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LLL Jr. Week 3
yup 3rd week of season
last weeks no shows are gone
2 more weeks and belts will be introduced
boot matches also as the league is too big currently
As for this week same rules as previous weeks
Check by wednesday drop by friday
no fucking around
Good Luck :2thumb:
Checkin in...Gotta get this win...Lmfao...
12? lines?
GL sickone
yea in w/e
Iight im spittin my verse right now
Ill be ur medicine call me ‘bucklys’ cause the ‘sickone’ is about to be
beat/
N ur lyrics? The only time when that shit is ‘rippin’ Is if I ‘tear’ ur rap
Sheet/
…..kid ur a fag and we don’t even need a no lie detector to detected-it/
ur just like a PS2 controller ur near the main button but never selected/
.......u been on ur knees almost all ur live so getting-up u might need a lift/
U no what? Christmas Is soon coming so use ur ‘wrapping’ skills for my gift/
……wigga end ur problems go to the L.L.L jr office and sign out right away/
Ya now I no why they call u the ‘sickone’ after all u the main cause of aids/
Dis White boy felt special seeing his name in colour he actrully felt black…
But little does he no Both of are names are in bold/
The only way ill be ‘feeling’ the effects of the ‘sick-one’
………………...………............Is if I caught ur cold/
This man is a prostitute hes just like his lyrics he is always ‘dropping’‘down’/
....The ‘sickone’ obviously didn’t listen when aines said ‘no-fucking-around’/
There it is...
Im explaining some of the rhymes evn tho some ppl get ratted on for this but i juss wanna make sure ppl understand...(I dont really do this)
1.Bucklys is a medicine that gets rid of the virus when ur sick
2.The ps2 line means theres a start button(the main button me) and the select button
on the controllor which is rarely used.
The rest should explain and should understand if u wanna no ask or PM me...
Lookin foward to ur verse sickone
you faggot, your rapps is finish...ill shit on you game
burning your gay punches is the only way it will flame
u suck foreal, had 4 days 2 write n yu droped that crap
don no y u hav 2pac as ur avater,cuz ant helpin u 2 rap
dawgs ur not organized....you never going to be blowing
i"ll draw a map for u son, so u can see wher ur life is goin
"Game" claims hes real dope....but he could never be one
look at his graveyard how many vets have he beat...None
worthless rapper.....Game over is the wackess in this city
u tryed 2 pick urself up, but seems 2 go down like gravity
............
iight uppin this battle
uppin *2*
Drop votes Please
this was a completely wack battle but thesickone won dis hands down although there were'nt much punches thesickones structure was better
v/the sickone
Ill be ur medicine call me ‘bucklys’ cause the ‘sickone’ is about to be
beat/
N ur lyrics? The only time when that shit is ‘rippin’ Is if I ‘tear’ ur rap
Sheet/
so you'll tear his rap sheet, so what? no punch to this
…..kid ur a fag and we don’t even need a no lie detector to detected-it/
ur just like a PS2 controller ur near the main button but never selected/
okay concept, but you coulda worded this better. You shoulda made the punchline "you get selected as much as buttons on PS2 controllers. Just reads much better
.......u been on ur knees almost all ur live so getting-up u might need a lift/
U no what? Christmas Is soon coming so use ur ‘wrapping’ skills for my gift/
played concept and not much of a punch
……wigga end ur problems go to the L.L.L jr office and sign out right away/
Ya now I no why they call u the ‘sickone’ after all u the main cause of aids/
okay concept, but you needed to word this better
Dis White boy felt special seeing his name in colour he actrully felt black…
But little does he no Both of are names are in bold/
The only way ill be ‘feeling’ the effects of the ‘sick-one’
………………...………............Is if I caught ur cold/
Your setup was wayyy stretched dude, no flow to this lol
This man is a prostitute hes just like his lyrics he is always ‘dropping’‘down’/
....The ‘sickone’ obviously didn’t listen when aines said ‘no-fucking-around’/
nah, this is kinda gay
vs.
