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LLL Jr. Week 3
yup 3rd week of season
last weeks no shows are gone
2 more weeks and belts will be introduced
boot matches also as the league is too big currently
As for this week same rules as previous weeks
Check by wednesday drop by friday
no fucking around
Good Luck :2thumb:
whatever
don't mean to brag.. but they predict me to win foo
it's a damn shame.. everyone want's to see u. lose
he ask'd fo fruit punch.. so i turn'd fag on this trash
turned him around.. and started punching his ass
america's online to see this.. now signout.. goodbye
punch's make contact 's there's mo den meet's da eye
don't get all hype.. i don't give a fuck what u were told
make you dead lift ya name.. cuz u gotta rep to uphold
eye drop sockets foo.. n i'll plug u into success
get wet 'n i'll hang u out to dry..
..wita extention cord round ya neck
drop soon
dawgggggg wtf??????
i beat assasiin last week since noob was easy
asked aines for someone good.. and look who he gives me. :(
philly stupiddd for tryna beat me, ima bash this dyke now
"The Next Level".. damn if thats true i hope my xbox crashes right now.
ima slaughterr this faggot, brains'll be hella missin
gon' need to see a dr. phil..somethin like daytime television.
u do somethin with guns? dawg all ya arms wreck less
we all know u a pussy at heart like a baby phat charm necklace.
rippin this verse? hahaha u be spittin shit worse
true story u'll beat me to the ground.. since you'll be hittin it first.
don't mean to brag.. but they predict me to win foo
it's a damn shame.. everyone want's to see u. lose
-lol alrite, decent here..
he ask'd fo fruit punch.. so i turn'd fag on this trash
turned him around.. and started punching his ass
-lmfao, funny in a way but not much of a punch.
america's online to see this.. now signout.. goodbye
punch's make contact 's there's mo den meet's da eye
-mayb i dont understand something, but it kinda didnt make sense to me.. but i understand what you were tryin to say... lol coulda been good if you worded it better
don't get all hype.. i don't give a fuck what u were told
make you dead lift ya name.. cuz u gotta rep to uphold
-lol alrite.
eye drop sockets foo.. n i'll plug u into success
get wet 'n i'll hang u out to dry..
..wita extention cord round ya neck
-lol yeh best line of ur verse
vs.
i beat assasiin last week since noob was easy
asked aines for someone good.. and look who he gives me.
-lol played shit still., but worded aite i guess
philly stupiddd for tryna beat me, ima bash this dyke now
"The Next Level".. damn if thats true i hope my xbox crashes right now.
-lol decent line here.
ima slaughterr this faggot, brains'll be hella missin
gon' need to see a dr. phil..somethin like daytime television.
-nah yo, weak punch attempt
u do somethin with guns? dawg all ya arms wreck less
we all know u a pussy at heart like a baby phat charm necklace.
-lolol ahha alrite another decent line.
rippin this verse? hahaha u be spittin shit worse
true story u'll beat me to the ground.. since you'll be hittin it first.
-lol i think its kinda played.. but i liked how it was worded yeh.. best line from u in this verse i think
/decent battle.. philly didnt come as hard as i kno he can.. whenever he battles me he comes dope :mad:, whhhhhyy.. but anyway lol.. phillyz best line was his closer aswell as ulose's.. but i think im gonna go w/ ulose for this.. he just seemed to come and stay more consistent than philly.. i know philly can do better than this.. but yeh.. ulose just came w/ more punches, and effective lines..
v/ulose
rippin this verse? hahaha u be spittin shit worse
true story u'll beat me to the ground.. since you'll be hittin it first.
the only quotable in this battle.^
It was solid by both of you but nothing special untill U.lose droped his closer. The Next Level line was cool too.
Vote U.Lose
phillycannonz: Was that 'mo den' line meant to be a 'modem' pun or something, or was it a contact lenses/meets the eye thing? If so, don't use retarded mobile-phone spelling unless it's for the purpose of a textual joke- otherwise your lines get confusing. Your verse was consistently OK, but nothing spectacularly witty.
U-Lose: Crap opener and Dr Phil line... you were totally inconsistent, dropping utter crap followed by something decent. Anyway, you had more good lines than philly and showed more effort in multi-rhyming.
