Alphabetized (1-0) vs Tuckzz (1-0)

LLL Jr. Week 2

Word

first week went kinda well no shows are gone and cats who showed and who signed up are now in...

same as last week check by wednesday drop by friday come good....if your opponent fails to check but shows then that will be allowed but they will be deducted 2 votes for failure to check.....
so all in all you MUST drop a verse this week.....

last of all voting.....im scrapping the 4 links this week, unless voting activity goes then this is how it will stay and if i catch anyone feeding off the first vote you will have votes deducted...constant offence then i'll boot your ass from the league.....


good luck all

:2thumb:

check. good luck. 10-12.

yeah, 12 IS good....

edit..... check

I felt like getting this over with.


Alphabetized is wack, havent you at all began to notice yet?
you came here to earn respect and all most did....
.......until we all saw last weeks verse when you posted it !!!
no matter how hard alpha try's .. he'll still always remain lame
i would say ur words r played, but it seems u dont use word.play
im sonnin this whore .. theres no chance of you winnin, freak
beat me? nah, ill leave you wit more L's than the initials of dis league
you crumble as i speak, he'll get whored so bad he will no-show this
it'll be like like he's fucken constipated .. cuz he wont drop no shit
there's no stoppin this, trust me, you'll never see the Gold whore..
even if you took an hour walk looking around .. a Jewelry Store !!
this dude is poor .. you'll never come close to the best at text
Face da Facts, o yeah..they already ran away..
.... from ur ugly ass the first time you attempted to face them

Lmao @ being an underdog to tuckzz....


Its a shame tuckzz 2 com here, jus cause ya audios worse than ya txt
And no doubt you got special attributes.....
.................................. and no doubt that loosing's ya best
Tuckzz is like throwin a clock away, the way hes waste of time
u cant tell me hes in his write mind, when his drops dont even ryhme
& tuckzz, wit a style as fuck'd as urs, i aint even consider it legit
and you must feel like ya giving up...
........................................... everytime you hit submit
N'd I dunno how u can think ur elevated, when u aint even blunt high
And fuck LLL jr, when what you really need is a junior front lines
Tuckzz,u just a noob wit no rep, sad how no one gives ya shits a peep
And you need more Z's in ya name....
...............................the way ya ryhmes put people 2 sleep
Dude its deep, how u've been around for a while, n never endorced
& i consider u Yoda, the way u come up short with verses that r forced

Alphabetized is wack, havent you at all began to notice yet?
you came here to earn respect and all most did....
.......until we all saw last weeks verse when you posted it !!!
-nah yo too stretched
no matter how hard alpha try's .. he'll still always remain lame
i would say ur words r played, but it seems u dont use word.play
-lol alright i guess, but not a hard hittin punch
im sonnin this whore .. theres no chance of you winnin, freak
beat me? nah, ill leave you wit more L's than the initials of dis league
-haha pretty cool.. best punch so far..
you crumble as i speak, he'll get whored so bad he will no-show this
it'll be like like he's fucken constipated .. cuz he wont drop no shit
-nah man, mad played, come more fresh..
there's no stoppin this, trust me, you'll never see the Gold whore..
even if you took an hour walk looking around .. a Jewelry Store !!
-decent punch
this dude is poor .. you'll never come close to the best at text
Face da Facts, o yeah..they already ran away..
.... from ur ugly ass the first time you attempted to face them
-nope, this is a weak line.

vs.