you faggot, your rapps is finish...ill shit on you game
burning your gay punches is the only way it will flame
umm, where's the punch
u suck foreal, had 4 days 2 write n yu droped that crap
don no y u hav 2pac as ur avater,cuz ant helpin u 2 rap
worded poorly and played
dawgs ur not organized....you never going to be blowing
i"ll draw a map for u son, so u can see wher ur life is goin
umm, pretty weak
"Game" claims hes real dope....but he could never be one
look at his graveyard how many vets have he beat...None
best punch so far cuz it's true
worthless rapper.....Game over is the wackess in this city
u tryed 2 pick urself up, but seems 2 go down like gravity
nah, doesn't hit, no punch
Overall, no hate guys, but y'all need to step ya games up. This battle was front lines quality. It was very close, though. After reading it a few times, I think Game ova was a bit more consistent, but the verse was worded poorly. Also, game ova, just a tip, drop the slashes from ya verse and make it look more like sickones. It had no affect on who I voted for, but it's a newbish thing to do and not necessary. I recommend you guys start reading battles in LLL to elevate as lots of good heads are in there.
Vote - Game Ova
iight thanks for the vote
and barb what kinda vote was that...
Anywayz uppin
1-1 keep the votes comin
Last uppin dont sleep on this
Game-Ova
Ill be ur medicine call me ‘bucklys’ cause the ‘sickone’ is about to be
beat/
N ur lyrics? The only time when that shit is ‘rippin’ Is if I ‘tear’ ur rap
Sheet/
~Vs~
The sickone
"Game" claims hes real dope....but he could never be one
look at his graveyard how many vets have he beat...None
Game-Ova- basic rhymes- most of ur bars too streched to land ur punches- ur 1-2s looked more like 1-halfs- some decent concepts, but u need to reword to make stronger punches- nice opener/closer- decent attempt on wordplay- work on structure/flow-
The sickone- single syllable rhymes here too- u went for the personals- but nothing too hard hitting(except the graveyard line)- u need to come with some fresh concepts next time-
close battle- it looked like both of you were treating this like a bi-week.
Vote Game-Ova his opener and closer took this.
come on peoples
Ill be ur medicine call me ‘bucklys’ cause the ‘sickone’ is about to be
beat/
N ur lyrics? The only time when that shit is ‘rippin’ Is if I ‘tear’ ur rap
Sheet/
no punch
…..kid ur a fag and we don’t even need a no lie detector to detected-it/
ur just like a PS2 controller ur near the main button but never selected/
aight
.......u been on ur knees almost all ur live so getting-up u might need a lift/
U no what? Christmas Is soon coming so use ur ‘wrapping’ skills for my gift/
not really a punch and like datrus said, that's kinda played
……wigga end ur problems go to the L.L.L jr office and sign out right away/
Ya now I no why they call u the ‘sickone’ after all u the main cause of aids/
concept is ight
Dis White boy felt special seeing his name in colour he actrully felt black…
But little does he no Both of are names are in bold/
The only way ill be ‘feeling’ the effects of the ‘sick-one’
………………...………............Is if I caught ur cold/
line is stretched homie
This man is a prostitute hes just like his lyrics he is always ‘dropping’‘down’/
....The ‘sickone’ obviously didn’t listen when aines said ‘no-fucking-around’/
naw
vs.
you faggot, your rapps is finish...ill shit on you game
burning your gay punches is the only way it will flame
ok
u suck foreal, had 4 days 2 write n yu droped that crap
don no y u hav 2pac as ur avater,cuz ant helpin u 2 rap
ight
dawgs ur not organized....you never going to be blowing
i"ll draw a map for u son, so u can see wher ur life is goin
weak
"Game" claims hes real dope....but he could never be one
look at his graveyard how many vets have he beat...None
good
worthless rapper.....Game over is the wackess in this city
u tryed 2 pick urself up, but seems 2 go down like gravity
not really a punch
Overall- i liked sik's verse better he came a bit better.
his verse was short and simple and also had a good flow to
it.Game concepts were ok but the stretched lines messed
your flow up .Both had some played concepts. keep elevating.
