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LLL Jr. Week 3
yup 3rd week of season
last weeks no shows are gone
2 more weeks and belts will be introduced
boot matches also as the league is too big currently
As for this week same rules as previous weeks
Check by wednesday drop by friday
no fucking around
Good Luck :2thumb:
Yo Yo Yo
16 hoe
check drop early fam
droppin tonight or tomorrow morning
Man my lyrics?, like Philly Sweet Swishers sell
but ur rap bars are weak, u should switch ta jail
put ya kin up fam, cuz straight up they can git it
next day, u'll mourn in sickness like pregnant bitches
if ur nice I'm triple that, I'm bomb a geek yea u made me rude
cuz when I come out, u'll be obsoleete like playstation 2
tony cant get a girl, and sure, he gets quotes but it aint much..
thas why he's sittin home alone, givin strokes like a paint brush
fuck it homey......youz a failure, u cant hold ya own
keep up wit me? Nah... youz a trailor like mobile homes
10
my bad, i quit the track team so i'll have time now
im droppin tonight when i get outta school
meh, afraid to drop 16.........Quote:
Originally Posted by Tony Brown
Watch ya back, i feel sorry for all the little boys
Even i like Candy, but Meks gots an Almond Joy lmao
Parties bump on my block, but the gay shit's gotta stop
Told em' come to My Strip
.............he couldnt wait 4 me to take my clothes off
Sure you got this battle wrapped, or so it may seem
U wouldnt have this War-Locked dressin as 1 4 Halloween
I saw u gettin prepared, makin ya verse perfect for this day
But you'll only be gettin ready for the Long Haul....of Shame
You ain't accomplished shit, thinkin you did, your delerious
If Love Conquers All, Meks must've never had that experience!
I Win
lolz..You said lmao to your own line
fuck it homey......youz a failure, u cant hold ya own
keep up wit me? Nah... youz a trailor like mobile homes
vs.
Parties bump on my block, but the gay shit's gotta stop
Told em' come to My Strip
.............he couldnt wait 4 me to take my clothes off
Sure you got this battle wrapped, or so it may seem
U wouldnt have this War-Locked dressin as 1 4 Halloween
You ain't accomplished shit, thinkin you did, your delerious
If Love Conquers All, Meks must've never had that experience!
Thought it was really one sided.......Meks i felt u rushed ya verse to much....didnt flow right to me for some reason.......nothin reallly sparked my intrest except for the closer..... and thats to late.......Tony......i honestly felt u picked it up and ran with it foreal.......punches made me think......but when i got it it was good.......good creativity....jus was feelin ur verse more out the two.....cause it kept my intrest......
v/ Tony
word renegade lol
uppn. no one sidedness tho dont yall get ahead of yaselves
Meks
fuck it homey......youz a failure, u cant hold ya own
keep up wit me? Nah... youz a trailor like mobile homes
Vs
Tony
Parties bump on my block, but the gay shit's gotta stop
Told em' come to My Strip
.............he couldnt wait 4 me to take my clothes off
Sure you got this battle wrapped, or so it may seem
U wouldnt have this War-Locked dressin as 1 4 Halloween
Meks what happened to you man?
V/ Tony, easy win.
meks-lmao your verse came so basic like old skool toys wow last bar was decent other then that you came pplayed girl punches,jack off punches naw came pretty week in ya verse structure was straight though
t-verse was pretty good i liked a few lines in your verse but your punches definantly hit harder then meks easily like meks giving up now a days.YOur Came Nice on A bar but other ones wasnt like damn u just did what you needed to top his so i win for having effort in your verse and stronger punches in your verse pz
go vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=254563
Man my lyrics?, like Philly Sweet Swishers sell
but ur rap bars are weak, u should switch ta jail
^^jail/bar concepts are well-played and this isnt flipped too well
put ya kin up fam, cuz straight up they can git it
next day, u'll mourn in sickness like pregnant bitches
^^heh actually this wordplay works, pretty creative
if ur nice I'm triple that, I'm bomb a geek yea u made me rude
cuz when I come out, u'll be obsoleete like playstation 2
^^meh
tony cant get a girl, and sure, he gets quotes but it aint much..
thas why he's sittin home alone, givin strokes like a paint brush
^^lmao I shouldn't really find this funny cos it's bad, but gets corniness points for making me laugh
fuck it homey......youz a failure, u cant hold ya own
keep up wit me? Nah... youz a trailor like mobile homes
^^heh, ok
vs.
meh, afraid to drop 16.........
Watch ya back, i feel sorry for all the little boys
Even i like Candy, but Meks gots an Almond Joy lmao
^^eh
Parties bump on my block, but the gay shit's gotta stop
Told em' come to My Strip
.............he couldnt wait 4 me to take my clothes off
^^needed better wording to make it harsher, but not bad concept
Sure you got this battle wrapped, or so it may seem
U wouldnt have this War-Locked dressin as 1 4 Halloween
^^creative
I saw u gettin prepared, makin ya verse perfect for this day
But you'll only be gettin ready for the Long Haul....of Shame
^^heh creative just a bit better wording needed to make it harsher
You ain't accomplished shit, thinkin you did, your delerious
If Love Conquers All, Meks must've never had that experience!