Vote: U-Lose
Quote:
Originally Posted by Nib Oswald
or was it a contact lenses/meets the eye thing?
^^^ THAT ONE..:)
philly-came weak this weak didnt try fareal good structure came with opener and it was played to death nothen really quotable in your verse
ulose-opener was straight had me laugh but wasnt hitten shit you had more punches directed to him in this battle both came wack but u lose just had more wit to his verse
v/lose
don't mean to brag.. but they predict me to win foo
it's a damn shame.. everyone want's to see u. lose
^Couldve been worded better.......
he ask'd fo fruit punch.. so i turn'd fag on this trash
turned him around.. and started punching his ass
^Naa gay jokes are appearin too much in battles
america's online to see this.. now signout.. goodbye
punch's make contact 's there's mo den meet's da eye
^Could of been dope.......the wording threw me
don't get all hype.. i don't give a fuck what u were told
make you dead lift ya name.. cuz u gotta rep to uphold
^aha
eye drop sockets foo.. n i'll plug u into success
get wet 'n i'll hang u out to dry..
..wita extention cord round ya neck
^aha
Verse was ok.......Really ur wording kinda threw me off.......but i jus felt you did average......I felt if u wolda worded ya punches a lil betta...... u coulda actually won it......but it jus didnt go together well to me........coulda putit together betta....
Vs.
i beat assasiin last week since noob was easy
asked aines for someone good.. and look who he gives me.
^LOL
philly stupiddd for tryna beat me, ima bash this dyke now
"The Next Level".. damn if thats true i hope my xbox crashes right now.
^aha.....but couldve been worded betta....
ima slaughterr this faggot, brains'll be hella missin
gon' need to see a dr. phil..somethin like daytime television.
^ok
u do somethin with guns? dawg all ya arms wreck less
we all know u a pussy at heart like a baby phat charm necklace.
^lol
rippin this verse? hahaha u be spittin shit worse
true story u'll beat me to the ground.. since you'll be hittin it first.
^ok closer............
U gotta alot of laughs from me foreal......i felt ya verse was well put together.....most lines were unique......stuff i neva heard before like the baby phat joint.....Jus felt you came more creative foreal.......and the punches had more of effect.......
v/ U lose....
Philly:
Nothing, sorry man.
U.Lose:
philly stupiddd for tryna beat me, ima bash this dyke now
"The Next Level".. damn if thats true i hope my xbox crashes right now.
rippin this verse? hahaha u be spittin shit worse
true story u'll beat me to the ground.. since you'll be hittin it first.
Overall:
This is where I explain shit but. . ain't it obvious?
Philly, you just sound confused when telling a punch.
Try not to over complicate it. U.Lose had some bad bad
punches but the quotes were cool. Good flip for
the closer.
Vote:U.Lose
don't mean to brag.. but they predict me to win foo
it's a damn shame.. everyone want's to see u. lose
^^meh, bland, predictable play on his name, but ok
he ask'd fo fruit punch.. so i turn'd fag on this trash
turned him around.. and started punching his ass
^^ok
america's online to see this.. now signout.. goodbye
punch's make contact 's there's mo den meet's da eye
^^ok but needed better wording
don't get all hype.. i don't give a fuck what u were told
make you dead lift ya name.. cuz u gotta rep to uphold
^^good concept, but not really worded as a diss
eye drop sockets foo.. n i'll plug u into success
get wet 'n i'll hang u out to dry..
..wita extention cord round ya neck
^^ok
vs.
i beat assasiin last week since noob was easy
asked aines for someone good.. and look who he gives me.
^^this concept has been used 9898123 times
philly stupiddd for tryna beat me, ima bash this dyke now
"The Next Level".. damn if thats true i hope my xbox crashes right now.
^^ok
ima slaughterr this faggot, brains'll be hella missin
gon' need to see a dr. phil..somethin like daytime television.
^^pretty coo
u do somethin with guns? dawg all ya arms wreck less
we all know u a pussy at heart like a baby phat charm necklace.
^^meh
rippin this verse? hahaha u be spittin shit worse
true story u'll beat me to the ground.. since you'll be hittin it first.