Its a shame tuckzz 2 com here, jus cause ya audios worse than ya txt
And no doubt you got special attributes.....
.................................. and no doubt that loosing's ya best
-lol decent punch..
Tuckzz is like throwin a clock away, the way hes waste of time
u cant tell me hes in his write mind, when his drops dont even ryhme
-nah, too simple n not really much of a punch at all
& tuckzz, wit a style as fuck'd as urs, i aint even consider it legit
and you must feel like ya giving up...
........................................... everytime you hit submit
-haha, gyea i like this..
N'd I dunno how u can think ur elevated, when u aint even blunt high
And fuck LLL jr, when what you really need is a junior front lines
-lol alright.. not too hard but yeh
Tuckzz,u just a noob wit no rep, sad how no one gives ya shits a peep
And you need more Z's in ya name....
...............................the way ya ryhmes put people 2 sleep
-gyea cool line.. executed well
Dude its deep, how u've been around for a while, n never endorced
& i consider u Yoda, the way u come up short with verses that r forced
-nah dont like this too much.. but yeh


this battle was decent at most.. tuckzz came w/ one or two fresh concepts..but a couple of played.. he had like 1 quotable bar in there.. wasnt feelin the rest too much, but overall.. it was a decent verse i guess.. keep up.. and alpha.. u did better than last week.. you had some fresh concepts in there.. executed couple of punches well.. you definitely had more punches and came stronger than tuckz..

v/alpha

no matter how hard alpha try's .. he'll still always remain lame
i would say ur words r played, but it seems u dont use word.play
this dude is poor .. you'll never come close to the best at text
Face da Facts, o yeah..they already ran away..
.... from ur ugly ass the first time you attempted to face them

vs.

& tuckzz, wit a style as fuck'd as urs, i aint even consider it legit
and you must feel like ya giving up...
........................................... everytime you hit submit
N'd I dunno how u can think ur elevated, when u aint even blunt high
And fuck LLL jr, when what you really need is a junior front lines
Dude its deep, how u've been around for a while, n never endorced
& i consider u Yoda, the way u come up short with verses that r forced

tuckzz, either that shit was just weak or play'd. ok verse, not much to it though.
alph, that closer was pretty funny and the other 2 lines i quoted, pretty dope. good job. you did better than i expected this time.

v/ alphabetized

v/alph. will explain in mag. some good punches in here aswell.

no matter how hard alpha try's .. he'll still always remain lame
i would say ur words r played, but it seems u dont use word.play
^not bad
this dude is poor .. you'll never come close to the best at text
Face da Facts, o yeah..they already ran away..
.... from ur ugly ass the first time you attempted to face them
worded poorly^

should a' been like...

u ugly fuck, just know its over, i wont just win by a hair
ide tell you to face the facts but they'd run away scared.....just keep it simple

vs

N'd I dunno how u can think ur elevated, when u aint even blunt high
And fuck LLL jr, when what you really need is a junior front lines
^could have been worded more witty

[B]V/Tucks for 1 more quoteB]

Blah... nvm... thanks for the feed.

uhh.. uppin this for some more feed... please?

Alphabetized is wack, havent you at all began to notice yet?
you came here to earn respect and all most did....
.......until we all saw last weeks verse when you posted it !!!
Na...
no matter how hard alpha try's .. he'll still always remain lame
i would say ur words r played, but it seems u dont use word.play
Ok
im sonnin this whore .. theres no chance of you winnin, freak
beat me? nah, ill leave you wit more L's than the initials of dis league
lol seems pretty obvious but ive never heard it before good...
you crumble as i speak, he'll get whored so bad he will no-show this
it'll be like like he's fucken constipated .. cuz he wont drop no shit
No...
there's no stoppin this, trust me, you'll never see the Gold whore..
even if you took an hour walk looking around .. a Jewelry Store !!
No...
this dude is poor .. you'll never come close to the best at text
Face da Facts, o yeah..they already ran away..
.... from ur ugly ass the first time you attempted to face them
No..

Vs.