^^pretty coo
hmm I thought Meks was gonna take this, but in the end it seems Mak edged it
Meks did better than y'all said, dunno what shit y'all on. And Liljay needs to stop voting like this was FL and this is his first time voting. And MOUSE, lol what ya writing that long waffle at the end for? You wrote so much without saying much at all.
v/Tony
Meks
Man my lyrics?, like Philly Sweet Swishers sell
but ur rap bars are weak, u should switch ta jail
^^ no
put ya kin up fam, cuz straight up they can git it
next day, u'll mourn in sickness like pregnant bitches
^^ lol sorta funny but bad wording
if ur nice I'm triple that, I'm bomb a geek yea u made me rude
cuz when I come out, u'll be obsoleete like playstation 2
^^ haha
tony cant get a girl, and sure, he gets quotes but it aint much..
thas why he's sittin home alone, givin strokes like a paint brush
^^ meh...
fuck it homey......youz a failure, u cant hold ya own
keep up wit me? Nah... youz a trailor like mobile homes
^^ nah man
Tony
meh, afraid to drop 16.........
Watch ya back, i feel sorry for all the little boys
Even i like Candy, but Meks gots an Almond Joy
^^ lmfao All men
Parties bump on my block, but the gay shit's gotta stop
Told em' come to My Strip
.............he couldnt wait 4 me to take my clothes off
^^ no
Sure you got this battle wrapped, or so it may seem
U wouldnt have this War-Locked dressin as 1 4 Halloween
^^ not really a punch
I saw u gettin prepared, makin ya verse perfect for this day
But you'll only be gettin ready for the Long Haul....of Shame
^^ coulda been worded better but funny
You ain't accomplished shit, thinkin you did, your delerious
If Love Conquers All, Meks must've never had that experience!
^^ ooooo harshness lol
Good ass battle, Meks ur flow is cool, but sometimes ur wording is a lil off. SO V/ Tony for a bit funnier and harsher lines and more consistency too
V/Tony
uoppppn mannn
are you in the league?Quote:
Originally Posted by Zephyr
Meks
Yeh, nothing was really quotable IMO. We both know you can drop a lot better than this, it's all about the effort you put in. Just brush this loss of and keep dropping dope in the next weeks like you usually do.
Tony
Parties bump on my block, but the gay shit's gotta stop
Told em' come to My Strip
.............he couldnt wait 4 me to take my clothes off
^Eh. This was pretty cool. Wording could always be better.
Yeh, you got really lucky here. You've been dropping inconsistent man. You seem like your running low on concepts. I've seen you drop a lot better than this and I see you as some one who will go far in the league, you just need to drop to your potential.
Overall
Meh, battle overall. This had the potential to be dope but, it seemed like you both half assed.
v// Tony, More consistent
.. Vote on my battle y'all
na, i ain't 1/2-ass it more like 3/5 lol
Meks
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Man my lyrics?, like Philly Sweet Swishers sell
but ur rap bars are weak, u should switch ta jail
it was weak, but just for reference verse bars and jail bars is hella played imo
put ya kin up fam, cuz straight up they can git it
next day, u'll mourn in sickness like pregnant bitches
this was aight, better
if ur nice I'm triple that, I'm bomb a geek yea u made me rude
cuz when I come out, u'll be obsoleete like playstation 2
ok-ish
tony cant get a girl, and sure, he gets quotes but it aint much..
thas why he's sittin home alone, givin strokes like a paint brush
nah this was weak, and very simple
fuck it homey......youz a failure, u cant hold ya own
keep up wit me? Nah... youz a trailor like mobile homes
weak closer too imio
Kinda shocked at this verse, i expected alot better from u. I personally think you should not post your verse so soon, take the time to re-read it, because alot of this was weak. Maybe u rushed it but it wasnt up to par, and unless Tony comes hella weak, u cant win this battle.
Tony
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meh, afraid to drop 16.........
Watch ya back, i feel sorry for all the little boys
Even i like Candy, but Meks gots an Almond Joy
Eh why is people laughin? Dont make sense to me
Parties bump on my block, but the gay shit's gotta stop
Told em' come to My Strip
.............he couldnt wait 4 me to take my clothes off
This was betta, aight
Sure you got this battle wrapped, or so it may seem
U wouldnt have this War-Locked dressin as 1 4 Halloween
nope, weak
I saw u gettin prepared, makin ya verse perfect for this day
But you'll only be gettin ready for the Long Haul....of Shame
aight
You ain't accomplished shit, thinkin you did, your delerious
If Love Conquers All, Meks must've never had that experience!
lol, aight closer
You also came kinda weak imo. Maybe not as week as Meks tho, I didnt understand your opener for a start, but you was more consistent than Meks by like one bar, so i gotta give u the win. Couldve come harder though.
I know that u can both do better than this, alotta people say that i no, but this is fo real.
V/ Tony for being slightly more consistent, as you can see in my breakdown. But none of you came really hard.
Just my opinions, no offence to any of u.
Linkage
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=254544
your slow lol
Almond Joy=All Men joy
yea..
faggots
lol.
vote tb easily
meks you had nuttin in my mind, that mournin wordplay while clever, was indirect as hell.
everything else was bad, or played, i got the feeling you half assed it. my advice, got witty and be harsh.
tb, you half assed it 2, almond wordplay was okay, and ya closer was good, but that's about, i guess you read meks' verse was like fuck it i'll give ya'll 2 decent punches.
vote tb
tony wins
Tony Brown (2-1)
Meks(1-2)