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LLL Jr. Week 3
yup 3rd week of season
last weeks no shows are gone
2 more weeks and belts will be introduced
boot matches also as the league is too big currently
As for this week same rules as previous weeks
Check by wednesday drop by friday
no fucking around
Good Luck :2thumb:
Check. 10 or wateva u wanna do
aiight, im cool with 10 i guess.
Aines set it up right...speak no english? Spanish i guess ill post
Mouse is uno and like my name................it comes Over Dose
Overdosed on your own conceit retards i will surpass
You can roll in Tu-Dors but still be the First C.L.-Ass
Underated by XXL standards.....Rays Pissed and i feel it
So ill give um a M cause at least he makes the age limit
Your concepts are like skinny niggas liftin with adrenaline rush
The constant repitition like most say......will only get you cut
I see you posted links to your song mixin words wit no hesitation
Ill add a LESS...to help out the front of the fortunate foundation
Quote:
Originally Posted by D.Zaster
Quote:
Originally Posted by M.O.U.S.E.
Mouse is tryin to ride my dick thats why im hurtin the bastard
Kid you must have a death wish...the way you flirt with disaster
Hittin him with a mickey mouse club, kid knows im viscious
Last time ya saw Disney i was beatin you this battle isnt any diffrent
Get it? i didnt think so..........face it you stink ho
You couldnt make people wave at you if you hosted a game of bingo
I think you should take some time-out, ya raps is that dirty
The F.C.C. will censer ya verse.............its FILLED with bad wording
This newbs too stupid to compete, use his bad grammar as evidence
Yeah, ya represents.......every battle you've ever had with veterans
Aines set it up right...speak no english? Spanish i guess ill post
Mouse is uno and like my name................it comes Over Dose
heh
Overdosed on your own conceit retards i will surpass
You can roll in Tu-Dors but still be the First C.L.-Ass
naw second line threw me off
Underated by XXL standards.....Rays Pissed and i feel it
So ill give um a M cause at least he makes the age limit
heh
Your concepts are like skinny niggas liftin with adrenaline rush
The constant repitition like most say......will only get you cut
naw
I see you posted links to your song mixin words wit no hesitation
Ill add a LESS...to help out the front of the fortunate foundation
no
vs
Mouse is tryin to ride my dick thats why im hurtin the bastard
Kid you must have a death wish...the way you flirt with disaster
lol
Hittin him with a mickey mouse club, kid knows im viscious
Last time ya saw Disney i was beatin you this battle isnt any diffrent
naw to streched and not worded well
Get it? i didnt think so..........face it you stink ho
You couldnt make people wave at you if you hosted a game of bingo
heh
I think you should take some time-out, ya raps is that dirty
The F.C.C. will censer ya verse.............its FILLED with bad wording
lmao
This newbs too stupid to compete, use his bad grammar as evidence
Yeah, ya represents.......every battle you've ever had with veterans
ok
Mouse-ou Had A Couple Bars That You Stepped ya Game Up With And Seem Like You Tried and some of ya otha bars was statements and badly worded but you canem decent from your to bar
OV-your verse was pretty nice i feel off on your second bar it was badly worded and streched could of been better i liked your forth bar you worded it nicely and that took your win both did pretty decent this week but ov just ame a lil more harder in his verse
pz
v/o
vote overdose, mouse u rushed this week. didnt really connect wit any of ya bars... easy win here
Mouse:
Aines set it up right...speak no english? Spanish i guess ill post
Mouse is uno and like my name................it comes Over Dose
O.V.:
Mouse is tryin to ride my dick thats why im hurtin the bastard
Kid you must have a death wish...the way you flirt with disaster
Overall:
Both had really good opening bars. But then its just got a
little bad. Your filler on both verses, was just annoying
because both of you had loadsa potential. Just too bad
you didn't take advantage of it. Ima have to give it to the
quotable that I liked more and that was O.V's.
It was worded better. . simple.
Vote:O.V. Dose.
Aines set it up right...speak no english? Spanish i guess ill post
Mouse is uno and like my name................it comes Over Dose
ok
Overdosed on your own conceit retards i will surpass
You can roll in Tu-Dors but still be the First C.L.-Ass
blah
Underated by XXL standards.....Rays Pissed and i feel it
So ill give um a M cause at least he makes the age limit
meh
Your concepts are like skinny niggas liftin with adrenaline rush
The constant repitition like most say......will only get you cut
naw
I see you posted links to your song mixin words wit no hesitation
Ill add a LESS...to help out the front of the fortunate foundation
meh
vs
Mouse is tryin to ride my dick thats why im hurtin the bastard
Kid you must have a death wish...the way you flirt with disaster
meh
Hittin him with a mickey mouse club, kid knows im viscious
Last time ya saw Disney i was beatin you this battle isnt any diffrent
naw
Get it? i didnt think so..........face it you stink ho
You couldnt make people wave at you if you hosted a game of bingo
meh
I think you should take some time-out, ya raps is that dirty
The F.C.C. will censer ya verse.............its FILLED with bad wording
meh
This newbs too stupid to compete, use his bad grammar as evidence
Yeah, ya represents.......every battle you've ever had with veterans
eh...