Its a shame tuckzz 2 com here, jus cause ya audios worse than ya txt
And no doubt you got special attributes.....
.................................. and no doubt that loosing's ya best
Ok...
Tuckzz is like throwin a clock away, the way hes waste of time
u cant tell me hes in his write mind, when his drops dont even ryhme
Bad setup decent punch
& tuckzz, wit a style as fuck'd as urs, i aint even consider it legit
and you must feel like ya giving up...
........................................... everytime you hit submit
lol decent..
N'd I dunno how u can think ur elevated, when u aint even blunt high
And fuck LLL jr, when what you really need is a junior front lines
lmao best line of the battle...
Tuckzz,u just a noob wit no rep, sad how no one gives ya shits a peep
And you need more Z's in ya name....
...............................the way ya ryhmes put people 2 sleep
lol...
Dude its deep, how u've been around for a while, n never endorced
& i consider u Yoda, the way u come up short with verses that r forced
Blah ok i guess...


Tuckz only had 1 decent punch with his initials of this league punch. Apart from that, i wasnt feelin his verse and was mostly played. Alphas verse had me lol'n with his junior front lines, and need more Z's lines. But his whole verse was solid with consistent punches. Thats what gets him my vote... Good Battle..

Vote/Alphabetized

Tuckzz

Alphabetized is wack, havent you at all began to notice yet?
you came here to earn respect and all most did....
.......until we all saw last weeks verse when you posted it !!!
-wayyy to stretched..this was closer to 3 lines than 2

no matter how hard alpha try's .. he'll still always remain lame
i would say ur words r played, but it seems u dont use word.play
-you just switched the words around...no.

im sonnin this whore .. theres no chance of you winnin, freak
beat me? nah, ill leave you wit more L's than the initials of dis league
-decent, it didnt reallly hit him hard tho and could be worded better

you crumble as i speak, he'll get whored so bad he will no-show this
it'll be like like he's fucken constipated .. cuz he wont drop no shit
-played to death

there's no stoppin this, trust me, you'll never see the Gold whore..
even if you took an hour walk looking around .. a Jewelry Store !!
-blah

this dude is poor .. you'll never come close to the best at text
Face da Facts, o yeah..they already ran away..
.... from ur ugly ass the first time you attempted to face them
-again this was hella stretched, almost 3 lines instead of 2


Alpha

Its a shame tuckzz 2 com here, jus cause ya audios worse than ya txt
And no doubt you got special attributes.....
.................................. and no doubt that loosing's ya best
-decent

Tuckzz is like throwin a clock away, the way hes waste of time
u cant tell me hes in his write mind, when his drops dont even ryhme
-meh, first line would have been a better ending

& tuckzz, wit a style as fuck'd as urs, i aint even consider it legit
and you must feel like ya giving up...
........................................... everytime you hit submit
-not bad

N'd I dunno how u can think ur elevated, when u aint even blunt high
And fuck LLL jr, when what you really need is a junior front lines
-haha coo

Tuckzz,u just a noob wit no rep, sad how no one gives ya shits a peep
And you need more Z's in ya name....
...............................the way ya ryhmes put people 2 sleep
-meh, not feelin it

Dude its deep, how u've been around for a while, n never endorced
& i consider u Yoda, the way u come up short with verses that r forced
-ok, couldve been worded better

v/ Alphabetized

Got another shot at worst battle of the week? lol, thanks for the feed guys.
Guess im uppin for more! feed me biatches.

there's no stoppin this, trust me, you'll never see the Gold whore..
even if you took an hour walk looking around .. a Jewelry Store !!
this dude is poor .. you'll never come close to the best at text
Face da Facts, o yeah..they already ran away..
.... from ur ugly ass the first time you attempted to face them

------Tuckuzz- I felt you came with some played concepts in this battle..... i almost didnt post the first quotable because it was so so but it was original. I felt you lines were also stretched just a tad bit too long... like ur closure.....was too long.....felt it didnt go together well....yuo could have worded it diffrently.... i felt the effort u put into this was average... nothin really witty here but u did ok....


vs.


