Diamond Mind (1-0) vs Untold (1-0)

LLL Jr. Week 2

Word

first week went kinda well no shows are gone and cats who showed and who signed up are now in...

same as last week check by wednesday drop by friday come good....if your opponent fails to check but shows then that will be allowed but they will be deducted 2 votes for failure to check.....
so all in all you MUST drop a verse this week.....

last of all voting.....im scrapping the 4 links this week, unless voting activity goes then this is how it will stay and if i catch anyone feeding off the first vote you will have votes deducted...constant offence then i'll boot your ass from the league.....


good luck all

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chickity checkin in

check. i'm going no more than 12. cool?

aiight yo am down wit tht

werd, yo.

like having sex for 7 days....untold is a week fuck,
this kids known to be in stickys, but is now about to come unstuck,
am like showing an xxx film to children, am fukin underrated,
a cud put u in a rocket to space, n u still wudnt be elevated,
but by pure word of mouth, i hear that your lyrically tall untold,
but i guess the onli reason that is, is probably cos ur knee-grow,
and i no this battle is gna be big, the expectation is widespread,
sorry to tell u the facts, but getting ur dick sucked is the onli way ur getting a-head,
u mite aswell become anonymous, n view this site as a guest,
n i wud truthully call u good, but u no they say a lot of the truth is sed in jest,
basically wat i'm saying is that the rest of the league best prepare,
cos diamond mind ripping this fool, man this shit is unfair.

haha. ez...

this wins mine, your done so get the fuck out
you get'n a loss is like lay run'n this league...
...theres no doubt
swing away, but you'll never hit me once, whore
s'you got more play'd punches than fight night '04
win'n this for sure, i'm holding nothing back, jack
cause diamonds are forever... known for be'n wack
my killa rays burn you, take cover for protection
and when i say diamond's shine'n...
...i mean the sun off his refelction
you so ill, you terminal... then this breath's my last
'n i'm pull'n the plug... so i can fit my foot in his ass
i show class and skool you like first graders
s'when you clap'n things, it'll be both my erasers

lol. aiight. lets get the votes on this shit. g/l.

Quote:

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Originally Posted by untold

swing away, but you'll never hit me once, whore
s'you got more play'd punches than fight night '04

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Diamond Mind - I think you tried to hard. not sayin that you prewrote, but it seems like you took awhile to develope hard hitting concepts... The wordplay seemed forced at times..

Untold - You had a solid scheme goin on, but I only seen one quotable. Other peeps will probably like the other stuff though... You had enough capacitiy with your punches to take this battle..

Vote - Untold

DM:
Nothing quotable, sorry man.

uNTOLD:
you so ill, you terminal... then this breath's my last
'n i'm pull'n the plug... so i can fit my foot in his ass

Overall:
Nothing in the match really. Untold was just better overall.
DM's punches were never going anywhere. Little disses
I'd call'em. Untold looked decent and just looked like
he wrote just enough to win. Props to both for showing.

Vote:Untold

this wins mine, your done so get the fuck out
you get'n a loss is like lay run'n this league...
...theres no doubt
swing away, but you'll never hit me once, whore
s'you got more play'd punches than fight night '04
you so ill, you terminal... then this breath's my last
n i'm pull'n the plug... so i can fit my foot in his ass

vs

like having sex for 7 days....untold is a week fuck,
this kids known to be in stickys, but is now about to come unstuck

Untold got the win here pretty easily in my opinion. No hate to u diamond but heres why...

Untold - You went at it straight from the off, Your punches were aight, and concistently aight too. Its definitely not the best verse ive seen you drop, but i feel that you saw his verse first and realised u didnt need too. Because...

Diamond - Your punches werent hitting as hard as your opponents. The only line i that kinda liked was your opener, but it faded out to me after that. Also it seemed like some of your rhyming was forced, like u tried too hard to end certain lines with a particular word, so that it would rhyme with your second line.

V/ Untold for those reasons. And more, better quotables.

swing away, but you'll never hit me once, whore
s'you got more play'd punches than fight night '04

vs

nothing

Vote goes to Untold because DiamondMind's verse seemed really played out

v/untold. will explain in detail in the mag. lol about doubt punch i must say though.

Diamond mind- I simply felt your punches were played........the unstuck one was the only one i saw that had creativity on it. No really new concepts so.....nothing attracted me to your verse honestly.... i felt u could have spent a little more time on ya verse......
Untold- Felt you came more consistent, alot of new concepts, Verse was attractive, did well.......memorable punches..... Really just a better verse foreal....
v/Untold

Diamond, didnt really feel any of the concepts in your verse. Seemed kind of simple, nothing really popped out at me and made me laugh. You had a decent verse at best.

Untold, a respectable drop from you, consistent with average punches, I liked your opener it was a fresh idea and concept, afterthat you flowed through your verse with decent punches.

v/untold. i felt both mc's delivered at about the same level except for Untolds opener, it was a fresh idea and wasnt played, so that bar wins him my vote.

up.

diamon was completely wack dunno why the fuck he was let in this tourney but w/e and i know i spit a bar extremely similar 2 yo 2 bar but w/e anyway good job untold dis 1 was a gimmi nice structure and flow


v/untold

lol getting buried alive here, but thanks for the criticisms ppl, up

up.

DM:

Nothing quotable.

untold

you so ill, you terminal... then this breath's my last
'n i'm pull'n the plug... so i can fit my foot in his ass

one sided, diamond you need to come more fresh, better punches, i mean...untold keyed that up and still won.untold your verse was still pretty decent, nice job.

vote - Untold.

Diamond: Nothing special.

Untold: The 'Lay' line worked OK, pretty much your style throughout came much wittier than Diamond Mind did. Your 'diamond' puns were a little played, though.

Vote: Untold. Not a strong battle.

swing away, but you'll never hit me once, whore
s'you got more play'd punches than fight night '04

vs.

nothing

untold u didn't have 2 come hard 2 beat him..wat u had was good enuff

v/untold

ok. up some more. looking for decent feed.

up for some more feed

Untold wins

Diamond mind (1-1)
Untold (2-0)