overall a pretty weak battle...ive seen better from the both of you....this does have to come down to the openings cuz the rest of yalls verse was pretty bad...and i did feel like OV had a better and harder opener
v/OV
Tru Tru......that how i learn....thanx bump 0-3..........
this was good match, i also felt that mouse rushed, and needed more personals. but mouse had a flow going, and ya punches were'nt that hard. you had some good woRD in here. and ya had a rushed structure.
o.v had a str8 flow, but manage to come out on top with his punches, and mokre personals.. v/o.v
WoRd^^
^I dont think your in the leauge......................not bein rude or nuffin but if ur not in the league u cant vote....
Aines set it up right...speak no english? Spanish i guess ill post
Mouse is uno and like my name................it comes Over Dose
Creative, cool
Overdosed on your own conceit retards i will surpass
You can roll in Tu-Dors but still be the First C.L.-Ass
Nah, wording was way off here
Underated by XXL standards.....Rays Pissed and i feel it
So ill give um a M cause at least he makes the age limit
Same again, wording was fucked, concept was weird as well
Your concepts are like skinny niggas liftin with adrenaline rush
The constant repitition like most say......will only get you cut
Nah
I see you posted links to your song mixin words wit no hesitation
Ill add a LESS...to help out the front of the fortunate foundation
Weird concept
Mouse is tryin to ride my dick thats why im hurtin the bastard
Kid you must have a death wish...the way you flirt with disaster
Pretty cool
Hittin him with a mickey mouse club, kid knows im viscious
Last time ya saw Disney i was beatin you this battle isnt any diffrent
Weak, wasn't feeling this
Get it? i didnt think so..........face it you stink ho
You couldnt make people wave at you if you hosted a game of bingo
Ok
I think you should take some time-out, ya raps is that dirty
The F.C.C. will censer ya verse.............its FILLED with bad wording
Not bad
This newbs too stupid to compete, use his bad grammar as evidence
Yeah, ya represents.......every battle you've ever had with veterans
Didn't get
Mouse, your wording was too off and your concepts were too weird for your punches to hit, some of them were worded to the point they were barely understandable, so work on that.
O.V, you had some decent punches and ok concepts, you won this pretty easily though as you were way more consistent.
v/ O.V Dose
Represents/Rep resents like his rep resents him everytime he loses to veteransQuote:
Originally Posted by KempoMRK
I didn't like the way he worded it but with better wording this coulda been dope.
its Rep Presents
Thats the wordplay on it.
ill vote on this later.
na i think demons version goes better
you mean my version? lol ...damnit demon you're stealing my thunder
Lol yer yours/demons version makes a better read...
Next time i post here it will be a vote :) weneva that is...
MOUSE
Aines set it up right...speak no english? Spanish i guess ill post
Mouse is uno and like my name................it comes Over Dose
^Solid attempt at a nameplay the concept was very original, but the wording killed it. With frsh wording this punch is killer.
As for your other lines, I wasn't feeling them. This verse was very inconsistent and I don't see why you posted so early. You have a good amount of time to drop and unless you won't be able to post later or your going to drop dope I don't see why you wouldn't take advantadge of the time. I know your capable of a lot more man.
OV Dose
Mouse is tryin to ride my dick thats why im hurtin the bastard
Kid you must have a death wish...the way you flirt with disaster
^Eh. This was cool but, I didn't like it too much because I don't see how he was flirting from the quotes you posted..lol You forced the quotes into a punch but I guess this was ok.
Well, I've seen you drop a lot better man. This verse seemed extremely half-assed. The only reason I'm voting for you is because I felt the rest of your verse was better than the rest of mouses.
V//OV
Everybody keeps sayin why i dropped so early lol........me and him agredd to drop by twelve midnight......thats why.....
M.O.U.S.E. came with a dope opening punch but the rest was blah.
O.V. Dose was much more consistent throughout, with better rhyming structure.
Vote: O.V. Dose
Aines set it up right...speak no english? Spanish i guess ill post
Mouse is uno and like my name................it comes Over Dose
decent but played as hell
Overdosed on your own conceit retards i will surpass
You can roll in Tu-Dors but still be the First C.L.-Ass
forced more than fisting a virgin
Underated by XXL standards.....Rays Pissed and i feel it
So ill give um a M cause at least he makes the age limit
that was just gay
Your concepts are like skinny niggas liftin with adrenaline rush
The constant repitition like most say......will only get you cut
No
I see you posted links to your song mixin words wit no hesitation
Ill add a LESS...to help out the front of the fortunate foundation
Hell no
Mouse is tryin to ride my dick thats why im hurtin the bastard
Kid you must have a death wish...the way you flirt with disaster
Lmao!
