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LLL Jr. Week 4
Yup season has been going well recently
no showers each week let this down though but dont worry there gone
just keep doing what you do
belts are introduced this week...if you dont have a match up for a belt
then up your fuckin game
normal rules check by wednesday drop by friday
no fuckin around
Good luck :2thumb:
no showers each week haha....check. we needed a rematch ;)
werd. man. i laughed see'n this. dude, g/l man. how about we go 20? sound good?
meh...its finals week for me. would you be cool goin 14?
for sho. 14's fine.
Meh, i really didnt have enough time for this...
None of ya lines are hot kinda like the bitches that've kissed you
Something dope only hits you...when my fists rip through ya tissue
Ya bitch crew isnt even listed in ya sig, foo
V.I. gets more cold shoulders than families livin in an igloo
You claimin ya hard but end up soft like hairgel
Aines gave me a buy-week...thats why i'll bid you farewell
This redneck doesnt have anything not even a mother with teeth
I'll sock U. ..............just to give him something to cover his feet
Untold speaks in obscenities even though he dont got the balls for it
i wouldnt say sex is uncalled for..........because i know you call for it
edited punches out and went 14. like we agree'd.
cock shit and bust, you'll never be better than me, whore
i'll help ray ban together, by showing him the 'thor'
your runnin on fumes dude, you better refuel, what say?
tryn'a get gassed up, you better off do'n circles around 'K'
just die cunt, o.v dose quick bitch, this isn't a game
so stop playing, kid and start living up to your name
you hold up nothing, and ur audio'll never be put in roatation
so after that weak post..
..tony'll need all the help he can find to hold up the foundation
fuck a sound station, your rhymes are wack and gay
i don't have to CBS to know everybody doesn't love ray
ok. i went 10. last edit. and still havent touched a punch.
what a bitch move
EDIT: ok, i edited it to 14.
let the fair votes roll in.
None of ya lines are hot kinda like the bitches that've kissed you
Something dope only hits you...when my fists rip through ya tissue
alright.
Ya bitch crew isnt even listed in ya sig, foo
V.I. gets more cold shoulders than families livin in an igloo
ok didn't hit that hard
You claimin ya hard but end up soft like hairgel
Aines gave me a buy-week...thats why i'll bid you farewell
decent
This redneck doesnt have anything not even a mother with teeth
I'll sock U. ..............just to give him something to cover his feet
didn't like this
Untold speaks in obscenities even though he dont got the balls for it
i wouldnt say sex is uncalled for..........because i know you call for it[/QUOTE]
naw.
vs.
cock shit and bust, you'll never be better than me, whore
i'll help ray ban together, by showing him the 'thor'
lol
i'll put you to sleep, burried and never to awake again, dawg
and i say you ov'er did it..
but when i read your shit, i dose'd off
saw the nameplay but not hard.
your runnin on fumes dude, you better refuel, what say?
tryn'a get gassed up, you better off do'n circles around 'K'
nice
you'll never get a fair lay, and i doubt you ever will, dyke
s'when i mention rapist, i'm just speaking of ya sex life
good but the sex life punches are played
just die cunt, o.v dose quick bitch, this isn't a game
so stop playing, kid and start living up to your name
coo
you hold up nothing, and ur audio'll never be put in roatation
so after that weak post..
..tony'll need all the help he can find to hold up the foundation
nice
fuck a sound station, your rhymes are wack and gay
i don't have to CBS to know everybody doesn't love ray
pretty decent
vote - Untold, he came more fresh, hit harder to, Ov you had one or 2 good lines but they were scattered around your verse. cool battle tho.
i had to leave so i only put ten, shouldnt you have matched me?
well, we agree'd on 14. so i can drop that many. if you want to edit it to 10, i will.
Edit it to ten and I'll edit this with a vote.