& tuckzz, wit a style as fuck'd as urs, i aint even consider it legit
and you must feel like ya giving up...
........................................... everytime you hit submit
N'd I dunno how u can think ur elevated, when u aint even blunt high
And fuck LLL jr, when what you really need is a junior front lines
Dude its deep, how u've been around for a while, n never endorced
& i consider u Yoda, the way u come up short with verses that r forced

--------Alphabatized- Was impressed with the drop here.......Those six lines were kinda creative....and also witty....got a couple of chuckles from me....i felt everything flowed together..... nothing was TOO stretched....but it was acceptable.. u came with a played punch but i felt u had more quotables and more wit in this battle.....U were mad creative.

V/Alphabatized...

yeah. this is all the text battles ive done since i first started. so yeah, im not that great lol. uppin

wait? these 2 are the only txt battles you've done?
lol.. no need to lie now tuckzz...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ghlight=tuckzz

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ghlight=tuckzz

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ghlight=tuckzz

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ghlight=tuckzz

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ghlight=tuckzz

and theres more... lol

tuCkzz - for the most part, ur opener was the debut of what was expected to be a solid verse. however, after your opener, you went straight basic with your verse. You need to be a little more creative with the wordplay.

Alphabetized - you verse was aiight. I loved the closer... "Yodi, may the force be with you" - incorporatin star wars made punch pretty entertaining. Seems like you did just enough to win... Solid effort on your part, but keep strivin for improvement cuz some lines werent as good as others...

Vote - Alphabetized

7-1... thanks for the feed antonio.... appretaite it dude...

anyways keepin this battle up the top to get more feed.

im sonnin this whore .. theres no chance of you winnin, freak
beat me? nah, ill leave you wit more L's than the initials of dis league

vs

& tuckzz, wit a style as fuck'd as urs, i aint even consider it legit
and you must feel like ya giving up...
........................................... everytime you hit submit
I Herd This Flipped Some where the submit
N'd I dunno how u can think ur elevated, when u aint even blunt high
And fuck LLL jr, when what you really need is a junior front lines

well tuckzz dunno what happen this week you was coming strong in the beginning but came poorly this week seems like every one including me keyed up some shit but i have to say alpha took it he just came a lil bit stronger pz
v/alpha

well if u did, i didnt mean to get it from someone else, honestly never heard it.
thanks for the feed.

i was just saying its flipped not the same line or nothen but just was flipped

Word, 8-1... one last up 'for i get offline

Wassup, risin for feed.

Tuczz i didnt really find a quoteable in your verse. nothing was to spesh for me, it was so-so. Some lines were stretched, i just couldnt catch onto the flow of your verse, I flet your rhyme scheme was off. You had some decents concepts in your verse it just needed some re-wording.

Alpha you were consistent throughout your verse, some punches were average but never below. You had a couple of good ones in there that had me laughing, I saw more creativity in your verse. Flow was good, you didnt get to stretched out with your verse. You used a nice play on the name. Overall it was just a better verse.

v/alpha

Thanks for the feed. Anyone else out there wanna leave some?

Tuckzz
im sonnin this whore .. theres no chance of you winnin, freak
beat me? nah, ill leave you wit more L's than the initials of dis league
there's no stoppin this, trust me, you'll never see the Gold whore..
even if you took an hour walk looking around .. a Jewelry Store !!

Alpha
& tuckzz, wit a style as fuck'd as urs, i aint even consider it legit
and you must feel like ya giving up...
........................................... everytime you hit submit
Tuckzz,u just a noob wit no rep, sad how no one gives ya shits a peep
And you need more Z's in ya name....
...............................the way ya ryhmes put people 2 sleep
Dude its deep, how u've been around for a while, n never endorced
& i consider u Yoda, the way u come up short with verses that r forced

This was an aight battle in my opinion.

Tuckzz - Openers are important to me, and yours was way too stretched which wasnt a good start. After that it got a little better, But the punches still wasnt hitting hard enough for the win. The 2 lines i quoted were the best lines in your verse, but they still didnt stand out as "good".