Ill be ur medicine call me ‘bucklys’ cause the ‘sickone’ is about to be
beat/
N ur lyrics? The only time when that shit is ‘rippin’ Is if I ‘tear’ ur rap
Sheet/
no point in being there
…..kid ur a fag and we don’t even need a no lie detector to detected-it/
ur just like a PS2 controller ur near the main button but never selected/
aight
.......u been on ur knees almost all ur live so getting-up u might need a lift/
U no what? Christmas Is soon coming so use ur ‘wrapping’ skills for my gift/
not really a punch and like datrus said, that's kinda played
……wigga end ur problems go to the L.L.L jr office and sign out right away/
Ya now I no why they call u the ‘sickone’ after all u the main cause of aids/
concept is ight
Dis White boy felt special seeing his name in colour he actrully felt black…
But little does he no Both of are names are in bold/
The only way ill be ‘feeling’ the effects of the ‘sick-one’
………………...………............Is if I caught ur cold/
whooa not really feeling them long stretched bars
This man is a prostitute hes just like his lyrics he is always ‘dropping’‘down’/
....The ‘sickone’ obviously didn’t listen when aines said ‘no-fucking-around’/
played
overall no punch really.......stretched lines....."not good" elevate...
IP: AB4D 2096
you faggot, your rapps is finish...ill shit on you game
burning your gay punches is the only way it will flame
bad opener, no point
u suck foreal, had 4 days 2 write n yu droped that crap
don no y u hav 2pac as ur avater,cuz ant helpin u 2 rap
meh
dawgs ur not organized....you never going to be blowing
i"ll draw a map for u son, so u can see wher ur life is goin
ok...played
"Game" claims hes real dope....but he could never be one
look at his graveyard how many vets have he beat...None
aight punch..only one seen
worthless rapper.....Game over is the wackess in this city
u tryed 2 pick urself up, but seems 2 go down like gravity
meh
v/TS
better punches,and structure
Game, stretched bars are not good
elevate
Ill be ur medicine call me ‘bucklys’ cause the ‘sickone’ is about to be
beat/
N ur lyrics? The only time when that shit is ‘rippin’ Is if I ‘tear’ ur rap
Sheet/
i think i heard this "rippin" ur "sheets" too often, but there was still no punch…..kid ur a fag and we don’t even need a no lie detector to detected-it/
ur just like a PS2 controller ur near the main button but never selected/
this was better, except from the "no lie detector to detected-it, 2nd line was ok"
.......u been on ur knees almost all ur live so getting-up u might need a lift/
U no what? Christmas Is soon coming so use ur ‘wrapping’ skills for my gift/
hella played
……wigga end ur problems go to the L.L.L jr office and sign out right away/
Ya now I no why they call u the ‘sickone’ after all u the main cause of aids/
this was better, ok
Dis White boy felt special seeing his name in colour he actrully felt black…
But little does he no Both of are names are in bold/
The only way ill be ‘feeling’ the effects of the ‘sick-one’
………………...………............Is if I caught ur cold/
now u messed up here, coz this coulda been probably your best line if it wasnt stretched to like nearly 4 lines
This man is a prostitute hes just like his lyrics he is always ‘dropping’‘down’/
....The ‘sickone’ obviously didn’t listen when aines said ‘no-fucking-around’/
i actually like the idea, coulda come up wid summit though to make it hit harder it was kinda weak, but i see what u were tryna do.
vs
you faggot, your rapps is finish...ill shit on you game
burning your gay punches is the only way it will flame
kinda weak opener, played
u suck foreal, had 4 days 2 write n yu droped that crap
don no y u hav 2pac as ur avater,cuz ant helpin u 2 rap
better, ok-ish
dawgs ur not organized....you never going to be blowing
i"ll draw a map for u son, so u can see wher ur life is goin
ok-ish but kinda weak
"Game" claims hes real dope....but he could never be one
look at his graveyard how many vets have he beat...None
lol, bar of the battle so far, and very true
worthless rapper.....Game over is the wackess in this city
u tryed 2 pick urself up, but seems 2 go down like gravity
weak closer
I thought this was kinda weak to be honest. Both came pretty weak.