None of ya lines are hot kinda like the bitches that've kissed you
Something dope only hits you...when my fists rip through ya tissue
You claimin ya hard but end up soft like hairgel
Aines gave me a buy-week...thats why i'll bid you farewell
This redneck doesnt have anything not even a mother with teeth
I'll sock U. ..............just to give him something to cover his feet
good verse by OV.. nothing was exactly fire but it was good
cock shit and bust, you'll never be better than me, whore
i'll help ray ban together, by showing him the 'thor'
just die cunt, o.v dose quick bitch, this isn't a game
so stop playing, kid and start living up to your name
you hold up nothing, and ur audio'll never be put in roatation
so after that weak post..
..tony'll need all the help he can find to hold up the foundation
fuck a sound station, your rhymes are wack and gay
i don't have to CBS to know everybody doesn't love ray
lmao @ the last line.. untold takes it with that one
nice battle.
None of ya lines are hot kinda like the bitches that've kissed you
Something dope only hits you...when my fists rip through ya tissue
You claimin ya hard but end up soft like hairgel
Aines gave me a buy-week...thats why i'll bid you farewell
vs
cock shit and bust, you'll never be better than me, whore
i'll help ray ban together, by showing him the 'thor'
fuck a sound station, your rhymes are wack and gay
i don't have to CBS to know everybody doesn't love ray
pretty close battle.ov does verse wasnt all that great but it was cool 2 quatble punches.untold had a decent verse n more cosistent verse and a personal on it also n 2 quatables as well.i give this to untold for have a more cosistent verse.
v.untold
You claimin ya hard but end up soft like hairgel
Aines gave me a buy-week...thats why i'll bid you farewell
vs.
your runnin on fumes dude, you better refuel, what say?
tryn'a get gassed up, you better off do'n circles around 'K'
fuck a sound station, your rhymes are wack and gay
i don't have to CBS to know everybody doesn't love ray
pretty good battle by both of yah but i ant like OV's verse..he had like one ok bar that was alright. u needed to come harder then that. ur punches were kinda weak no good personals. untold ur lines intrestin readin it. ur punches n personals was good. u came out better hiten him back 2 back. ok battle.
v.un
None of ya lines are hot kinda like the bitches that've kissed you
Something dope only hits you...when my fists rip through ya tissue
Self-glory really
Ya bitch crew isnt even listed in ya sig, foo
V.I. gets more cold shoulders than families livin in an igloo
Pretty decent
You claimin ya hard but end up soft like hairgel
Aines gave me a buy-week...thats why i'll bid you farewell
Pretty meh, seen lots of lines like this
This redneck doesnt have anything not even a mother with teeth
I'll sock U. ..............just to give him something to cover his feet
Not really much of a diss, lol
Untold speaks in obscenities even though he dont got the balls for it
i wouldnt say sex is uncalled for..........because i know you call for it
Coulda used the uncalled for concept better
vs.
cock shit and bust, you'll never be better than me, whore
i'll help ray ban together, by showing him the 'thor'
kinda cool
your runnin on fumes dude, you better refuel, what say?
tryn'a get gassed up, you better off do'n circles around 'K'
nah, not much of a diss
just die cunt, o.v dose quick bitch, this isn't a game
so stop playing, kid and start living up to your name
played nameplay
you hold up nothing, and ur audio'll never be put in roatation
so after that weak post..
..tony'll need all the help he can find to hold up the foundation
also pretty meh
fuck a sound station, your rhymes are wack and gay
i don't have to CBS to know everybody doesn't love ray
seen cbs lines before but this was a good one
Not really a great battle for a belt match, but it was kind of close. OV had the igloo line that was alright, though nothing special. Untold didn't have a lot either, but the closer was nice, even though CBS lines are played cuz he made it into a nice personal. I'd say Untold got this by about 1 bar.
Vote - Untold
None of ya lines are hot kinda like the bitches that've kissed you
Something dope only hits you...when my fists rip through ya tissue
Ya bitch crew isnt even listed in ya sig, foo
V.I. gets more cold shoulders than families livin in an igloo
This redneck doesnt have anything not even a mother with teeth
I'll sock U. ..............just to give him something to cover his feet
Untold speaks in obscenities even though he dont got the balls for it
i wouldnt say sex is uncalled for..........because i know you call for it
^^lol all of those were borderline good, but I quoted them cos they were all worded pretty well and made me smile
vs.
just die cunt, o.v dose quick bitch, this isn't a game
so stop playing, kid and start living up to your name
you hold up nothing, and ur audio'll never be put in roatation
so after that weak post..
