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G'd Luck my boy.
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Good Luck.
Chk.
Look Tha Lizard carry the heat and you know it'll bust//
Your flows bout as high as the I.Q...........................
.........................of the kids on the short yellow bus//
This dudes got no life he's a computer nerd slash gay//
......He's the first cat on RB to set up 67 posts a day//
...Sun Tzu tryin' to become hot rapper like his bro Jin//
....Tha Lizard bout to give you tha opposite or a win//
...Your about as gangsta and that dog on Blue Clues//
It's funny cause I've ate.......................................
.......................Gummy Bears that harder than you//
This dudes thinkin' he's good well I'm not conveinced//
I'ma splat ya brain's over ya windows......................
...........................make it look like you got red tint//
Tha 6th line down its supposed to be Tha Lizard bout to give you tha opposite of a win//
Man drop already its only ten lines and its blind.
^ Hey dude i just started 6 min. ago..I'll post a quick key..in a sec.
I mean it's like his spits went bankrupt how i got em shooken
i'll give u credit where its due,n then loan u an ass whoopin
U little rap fakes get crushed, Ya lil lizard...You've been warned
i'd take u on the ride of ya life,but ur not tall enough to get on
By the way i keep the win tuck'd you'd think my rhyming suck
It's like this lizard had sex with a cold but he's just a sick fuck
Let's be real guy's this cat named after something that eat flies
I'll cop you a bracelet n chain to match that ring around ya eye
hopefully he'll leave just watch him,fumbling,we assume him shook
If rhyme's a art form then you're the equivalent of Coloring Books
Basic but more than enough for this.....
Nice drop.
But I think to Basic you were way harder in ya other battles.
Uppin #1.
We will see....Ups 4 votes....
god battle...................both brought they a game
punches-sun-last line took my vote
flo-lizard
creativity-both
Uppin #2
Uppin #3
Last Vote for Today.
hopefully he'll leave just watch him,fumbling,we assume him shook
If rhyme's a art form then you're the equivalent of Coloring Books
that had me laughing out loud for serious. sun definitley takes this battle, with slightly better punches, structure and flow. i especially like the bar above. shit was funny.
v/sun
Appreciate the vote my boy.
Uppin #2 for votes.
This battle was not really that close in my oppinion, Lizard had too many stretched lines, no problem with the rhyming, but the lines had too much excess stuff in them, and made the verse lose it's flow.
See what I mean? By the way, ^^ that was funny as fuck. :2thumb:Quote:
Look Tha Lizard carry the heat and you know it'll bust//
Your flows bout as high as the I.Q...........................
.........................of the kids on the short yellow bus//
However, since Sun Tzu had some really good punches, and a better flow, (sick wordplay as well.) LOL, coloring books. SHit had me laughing. Sorry to say it Lizard, but My vote sadly has to go to Sun Tzu for better flow, and wordplay. But you aren't bad Lizard, and I am in no way saying that, just that in the long run, Sun had a better verse. Peace
Vote=Sun Tzu.
Peace.
Lizard-
Your flows bout as high as the I.Q...........................
.........................of the kids on the short yellow bus//
lol..nice
vs-
Tzu
I mean it's like his spits went bankrupt how i got em shooken
i'll give u credit where its due,n then loan u an ass whoopin
lol..dope
Let's be real guy's this cat named after something that eat flies
I'll cop you a bracelet n chain to match that ring around ya eye
cool
wordplay-Tzu
flow structure-tie
punches-tzu
multies-tzu
vocab-tie
vote tzu
for
a more direct verse with personal effects thrown in and good shots at wordplay
Punches - Lizard
Multi's - Lizard
Flow - Sun
Vocab - Lizard
Hostility - Sun
Vote - Lizard
Why - Nice Punches Dawg...!!
Alrighy 1 more vote.
Uppin #3.
I mean it's like his spits went bankrupt how i got em shooken
i'll give u credit where its due,n then loan u an ass whoopin
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^^was a good punchline man................nice
U little rap fakes get crushed, Ya lil lizard...You've been warned
i'd take u on the ride of ya life,but ur not tall enough to get on
By the way i keep the win tuck'd you'd think my rhyming suck
It's like this lizard had sex with a cold but he's just a sick fuck
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^^nice metaphor with a punchline...
hopefully he'll leave just watch him,fumbling,we assume him shook
If rhyme's a art form then you're the equivalent of Coloring Books
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^^NICE NICE line homes..........its over
V/ ST for better punches Metaz and creativity.