belts so u ready to spit son?
sadly it also marks the first week to never that you'll ever get one.
..lol. pretty good..
namin yaself after the drink? haha ima take advantage of that
cause seemingly it seems u get ya punchlines from inside of the cap.
..meh, aiight..
bookin my gear, packin punches leavin u shooken in fear
get beat by U. so bad u gonna be scared to look in the mirror.
..lol..
so put ya investment in this battle if u really rappin ock
pryor to my verse i knew u'd end up like richard- a dead laughin stock.
..lol. nice..
aint no match for me, im easily handlin this dyke
casino fuckin with me would be the real gamble of his life.
..pretty good..
ima legend get it right dim wit
only idle u'll ever be is ya buddy lists after leavin for 15 minutes.
..lol. pretty cool..
u. lose dogggie.. this be a quick win bitch
the day Sowin a battle is the when dont bring his needle dick in it.
..lol nice closer..
vs.
It's obvious ya prewritin' kid, playin off ur own name...
ya playin urself.. & when I make U. Lose it'll prove he has no game
..lol. pretty good..
this kid don't understand who he is, n' all the rest know
u talk like snoop in ya verse, & a cracker in the next post
..aiight..
really, u a wannabe. every attempt this fag seems to fall
& if u "bees that nigga".. how come ur punches don't sting at all?
..lol. funny..
when it comes to sex, his mom got him. damn the abuse burns
but ur Ma'zda best.. she's got drive & even makes U. turn
..nice..
it must be frustrating son, bein a loser, I don't mean to show hate
but ur makin' all these aliases, & ya name still holds noweight
..aiight..
try & try again. ya keep gettin rejected when ur writin kid
shit, i'm givin ya flonase so much.. it could clear ur sinuses
..dope..
ya style is wack kid. it's been played out for some time
fuck LLL, to even come close to his alias I'ma read verses in Front Lines
..lol. dope..
this was a real dope battle. i felt both had good and witty punches. both were creative and did a good job hyping this battle up. nice structure from both and just plain out, good job.
v/ sobe, he had 1 better line i felt.
namin yaself after the drink? haha ima take advantage of that
cause seemingly it seems u get ya punchlines from inside of the cap.
aint no match for me, im easily handlin this dyke
casino fuckin with me would be the real gamble of his life.
ima legend get it right dim wit
only idle u'll ever be is ya buddy lists after leavin for 15 minutes.
vs.
really, u a wannabe. every attempt this fag seems to fall
& if u "bees that nigga".. how come ur punches don't sting at all?
when it comes to sex, his mom got him. damn the abuse burns
but ur Ma'zda best.. she's got drive & even makes U. turn
it must be frustrating son, bein a loser, I don't mean to show hate
but ur makin' all these aliases, & ya name still holds noweight
try & try again. ya keep gettin rejected when ur writin kid
shit, i'm givin ya flonase so much.. it could clear ur sinuses
not bad
v/Sobe
sobe wins 3-1
U.Lose (2-1)
Sobe plz plz (3-0)