..tony'll need all the help he can find to hold up the foundation
fuck a sound station, your rhymes are wack and gay
i don't have to CBS to know everybody doesn't love ray
I actually enjoyed OV Dose's verse more. Untol needs better wording on some of his punches
v/OV Dose
your stupid.
j/p. more votes please.
5-1, my lead.
vote people.
It was a nice battle and it was pretty close, but I'd say Untold took this one. His punches to me seemed to hit harder than yours OV but yours was still dope. I was just feelin' Untold's or Mr. Nice Guy's drop more. Untold seemed to dropped more consistent verses. No hate.
v/-Untold/Mr. Nice Guy
lmao ^ that is the kind of feedback that shouldn't even be allowed in FL, let alone in a league. ROFL.
It's completely generic and says NOTHING about the battle. It could be applied to ANY battle verse on the planet. Plus LMAO @ referring to untold dropping more consistent verses in general. No one cares about that in this battle, it's about THIS verse.
Feedback like this ruins the league
is that kid even in the league?
lmao @ you saying all that about a battle you not even a part of.Quote:
Originally Posted by Vaskez
but you are right. there needs to better feed... i mean, some battles don't need it and it would be pointless to vote 'cause one person did good and the other basically just blah'd it, but still, better feed is required.
and to ov, yea, hes in the league. he battle'd rec.
I type quick so it took me about 30 secs to type that. Plus I was making a point so it doesn't matter which battle it's in
i figured that, hence why i agree'd with you.
rise.
cock shit and bust, you'll never be better than me, whore
i'll help ray ban together, by showing him the 'thor'
fuck a sound station, your rhymes are wack and gay
i don't have to CBS to know everybody doesn't love ray
vs.
None of ya lines are hot kinda like the bitches that've kissed you
Something dope only hits you...when my fists rip through ya tissue
You claimin ya hard but end up soft like hairgel
Aines gave me a buy-week...thats why i'll bid you farewell
a close battle indead my freinds,....but i felt's tho that untold just came with a fresher head,.....no hate to neither
dope battl;e tho
V/untold
v/untold. will explain in mag. good battle guys.
dont think so and if so then he shouldnt beQuote:
Originally Posted by O.V.Dose
i'll be voting in a sec
This redneck doesnt have anything not even a mother with teeth
I'll sock U. ..............just to give him something to cover his feet
Untold speaks in obscenities even though he dont got the balls for it
i wouldnt say sex is uncalled for..........because i know you call for it
vs.
you hold up nothing, and ur audio'll never be put in roatation
so after that weak post..
..tony'll need all the help he can find to hold up the foundation
fuck a sound station, your rhymes are wack and gay
i don't have to CBS to know everybody doesn't love ray
O.v came cool....but uh..untolds last line won him the battle imo. Good shit.
Vote.Untold
You claimin ya hard but end up soft like hairgel
Aines gave me a buy-week...thats why i'll bid you farewell
vs.
just die cunt, o.v dose quick bitch, this isn't a game
so stop playing, kid and start living up to your name
v/untold
good battle
None of ya lines are hot kinda like the bitches that've kissed you
Something dope only hits you...when my fists rip through ya tissue
meh, i see where you were going
Ya bitch crew isnt even listed in ya sig, foo
V.I. gets more cold shoulders than families livin in an igloo
decent
You claimin ya hard but end up soft like hairgel
Aines gave me a buy-week...thats why i'll bid you farewell
another good concept that just seems to need better wording
This redneck doesnt have anything not even a mother with teeth
I'll sock U. ..............just to give him something to cover his feet
eh
Untold speaks in obscenities even though he dont got the balls for it
i wouldnt say sex is uncalled for..........because i know you call for it
lol this kinda made me chuckle, i dunno why tho :/
not a bad verse. fresh concepts.....seemed very rushed though. structure was kinda choppy. think that was also because you rushed it. with rewording and what not this coulda been much better
cock shit and bust, you'll never be better than me, whore
i'll help ray ban together, by showing him the 'thor'
good
your runnin on fumes dude, you better refuel, what say?
tryn'a get gassed up, you better off do'n circles around 'K'
meh
just die cunt, o.v dose quick bitch, this isn't a game
so stop playing, kid and start living up to your name
i like this, simple but hits hard
you hold up nothing, and ur audio'll never be put in roatation
so after that weak post..