Alpha - Your opener wasnt the best either, but it was at least not stretched. You picked up though aight, Some decent punches quite consistently, and some funny witty lines that had me laughing. Especially liked the submit line, funny shit.

Vote Alpha, for more consistency with harder punches, and some humourous lines along with better quotables.

Thanks for the feed.
I think I took this one, but still lookin
for more feed and more people to give there opinion.
Im gettin off for now. word out.

Alphabetized is wack, havent you at all began to notice yet?
you came here to earn respect and all most did....
.......until we all saw last weeks verse when you posted it !!!
Ok, nothing special
no matter how hard alpha try's .. he'll still always remain lame
i would say ur words r played, but it seems u dont use word.play
Once again, nothing special
im sonnin this whore .. theres no chance of you winnin, freak
beat me? nah, ill leave you wit more L's than the initials of dis league
Good.
you crumble as i speak, he'll get whored so bad he will no-show this
it'll be like like he's fucken constipated .. cuz he wont drop no shit
No, played.
there's no stoppin this, trust me, you'll never see the Gold whore..
even if you took an hour walk looking around .. a Jewelry Store !!
Not feelin it
this dude is poor .. you'll never come close to the best at text
Face da Facts, o yeah..they already ran away..
.... from ur ugly ass the first time you attempted to face them
Good concept but wordin was fucked up

vs.

Its a shame tuckzz 2 com here, jus cause ya audios worse than ya txt
And no doubt you got special attributes.....
.................................. and no doubt that loosing's ya best
Good.
Tuckzz is like throwin a clock away, the way hes waste of time
u cant tell me hes in his write mind, when his drops dont even ryhme
Wasnt feelin it.
& tuckzz, wit a style as fuck'd as urs, i aint even consider it legit
and you must feel like ya giving up...
........................................... everytime you hit submit
Aight
N'd I dunno how u can think ur elevated, when u aint even blunt high
And fuck LLL jr, when what you really need is a junior front lines
lol good, felt this was the best punch in the battle..
Tuckzz,u just a noob wit no rep, sad how no one gives ya shits a peep
And you need more Z's in ya name....
...............................the way ya ryhmes put people 2 sleep
Ok
Dude its deep, how u've been around for a while, n never endorced
& i consider u Yoda, the way u come up short with verses that r forced
Not feelin it.

Overall this was a decent battle, gonna have to give it to Alphabatized tho cuz he had better punches then Tuckzz. Good battle to both of u.

V/Alpha

Word. Thanks for the feed.

Tuckz

Alphabetized is wack, havent you at all began to notice yet?
you came here to earn respect and all most did....
.......until we all saw last weeks verse when you posted it !!!
(Basic and stretched as fuck)

no matter how hard alpha try's .. he'll still always remain lame
i would say ur words r played, but it seems u dont use word.play
(No, played and weak)

im sonnin this whore .. theres no chance of you winnin, freak
Coz ill leave you wit more L's than the fuckin initials of dis league
(This wasn't that bad actually, if you worded it better it coulda been real nice)

you crumble as i speak, he'll get whored so bad he will no-show this
it'll be like like he's fucken constipated .. cuz he wont drop no shit
(Nah shit punches are soooooooooo played now, this wasn't even original or harsh)

there's no stoppin this, trust me, you'll never see the Gold whore..
even if you took an hour walk looking around .. a Jewelry Store !!
(Nah wack)

this dude is poor .. you'll never come close to the best at text
Face da Facts, o yeah..they already ran away..
.... from ur ugly ass the first time you attempted to face them
(Very played, stretched and not well worded)

Alphabetized

Its a shame tuckzz 2 com here, jus cause ya audios worse than ya txt
And no doubt you got special attributes.....
.................................. and no doubt that loosing's ya best
(Wtf? Hell no)

Tuckzz is like throwin a clock away, the way hes waste of time
u cant tell me hes in his write mind, when his drops dont even ryhme
(Nah very basic and weak)