Game - U had some ok ideas, but ur lines were really really stretched, which fucked the flow up aswell as making it messy. You need to focus on some decent structure aswell as the weak punches. Re-word your stuff, and youll do better.
The sickone - I felt you also came weak, but had the bar of the battle which was "aight" but i still wouldnt class it as "decent". Structure and flow was str8.
It came down 2 this for me,
nothing
vs
"Game" claims hes real dope....but he could never be one
look at his graveyard how many vets have he beat...None
V/ The sickone for the reasons above.
No hate just honest feed.
Fuck i thought i had this in the bag...
2-3
More votes...
Wait...
Some of these guys aint in the league
does it count???
Ill be ur medicine call me ‘bucklys’ cause the ‘sickone’ is about to be
beat/
N ur lyrics? The only time when that shit is ‘rippin’ Is if I ‘tear’ ur rap
Sheet/
*** AN ALRIGHT PUNCH***
…..kid ur a fag and we don’t even need a no lie detector to detected-it/
ur just like a PS2 controller ur near the main button but never selected/
*** KINDA FEELING IT***
.......u been on ur knees almost all ur live so getting-up u might need a lift/
U no what? Christmas Is soon coming so use ur ‘wrapping’ skills for my gift/
*** HAHA PRETTY GOOD PUNCH***
……wigga end ur problems go to the L.L.L jr office and sign out right away/
Ya now I no why they call u the ‘sickone’ after all u the main cause of aids/
** SORTA THE WORD-PLAY COULD BE BETTER***
Dis White boy felt special seeing his name in colour he actrully felt black…
But little does he no Both of are names are in bold/
The only way ill be ‘feeling’ the effects of the ‘sick-one’
………………...………............Is if I caught ur cold/
*** I STILL GOT IT BUT YOUR LINE WAS STRETCHED***
This man is a prostitute hes just like his lyrics he is always ‘dropping’‘down’/
....The ‘sickone’ obviously didn’t listen when aines said ‘no-fucking-around’/
*** NICE LIL PUNCH***
vs.
you faggot, your rapps is finish...ill shit on you game
burning your gay punches is the only way it will flame
*** PRETTY GOOD ***
u suck foreal, had 4 days 2 write n yu droped that crap
don no y u hav 2pac as ur avater,cuz ant helpin u 2 rap
*** AN ALRIGHT PUNCH COULD HAVE HAD BETTER WORD-PLAY***
dawgs ur not organized....you never going to be blowing
i"ll draw a map for u son, so u can see wher ur life is goin
*** NAH AIN'T FEELING IT***
"Game" claims hes real dope....but he could never be one
look at his graveyard how many vets have he beat...None
*** NOT REALLY FEELING IT***
worthless rapper.....Game over is the wackess in this city
u tryed 2 pick urself up, but seems 2 go down like gravity
*** KIND OF A GOOD PUNCH*** THROUGH OUT YA VERSE SICK-ONE NICE FLOW...
I have to give it to game- ova for better punches an he kinda stayed more consistant...
Sick-one u had alright punches but an ur flow was alright to...
* Not hatin just votin...*
Vote- Game-ova.. nice battle
after taking away votes from those not in the league
my vote would go to game-ova tho
so he takes this
not bad guys but got to come alot better agaisnt better people
The sickone (0-2)
Game-ova (1-1)