^^coo, nice
v/U.Lose
7-0
vote philly cannonz... other guy came with garbage, Dr phil?.. lmao u did ok last week but this verse was trash,
dr phil, double meaning on d/r for philly, didn't ya get it Meks?
:mad:,......stop badgering in my voter's......lolQuote:
Originally Posted by Vaskez
7-1
link's edit'f to first post
Quote:
Originally Posted by Vaskez
yea i got it...and? i wasnt feelin it at all.
Vote Philly....
Opener- u -lose
punchs- Philly
Flow- philly
Structure- philly
Word-play- U-LOSE
Creativity- PHILLY
Finisher- PHILLY
I feel that philly came stronger an i was feeling his punches a lot more so my vote goes to philly.......
NICE BATTLE...
7-2
this dude allways makes a comeback^
Philly = The Comeback Kid
watch him win.
philly stupiddd for tryna beat me, ima bash this dyke now
"The Next Level".. damn if thats true i hope my xbox crashes right now
rippin this verse? hahaha u be spittin shit worse
true story u'll beat me to the ground.. since you'll be hittin it first
vs
don't get all hype.. i don't give a fuck what u were told
make you dead lift ya name.. cuz u gotta rep to uphold
v/ ulose
8-2
whys duke up there knockin my verse, u aint nobody great.
why try when i can key somethin in 2 minutes and still win?
stfu,....u got voted against..:love:......... :2thumb:Quote:
Originally Posted by U. Lose
and u got voted against 4 times as many times i did... great insult dogggie
:rolleyes:........ur still a bad man,........*tells mommy*Quote:
Originally Posted by U. Lose
don't mean to brag.. but they predict me to win foo
it's a damn shame.. everyone want's to see u. lose
its a bit simple? Kinda the obvious hit on the name, but ok
he ask'd fo fruit punch.. so i turn'd fag on this trash
turned him around.. and started punching his ass
ok
america's online to see this.. now signout.. goodbye
punch's make contact 's there's mo den meet's da eye
yeah there was aight
don't get all hype.. i don't give a fuck what u were told
make you dead lift ya name.. cuz u gotta rep to uphold
lol best line so far
eye drop sockets foo.. n i'll plug u into success
get wet 'n i'll hang u out to dry..
..wita extention cord round ya neck
aight closer
It was average imo. All of ya punches were "aight, but only one that really caught my eye, which i will quote in a minute. But thats all i can say on it, mostly average aights. Need to make the punches hit a little harder, another thing is that i thought ur punches were kinda predictable, like i had an idea what it was gone say before i read it, try and hide them until ur actually saying it, then it will hit harder, just my opinion.
Vs.
i beat assasiin last week since noob was easy
asked aines for someone good.. and look who he gives me.
aight opener, as ur opponent though, kinda basic
philly stupiddd for tryna beat me, ima bash this dyke now
"The Next Level".. damn if thats true i hope my xbox crashes right now.
lol this was aight, coulda re worded the 2nd line, was a lil stretched.
ima slaughterr this faggot, brains'll be hella missin
gon' need to see a dr. phil..somethin like daytime television.
lol ok
u do somethin with guns? dawg all ya arms wreck less
we all know u a pussy at heart like a baby phat charm necklace.
yup this was aight
rippin this verse? hahaha u be spittin shit worse
true story u'll beat me to the ground.. since you'll be hittin it first.
lol aight closer.
U had the better verse imo. Ur punches werent "great" but they was slightly better than your opponents, if not even, but i think you got the win because it was more humorous and witty, with some fresh concepts.
V/ U . lose , for a more humorous and witty verse, with fresher concepts, Maybe just edged the harder punches, but was quite close. Both came with the same "aight" lines consistently.
Both yall hit the link, thanks
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=254544
And plz show the same respect as i do whilst votin.
i'll get to it in a lil bit hommie
bump......
rippin this verse? hahaha u be spittin shit worse
true story u'll beat me to the ground.. since you'll be hittin it first
vs
Nuffin
v/ U loose
U.win :)
10-2
go to the fuckin top
YAY 1-2 him.....:(
come on pplz.......vote against me some mo.......:mad:
wow seriously U. Lose displayed dopeness. thats some promising shit right there. keep up the good work.
U.Lose wins
U.Lose (2-0)
Phillycannonz (1-1)