& tuckzz, wit a style as fuck'd as urs, i aint even consider it legit
and you must feel like ya giving up...
........................................... everytime you hit submit
(Nah not direct at all)

N'd I dunno how u can think ur elevated, when u aint even blunt high
And fuck LLL jr, when what you really need is a junior front lines
(lmao, not a great punch itself but the idea of a jr front lines for people so wack they lose to 'mc hoodaman' and 'dat lil nigga G' is hilarious)

Tuckzz,u just a noob wit no rep, sad how no one gives ya shits a peep
And you need more Z's in ya name....
...............................the way ya ryhmes put people 2 sleep
(Alright idea but not very well executed, ok though)

Dude its deep, how u've been around for a while, n never endorced
& i consider u Yoda, the way u come up short with verses that r forced
(Yoda is a jedi, not a textee. I've checked several times for some dope subtle wordplay but there is none so this punch is weak)

Overall this was a very weak battle with very basic concepts with poor wording. Alpha came slightly more consistent I guess, the jr front lines and zz's line was alright, better than any line tuckzz had. Only half decent shit tuckzz had was the LLL line, overal I'd say Alphabetized wins on consistency.

V/ Alphabetized

Thanks for the feed.
I agree with you demon,
Yoda line = coming up short. Yodas like 2 feet tall
His verse was forced = jedi's use the force...
not really wordplay but sorta a meta idk.
Again thanks for the feed dude. Uppin.

yeah, im not good at text at all. im signed out now. i wanted to see how good i could do.

Uppin for feed yo... im still hungry... need desert or somthin

Second 2 last up... lol... common

Last up before aines closes it....

hell.. mine as well get 1 more up in here

Alphabetized is wack, havent you at all began to notice yet?
you came here to earn respect and all most did....
.......until we all saw last weeks verse when you posted it !!!
...ok nothing too great..but decent

no matter how hard alpha try's .. he'll still always remain lame
i would say ur words r played, but it seems u dont use word.play
...pretty good
im sonnin this whore .. theres no chance of you winnin, freak
beat me? nah, ill leave you wit more L's than the initials of dis league
..decent play

you crumble as i speak, he'll get whored so bad he will no-show this
it'll be like like he's fucken constipated .. cuz he wont drop no shit
...nah not feelin this

there's no stoppin this, trust me, you'll never see the Gold whore..
even if you took an hour walk looking around .. a Jewelry Store !!
...decent ish

this dude is poor .. you'll never come close to the best at text
Face da Facts, o yeah..they already ran away..
.... from ur ugly ass the first time you attempted to face them
...yea decent nicely delivered

vs

Its a shame tuckzz 2 com here, jus cause ya audios worse than ya txt
And no doubt you got special attributes.....
.................................. and no doubt that loosing's ya best
decent..

Tuckzz is like throwin a clock away, the way hes waste of time
u cant tell me hes in his write mind, when his drops dont even ryhme
decent again

& tuckzz, wit a style as fuck'd as urs, i aint even consider it legit
and you must feel like ya giving up...
........................................... everytime you hit submit
decent

N'd I dunno how u can think ur elevated, when u aint even blunt high
And fuck LLL jr, when what you really need is a junior front lines
ok play

Tuckzz,u just a noob wit no rep, sad how no one gives ya shits a peep
And you need more Z's in ya name....
...............................the way ya ryhmes put people 2 sleep
...nice play

Dude its deep, how u've been around for a while, n never endorced
& i consider u Yoda, the way u come up short with verses that r forced
lol nice play


well was a pretty nice and close battle fosho...Alpha just had a couple more nice puncheverything else was near equal.. in my opinion..so just edeged ahead with more niceness..and tuckzz hadda couple more i wasnt feelin too much

so

vote-alpha

Alphabetized wins

Alphabetized (2-0)
Tuckzz (1-1)