..tony'll need all the help he can find to hold up the foundation
lmao, why does my name keep comin up in ppl's verses? decent punch though
fuck a sound station, your rhymes are wack and gay
i don't have to CBS to know everybody doesn't love ray
rofl and i dont even like that show
really only like one line i didn't like and that was the 2nd bar. besides that is was a pretty consistent verse. good flow and some nice witty punches
v/ untold
werd. :coolio:
This computer is loading slow as shit.
O.V. Dose- Nice multi/internal rhymes throughout, your buy-week/bid pun was your best line, the rest held up but wasn't particularly spectacular.
Untold came more aggressive, with consistently short snappy lines that got to the point. Liked both drops, though.
Vote: Untold
CBS line is bitten, tuh tuh. Well half bitten from what I know.
Untold won this but I ain't gonna put a vote down, coz
I got that little bit of doubt.
Ya bitch crew isnt even listed in ya sig, foo
V.I. gets more cold shoulders than families livin in an igloo
Untold speaks in obscenities even though he dont got the balls for it
i wouldnt say sex is uncalled for..........because i know you call for it
Vs
just die cunt, o.v dose quick bitch, this isn't a game
so stop playing, kid and start living up to your name
you hold up nothing, and ur audio'll never be put in roatation
so after that weak post..
..tony'll need all the help he can find to hold up the foundation
fuck a sound station, your rhymes are wack and gay
i don't have to CBS to know everybody doesn't love ray
V/Untold.
I thought OV would of won this. Last line by untold was dope
wtf? his name is ray and i bit that line? from where? i'm sure people have used CBS before, but i used it because of his name. so if you know of a battle someone used the same punch against this guy, with the same wording and same punch for this kid here, gimme the link.Quote:
Originally Posted by Brixton
don't ever accuse me of biting. not my style, son.
None of ya lines are hot kinda like the bitches that've kissed you
Something dope only hits you...when my fists rip through ya tissue
So so, concept was weird and not logical
Ya bitch crew isnt even listed in ya sig, foo
V.I. gets more cold shoulders than families livin in an igloo
Made me laugh but weak
You claimin ya hard but end up soft like hairgel
Aines gave me a buy-week...thats why i'll bid you farewell
Not bad
This redneck doesnt have anything not even a mother with teeth
I'll sock U. ..............just to give him something to cover his feet
Ok, wording was off
Untold speaks in obscenities even though he dont got the balls for it
i wouldnt say sex is uncalled for..........because i know you call for it
Nah
cock shit and bust, you'll never be better than me, whore
i'll help ray ban together, by showing him the 'thor'
Huh?
your runnin on fumes dude, you better refuel, what say?
tryn'a get gassed up, you better off do'n circles around 'K'
Nah
just die cunt, o.v dose quick bitch, this isn't a game
so stop playing, kid and start living up to your name
Pretty cool
you hold up nothing, and ur audio'll never be put in roatation
so after that weak post..
..tony'll need all the help he can find to hold up the foundation
Ok
fuck a sound station, your rhymes are wack and gay
i don't have to CBS to know everybody doesn't love ray
Seen CBS concept about 3 times lately but u worded it nice
Untold started off weak IMO but dropped pretty cool at the end. OV was just inconsistent throughout.
v/ Untold
ok. here man, ban together, and thor got banned. and instead of showing him the "door", i said "thor" saying he'd be better off banned.Quote:
Originally Posted by KempoMRK
get it?
untold wins
O.V Dose (2-1)
Untold (4-0)