Hittin him with a mickey mouse club, kid knows im viscious
Last time ya saw Disney i was beatin you this battle isnt any diffrent
meh, i used wordplay like this b4 so it's kinda played
Get it? i didnt think so..........face it you stink ho
You couldnt make people wave at you if you hosted a game of bingo
NO
I think you should take some time-out, ya raps is that dirty
The F.C.C. will censer ya verse.............its FILLED with bad wording
na
This newbs too stupid to compete, use his bad grammar as evidence
Yeah, ya represents.......every battle you've ever had with veterans
very bad wording but nice concept
well, both of you had a few good lines but then would follow it up with somethin filler or played. Mouse stop tryin so damn hard your forcin the shit outta all your concepts. keep it simple
v/ Ov dose
Mouse
Aines set it up right...speak no english? Spanish i guess ill post
Mouse is uno and like my name................it comes Over Dose
^You tried but it wasn't the best shit. And the rest of your verse sucked.
Vs
O.V Dose
Mouse is tryin to ride my dick thats why im hurtin the bastard
Kid you must have a death wish...the way you flirt with disaster
^Dope. Mouse = Owned.
This newbs too stupid to compete, use his bad grammar as evidence
Yeah, ya represents.......every battle you've ever had with veterans
^Nice wordplay.
V/ O.V Dose for a more concistent verse and wayyy harder punches.
Aines set it up right...speak no english? Spanish i guess ill post
Mouse is uno and like my name................it comes Over Dose
vs.
Mouse is tryin to ride my dick thats why im hurtin the bastard
Kid you must have a death wish...the way you flirt with disaster
Get it? i didnt think so..........face it you stink ho
You couldnt make people wave at you if you hosted a game of bingo
I think you should take some time-out, ya raps is that dirty
The F.C.C. will censer ya verse.............its FILLED with bad wording
mouse you came real weak. your opener was the only quotable, and it wasn't even that good. work on wording and more doper/wittier concepts. ov, pretty dope verse. you could also work on wording, but you got this good. i liked the FCC line alot. good shit and nice drop.
v/ o.v. dose
and for more ray pissed/o.v. dose battles, click the link below :2thumb:
wtf why mouse aint banned yet? he bit meks :mad:
^^^^^^^WHAT THE HELL U TALKIN BOUT I NEVA BITE WHAT THE FUCK.........MAN GET OUTTA HERE.......i rememba sittin here and writin the whole thing so shut that up lol.....
Aines set it up right...speak no english? Spanish i guess ill post
Mouse is uno and like my name................it comes Over Dose
(Eh.)
Overdosed on your own conceit retards i will surpass
You can roll in Tu-Dors but still be the First C.L.-Ass
(Forced HELLA)
Underated by XXL standards.....Rays Pissed and i feel it
So ill give um a M cause at least he makes the age limit
(Eh. Horrid Wording.)
Your concepts are like skinny niggas liftin with adrenaline rush
The constant repitition like most say......will only get you cut
(Naw.)
I see you posted links to your song mixin words wit no hesitation
Ill add a LESS...to help out the front of the fortunate foundation
(Naw.)
vs. OV Dose
Mouse is tryin to ride my dick thats why im hurtin the bastard
Kid you must have a death wish...the way you flirt with disaster
(Not Really.)
Hittin him with a mickey mouse club, kid knows im viscious
Last time ya saw Disney i was beatin you this battle isnt any diffrent
(Ight. Forced.)
Get it? i didnt think so..........face it you stink ho
You couldnt make people wave at you if you hosted a game of bingo
(Cheesy.)
I think you should take some time-out, ya raps is that dirty
The F.C.C. will censer ya verse.............its FILLED with bad wording
(Hah. Ight.)
This newbs too stupid to compete, use his bad grammar as evidence
Yeah, ya represents.......every battle you've ever had with veterans
(Naw.)
/v OV Dose. He got this easy. Had the better lines basically. F.C.C line won it for him. Not a great battle. Pz.
lol.. its so obvious you bit.. you battled meks.. he used the line.. then you used it in another battle.. rofl.. hahaQuote:
Originally Posted by M.O.U.S.E.
Quote:
Originally Posted by WTF MAN
Nigga check every motha fuckin battle ive been in......get aines lol.......i dont bite period.......oh yea and didnt meks vote on this shit ON THE FIRST PAGE........if i bit him he woulda said somethin stupid fuck.........man get ya dick ridin ass out of here wit tha shit......and if it was some how a conicidence i could understand but i dont bite....so shut ya motha fuckin mouth u no talent.....net gangsta......prest ova the internet cause its my lover ass nigga....
lol... net gangsta? how am i acting gangsta faggit.. lol.. but relax your self fag face.. im just saying i thought you bit... dont get a heart attack now.. lmfao..
no talent? I'll rape you..
Ov wins
Mouse (1-1)
O.V Dose (2-0)